Hello everyone..Eva here…my 9th ff….i’m so happy….so thanks to u all…u all appreciated me,,encouraged me to write more……that’s why i’m here…..
Scene:Mount College
First day of the first year students…..in the college
Some boys r seen playing basket ball…….and girls r cheering for them…..but only one name could be heard……LUCKY………..yes its Mr Laksh Maheshwari….the captain of the basket ball team…..3rd year student…he is quite famous…smart and talented….he is an obedient son…and loves his family the most….he is not a flirt but someone who respects girls……in all…he is something we call a good human being….
Laksh was about to put the ball in the basket…when he was stopped by another handsome man……he snatches the ball while playing and puts it in the basket…..he in none other than our Sanskar….Sanskar Mehra…another excellent player…..2nd year student…
The bell rings…they r going…..just then Sanskar comes and blocks Laksh’s way….
Sanky:Today i just snatched the ball……wait and see how i snatch your position too….
Laksh:U r junior to me……i won’t say anything bad to u…..or else their won’t be any difference left between us…
Just then Rishi,Sanskar’s bestie comes there…
Rishi:Sanky lets go…see…..some freshers…..ragging toh bantiii hiii hai boss…
Sanky smiles evilly and leaves with Rishi…
Sanskar’s group:Kavita Roy,Kavya Malhotra,Sahil Sengupta,Rishi Shah and Rajat Khanna
Just then…they see a girl entering the college…..she has wore an anarkali suit…..wears glasses and has made a ponytail…..
Kavya:Mil gayi bakri….
The girl sees them and gets scared..and is about to run…..when Kavita puts her leg in between and makes her fall…her chin starts bleeding….
Kavita:Oh o…sorry…..i did not see u…..
She stands and is about to leave….
Rishi:Beta…what’s your name?
The girl stammers;Sw…ar….a….(Yes that girl is Swara)
Kavita;What?Sw..ar…a?Aisa bhi koi naam hota hai bhala?
Everyone starts laughing…
Kavita:Accha….prove that u r uselful….i mean..dance or sing…..do something……………
Swara starts crying…..
Sahi;Ole le le….baby…don’t cry….
Kavita:Just see her hair….full of oil..champi…
She is about to touch Swara’s hair..but someone holds her hand……nope..if u r thinking that its Sanskar……then no..its not Sanskar….Laksh bhi nehi…..its a girl..and she is none other than our Ragini….
Ragini:Stay away……don’t u dare to do this thing again…
Kavita:Who the hell r u?
Ragini:Ummmm…yeah…i’m DAKUBASANTI…..
Sanky’s group is shocked….other than them everyone is laughing….
Ragini:Stay away from her….
Ragini is wearing a pink top and jeans….she grabs Swara’s hand and leaves….She makes her sit…..Sanky’s group follow them…..
Ragini:See…if anyone insults u..then u have to fight back..u have to answer them…. if u stay quite then they will insult u more…to stop them from doing this…u have to answer them…and everytime…this dakubasanti won’t be there to save u….u have to save yourself…
Sanky and his group hear this convo….
Kavya:We have to teach this dakubasanti and her Sw…ar..a,,,,,,a lesson…..
Laksh’s group:Arjun and Abeer…
Abeer:Pearl V Puri
Arjun:Aham Sharma
Laksh:This Sanskar and his group will never change…..
Arjun:Ha….
Their classes end…and everyone is leaving…..
Laksh is walking on the road….Sanky drives his car towards Laksh…
Sanky:Ajke baadh..he won’t be able to play basket ball…and anything…..
Laksh doesn’t see the car…the car is about to hit him when a veiled girl saves him..both of them fall down….
Sanky stops the car and looks from the looking glass…
Kavya;Sanky….start kar car…we need to leave…..or else….they will catch us…and police case na banjaye….
Sanskar drives away….Laksh gets some scratches….he looks back and sees that the girl is gone…
Laksh;Where is she??
He looks here and there….and his eyes fall on a silver chain….with a love shaped locket…..he keeps it with him…..
Precap:Nehi patah…
My first ff…where u’ll find the mystery later….please do tell me how it was….my first try….trying to change my writing style….. 😀 😀 :D.
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hey eva loved it! oh wow! abeer is also there. plz tell pairs…………. swasan n raglak plzzzzzz n ya congo to ur 9th ff…………. luv u a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank u Yashasvi……i never declare the couples…so not even today….cholly for that….love u too..and i like Pearl V puri..so thought to bring him here…
Awesome Eva, loved it, Wah, can’t wait for the next episode, Kya tune Samjhota finish kar diya?? If yes then sorry, meine Nahi para. But Wah, this one is so good. Keep smiling ?
Thank u Halima…i did not finish Samjhota..i’ll be finishing that within this week 😀
I will miss it, but it’s good you started another one… Eva? Kya mein tumhe apne one shot mein cast karsakti hoon?? Bas yahi puchna that…?? ???
How stupid of me, mein batana hi Bhool gayi Ki mera one shot a SwaSan one shot hoga…?
So do you mind?? It’s okay if you say no. ?
Mujhe cast? Woh kese?
Bas Socha tha but if you have a problem then it’s okay, don’t worry. ?
Anyways how have you been?
U said about being Sanky’s sis..so..nehi patah mujhe kich bhi..and I’m bored….and not at all fine..I’m going mad…?
superb but one request at least this ff don’t make ragini negative pls
Thank u..and i can’t give surety of anything…let’s see what happens….
nice plzz make it raglak next part soon
Thank u…u’ll get to knw about the couples soon….
Good starting dear…
Thank u Anuann:)
Awsm Bhabhi luved it soo much but why did u made our swara a chashmish jao katti
Oyee damad..chup re.mmeri bahu Ko kuch na kehne….warna Teri biwi Ko complain kardungi…phir dekhio..kya haal hota hai apka..
Mummyji Mein toh majak rak raha tah I m not angry on Bhabhi
Patidev Ji, where are you? App ki darshan nehi milti Ji?app ki tabiyat kushal mangal hein na Ji? I miss you very much Ji.
I m fine wify hw r u lo agaya Mein meri tabiyaat thik hain what about u I m too missing u
Plz katti nehi..thank u…my mummy ji ❤
Telly updates please fix the cover photo…there r 4 leads..and Laksh’s face is cut..plz..fix it..??
Tere pati ka hi chehra cut gaya..???
Lekin mujhe accha banaya hai na???
Ikr ?? mera bechara pati..
nycccc update Eva di
Thank u Janvi…and uk we share the same name?? My real name is Janvi..? and when I reply to u..i feel like I’m replying to myself ??
aww..di..can I also join your family tree….has any post left…
Talk to mummyji for that dear…?
Hey mystery girl/devi it’s really awesome ??
Thank u?
nice start Eva…
new writteng style well I’m sure it will good like other ff and your ff always rocks..are you going to tell the pairs or not? hopefully it swalak/ragsan but it dosen’t matter if it swasan I’m going to read as your writing it ..looking forward the story
Awww..thank u..for being ready to read my ff without expectations of your fav couple…and I won’t reveal the couples…? thank u
9th ff??? Awesome ? job…first chapter of this ff…dakubasanti??? what a name..u r soo creative.
Now..to all my family members.. Kese ho? Meri talented bahuyein, useless aur nalayak bete,mera gumshuda pati,meri bewakuv betiyan..aut meri pyarrii potio..oh..another one..jalkujri Riya..thik hona?
Shut up u stupid lady…i think this is going to be raglak..Eva got scared sewing the bashing comment of raglak fans…so she must have started this raglak ff…u call me jalkukri….and what r u?U r a donkey,your bahu Meher is chimpanzee,Anjali is an elephant and your ladki Eva is a chipkali..
U know very well about animals.. I guess u hv stayed for a long time in zoo
One more thing Eva aaj tu maan le this girl loves u most in Tu… Sunghte hue paunch jati hai tere ff m.. Itni baar beijjat ho chuki hai but sharm ni hai.. Har bar new email se apna bina dhula muh le ke aa jati hai… ????
Sahi kehte hein, kutte ki dum kabhi sidhe nehi hoti, you are the best example of it.Itne insult ke baad bhi agayi apna tangg arane.Shame on you!
this is nit fair mummy ji..aap hamesha bete ko nalayek kehte ho!!Par aap toh bade mahan ho!Jalkujri ka bhi khabar le rahe ho!!
Waise hum toh thik hai..aap kyse ho?
Oh Riya u see your face in mirror then u just speak up and don’t u dare to speak bad about our family members ok
Beta sorry..patanehi tha ki Tu mentally unstable hai…btw UK so much about animals…well do u stay with animals???u seem to knw so much about animals..aur Tu bhootni hai…everyone is scared of u..meri Eva toh bacchi hai..daregi nehi toh kya karegi..and Maheshwari house is not a zoo…and hey..u called me stupid lady?chudail..apne app Ko dekh..khud Ko agar samajdar samajtu hai toh tere samne toh mein intelligence ki devi hu..mene toh baas tere haam chaak puchliye..aur Tu dog ki tarah bark karne kafi..ab yeh bhi koi baat huyi bhala?Beta..jakee..apne parents Ko bol ki 3 bahuyo ki SaaS be kaha hai tujhe psychiatric treatment chahiye….mujhe donkey bolti hai…tu usi donkey ki amma hai..bewakuv..bhau bhau bhau bhau..karna band kar..wese u called us donkey and all..but your characteristics t similar to dogs..barking without reason..
Mummy ji aapke charan kaha hai ???????
OH god I went rofl ?????
Mummy ji rockx
Srsly mummyji!! hats off to you…..
Pata nhi iss riya ki chakkar kya hai….
Like meher said, she must really love us… Doesn’t leave us alone at all… :/ :/
U illiterate woman..shut up..who the hell r u to tell me what should I do..and where should I go?u called me a dog..u r a hippopotamus…bandar…chup rahoo..i hate u all..cuz u all r after raglak…your house is definitely a zoo…filled with these stupid and brainless creatures..so shut up.
Meher u…u actually deserve someone’s charan only…..mummy ji ki chamchi..
Mummy, kamal kardi apne. Uss din ap mujpe proud feel karretena,today I am feeling proud to be your daughter.I like ROFL after reading it.Meher babhi ne toh peher pakad liya, mein apki haath pakad na chahti hu.Hip hip hurrey for our rocking mom!!!
Finally riya… you told the truth!! You hate us…. and we hate you back!! We do NOT WANT TO associate ourselves with you…. you’re a very malicious and poisonous girl….
Raglak… Srsly?? Only in ur first comment in samjhota did you mention Raglak
After that it has been a blo*dy PERAONAL ATTACK ON ALL OF US….
I BET EVEN RAGLAK WILL BE ASHAMED TO CALL YOU THEIR FAN…
LEAVE US ALONE!!
YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO INSULT US JUST BECAUSE YOU HATE US….
WE HAVE NO NEED FOR PPL LIKE YOU… AND SRSLY… IF YIU THINK THIS WILL OR MIGHT BE RAGLAK, THATS YOUR OWN FAULT… LATER DONT COMPLAIN THAT EVA DECEIVED YOU BCOS SHE DIDNT MENTION A WORD ABOUT ANYTHING…..
Hawwww…..mummyji aap apne damad ko toh bhul hi gai….mana ke main thode din gayab thi, to aesa karneka???
@Riya
Riya if u cant say any nice words then stay mum. No need to speak or rather write n insult others. If u don’t like Eva’s ff then don’t read it n if u wanna critize there is a decent way of doing it. No point insulting others
Riya seriously I think u don’t know the meaning of illiterate pity on u first u wash your mouth with gangajal then u will be speaking good words if u don’t then it depends upon u
Understand or u better understand
hello family waalon.. SHANAYA here, using Riya’s id.. Woh jalkukri Riya nahi ho .. Bash mar kar dena galti se.. mummy Ji .. Tussi great ho Ji.. Arey Riya tujhe pata last time Kab tune yeh non sensical baatein ki thi to maine tujhe thoda Sa data aur mera sir ka dard chala gaya.. Tab maine yea baat Eva se bhi kahi thi.. Tujhse bhi kehtu hai.. Tu bata tu hai kaun .. Let’s do a personal meeting.. I’ll give u some slaps and all problems of my life will say tatta bye bye.. Kyu re family walon.. Aur if u hate Eva’s writing so much then why are u forcing her to write on raglak.. And haa we love u too so much tabhi na , dekho your pyar is so strong that even getting insulted like bhao bhao bhao ( samjh to gayi ho na ki seedhe se kahu ki kis ki tarah insult ho ti hai) you come back to talk to us.. Waah re aaj ke zamane ka pyaar.. Love you too again
@riya
With due respect I want to say that i know that u live in zoo but that does not mean our house is zoo…
Yeah I need charan b u need psychiatric assistance.. Dude u r totally talking overboard…
Yup m mummy ki chamchi but dear u r a dabba.. Khali dabba which is good for nothing… Bhai itta bura bolna kaha se seekha… N aap bachpan se ese harkatein karti hai ya koi special course kia tha?!
meher my first episode of a hate to love story has been published it is in 1st page plz read it and comment
nice…….
Thank u Soujanya?
Awesome start Eva…and honestly speaking..I’ll read anything u wrote..i don’t care about writing style or couples…writer is Eva…this thing is enough for me to read something…love uh???
Write*
Aww..that’s very sweet of you…thank you and love you too ??
ragini character is awesome
Thank u?
Nice start bhabi….aap ko toh detective banna chahiye tha .. mystery,mystery, mystery!!
Where is Samjhota 3??Post that soon!
Thank u jethji..mujhe detective nehi banna…they were black cloths…and I hate black..
Awesome…pls pls give ur ff list.. i missed 2 ff.. pls
Swaraginiti Ki kahani
I hate u too
Samjhota Swaragini ka
Samjhota Swaragini ka intezaar
Rishto Ki dastan
Sanskar zingedi meri
Ragini vs Manyata
Samjhota swara aur sanskar ka.
And now this one..thank u?
Nyc
Thank u ?
Si back with new ff. Hehe changed all Intially sketch of all pairs.
Honestly saying l dislike swasan as much you dislike raglak. So if you will give extra importance to them . Then l wouldn’t be able to read it.??
Sweetheart no one can compete with me in hating raglak..no one hates someone as much as I hate Raglak…everyone reads my ff without any expectations..and u’ll soon get to know about the couples
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Even I hate Raglak very much so I made them Bro and sis in my story and whenever Raglak scenes came I would just forward them, cause I would feel sick
Lol…u even hate raglak..but I’m so sure..not more than me..?
Awesome dear…. Continue soon… Anyway congrats on ur 9th ff…….
Thank u Deeksha?
nice
Thank u Vyshu?
awesome
Thank u?
Excellent dear.Keep going.
Oyee..dear nehi Mein teri bhabi Hu pagli…?? and thank u?
Very nice ???
Thank u Krystle?
Wow nice !! What are the couples ??
Thank u..and I never reveal the couples..sorry..u have to wait to knw who the couple..
Awesum
Superb
Love rags
Thank u Lisa?
Awesome start Eva
Thank u Crazygirl?
Hi can you please read my both stories A day to remember and Swaragini: you stole my heart
Ok..i’ll read them 😀
Awesome one dear….loved rags charecter..dakubasanti lol :p ..watng for nxt update…
Thank u dear..thus name just popped up in my mind and I wrote that..?
Hello eva bhabhi …..nice start…..i m reading your first off, n i like the way it has began….waiting for the next episode…
N one question, does samjota 3 have any connection with previous series?? Cause i m planning to read it as well…
Plz do reply
Nita what is ur role in our family sorry I didn’t remember it
She is riya ‘s hubby
Hey sanskriti…. I guess u also have the same position as mine……uma’s hubby right??
Nita..my samjhota series r not connected…thank u..and she I mean he is Riya ka pati..hamari wali Riya ka pati..apki sali ka pati..
Hiiii eva , i know u from begining but didnt comment on ur stories because they swalak and ragsan …. first KAAN PAKADKE SORRY ….
But please make this one swasan and raglak , otherwise i cant read it please please …. *widest ppy dog eyes i can make* ….
See sweetheart..my story never had 2 couples..its always like anything can happen…so u can’t say that this wer swalak and swasan..my other ff is purely swasan…samjhota’s last season..still anything can happen there as well…I can’t give any surety about the couples…
Samjhota’s third and latest season…not last..
Dundhiliya maine???
Wah eva mujhe itnaaaaa accha banadiya???
Tumne 8 ffs likke hai?? Great wifey
Yeh bhi bohot accha hai.
Love u wifey????
Sab family members bhi mil gaye. Kaise ho sab???
Aur Eva uss pagal Riya ko bhul jao. Just think she doesnt exist?
She is Eva’s desperate lover
… Har jgh ise search kr k aa jati hai
No comments on Riya Kapoor case..app toh hahi acche..love u too hubby..???