Hi rikarians & Shrenalians, sorry for late update.
Previous chappy chapter-6
Anyone who need all the previous crappies, the link is also given in previous chappy.
Aishwarya – “Violet / Purple” for hatred (for omkara towards gauri) n rising affection (for Rikara’s rising affection)…..
Dhar – red for anger, romance
Aashi26, Verna – red for pain
Dunno if this chappy is boring, try to guess the colour.
Recap:- Om was gouri’s art teacher. Misunderstandings led om to hate gouri as he thought she will marry kali for money.
But, finally Om ended marrying her.
Svetlana exposed.
Om used drugs stopped by gouri , led to om slapping gouri. Bua asked gouri to give Om an oil massage.
” No buama, uski koi zaroorat nahi hai.” a shocked Om told.
He was staring gouri. He actually wanted a massage from her, but still his mind was not ready to give a chance to her.Nowadays his mind is always flipflopping with gouri.Sometimes he wanted her attention,but couldn’t really accept her.
When lost in thoughts, he heard gouri’s voice.
“woh, darsal buamaji, I have a severe headache now. I can’t do this; I want to take some rest.”
Om was surprised at this. Usually she doesn’t ignore to do any of his work; but now she has. May be she might be really tired, he thought. Suddenly he remembered the previous night’s incident. He was guilty.
Buama was sad, ” fine puttar,abhi abhi you should just have a sleep. Omkie go with her. If u want take some medicine from Shivay,theeke?”
Gauri was smiling. She actually had headache. She was depressed with yesterday’s incident which came in the form of headache.
She didn’t wait for Om to go to their room.Whereas he was surprised with her ignoring behavior. The after effects of a slap, he thought. After all she is dabbang gouri, she wouldn’t forgive easily; he knows.
“But…who wants her forgiveness, after all I hate her then what?” he thought. But still he was remorseful.
A debate was going on in his mind, when he saw that she had already gone to the room.
As he entered he saw that she was already laying on the bed. He took some balm and a pill from his wardrobe and sat near her.
O: have this gouri.
G: I don’t want ( attitude)
O: don’t be ziddy, just take this and rest.
G : y do u care? I’m a bad girl, then y should u worry?
O: I’m a human, so I do show humanity to everyone in the world.( not ready to give up)
Suddenly gouri thought something.
G: I don’t have headache!!!
O: (shocked) what?? y did u lie to bua maa?
G: I didn’t want to do a massage for u. I just wanted to escape…
Om was literally shocked. This really hurt him, he didn’t know why. All these days she was caring him like hell, even he was fed up. But now when he knew that she simply ignored him made him sad. She have lied just to ignore this , am I that bad?? All their previous moments of friendship was flashing in his mind.
Gouri was Watching him. She understood that this had affected him. She wanted him to realise that she affects him, her ignorance affects him.She was deeply hurt by his slap the previous day, so she decided that she wouldn’t be a crying doll anymore to all his encounters. She was also sad that she had to ignore him to make him realise his feelings. Actually, all this were some ideas of anika bhaujai.It was difficult, but still she would do this.
Om went out without speaking. Later, gouri had medicine and took a nap.
It was 3 pm.The servants were given a leave that day and only jhanvi and gouri were there in home. The rest were out of home.Om usually spends Sundays in gallery finishing all works.
Gouri was just waking up, she could hear footsteps. She preferred to rest some more time. As she was beginning to doze off, she heard a big thud; she was shocked.
She managed to get out of the bed and run. As she ran, she got a faint vision of jhanvi laying down on the floor with blood. As he approached her, she cried as many small glass pieces had pierced into Gouri’s leg; she hadn’t noticed it.Then she saw that a glass vase was broken and jhanvi’s head had hit on the wall; she was unconscious too.
Gouri couldn’t bear the pain in her leg ,it was bleeding. But she managed to take jhanvi to her room somehow. She had to control her shock and pain the same time…….
Om had got a call from shivay that his mother had a fall. He couldn’t even concentrate on driving as he was tensed. He didn’t know what had happened to her. He was crying, his vision was blurred.
As he reached home , he first saw gouri. She was taking him to jhanvi when she saw Tej.She left Om and went to Tej; even he was shocked. His eyes were red and teary. Gouri took Tej to jhanvi which was watched by an angry Om.
Then she came back.Om lashed at her
O: who asked u to take Mr.oberoi to my mom?
G: calm down, let sasurji see her first.
O: come on gouri, u r a stupid. My mom is suffering because of him.
G: this is ur problem. U make ur own decisions about others , u r not trying to see this feelings. Dint u see how much sasurji was crying. After all she is his wife. After sultanaji had gone it is true that he was angry on maaji. But now we should create situations for them to come closer, to feel each other’s hidden love.We should give him a chance. Only when given a chance true love can be realised.
Her eyes were teary when she told this. Om understood this, he knew what she was saying. As he looked into the room, he saw that Papa and mom were crying. Mr.oberoi was holding mom’s hand and caressing her forehead; he had never seen this in his life. He smiled seeing this.
Later when he went to see mom with gouri,he nearly broke down seeing his mom.
O: what happened mom.
J : ( angry)nothing , my BP increased and I collapsed.
O : I know Mr.oberoi must have told u about divorce.
J : u r the reason for this!!!
O: ( shocked) but mom!!
J: u have started to take drugs isn’t it?
And u slapped my gouri too when she tried to stop you.
His eyes were filled. He just wanted to disappear at that moment.
J : I don’t have to say anything. I don’t know for whom u r doing all this. U r destroying gouri’s life too.Did u see her feet was hurt while saving me due to glass pieces; yet she took care of me when doctor came without even applying medicine.
He noticed her bandaged feet. He was sad….
O : mom, I’m sorry… please
J: ( crying) it’s ok beta, I now u love me and would never do anything to make me cry. U shouldn’t destroy yourself Om. U have a good life ahead. U need to care gouri also.U have responsibility of gouri too.Everything will be fine. Don’t be desp.
Saying this, she kissed rikara.
A remorseful Om came out of the room. He was seeing gouri. They were having an eyelock.
An ocean was waving in his mind. He couldn’t understand.He thought gouri as characterless but each and every action of her was glorifying her character everyday. He thought everything to be a drama but the care she gave to him and his mom was…
He was in a dilemma; he couldn’t even face gouri.He didn’t know whether to care and console her or not.
He saw that gouri was trying hard to climb the steps. Without thinking he went and took her in his arms and started to climb up. Gouri was wondering, y is he helping her; maybe as a favour for caring his mom.She didn’t expect anything more.
He kept her in bed, took the medicine and sat on his knee. As he took the bandage out, he could see a pathetically bleeding feet of gouri, he wondered how she could bear the pain.
G: I don’t need any help.
O : just keep quiet, don’t be a rebel.
G: I know u r returning the favor for caring ur mom. I don’t need sympathy.
Om was shocked, she is giving different meaning to his actions. He was doing this as he really cared for her; not as a favour. But he dint want to open it up.His eyes were teary, so now she was seeing him as an evil.
“I don’t have any problem if she think anything about me” he thought.
But his heart … his heart was saying him that, it do affect him; but he ignored it.
As he did all medications and bandage it, without even thinking he kissed her foot.Gouri was shocked by this.Even Om.
G: y r u caring this characterless girl??
O: I would have did this for anyone!!
G: would u have kissed anyone’s foot also????
Precap:-.Will some shocking revelations lead to rikara union??
A/N : hey guys, few things.
1. I will clear the mu soon maybe by next chappy. I wanna focus on this life after that.
2. Will make bua maa a villain later..
3. Rumya or ruvya??
Waiting for all ur responses …..???
33 Comments
Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr……. Rumya…..
Thanks bk, waiting for ur ff too?
Lovely chappy… Loved Gauri’s attitude towards Omkara….
Omkara having strong feelings for Gauri but is not ready to accept…..
I am soo happy to see Omkara’s hidden love and care for gauri..
Actually I want this track in DBO serial as well….
Keep writing like this ……
Thank you mahi, yep I too expect this same track on DBO..
Let’s wait and watch??
Awesome…loved it waiting for next update soon
Thanks niri for supporting.
Next update coming soon?
Awesome episode.
Keep writing dear.I’m still smiling on Omkara’s hidden love which he is not accepting. Love this Om.
I hope Gauri will help Om to realise his love for her.
Yes dear, but u will have to wait till om accepts his feelings?
Awesome
Rumya..
Hay charity thanks for commenting?
Amazing episode dear ?? Gauri should make him believe that she effects him ‘uuse farak padhta hai ‘ plzzz pair rumya , I didn’t connect with ruvya
Yes this will happen soon
Even I love rumya?
Hw u manage to surprise us wd wow episodes?….?…
It was amazing diii…loved dabbang Gauri’s attitude….
Plzzz post nxt part soon…plzzz…byee..luv u??
Happy to know that u were surprised.
Keep following shreya?
Next update coming soon?
Rumya
dont bring bua maa at all
lovely,amazing episode
give some romance scene between Gaurikara
Yes aashi, u will get romantic rikara after 2 more chappies?
Awesome shraddha!!!! ? loved gauri’s attitude and om’s care….. He loves her but of course he’s an Oberoi.. How can he accept his feelings easily……. Huh…. Well superb epi…..
N I want rumya pls……
Update soon n take care dear!!! ?
Hey Richa, thanks yaar….
Yes he need to realise his love
Next update coming soon?
Wow.. today I had a smile in my face while reading about Om’s povs.. really want him to understand his mistake and unite with Gauri.. I loved it
And colour is for rebel Gauri and Understanding Om
Yes Verna, this will happen just wait & watch…
Happy to know that I could bring a smile on ur face?
AWESOME AMAZING CUTE NICE SWEET SUPERB??????
Don’t Make buamaa vilan
I want RUMYA??
Please clear GauriKara MU FAST.
Of course dear,keep following?
It is nice one dear… Wants rumya…
Thanks dear, yes rumya for sure?
Awesome yaar.. loved it… I wish I could see tis in don’t… waiting for the next one… post it soon
I hope we will see in DBO.
Next update coming soon?
Hey shraddha,
I have read all your ff’s chapters and seriously I don’t have any words to describe it. You have written so descriptively I could feel your love for writing.
Your story’s twist and turns are unexpected and amazing. I don’t understand much about colors but I will surely give it a try.
And talking about om please realize gauri’s truth and her true love for him.
And about rudra, I would like rumya. Missing their bubbly and cute chemistry.
Waiting for next update
Thanks for ur comment…
Yes I do love writing on rikara…
Hope u r liking the plot
Next update coming soon?
& Love Tashkara too?
Gauri’s ignorance will make Omkara realise dat he loves her..
Lovely update
No ruvya please and also dnt make bua maa as a villian… as usual u r awesome with ur writing skills dear…
Lovely ❤️❤️❤️
No let her be positive na