DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 11 [By Renima]
Damn sorry friends, for late updates……I was almost sucked with professional and some sort of personal issues which made me 2 remain silent for a while….Also my health didn’t favored me…….Finally when I got time, I am giving this update……This is only for rikara, and the thing is while writing this, I am also in dilemma like my characters in this ff…..I would have stopped writing all ff’s but due 2 some silent readers, am not able 2 do it……. So I don’t know whether this one is good, I have tried my level best,…..Pls forgive me…… 1000000000 times sorry and hope u guys will comment on this…….
Scene – 19 { @ Hospital}
Om runs 2 hospital and gets panic…..As soon as gauri got admitted, om also tried 2 enter room…
Doctor : Excuse me…..U can’t go inside….We have 2 check the patient ….
Omkara : Doctor, pls save my gauri…….Pls make it fast……Doctor……
Doctor : We will try……U pls wait outside and pray 2 god for ur wife’s fast recovery ….. doctor pats om’s shoulder….
Om bows his head and stares gauri who was lying on bed without knowing anything…… Om went out from the room and folds his two hands before the ganeshji’s idol and bend down @ his own knees……..
Omkara’s view
For gauri, am praying before u , I have seen her ringing bell before u @ mornings and the way she use 2 worship u……My hands are plain and I don’t know abt rituals and puja…… All I know is gauri trust her baghwan sankarji and it’s ur duty 2 keep that trust…….Pls save her….[ om fold his hands and shut his eyes for a while]
His mind, breath and heart was just telling “gauri” only…..Omkara opened his eyes and rushed near the ward…..Through the glass window, he stared gauri’s face……Her face was covered with an oxygen mask, as she was finding hard 2 breathe……Om felt his heart beat was going down, he couldn’t view her face any more……Om leaned his back on the glass and bent @ his own knees…….His face got pale, his hands started shivering and his eyes went redish…….Om’s heart again brought flashes of gauri’s face, her eyes and some moments which he spent with gauri…….BGM….. “Dekhke Voh Mujhe Tera Palkein Jhuka Dena…
Yaad Bahut Aaye Tera Muskara Dena…
Kaise Bhulaauunvo Woh Saari Baatein
Woh Meethi RaateinWoh Mulaaqaatein
Jeeyen To Jeeyen Kaise Bin Aapke” [film- saajan] plays…..
He couldn’t lost himself in gauri’s thoughts as some one touched his shoulder…..
Person : Excuse me, U have 2 fill this form as it’s part of formalities….……By the way that patient is ur wife, is it ??
Omkara nods his head and stares gauri;s face with teary eyes…..
Omkara : Just tell me where I have 2 sign ?? My wife is been fighting with life and death…… [om gets emotional and completes the formalities ]
After some time, om gets permission 2 meet gauri…….
Doctor : Don’t worry, she is out of danger now…..Within few hrs. she will gain back her consciousness…..U can meet her…..
Omkara : Thank u doctor…..
Om goes inside and sits near her bed…..He finds that gauri was still lying silently on the bed……Om holds gauri’s palm closer 2 his cheek and stares her face…….
Omkara : Gauri, this silence is distracting me, it is torturing me and I am not able 2 bear this silence……..I can’t see u like these gauri…….I made a promise 2 ur maa that we will stay together forever…….I don’t want 2 lose u, gauri, I can bear pain , but can’t bear ur loss…… Gauri….u can’t leave me alone in this dark silence…….It is killing me, gauri…….. Do u hear me, gauri ??? Why u are not telling anything ???…..[om burst into tears and it falls on gauri;s palm…….His eyes went down as he was not able 2 stare gauri in pain…..] BGM…..”Pad jaaye naa, dil pe kabhi, gam kaa nishaan,oh saathiya” plays……..
Mean while gauri slowly get back her sense and she opened her eyes…….She gently whispered ……”Omkaraji”……..Om raised his eyes and stared gauri’s eyes…..He find gauri’s eyes have went tiredness , but they were conveying something 2 him…….Gauri find om’s teary eyes which made her 2 shatter a drop of tear….Before that tear could fall down, om placed his finger beneath her eye and wiped it……
Gauri : Omkaraji…….Are u fine now??? Wooh…….sulthana……
Omkara : [omkara interrupted gauri by placing his finger on her lips ] Sh!!!! Gauri……U need rest…….Just take rest well…….
Gauri stared omkara’s eyes with teary eyes………She was not able 2 tell anything 2 him @ that moment….. But her eyes reflected her inner heart’s feelings 2 omkara…..Om slowly took the finger from her lips and placed his hands on her cheeks…….He stared her for a while and smiled with wet eyes…….Om again wiped her tears and touched her cheek….Gauri feels heavenly……..
Omkara : Thanks 2 ur sankarji……He didn’t broken ur trust……
Gauri : Haa……And I know this time u have kept my trust……
Omkara : U didn’t felt fear ??
Gauri : Never…….When u are with me, I will never feel scared…….
Omkara : I am not ur bagwan sankarji……
Gauri : But for me u are like bagwan, Omkaraji……..When u filled sindoor in my hairline, I felt sankarji has send u for me only……..And I trust u more because u promised 2 maa that we will keep this relation forever……..I know u can’t lie before any one and u can never break promise also…….
Omkara : Gauri, ur trust, view all tells u knows me well…….Am I ??
Gauri : Haa……Because u are my husband……And…..[gauri stared om’s face……gauri’s mind voice…..”I want 2 tell u omkaraji that my heart is full of u……It needs ur ishq, but I know u haven’t felt it for me”]
Omkara : Why u stopped in middle ?? As a husband, I am not doing anything for u……For ur trust , I rewarded u pain……For the relationship, I rewarded u pain…….And now u fighted with life and death because I am responsible for ur pain……..And beyond of that u expect something from me, and am not able 2 fulfil ur expectations, because there also am giving u pain only……..“DARD WHO TEER HEIN, JOH BAAR- BAAR DIL KO GHAYAL KARTA HAIN…..
ZINDAGI EK JISM HEIN, JISS MEIN YEH TEER BAAR- BAAR CHOT DETE HEIN …….
JUDE HEIN HUM ISSI TEER SE AUR BANE HEIN HUM ISS TEER KE PYAARE SHIKAAR…….” [ om gets emotional]
Gauri : Omkaraji…….[gauri gently hold om’s hand] U are not alone in this pain……I am with u…….
Omkara : [om smiles and stares gauri……om’s mind voice…….”I don’t want u as a sufferer of my wounds and pains, gauri…..But destiny has made u and me in a relation where both are supposed 2 bear pain…..I don’t know how long I have 2 suffer pain, but from today onwards I will try my level best 2 heal ur pain, gauri…….It’s my heart’s promise…..” Om gets emotional and he waves his hand through gauri’s forehead] Take rest….gauri…….I will be back within few minutes…….
Om gets up and turns 2 leave……But gauri hold om’s hand and gaurika stare each other’s eyes…….
Gauri : U are leaving ????[gauri’s eyes went teary as she was like a weeping kid, who doesn’t want 2 leave his mom’s hand]
Omkara : I am just going 2 wash room only…….[Om smiles and releases his hand from gauri’s hold…….They share an emotional eyelock……..BGM…..”Jo naa keha sake tum, jo naa keha sake hum, kehane lagi donon se who khamoshiyaa, oh saathiya……saathiya…..saathiya” plays…….Om slowly goes 2 wash room….Gauri turned her eyes 2wards om and smiled with wet eyes……After a few minutes om come out from wash room and finds that gauri has fallen asleep…..He arranged pillows properly and slowly touched her cheek……Om sit beside her and stared her ……After a while, he slowly tried 2 took his hand from her cheek, but gauri hold om’s hand unknowingly as if she was telling om that am safe in ur arms, omkaraji, don’t leave me…….Om leaned back on the bed without making any change on his hand and stared her……He recollected the moment when gauri asked him……”u are leaving?”
Omkara : I will never leave you, gauri……..It’s my promise……Om holds gauri’s another hand and stared her……..
BGM……. “Teer aisa laga dard aisa jagaa, Chot dil pe wo khaayi mazaa aa gayaa!
Mere rashke qamar Tune pehli nazar jab nazar se milaayi maza aagaya
Ranjha ho gaye hum fanaa ho gaye Aise tu muskuraai mazaa aa gaya” [film- baadshaho]
PRECAP : PAIN ALSO WILL BECOME SWEET,WHEN U ARE WITH ME…..BLOOD WILL NEVER SCARE ME IF U WILL HOLD ME IN UR ARMS…….IF SOULMATE IS WITH ME, THEN I AM BEAR 2 SUFFER ANYTHING…….
13 Comments
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC HEART TOUCHING INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
Dear Renima Di
Om’s Pray For Gauri Is Nice??OmRi Talk And Scene Is Awesome???Totally I Love The Part???Story Is Going Very Good And Intersting??????
Thank u uff for ur continuous support 2 ff…..nothing is been going right in life and am feeling bit tensed now….So ff’s will came late……u have 2 wait for that…..
yup…superb episode..missed ur ff..take care of ur health..willl wait for ur nxt post…
Thanks a lot bubblu……Will post next one when i will get time and right mood…..
Amazzinggg part….di u r back wd bang…..
Awesome part…loved convo amid rikara…just nailed it.. .
Post whenever u get time….
Nd I hope u r better now…nd all problems r solved ..my wishes nd prayers r wd u.
Lots of love?????
Thank u saku for ur continuous support 2 ff…..nothing is been going right in life and am feeling bit tensed now….So ff’s will came late……u have 2 wait for that…..Thanks a lot for taking time and reading this one and am glad that u liked it…..and am ok….from past few days am facing eye pain and head ache and i went hospital dear……now am feeling bit okay…..but work stress and some issues are troubling , don’t worry i will cum back soon…..and will write and post next one when i get time and right mood……love u lot chotu
Love u too didu ????…just take care any ur health…dont stress ur eye….nd coming to ur problems…dont worry di.. everything will get fine soon….we all r wd u???…..
Awesome….emotional and heart touching part loved it..Take care of ur health..
Thank u niriha
Update sooon its awesome update soooon cant wait more
Thanks dear and sorry now am facing certain issues and am not in a mood 2 write some thing…..so ff will cum late…..sorry….
It is awesome dii… Stay happy and blessed dii…
Thanks a lot nikki darling