Hey frnds…tulasi here….sum of u may know me….i m always intrestd in readng ffs…i do read many…..ffs os pragya di, sat, shama, ayath,ananya,jara di, n many more…..n nw i jus wanna give it a try….i know i m nt gd at writng…..bt plz do read it n comment frnds plzzzzzzzz……all chandnis n chamelis r accepted….i m a very big fan of shivika……all d negatives r warmly welcomed……
Nw enough of my bakwaas…..i ll write writing…
One fine mrng…..oberoi mansion….
Shivaay n omru in d kitchen preparng breakfast for d family…
Ru: bhaiah ajj tho sunday hain….!!!?? mujhe clg nahi jana padega…..n i cn meet my new gf …hurreeee!!!!
Om: arey dumbell oberoi!!! Tu clgg jana kab se shuru kiya… om n shi giggles???
Ru keep faces??
Ru: bhaiah….ajj kuch karthe hai na plzzz…..
Shi: rudra…u know i m always busy ..n today i have an imp meetng…!!!
Om: shi..tu kabhi nahi sudregaa….keep sumtime for urself shivaay…jab dekho kaam me phas jaathe hoo….
Shi: its imp om….n its a very big deal…..
N then dadi, pinky, jhanvi comes der…
Pinky: mujhe aap sabse kuch kahna hain….aaj hamare homes mein ek guest aane wali hain….
Dadi: kaun hain puttar
Ru: waali hain matlab ladki….he thnks she ll fall for me….??
Pinky : badmash baccha….woh tumse bigs hain…
Om n shi giggles
Shi: whose tht mom?
Pinky: wo mere frnds ki daughtrs hain…yahaa padne aarahi hain…
Shi: okay mom…i m very busy…mein jaa rahaa hoon..!!
He bids byeee to evryone n goes
Ru: o..bhaiah ka ek gf hain…pataa hain tumhe??
Om: wat ?? Kaun hain???
Ru: arey uska office hain naa…wahi…they give hifi to each other…..
Scene shifts…..railway station…..
Kolkata to mumbai….
Prinki studies in kolkata….for navratri holidays she strd to go home….n wanna give evryone a big surprise…….
Near her seat der r a grp of naughty boys who r teasng d girls near by…..n they strd teasng prinku…….
U know our prinku is always nervous n she strd cryng…..????
N then a girl enters d compartment…..she is tall….skinny……straight loose hair n in pink salwaar…..she looks aweeeeesummmm totally……she came der… n strd shoutng at those boys….
Girl: arreeyy….kya kar rahe ho idhar…….agar jyada kiya na tum logon ko meri chandni jawab degi……
Boys: woo koun hain?? Another girl …brng her here …we ll see her alsooo….n laughs..
Girl: ha ha laata hoon…bahot tezz hain woo….agar ayegi na sab loog bhagna shuru kar dengee…n lifts her sandal (chandni)….
Soooo tht girl is annika shetty….our cutiee piee annika….
Uss chandni se unki band baajathi hain….n evryone runs frm der…..
Ani: its okay yaar….dnt wry..main hoon naa…issliya chandni ko rakhna hain ….☺☺☺
Prinku: thnk u sooo much…main bahot dar gayi thi….
Ani: its okay yar…calm down….
Pri: tho wats ur name??? N wat do u doo…??
They sit in their seats n strts talkng…..
Ani: main hoon annika shetty…..i completed my mbbs….n wanted to join my pg in mumbai….n u???
Prinku tells abt her….n they became gd frnsss……
Prinku: soo wer r u gng to live???
Ani: waha meraa mom ki dosth hain…unke ghar jaa rahi hoon….
Pri: wer do they live??
Ani: dey r oberois….suna ho hogaa ..unke baare mein….
Prinku strts laughng sooooi much……
Ani: kya hua??? Tum has kyu rahi hoo…main ne kya joke maara????
Arreyyyy anika tum hamaare ghar hi aa rahiii hooo….mein priyanka singh oberoi…..daughter of shakti oberoi….
Annika feels sooo happy ……n tells abt her moms frnd …i meant pinky……
Prinku tells tht i m her daughter…..!!!!!
Thts all for 2day guys….actually its a one shot bt dis is my first time n i m nervous abt hw would u receive mee……soo may be i m borng..bt plzz bear wid meeee…..plzz guys n drop ur commentsssss….plzzz ?????
Precap::: shivikas meet…..!!!!!!
35 Comments
nice continue
Thnk u
woww..didi..nice starting plz continue dont be nervous dii
Thnk u dear….
nice
Kamaal Yar.dont know what to say. It is awesome Yar. I was awestruck. Please update the next epi ASAP
Thnk u sat…..i m really very happy tht u liked it
Thnk u dear…..
Tulsi marvelous dear don’t worry you’re not bore and I have to know whether ur elder or younger to me I am 20 … Should I call u di
Thnk u di…..i m youger to u….by jus one yr….
Its fab dear pls cntinueeee
Thnk u ashu…
Too gud dear…..fab continue
Thnk u nithu
Superb tulsai…..actually sorry for commenting…..no words to say………
Thnks di….inspired by u….
It is fabulous didi ……..pls update soon
Thnku dear
It was good… and pls continuèeeeeee…..
Thnk u niharika
Nice track…… please continue……
It was very nice l like it very much .
Good srtart post the next episode ASAP
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Nice Tulasi! Good going! Waiting for the story to proceed 🙂
Keep smiling.
-Zuha
Thnks dear…
its nice pls continue n it isnt boring dont worry
aweeeeesommmee dear
Nice … Plzzz continue….
Really nice pls upload next episode soon
keep going tulasi
Thnk u shivani, mukta,mohini,satyam, sanchi ,tiara, kakku
It was really nice…
Keep continue..
Starting was too good.. And I loved anikas intro with prinku
Thnk u goms…