Hello peeps… Thanks a lot for all of your lovely support and I already started mission replying to each comment and hope I’ll complete it soon and Yeah back with next update…. And no but before update I would like to clear one thing nope two thing almost reader are complaining regarding update is short but if I’ll make update lengthier then thrill charm of update will lost and another very few ask me to not show Shivay’s character like this but trust me with the passing of update his character will change and as of now his character’s intense love, obsession is required so… Hope you all get my point and if not then feel free to let me know by comment and PM… Kitna sara bol diya now Enjoy update…
Part four
Feeling his rough touch on her milky bare back Anika come to her normal sense and she tried to remove his hand from her back as his touch is sending chill to her spine but before she can remove his hand Shivay hold her hand and wit full delicacy he twist her hand and lean over her and in his deep husky voice he once again speak in her ears
Shivay: Anika I want you to stop and break this marriage…
This time with all her stamina she succeeded in free her hand from grip and push him lil which bring distance between their bodies which not liked by Shivay and before he can do anything Anika speak
Anika: Are you out of your mind Mr.Oberoi??? Seems like you are not in your sense… And do not you dare repeat that word… (With full anger in her voice)
Despite of her anger and her dislike for his proximity to her Shivay come close to her and roughly he caresses her lips and speaks
Shivay: Yeah Anika I am out of my mind and my senses after seeing you. And now you are driving me crazy with passing of each moment…
And his hand started moving towards her neckline and forcefully Anika remove his hand and speak
Anika: Just stop this nonsense and leave from here now Mr.Oberoi… (In rage with full anger in her voice)
Listening her such tone Shivay loose his control over his anger and he roughly hold her by her shoulder and trap her between him and nearer wall and speak
Shivay: Listen, me carefully, I am mad for you now and from now only I am the one who can stand with you can call you mine so just stop this blo*dy marriage with that looser Daksh. And I you are mine now that’s final….
As soon as his words register in her mind Anika loose her senses and stamina to fight back with demon standing in front of him but soon she recover because she do not like to be weak in front of any one and she retort back to him
Anika: I am not any property whom you can call yours and You madness for me is your problem so dealt with it and now I’ll call everyone and do not you dare threaten me by giving what they look because now I am not bother with that because I do not wanted to tolerate you and your nonsense any more…
Anika is in shocked with her own self because she never ever shouted on any one like this but today she is screaming on devil in front of him… And soon Shivay left her hand settle on her bed and looking at her he speak
Shivay: I like this wild kitten hidden inside you, now you totally spellbound me and I am eager to know more layers of yours you are hiding…. (With naughty smirk)
Anika feel disgusting with his smirk and she tries to cover herself with Dupatta of her bridal ware which firstly come in her eye sight. Seeing her hiding herself with that dupatta shivay stand up and started walking in her direction and seeing him coming towards her Anika feared little but she pretend to be normal and coming to her Shivay tries to take off Dupatta from her body and speak
Shivay: This dupatta is of someone else’s name so keep it away from your body. I do not like it…
Anika: And I do not care for your liking…
Shivay: Stop answering back.
And he holds her hand and twist it this time bit roughly and Anika hissed due to pain and seeing this Shivay continue.
Shivay: Anika, I feel same pain when you are dreaming and missing someone else so do not do this and break this marriage… (With pleading look but anger is there in his tone)
Anika: I won’t and just leave my hand you are hurting me…
Shivay: I told you na I do not want to leave you I damn want you and keep one thing every yeas and no of your will gonna affect your life from now..
Saying this he lost all his sense and control over his lust and lean over her and before she can respond he slammed his lips on her tightly And feeling his rough lips over her rosy lips she pressed her lips hard restricting him to move further and struggling to press him away from her but Shivay aggressively pull her more close to him leaving no space between their body not even for air to pass and his lips and tongue are struggling to enter inside her mouth to taste evry corner but she is not allowing so irritated Shivay hardly bit her lower lips and same time pinch her on her waist and she ouched due to pain and taking benefit of this he entered his tongue inside her mouth and starts tasting every corner and same time his hands are roamng over her milky bare back and waist randomly and seductively and Anika is feeling disgusting and lifeless dur to his touch and she lose all her stamina and sense to fight back and she give up and waiting for him to stop this all. And taking his sweet time he pulled back when he is out of breath and caressing her cheek he speak
Shivay: You taste heavenly and be ready to Shivay Sing Oberoi’s bride…
And he leaves from there leaving crying Anika behind…
So howz update is??? Enjoyed it or not??? And any guess or assumption for Shivay’s next action… Plzzzzz leave your feedback whether its positive or negative and dearsilent reader plz don’t shy feel free to comment…
And yeah writers plz msg me your updates link I love to read all your works…
72 Comments
How rude!! I hate Shivay in this
Trust me dear with passing updates you gonna love Shivay…??
And thanks for comment dear..☺☺
Ohh… My… God pri… This was soo romantic…. No not romantic…. It was lust…. Wat To say…. I m. Speech less… I can feel each and every word written by u…. I stop breathing when i was reading that kissing part…. U nailed it this tym…. Awesome se Awesome ❤❤❤❤
Thanks Sanu baby…☺☺☺ ?
Love you Sanu baby…??????
Today Shivaye was a hungry animal…. I can never imagine sso like this…. ????
Me too but before half hour of writing this update I imagined this SSO…???
Ohhh my mata Shivay is so intense lover and he is obesses with Anika and his way to handle her is lil non gentle I don’t like it but its okay coz I am waiting for ShivIka to come together….
PRI you rocked it gal… This is what call Khidkitod update….
Thanks dear… And soon all gentle ness will come rushing to him jus wait and read…☺☺☺
It was damm strucking……not even can imagine harsh sso like so….
Thanks for your comment dear…☺☺
Omgggggggg shivay obsession has no limits. Really I too can’t breathe PRI.I love him at ta same time hating him in this.he is so villian wala hero.sry such a stupid phrase. But waiting eagerly for ta next part
Nandupie that was perfect phrase right now he is like that and Thanks Nandupie for your comment…☺☺☺
Love you Nandupie…???
Am loving this obsessive Shivaay but at the same time am feeling bad for poor Anika.
Anika ke din bhi aayenge just wait…???
And Thanks for comment dear…☺☺☺
Its fab!!!
But I doubt whether he will be fine or not.
He will be…?
And thanks a lot for your comment…☺☺
Hot update ahaa nice update This SSO is giving goosebumps to me…???
I loved it and enjoyed it…
Thanks for comment Aish…☺☺☺
omg.. Shivaaay attacked her like an animal.. crazy obsession.. wtever he is doing i dont know its right or wrong.. It was lust not love.. but i enjoyed it a lot 😀
update soon
Thanks for comment Priyanka for your comment…☺☺☺
actually I am wondering that you are same Pri who write cute and sweet OS???
O my maata Pri this is latterly like breathtaking update and this side of SSO ahhh I wanted to see such SSO in IB…
well done Keep it up and update next part soon I am now being obsessed with this dark FF..
Actually I think this is first Dark FF on ShivIka and about low comment plz don’t worry we will support you OK???
Yeah I am same PRI…?????
Thanks for your support and comment dear…☺☺☺
Ohhhhhh my god…????
Such a hot update it is and after your dare wala shots I am waiting for some hot shot from you and finally you are backnin world of hot shot…???????
Pri I loved this update and in this spine chilling winter your update form sweat on my face such hot hot…????
Pri next part ASAP plz…
thanks for your comment dear….☺☺☺
And about comment Dear I already have told my frnd group to comment here being guest and I will do what I can for you but plz you don’t quitt writing han…. plz…
That’s really sweet of you Rivanah…☺☺☺?
Speechless and spellbound by your update…
I wish IB bhi itna hot hota… And this one is amazing thriller dark FF…
Update next part soon plz…
Thanks for you comment dear…
Thanks for updating this one.??
Obsession side of Shivaay is damn crazy…
I just loved it…. keep going??
Sorry Di I couldn’t express my views as I was a bit busy at that time.
Like Nandupie and Sanu even I couldn’t breathe at the time of Shivaay’s forceful kiss.? I felt each and every bit of this and you expressed it in some other way which is out of world.
After reading only we felt like burning inside and outside andi can’t guess your situation what you might be feeling no no what your condition while writing tha kissing part.?
I can never ever imagine my Adi and Shivaay is such a demonic lustful wala character?
But still I want this side of him?
I have no guess and no hopes on the next episode because Everytime if I guess something you are coming with a blast.?
Moreover I want some thrill and Suspense.??
And I agree here you asked for assumption for Shivay’s next action but we can’t because whatever our will be your’ll be blasting one so waiting for POV…
I can’t explain my situation… And cutie thanks alot for your comment.. And next time I’ll try to add thriller spice in update…
Rads I’ll update it soon dear… And I am taking that words of your as compliment..
Thanks Cutie…
Soooo lovely update????????
Thanks for your comment…
Thanks for comment dear…☺☺☺
awesome new side of sso im loving it waiting for nxt but plz update daily plz
Thanks for comment dear and actually my 2 FF is going on so I update each of them on alternate day… And right now my exams are continue so not possible to type two updates in same day so may be after exam I’ll try…☺☺☺
Hope you don’t mind…☺☺☺
Awwwww…..dimplee……its awesummmm girl……its hot girl….brigade is not really enough…….n i luvd it like hell girl…?????
Thanks Tussy for this comment…
great update dr….
http://www.tellyupdates.com/big-con-anah-os/
Thanks for comment dear… And I’ll read your OS soon…
lovely updateand a beautiful side of shivaay
Thanks for comment..
Jst awesome…u r rocking…keep updating
Thank you for commenting…
Fab PRI… You’re an incredible writer. I love this
Thank you for comment and that compliment..
Awsm episode….. I don’t imagine SSO like this.. Waiting for next……
Thanks for comment…
Fabulous episode ????
Thanks Jaaz… 🙂
Damn good…. lovely… sry fr d late comment
Hey do nnot need of sorry and thank you for comment…
Loved the way u wrote your ff…got to see new side of shivaay…god it was really hot one…don’t know what’s ahead but its a request add more shivika romance in upcoming episodes…bcos I loved the wild and lusty shivaay…?..
Thanks for comment and I’ll try to add such scenes….
This update is too hot to handle rather to say read… OMG girl the way you write Shivay’s devilish lusty side, his over possessive nature, his pain(though its for a seconds), his forced kiss and all in all this whole update is giving me goosebumps and I love this side of SSO…
And I am feeling bad for Anika and her situation…
And yeah welcome back to your own hot shot world.. 😛 And plz update next part soon I excited eager and many more phreases like this to read next part and Shivay’s action….
And waise I am a silent reader till now but today your update forced me to write this comment…
Hehe thanks for comment and welcoming me to that world and sorry reply for your comment get posted on other comment…
OMG pri…. I am totally speechless after reading this…. i was blushing while reading the kissing part… loved it.m
Thanks for comment Priyali.. And sorry that reply wasn’t for your comment..