Hi everyone- I have been a silent reader for a while but was very excited to pen down something after the latest promo of Dev asa Devdas!!
please read and drop your comments ,
Thanks for your time !!
Preview: Dev slits his wrist in Sona’s engagement.
Scene : Hospital : Dev is lying in the hospital bed with his wrist bandaged . Sona is sitting next to him with swollen eyes with his hand in hers while Dev is still unconscious.
Dev regains consciousness:
Dev: Sona , Sona.
Sona : Dev ..main yahin ho Dev. Nurse , can you please call the doctor
Nurse leaves
Doctor enters with Ishwari , Neha Nikki Ria Mamaji and Mami. Sona tries to moves back and make way for Doctor to check.
Dev clutches her hand. Doctor sees that .
Doc: its ok Dr Bose . Aap yahin rahiye. I will do the check up .
He checks up and gives some instruction to Nurse and then turns around to the family.
He is out of danger now (smiles) Let him rest .
Dr Bose ,you call me if there is anything required.
Sona: Thanks Doc.
Doctor starts leaving when Ishwari with teary eyes says “ Shukriya doc sahib” and moves towards Dev who hasn’t noticed anyone till now.
Ishwari: Dev, beta –ab kaisa hai.
Dev : Oh ma..main main ..ab theek hoon.
Ishwari comes ahead and hugs him. Dev is still clutching Sona’s hand ..she tries to release it and leave to let ma beta have some conversation .
Dev: Sona – kahan ja rahi ho!! (Agitated)
Sona: kahin nahi ja rahi Dev. Main bahar hoon. (Looks at Ishwari. ) Main thodi der main aati hoon doctor se kuch poochna tha.
Dev: Kahin mat jao ..and stretches his hand to hold hers.
Ishwari: haan beta ..tum betho ..turns to every body -Dev ko aaram karne do. Hum sab thodi der main aate hain.
Dev : Ma aap bhi ruko na !! hold her too with the other hand!!
Mamaji takes every body outside .
Dev: Mujhe tum dono se sorry kehna hai. I know ..maine tum dono ko bahut pareshan kiya hai!!
Ma , tu mere liye humesha hi bahut important thi par ab Sona ke bina bhi mujhe nahi rehna.
Aap ne mujhe janam diya – mujhe bada kiya – jahan main hoon wahan pahuchaya par Sona ne us Dev ko jeena sikhaya hai. Looks at Sona who is looking at him with teary eyes
Ishwari: beta yeh waqt yeh sari baton ka nahi hai. Tu jo kahega waise hi hoga..bus tu theek ho ja
Sona: Dev , please abhi aap yeh sab baton ko mat start kijiye. Aap sab log humesha (looks at both Ishwari and Dev) impulsive decisions lete hain. Hum baad main baat karenge is baare main.
Ishwari –usme galati Dev kin ahi hai..maine hi use aisa bana diya ..main abhi tum dono se aakhen bhi nahi mila sakti and she walks out( crying)
Sona tries to stop her ..Dev holds back Sona !! Sona is shocked
Sona: Dev.. ma ro rahi thi!! Woh meri ma hain..mujhe aise dekh kar pareshan hongi par main janta hoon unhe bhi thoda waqt chahiyega apne aap ke saath isse pehle ki main unse baat karoon.
Par ab tum yahin rehna ..maine realise kiya hai..! Tumhari presence meri life main oxygen ki tarah hai..ab nahi reh sakta main tumhare bina!!
Tum nahi thi to main kayar , kameena aur pata nahin kya kya ban gaya.. I need you …Sona ..jisse main sane reh sakoon..main pagal nahi hona chahta!
Sona: ( serious) Dev – aapne mujhe chod diya –ek jhatake main..aur ab ek jhatake main expect karte hain ki main sab bhool ke wapas aap ke paas aa jaon ..waise hi..jaise kuch hua hi nahi
..aap ne apne baare to bata diya per mera kya..pehle chod do ..phir dusre ki taraf badne ki koshish karo..phir aap meri zindagi main phir aane ki koshish kar rahe ..main kya karoon
Dev: tum hamesha kehti thi na..follow your heart.. wohi karo .
Sona: aur aapko lagta hai ki mera heart mujhe aap ki taraf hi layega.
Dev: pulls her – I know you love me Sona.. tum jaise sab chod ke mere pass aayi ..its obvious u love me and only me.
Tum Hritik ke baare main soch rahi ho na.. Hritik tumhari dhal bana.. tum ne uska sahara liya mujh se breakup ke baat strong bane rehne ke liye ..pyar nahi karti tum use..issi liye maine tumhari sagai tudwa di..
mujhe maloom hai tum apne pyar se darr ke usey shaadi karne ko tyyar hui thi..aur agar yeh shaadi ho jaati to tum kabhi khush nahi rehti ..na hi Hritik..
Yaad hai jab maine Natasha se sagai todi thi..jab maine usey bataya to mujhe maloom bhi nahi tha ki tum mujh se pyar karti ho ya nahi..
par usey engagement karne ke liye yeh important nahi tha..yeh important tha ki main Natasha ke liye kaisa feel karta hoon!!ek baar ye realise hone par ki Natasha is not that girl ! I couldn’t get engaged with her!
Abhi sabko lag raha hai..ki Dev deewana ho gaya hai..pagal ho gaya hai..
kuch had tak yeh such bhi hai..par aisa nahi hai ki maine sirf dewangee main yeh kadam uthaya..
main har haal main yeh engagement rokna chahta tha..pehle is liye ki tumhe door nahi jaane dena chahta tha par is liye bhi ki tumhe itni badi galti karte nahi dekh sakta tha!!
Sona: (crying ): par Dev ab kya ..main Hritik ko kya boolun. Ma Baba ko kya bataon.
Yeh bolongi ki tumhare is kadam ki wajah se main tumhare paas wapis aa rahi hoon to koi nahi manega. Sab samajhte hain tum ne yeh kiya ..pagalpan main..tum kamzor ho..aur koi bhi parents aise ladke se apni beti ki shaadi nahi karna chahenge.
Such poochon to main bhi samajh nahi pa rahi hoon ki main tumse pyar karti hoon ya tumhare iss step se darr ke mujhe aise lag raha hai ki jo bhi tum keh rahe ho who sab theek hai!!
Main abhi yeh bhi samajh sakti hoon ki tumne ma ke hospitalize hone se mujh se ekdum se rishta kyon tod liya….
Main bhi abhi tumhe khone ke darr se kuch bhi karne ko tayyar hoon..par jo galti aap ne uss samay ki main phir se nahi dohrana chahti.
Sona – clears her tears!
Mujhe thoda waqt deejiye Mr Dixit!
Dev : looks shocked !! Sona – tum ab bhi soch rahi ho
Sona: Mr Dixit – aise emotional blackmail karke life ke itne bade decisions nahi liye jate.
Maine aap se bahut pyar kiya hai Dev par aapne mujhe 2 baar tod diya ..
ek baar breakup kar ke ..aur ab apni jaan leni ki koshish karke..main kab tak strong bani rahoon..
aur kal ko phir se aise situation aayi ki aapko mere ya ma beech main ek ko chunana pare to aap kya karenge..phir se mujhe chod denge …ya jaan dene chale jayenge!!
Nahi Dev ..yeh koi solution nahi hai aur na hi mujhe aap se koi promise chahiye ki aap mujhe chunege aisi situation main..kyunki us situation main bhi aap hi ko takleef hogi
Dev: tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho…aisi situation nahi aayegi
SOna: aap guarantee thode le sakte hain !! jab pyar kiya to tab guarantee li thi na kabhi na chodne ki!! Kya hua!!
Dev: sona tum baar baar us baat ko kyon dohra rahi ho..
Sona: kyunki abhi iss waqt bus yehi such hai Dev..ki hum alag ho gaye hain aur maine life main kuch aur commitment kar diye hai
Dev: sona par woh galat hain..mere se bhi tumne commitment kiya tha ki tum mujhe chod ke kabhi nahi jaogi ..main chondoga tab bhi nahi!!
Achcha theek hai..tum thande dimag se soch ke bus mujhe itna bata dena ki tum mujh se ab bhi pyar karti ho ya nahi!!
Bus Sona yehi important hai..baki to sab kuch actions hain..
kuch undo karna parega kuch re do karna parega par life main galat faisla kar liya to zindagi bhar phachtaogi ..
agar sahi kiya to yeh sab ek bure sapne ki tarah nikal jayega …aur believe me ..main madad karoonga tumhari!
Nurse enters: Sir aapko ek injection dena hai. Mam inko thoda rest karne de. Inka BP abhi bhi high hai!
Sona : ya sure. Dev main chalti hoon ..shaam ko aaongi .. main Ma ko tumhare paas bhejti hoon
Dev looks at her serious face . Realises that she needs some time and lets her go.
Ishwari comes in. sees his tensed face
Ishwari: kya hua Dev. Sona se baat hui.
Dev : haan ma..par maine usse bahut mushkil main daal diya hai..aur ab who ulajh gayi hai..itna ki ..ussey mere liye apna pyar bhi saaf nazar nahi aa raha!
Ishwari (crying ) beta mujhe maaf kar de –yeh sab meri hi galati hai.
Precap: IShwari tells Dev that she had sent the Rishta of Hritik ..
17 Comments
Wow!it was nice. Update soon ☺
Wow..what a take! Good writing .
supprrb ..nxt step dear luved it….
wow ishwri reactions was awssm….
luved it ..ur frst attempt was perfect
Awesome..nxt episode soon plzz
Nice
Amazing and u can call me ayushi post soon
OS is heart touching but can’t see DevShi apart
Hoping happy ending in next OS
Sorry wrong comment
Episode is awesome
Precap is amazing can’t wait for next episode
This was something extra amazing. Dev committing suicide ?. Rest was amazing, Devakshi convo and everything
Very nice episode.. Sona’s point of view is superb..
Sorry to say this I really didn’t understand anything
If u don’t mind can u pls write this in English too as I don’t know hindi ? pls
Thanks for all the comments . Sumi.. will try and transalte it.