Hi everyone…………I hope you all enjoyed the intro and the promo………. I will be the narrator ya guide for you all…..Chalo mere saath…….So here comes the first episode……”Love is Everywhere”…………..
Our story begins here in Paris………….One of the beautiful city in France……..and also well popular as city of love…….
Here we can find our heroine Dhani……….
As I told you that she is a music student……She is playing violin sitting under a statue. Wah…….it’s so beautiful….!
Now look there…to the other side of the road…….our hero Viplav is entering. Thaaliyaan……..
Dhani turns and sees him. It was like an aww moment for her (cloud 9). Yeah its love at first sight for her…..(like us….) She was speechless while he is not looking at her and walks near to his car in slow motion. She felt that whole world just stopped for one second at that moment. She thinks wow kya handsome hai…? (woh hume patha hai Dhani) Just then he opens the car door, sits and starts the car. She comes to her senses and starts running towards his car. But he has already left. She misses him. She comes back there and gives the money to a poor man which she had collected by playing the instrument. (arey aap log bhi diya hai na money..? chalo acha hai….gareebon ki madad karna achi bath hai) The poor man thanks her. She thinks is this the man I’m waiting for? But daffar Dhani….how could you miss him? Hmm have to find him. I think Avi will help me. ( oh main bathana bhool gayi…..avi means Avijit) She leaves from there.
She reaches her house. Rakesh comes and asks baby itni jaldi aa gayi? (Papaji ko namsthe bolo sab…..arey Dhani ki papa hamari bhi papa hai na? Chalo papaji Dhani ko baby naam se pukarthe hai) Dhani makes some excuses. He says Avi is waiting for you. Dhani comes inside and sees him eating some snacks. She teases him. You foodie…..always eating something….sometimes work your brain also…. (Sorry Avi bhaiya if I hurt you anyway…..) He asks what? She was about to say the incident but Papaji interrupts them. (Kya kamala ki timing hai papaji….?) Baby you have a call from your music school. Ya papa. We are leaving. Come foodie…They leaves….. (Dhani ne Avi ko bulaya hai par hum log bhi saath jayegi……arey yaar aage ki story jaan na hai na? Chalo sab log apne apne gadi main baito aur follow karo…..)
They reach music school…… (hum bhi. Chalo sab gadi se utharo) Avi is also studying there for guitar… (haan patha hai hume….tum rockstar hai Avi) He says jaldi aao… (aap log kahan ja rahe ho….heroine ke saath chalo….woh hume aage ki kahani bathayegi) She asks him to go; she will come after parking the scooty. Avi leaves. She takes her violin and parks the scooty there.
Just then she hears someone saying to kill the person in the photo. (aapne suna ….? thodi aur concentrate karo….) He is the new boy friend of my girl friend. She cheated me so I want to take revenge from him. I don’t want him to be alive. Dhani hears all conversation (hum bhi poori sun liya..) and she manages to see the photo. (dekho sab woh insane kaun hai..) She is shocked that it’s the same guy (yaani apna Viplav??? Haan omg…) The person says his name is Viplav Tripathi and I know today he has a date with my GF in the hotel at 4 pm. He tells the address, room number etc. And says you go first and I will come later. The goons say yes boss and leaves. Dhani hides and starts worrying. (chalo sab log hide karo….
.mujhe bhi fikr hone laga hai jaise Dhani…..)
She comes to the class and starts playing violin. (agar aap logon ko bhi kuch yahan padna hai toh aap padd sakti hoon…par meri mood kuch theek nahi hai) she looks at the clock. It’s 3.30 pm. (omg aadha ghanta aur…..) She gets up and starts running. (hey sab log uske saath hi jao warna aap logo ko patha hai na woh perfect runner hai….chalo speed karo) she takes her scooty and leaves to the hotel. (sab gaadi main baito aur usse follow karo)
In the meantime our chocolate boy Viplav is dating with the girl in his room. ( ya ya it’s the same girl…naughty Viplav) They start to eat their food. (yahaan hum nahi hai… hum toh Dhani ke paas hai ……so no comments….. just enjoy the scene…) Just then goons came and start the fight….Yeah lag toh handsome and cute but our Viplav can also fight. That girl escapes through the window and jumps to our Pankaj’s room. He wonders what is going on here. He come to Viplav’s room and obviously starts fighting.
Episode ends…..No precap..
Wait and read…….Do comment……Aap logo ko maza aa gaya na? Then share your experiences……some tells me that I took a long time to unite Vidhani in my last ff….but I hope that u all are very happy with my first epi of this 2nd ff…..with no delay they meet…i mean Dhani meet our hero….Soon Viplav will also meet our heroine…..Hum use bachane ke liye jaa rahe na? But I think usko hamari zaroorat nahi hai….But what do you guys think..? Kya Dhani Viplav ko bachayega…? Ya Dhani khud kisi problem mein fas jayega..? aur Viplav use bachane aayega…? Jaan ne ke liye padthe rahiye “Love is Everywhere” by me Lakshmi only on Telly updates….Don’t miss it…….
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Guys i can’t assure u that when i will post the next epi….time milthe hi main post karunga
Sorry for the wrong name…….i wrote on the introduction as dhani mallik…rakesh mallik….avijit mallik..
But it’s actually dhani mallick…rakesh mallick….avijit mallick
Lovely lakshmi u have written a superb story. Caring đhànìi naughty flirt viplav too gooď. Looking forward for next.
Thanks renu di will post the next one soon…..
hey Lakshmi! great one re. haan it’s like watching that movie once again but watching with ViDha as our leads is even better as we know the naughty Viplav with look and smile *__* (falls down from bed) anyhow! i obviously know what is going to happen par phir bhi, i am really excited to read and imagine ViDha so make it fast ok? meendum santhippom! (salutes)
Thanks shuruthy…….
Yes me too had a great experience while writing it…..instead of jr and h its really interesting with our vidha…..haan ungalku suspense illennu theriyum…….haha…yep athuvaraikum vanakam….
Superb Lakshmi. Well done. Go on dear.
Cutie thanks…..good to see u back…how was ur trip??? Now soon post ur ffs…..eagerly waiting for it
one minute lakshmi ..ae writing style …”I am your narrator ya guide” ..I remember this line …areh ae to mere ff ke 2nd episode me mene bhi likha tha … hehehe … you use little my writing style ..bich bich me readers se bat karna ..guiding them ..etc … 😛 😛 .. and episode was very interesting ..keep it up sis ….
mere style se likha thora isliye mujhe bohot achcha laga … mujhe bohot kushi hui … keep this writing style ..and.add your new style also …OK ..make your style that all follow you …
Avi bhaiya thanks…..oh really aap ne bhi likha tha kya? Mujhe theek se yaad nahi….agar hota toh main kabhi aapko copy nahi karte…..sorry…and i hope u r enjoying it…..haan mujhe patha hai yeh aapke style hai….par main jab hindi mein baath karti hoon toh aisi hi karte hai…iss liye maine ye choose kiya….after all this story is a third person narrative…..so i used it…ok main ek apni alag style banane ki khoshish aage ki epis main zaroor karungi……thanks once again bhaiya….
that’s my sis
.all the best for future episode . keep it up … 🙂 🙂
Lakshmi …keep it up dear…… 🙂 🙂
Thanks sujie di
Nice one Lakshmi! Post the next part soon!!
Thanks maria….i will try
Very very nice lakshmi..
Keep going dear..
You are meeting our expectations??
And yaa the narrating style seems similar to avijit but i love it?
Arshi di thanks….ya main aap logo ka expectations nahi thodunga….yeah its similar to avi bhaiya…and that is also my style…
Wow amazing Lakshmi? enjoyed alot waiting for the next episode
Thanks maha….will try to post
Good one Lakshmi di?
Couldn’t restrict myself from calling u by name?
Keep writing
All the best?
thanks swetha
Super Keep Going…..!
ummmmaaa