Hai friends…Am l late???…Oh l know that l am late,l mean super late…So sry for that.. Firstly l had been really busy and a little dissappointed,secondly l am preparing for my improvement exams…And finally my phone was damaged…Root of my problems starts from my results.. Ah…I got a little bit lesser than my expectations…So l had to work hardly to regain myself in my actual track of studies.. Actually l was a little lazy last year and all these happened are the after effect of that…Friends,l would like to say that l will end this ff by completing my 20th episode…And after this part l will post the succeeding parts after my exams…Please understand the situation,and in the next chapter l will give the links to my previous Chapters
Here we goes….
They reached the place in the evening…They got rooms in a hotel and decided to do the darshan in the morning…Nairan and meghnal went to their respective rooms…Nairan were sharing the same bed. Both wete turned to their own sides…Thinking…Smiling…. They haven’t even looked to each others face after that incident.. that incident in which they felt something weird,may be which realized them a bit about that feelings of their partner,something like “love….”naina turned towards karan…He also turned and saw naina,as soon as they realized that they are facing each other,they tried to hide their faces…But it was too late to hide themselves,as they eyes got locked in…. Slowly,sleep conquered them….. By giving a sweet dream…..
Next day they went to the temple and did pooja.. Afterthey were just exploring the place,meghnal and nairan went seperately so that they would get some time to be with their partners…(at least for meghnal)…. Nairan went to a café. They had coffee with some chit chats…All the time they were observed by some goons….
Naina :what do u think karan we should do?
Karan :we should do what naina.. What are u talking about?
Naina :l’m talking about this marriage…. Karan,u know that l can’t accept this marriage,l.. I can’t spoil ur life coz l’m a widow..
Karan was fuming in anger. He looked into her eyes
Karan :u are not naina.. U were…Now u are my wife…So now also u thinl that u are a widow!!!! Means that l don’t exist any more for u!!!????
Naina was shocked. She didn’t meant that…But even unknowingly she said it…She said that she is a widow,she said that karan is dead!!!! How could she say that…. Jer eyes welled up but didn’t shed a tear! She looked down.. But she understood that karan was looking at her and now he left the placein anger and being heartbroken…She laid on the table and started crying…She covered her face with her hands…The goons felt that it’s the right time,so they went near her…
Goon1:hey lady,why are u crying?
She lifted her face and saw the goons…
Naina :who are u all?
Goon 2(trying to touch her face):oh!! this face doesn’t suit tears…
Naina :stop it.. I will call my husband…(first time she said it…..)
Goon3:oh…He is ur hubby…Oh not fair…. He left u here alone…I don’t think he will come back soon…Till then we will give u a company…
Naina :l don’t need ur company…Pls leave now…
She tried to take her phone but goon1 snatched it away..
Goon4:oh!!! U ate trying to call him…By the way u are looking more beautiful when u are red…He is a duffer instead of praising and enjoying ur beauty,he behave so rudely…Give nodd ur head baby l will kill him and become urs…Forever…
The goons started laughing while naina felt very bad and disgusting,coz they are crossing their limits…They called karan a duffer!!! How could she forgive it…
Naina:stop it…I won’t hear a single word against karan…U UNDERSTAND!!!!
Goon1:seems like u love him very much,huh…
That words echoed her ears…Love!!!!
Goon4:why are u paying attention to a person who don’t even care about u?
Naina :l told u all that “NOT A WORD AGAINST KARAN!!!!”
Goon1:oh,then give me ur hand girl….
Sje moved away her hand,but he tried to catch it…. Just then another hand caught the goons hand…
His face revealed to be karan..
Karan :first try with my hand then also if u have the guts,touch hers…
They started the fight.. Karan beat the goons…But one of the goons tried to catch naina,she ran but hit a stone and fell down,the goon was about to catch her hand,just then karan came infront.
Karan :l told u to first deal with me…And he punched on the goons face…The goons ran from there.. Karan looked at naina,and gave her his hand. Naina tried to stand up by holding his hand but failed…she looked into his angry face with a cute puppy glare.. That stoned heart melted like butter,but didn’t showed her any softness,he only just lifted her in his arms(tu pyaar hei…. Plays)the people present there claps and moved by making a way…. He started to walk with naina…She looked into his eyes…And wiped off his blood from his face…He looks at her….
Nairan’s room-
Karan laid naina on the bed. He took a spray from his bag and sprayed it on her leg. All the time she was just looking into his eyes…
Naina:karan…
Karan :what was the need naina? How many times have l told u that past is past…And l…l don’t care about it…. When will u come out of this naina…If something happened to u then??? Pls naina,pls think about ur future…
Naina had tears in her eyes,she hugged karan….
Naina :l love u karan…I love u very much….
Karan gets shocked…He slowly hugs her back…
Karan :l love u too gow..
Naina broke the hug
Karan :naina… naina.. I didn’t…
She raisesher hand to stop him…. She then gets off the bed and moves to the balcony…Karan followed her. She is crying badly and moved slowly as her leg is paining as well as her heart…Karan tries to console her. But she pushes him away…His leg slips and falls from the balcony….!!!!!
Naina:KARANNNNN!!!!…..
To be continued..
How as it….I am really sry to leave u all at this cliff hanger for thi much long…But l believe u all will understand me…
Loads of love-Seyal ???
19 Comments
It was a good one.The wait is for long.Post ASAP.Small one’sare also enough.Loads of love and best of luck for your exams.
Thank u amelia,its so good to know that u like it,and ya the wait is so long,as per i have to end this ff i my 20th epi,l am helpless to post very short ones…. Today l skipped my school coz am having a high fever…. So l will try to post one today… So as to revlease u all from the secret…
Loads of love-Seyal ???
Seyal I am sorry because I have not revealed my real name.Amelia is just my nickname.My real name is Amena.So sorry for hiding this for a long time.When your ff came I was just a new comer and thinking about online spams I didn’t reveal my real identity.But now every ff of swabhiman on telly updates and all the writers have become my friends and family.So now no hesitation.Again sorry×200 times.You are such a sweet person seyal.Please try and understand my condition that time.Sorry again and get well soon.Give your best in your exams .I will also try to pray for you.All the best and get well soon.Sorry again.
Oh come on yaar… Don’t say sorry… Why are you sorry??? it’s not a sin or crime not to reveal ur identity in cyberspace … Ya we all know very well about cyber crimes and it’s necessary to be aware about it and do take precautions.. And l would like to say that seyal is not my actual name.. As TU rejected to keep my name as user name(coz there may be another user with that name,l just simply typed a name… And l will reveal my actual name in my last episode…. Dear.. So don’t worry..and thanks for ur support girl.. U name is so nice…. But l will call u amelia only…
Loads of love -seyal ????
Thanku so much for understanding me and yes you can call me Amelia only.
Seyal! My heart is aching ! This episode really very painful! I could visualise them and I felt as though I was going thru their situations!! It felt so bad!! Did he love Gauri! So where is she now?
Hai resh…. Oh sorry friend… Glad to know that u could visualize it and he loves his gowri very much,as muvh as he love naina… But wait for my 15th upload,u will be happy to know the truth and ya a small surprise is waiting for u in the next chapter,something related to this epi…. Pls share ir thoughts after that…
Loads of love -Seyal ???
Omg Seyal! I’m eagerly waiting for the next one! Please post as soon as possible!???❤️️
Interesting .. Continue soon
Thank you,keep reading…
Loads of love-Seyal ???
As a saying goes, pain is the best healer..
Your story is a true embodiment of the above truth of life. Naina’s spoken words were sharp enough to pierce the already wounded heart of a man so strong and make him enraged to the brim. Her words, wrongly comprehended by him or to say accepted by her as a grave fault of hers truly pained my soul. The statement about being a widow followed by the outburst of a living husband and the subsequent sequence of actions were presented meticulously. The entry of the evil here and the acts performed by the minions of the devil (or to say the goons) were surely condemn-able. Nonetheless, as a coin has two sides to it, this scene too had a bright side to it as it brought back two soulmates into one. Seeimg someone as daring and caring and karan fighting along yet looking out for naina was so very lovely. The confession of feelings here followed by the actions of theirs and was truly wonderful in its portrayal. A twist in the tale yet again..
Hai shivani…. ???U made my day… Ibalso agree with that saying,pain is indeed the best healer….. I don’t know how to create magic with hands just as u do…. But l love to do….. U really find out this much things from my story(even l’m not able to????)yaar,l should appoint u as my advertising agent… Hahaha(?????bad joke… ???I know….)Dear… So lucky to have a reader like
Lovingly -Seyal ???
“you”… forgot to add this….???
Fantastic dearm…and dont worry about your result..plusone ellavarum inganokkethannavum..so ath kaaryamakkanda..pinne improvement undallo..do your best..and update when you become free
Thank u chechi… Ya l stopped worrying about it… Enthu parayananne,sadharana Septemberill varunna improvement exam,ente bhagyathunu june avasano,july aadyo nadakkum???,appo padikkathe pattuvonne,ente cousinsum ithu thanna parayunne… Ya i will try my best… Illel pani palum….
Lovable -Seyal ???
Allalo. Porichu. Hope nothing will happen to Karan. Eagerly waiting for next one.post ASAP
Hello,evidarunnu,oh onnum pattathillanne…. Don’t worry… Class tudangarayo… Plus one aanyu pidicha,enne pole karayendi varilla..???Chumma paranyatha.. Enikkupadeshamishtalla…ennalumoru updesham….upadeshichekkannu karuthi…. Ayyo kurachu koodippoyalle,don’t worry paniyadichu thalakku vattaya oruthide athmarodhanamayi kanda mathi…. Ini,thanks for reading… So good to know that u enjoyed it…. Pore…. Haha???Ee ethrayum paranyathintidayil ente valla side effects(bad jokes i meant )undel sadaram kshamikkuka…. Alla nammalethu jillakkariyannu paranyilla???? ennathanelum….
yours lovingly
chechi
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Nice one di!!!. Last part of Nairan is being shocking, waiting for the next part to know about it more. I think that Karan will get saved anyhow. Let’s wait for that. Really amazing story writer u are di. Post ASAP. LOADS OF LOVE-AYONIJA
Oh girl…. I am sad that l will make u wait longer… But l had too…thank u arya(shall l callbu that)… And ya karan will be saved(but how? is a surprise )thanks for ur compliment…and yaar may l won’t be able to comment on ur succeeding episodes.. But l will read them for sure…
Love u a lot –
Seyal ????