IN LOVE… AGAIN… ISHQ KA RANG SAFED… First Part
HELLO BUDDIES…. I KNOW …MOST OF YOU HAVE ALREADY STOPPED VISITING THE PAGE… BUT I THOUGHT WHY NOT BRING A STORY TO GATHER US TOGETHER ONCE AGAIN….SO HERE GOES MY STORY ON VIPLAV AND DHAANI YET ANOTHER TIME…. I KNOW I HAVEN’T COMPLETED PREVIOUS TWO STORIES OF MINE…ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT…THOSE STORIES ARE ON HOLD FOR NOW…. AND THIS ONE IS A NEW STORY… THIS TIME I AM NOT GUAREENTING REGULAR UPDATES..BUT I WON’T FORGET TO UPDATE..ONLY IF YOU SUPPORT ME IN THIS JOURNEY….
HOPE YOU GUYS ARE GONNA SUPPORT ME… AND IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN READING FURTHER THEN ONLY I WILL BE POSTING OTHERWISE I WON’T BE ABLE TO DO BECAUSE WRITERS ARE NOTHING WITHOUT THEIR READERS…SO JUST POPP IN AND GIVE YOUR VALUABLE SUGGESTIONS,COMMENTS…EXPRESS YOUR VIEWS ABOUT THIS STORY I HAVE BROUGHT AFTER SO MUCH TIME….
SO HERE GOES THE FIRST PART OF MY STORY… THIS IS THE STORY OF VIPLAV AND DHAANI..OBVIOUSLY THEY ARE THE LEADS….
This episode consists of Dhaani’s story… Viplav’s story is yet to come in the next episode….
And yes…characters would be introduced as per requirement in each episode…
A large house is seen…not less than any lavish mansion somewhere in Delhi… A kid comes running there while a lady in her mid fifties runs behind her lady runs …Suhaani..drink the milk Beta…Daadi ko pareshaan mat karo beta.. Have this glass of milk please!! Suhaani says No… I won’t drink it..Milk is Yuccccccccccck !!The lady says don’t say like that..and an idea pops in her mind…She says if mommy comes to know it..she will be katti with you… do you want that?? The kid then stops and turns…She runs to the lady and says Daadi… Will mommy really be katti with me?? The lady says she won’t…if her princess drinks the milk… Hearing this,Suhani gulps down the milk in a jiffy… and says Mommy won’t be katti with me now… The lady smiles seeing her grand daughter’s antics…and hugs her saying… No..now your mommy won’t be angry with you now caressing her hair….Another voice is heard in the room…Somebody is having merry time with her Daadi!! Suhaani excitedly says Chaachu…and runs to the man who happily widens his arm to embrace the little angel while the lady smiles with tears in her eyes..The man takes Suhaani in his arms and asks “Honey,did you miss Chaachu?” Suhaani giggles and says No… He then tickles her and asks did Honey miss her Chaachu?? Suhaani laughs…and says yes yes…Chaachu…and laughs….He then goes to the lady and hugs her…
How are you Maa??? Saying so he gives Suhaani to her..and bends to touch her feet… She blesses him and he smiles.. I am good..She replies….He wipes a lone tear on her cheeks…Suhaani is looking at the mother son duo…while Suhaas…the man…gives chocolate to Suhaani and seeing the chocolate..she takes that and runs to sit at her favorite spot to enjoy her chocolate… Mother-son duo smile seeing their little angel…
Suhaas: Maa,where is Bhaabi???
Lady:Where will she be today Suhaas?? She has gone to orp…..
Suhaas: How can I forgert?? I will just go and meet her…
Lady: Okay…
She thinks what has god kept in store for her children.. She then turns to see Suhaani near her little swing…enjoying her chocolate.She could not help but smile at her grand daughter’s innocent antics… This cute chocolate lover was all she thought about all these years…reminding her of her child….She goes…
Moments later…. Suhaas reaches an orphanage… He hurries inside and looks at the kids… He smiles at them…as kids smile at him knowing him… He finds a girl there playing with those children…and calls Bhaabi!!! The girl turns… She is happy to see Suhaas there… She goes to him and hugs him…. She asks how are you Suhaas Bhaai??? Suhaas replies first class…Suhaas says Bhaabi…let’s go home now.. The girl says Haan.. Suhaani must be waiting for me… we should go… Suhaas smiles…. And says Now..she is enjoying her favorite chocolate…and must be least bothered about anything…The girl smiles and says aakhir she is her father’s princess..toh she would be chocolate lover naa.. While saying so..a lump is formed in her throat choking her… Suhaas asks her not to cry and consoles her saying Bhaai would not spare him if he gets to know his sunshine cried…Dhaani smiles with tears ready to betray her and come down rolling…. Remembering those moments when HE and Dhaani both used to come to orphanage to spend time with the kids there…Dhaani turns back crying not being able to control those tears while Suhaas looks on thinking of letting his Bhaabi remember his brother with those tears…Dhaani then wipes the lone tear that escapes rolling down her cheeks…. She turns to Suhaas and then asks him to accompany her for bidding kids a good bye.The staff in the orphanage then wish her a good day and greet Suhaas as well…Dhaani and Suhaas then set off to home……
Scene shifts back to cute Suhaani….and her lovely Daadi…
Suhaani:Daadi…where is momma???
Lady:Beta she is coming okay….
Suhaani:But when will she come?? I am missing her…
Her daadi smiles…while Suhaani turns hearing….
Honey…my dramebaaz…your mommy is here okay… she has not gone out anywhere that you miss her in few hours….
Suhaani makes faces while Suhaas is having fun in teasing his niece… Dhaani then comes inside…and Suhaani runs to hug her momma darling… Dhaani also hugs her… and smiles…asking if sunshine missed her mommy?? Suhaani cutely nods while agreeing that she missed her…Dhaani smiles…and then takes her in her lap kissing her sunshine and showering her motherly love…. Then she goes to her mother-in-law..Suhaani then runs to play while Suhaas teases Suhaani and plays with her making Suhaani giggle and have fun….Dhaani has tears in her eyes..watching them…But she wipes those tears before she thought her mom-in-law could see.. But little did she know…her mom-in-law had seen her tears but chose to keep quiet….
Dhaani excuses herself…and goes to freshen up while the lady thinks..Bhagwan…Dhaani is not only my daughter in law but my daughter too whom I wished to have but could not… you gave me a loving daughter in a daughter in law..but you forgot to write happiness for her… She fakes her smile all day and world may believe it but I know how my daughter is dealing with all the pain..Can’t she get that hand to hold her again to soothe her pain??Can’t someone be there for her taking care of her happiness?? She thinks about these things and goes to her room to look for her son’s photo..leaving the uncle-niece..the buddies in their own world…She goes to her room and hugs her son’s photo…thinking he broke the promise and left his family..why did he do this??
Here…in one room,a mother was crying for her son while in the other…Dhaani was crying..hugging the photo of her husband… She says… you broke your promise..you left me..you left mom…you left Suhaas and Suhaani…Can’t you see I am in pain…why did you go Suhaan?? This life is nothing without you….
Suhaani is my reason to live but seeing her face I cannot control those tears that threaten to spill endlessly…what will I do when Suhaani will question me about you??what will I tell her??? She is a kid now…but once she starts schooling…what will I tell her??? what will I do Suhaan??? Dhaani cries holding Suhaan’s photo by her side…. Her crying session goes endless thinking how will she face Suhaani’s question once she comes to know about her Paapa??? How will she tell her that she can never see her papa again?? How??She drifts into sleep just like that with tears by her side like every day….She only wakes up by the knock on her door. Dhaani fixes herself while her mom-in-law eyes her with love and care knowing what she must have been doing alone in that room where she had not let the single ray of light enter…She comes inside and hugs her….
Dhaani too hugs her back and sobs…Dhaani says Maa… Suhaani…The lady says she knows what she must be thinking about…She makes Dhaani sit in the bed while she takes her head on her lap and caresses it…Dhaani has those tears gushing out nonstop…The lady continues…fearing about that,they cannot let Suhaani’s studies suffer..it is the age for her to start schooling…those little hands of hers will hold the pencil and write something beautiful…. She needs to go to school…enough of me teaching her ABC at home Dhaani…She needs to go out… I know you must be thinking how will you answer her questions once she goes there…Seeing her classmates’ parents,she might ask you endless questions…and you can’t afford to deal haphazardly…I know the pain Dhaani…You have to deal with Suhaani’s questions patiently…it is sure that one day she would ask…. Meri bacchi…she never knew what a fatherly love is… she would have her share of questions to ask…and she has the right…She might ask us to bring her father back…but our bad luck…we can’t ….we can’t bring Suhaan back….Dhaani cries vigorously while the lady calms her down asking her not to fall weak…Dhaani nods…while the lady thinks she should talk to Dhaani about it soon….
Suhaas comes there carrying sleeping Suhaani… Dhaani then takes her from him and thanks him for being their for Suhaani… Suhaas asks her not to thank him..as he is doing his duty…that is to love his life Suhaani… agar Bhaai hotey toh woh bhi yehi karte naa Bhaabi…Dhaani nods… Suhaas caresses sleeping beauty Suhaani’s cheeks while the lady comes there engulfing her children in a hug…..
PRECAP: You are not the only one with all the pain in your heart forcing you to think about ending your life and just letting it go…but that innocent smile of your little bunch of joy is all you wanna live for now….for ever….
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Hey sujjie…I am very very glad that u have came back…thank u so much dear…u know I am visiting this page every 2 days once with the hope of reading atleast one ff….
Coming to this ff…frankly I didn’t understand the meaning of this ff name that is in love again….ok I understand something after reading…..in this suhaani character is veryyyy cute yaar…..
So dhanis husband name suhaas ok…
But really nice story line dear….continue like this…..
Can I ask u 1 question?that if u r writing for another serials?or stopped writing completely?
Plz don’t take much time to update next episode….I am really waiting for ur another ffs also…..
I am very glad atleast u wrote an ff..thanq thanq so much…????
Bye sujjiee…
Take care….
Nd keep writing….??
Thank you Lalitha…Thank you sooo much…..
I know I have not been available here for much long and I really apologize for that…. You know what…. I was thinking about this particular plot and was quite skeptical about submitting it…But I thought I should…. And see you are here….
Okay..regarding doubts if you have any…let me try to make it clear…
Suhaas and Suhaan are brothers…Dhaani is Suhaan’s widow..Suhaas is younger to Suhaan and yes he respects Dhaani as his own sister and treats her nicely… This episode was entirely on Dhaani…next will be on Viplav…okay???
Lalitha… Till now I have written on ViDhaani only… I am not writing any other stories on other pairs.. and yes…my previous stories..A TALE and SOULMATES… I have kept that on hold .. I am continuing with this one…
I will try to post soon…I submitted this as I wanted to assure you guys ,who regularly visit this page hoping to see any fan fiction,that I am not going anywhere..just took a break….
Thank you for liking this yaar.lots of love to you….You too take care dear…
Hi Sujie,
This is the first time I am writing on this forum. I have been a regular visitor on this page a silent reader. I have also read all your earlier FF.
Soulmate is the one closest to my heart. Even Maha used to write so well. She too has stopped completely. I have read all her earlier FF .. the style was too good. Even you are great .. your ideas, your story keeps us going in our daily humdrum of life. It gives us a new lease of life.
Please do continue to write. I still check this page every day for any new update. Sadly, the last update was posted on July 8, 2017. So it was with great anticipation & amazement to see your new FF posted on Oct. 9th.
Once again, please do continue to update. Awaiting your next episode with great eagerness.
Hi Janice…first of all a warm welcome to you….
Thank you for being here….I am glad that you managed to read all those fanfictions on Viplav and Dhaani….
I have kept Soulmates and A tale …now on hold…I am thinking of continuing it… but not soo soon…I am glad you found them worth reading….
Yes….Mahaa used to write but she stopped long back… Her stories … those few shots are close to my heart actually….
I will try to post the next episode soon dear… Thank you for being here dear… LOTS OF LOVE…take care
Hey Janice! So mujhe yaad kiya jaa raha hai! Actually I’m here after a looooooooooooog time, woh bhe thanks to Sujie, I haven’t read this part till now but seeing your comment I thought to bang on first. I wish you would’ve commented at that time only, but thank you very much for loving my love like a silent or secret admirer *flying kiss*
And now I’m also thinking to continue my story Haan hai mere ishq ka rang safed, let’s see. And Sujie I’ll comment about the story once after reading it.
For loving my story** sorry! My bad -__-
HI Maha,
So good to hear from you after a long time. Yes, I too wish I had commented earlier. I was a little unsure how to enter into this forum. As told earlier, I was a silent reader. The ones closest & most read FF (you have written) is VIDHAN’s hidden love and Is Love a coincidence.
Now awaiting the next episode of Haan…….Safed..
Please update quickly. I do know you all are very busy with your studies etc. but still do keep posting.
Take care.
Janice thank you very much yaar for loving those stories, I’m so happy after reading your comment, and more happy because finally you’re here on this forum. Okay so I’ll continue HHMIKRS soon but before that a story which is already written, I’m thinking to post that first and then I’ll start previous one. Let’s see dear!! But you’ll find me here from now onwards.
I am crying after reading this update , sujiee…Such an awesome depiction of emotions, i don’t have words 2 say what am feeling now…….U know what sujiee, after the last update of we united them i underwent surgery and when i came back on august i didn’t find even a single piece of article here…I completely felt much disappointment as mahaa already stopped haa hein mere ishq ka rang safed, and it was only u who was writing articles and trust me that was the sole reason for me 2 write articles for vidha…But seeing no one is coming, i left the hope 2 post an article for Ikrs……I still waited for u and even after 2 months august and september, i didn’t find any ff from u i completely felt that u have also stopped coming in this page….. As i said earlier that i don’t know much abt vidha as i stopped when eisha singh quit the show, i always felt that whether my writing for this pair is right or wrong ????? And that doubt again went strong when almost 2 months , i didn’t find any single article here…..But after seeing ur article today i finally got the confidence 2 submit my article and i have done it……Hope Tu will post it soon……..And sujiee, now pls try 2 give updates when u get time even i can’t also assure abt updates due 2 work load and lack of time, but we can try our level best……Missed u my dear patakhagudi…..Love u loads……..
Reni… you are back!!!!!!! Lots of love to you……
I am glad you are doing well… I knew your eyes needed rest… But I would visit the page to see the update and get disappointed… then I thought I should come back..See I am here… thank you for all the love yaar….I might take loooooooooooooooong time to come back but cannot think of not visiting the page….
I am gonna read the new episode right after this…and yes …take care dear…thank you for all the good words and support…lots of love to you..take care….hope you are all good… and yes…. I will be always there…. You needn’t to doubt yourself yaar…. I would be there to read…. I am sooooo happy that you and others commented…. lots of love….byeeee
Awwww, my patakagudhi it feels so nice 2 see u after a long gap…..Yeah some how I thought either u will come 2 update or mahaa will come, after that i can make update, instead of thinking it i should have posted article..But kyaa hein ki jab hamare saathi post karte hein, tabhi humein bhi post karne kaa man karega…..sorry for coming so late , but while today in office when i got a break, i just checked this page and when i find ur article, trust me i was in cloud9 …..Then what i quickly made an update and submitted it 2 TU…..Because seeing u and lalitha , i felt yeah definitely these guys will comment on my ff……Love u more and more….dear.. and am gud now, just sucked with work pressure only……
HOW CAN I NOT MISS YOU RENI….. YOUR PATHAKAGUDDI 🙂 🙂
HI Reni,
I have not forgotten you either.. Your stories are also good.
I have read all your FF and trust me you too are writing so well.
I think one of your FF is still incomplete. Please do complete the older one too. Awaiting to read it with great eagerness.
take care..
Thanks janice for all the support dear, will update the older ones after completing we united them…….
So finally read it, I must say it’s a different story and you portrayed it very nicely. Really got emotional after reading the pain through which dhaani and her family is bearing. Now waiting for viplav’s entry, and yes felt good to read something on ViDha after a long time.
Lastly you all are saying that because of me you guys weren’t posting your articles here, so I can only say sorry for that.
Love you loads<3
hey. how r u.
I’m fine. Good to see you here after a long time! How’re you?
Hey Mahaa….thank you for your comment dear…Talking about not posting articles…I thought,the page is silent since GOD KNOWS WHEN then I decide…Why not write a brand new story on ViDhaani…that’s why…hope you will support me through out this journey
hey sujie. Happy to see you back. Missed your stories and this page our previous ikrs family. Thank u for being a reason to visit this page once again.
coming to story title described it well. love again. Surely you gonna rock this. all the best?
keep writing.
Hey Meghs…good to see you as well…glad that you are here …Pleasure is all mine yaar…I wanted to be here…and bring atleast most of us together….hope you liked it…..thanks for all the love dear ??
Hi Sujie, Lovely story . Keep it up. Missing Vidha so much. You guys are making them kinda come onscreen again 🙂
Thank you dear…..Keep supporting Avani?????Glad that you read it