Hi guys !! Mars back starting a new ff…Hope you lovevit…
let's begin… it will start from the time when it was uttra's marriage….
( i will not focus on raglak)
Shot 1
Gaytri sees swara on sanskaar and gets angry… she pulls swara from sanskaar and takes her down…
Gaytri: All look this girl.. a pr*stitute… greedy and lusty woman… i got a suspicion on her when i seen her for the first time…
( tears rolls from swara 's eyes)
sanskaar comes downstairs
Ragini: enough!!! she is my sister not a pr*stitute…. mind your words… dare you spoke any other word against swara… i will pull out your tongue…
Gaytri: Shut up!!! you are her sister may be you would be a pr*stitute…. you both are cheap girls… who are you to speak in rude tone with me… cheaps!!!
And Gaytri gets the hardest slap of the world…. the person who slapped her was non other than Ap….
Ap: dare you speak any bad word against my bahus….. before blaming them see yourself… a black hearted woman… good for nothing… self praiser … thinks herself as mrs right…. giving us threat to break relation with uttra… are just go… dont need your realtion…
Gaytri: whatt… these cheap girls are your bahus…. actually you are doing worlds biggest mistake… and yaa we are leaving … Chirag and Chairag's father … come we are leaving and breaking this realtion….
they trio were about to leave when..
sanskaar said: rukhhh jaaiye!!!! just wait a moment… you were here to attened the marriage na…and going without attending it.. you are leaving without attending it… just wait for some time…
Ragini: marriage???? whose marriage..
sanskaar: mine n swara's …
All gets happy..
He moves towards swara and holds her hand…
swara feels his touch…
He brings sindoor from Mandir and places in her forehead…
swara closes her eyes..
her pov
sanskaar!!! i think i had given u a very tough times… i think you were not worthy of that also…. i am sorry sanskaar… you always loved me…and me too but i didnt trusted you and blamed you… the fault was mine not yours..
i will love you till my last breath… sanskaar i really apologize for my rude behaviour…… i love you.. i love you..
pov ends..
Sanskaar's pov
what did you think swara… i rescued you.. noah noah…!! no way.. actually now i will take my revenge easily… didnt you heared that " keep your enemy closer than your frnd" …..
now you will see the worst sanskaar.. get ready wifey!!! here presenting the worst sanskaar… I hate you swara… i hate… you just blamed me without trusting me… you know trust is the base of every realtion.. if not trust then only hate…. i have laways given you love.. everything in excess is deadly naa … so enough of love… now have my hate…
pov ends..
san: maa let gaytri jii .. go from here…
gaytri n her family leaves…
san: Maa …. i wanna give swara some time.. so i am going with her to our of Mumbai… right now… inform the servants there to make preparation….
ap says yes…
Ragini calls and infroms shomi and shekhar about swasan reunion…and they both arrived with some gifts…
Swasan takes blessings from all the elder and leaves…
after a day
swasan comes to their home…it was not a big mansion… but was enough for our love birds…
as soon as swasan comes to room..Swara hugs sanskaar…
swara: i am sorry sanskaar… i am sorry..pls forgive me… i love you sanskaar… i love you..
sanskaar pushes her …swara shocks
sanskaar: what you think… you will say sorry and the pain you given me will vanish… no swara.. it will never vanish… because now it is turned into hate… you think that i brought you for giving you time…no swara no..
swara: sanskaar… i know that i have given you so much pain but pls… give me a second chance….
sanskaar:second chance?? how many times i should give you second chance… just listen swara… i hate you… i just hate you..
swara: Sanskaar your tongue is saying something else n your eyes are saying something else… dont lie sanskaar…
sanskaar: damm it swara… i
hate you… i hate you swara..
swara:say the samething… seeing my eyes…
sanskaar: i dont repeat my words again n again… admit it…!!
he leaves..
swara: you should admit it sanskaar that you are lying…. it is not your hate… its your love… your love is just hidden behind the hate… i love to play hide n seek… and i will seek your for me soon….
Epi ends..
howzz the concept guys… hope it doent bore you…
57 Comments
Wooww awesome and interesting.
I will love to read it and I m so happy that u came with new story.
All the best for your future work.
Continue soon
Thanks
Take care
Again I thought it’s u…??????????? seriously then I saw ur comment…
Hahahaa asha chal ho jata hai.
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I too thought its yu???
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thank you mars….i means alot to me dear❤❤
Even I also thought the same Marsuuu. And I confirmed, when I saw the line “I will not focus on raglak”. Wow, girls u both are have many similarities.
Awesome dear
thanks dear
Awesome dear just forget raglak they always comes in between our swasan’s happiness
thanks dear????…. ofcourse i will not bring them in between??
oh dear!!!! why didnt you became the writer of swaragini…. hamare swasan abhi hamare saath hote… i will consider this ff as the story of swaragini …..❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
reallyyy dear…!!!????? love uhhhh…yaa humare swasan????….
thanks dear alottt
awesome
ty??
Sooo interesting pls update as soon as possible ?
thanks?????? k i will update
Awesome..
ty???
awesome ?? but yaar swara was also not wrong ?..
thanks?… ya she was nott
Awesome yarrr….. Love it… Love it soooooooooooo much…. U know I’m happy u neglect unwanted people…. Please please please infinity times to post soon….
Love u Mars 2?????????
thank you soso much????…. i would not drag them in betweenn….. yaa i would post it soon..
love too depu???
????????? I’m waiting ??
Awsm Dr…. Update soon
thanks? sure
Loved it. Excited for next one
tysm❤
Interesting dear.
Waiting to read further.
thanks dear…
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sorry for making you wait
awsome dear next part soon
thanks??
Really interesting..I’m so glad that u r writing a new swasan ff..continue soon..
Tc..
thanks very very much❤❤❤
Nycc
thanks?
Amazing dear….interesting…..Continue soon….
tysm dear ????
u r just amazing mars… I really don’t know how ur brain runs so fast…. it’s lovely… looking forward for next… n even believe me b sanskar ki swara….
tysm dear ????… but dear i am the new mars… i wondering that you are talking about mars prt 1… but i am part 2
Superb mars… ??
thanks????❤
Nice episode
thanks ????
nice but pls change ur user name?
thanks?? but i dont know how to change
In six months leap i don’t think only swara is wrong!!! Both are wrong!!! But everyone who are writing from this track showing only swara getting punishment!!! Okie no worries!! U continue…. Bye
areee…just wait a little n read furthter…???☺
it’s really superb
nyc dear
superb
Awesome dear… Its good u didn’t include raglak…
Superb start Mars no.2(hehehe!). But don’t write, bcz of Sanskaar’s punishment Swara feeling pain(mentally n physically) n Sanskaar feeling guilt…..blah blah, something like that dear. Write something different!! Don’t disappoint us Mars no.2(hehehe!!). And don’t take me wrong dear.
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY!!!
nice
Interesting….
Wonderful