hii guys I know u r angry on me as I didn’t posted from long time but I was really busy with my final year project n submissions which just ended today n have my exams next month……. so won’t be able to post my ff till may but I m here to pay my penalty as an os…….. n would try to give an update of my ff before my exams but can’t promise……… so here we go……
THIS OS IS A GIFT FROM ME TO MICKEY AS SHE WAS HAVING HER BIRTHDAY ON 24TH MARCH….. LOVE U MICKEY……
The scene opens when all Maheshwaris return to MM after janmashtami Pooja at baadi I.e on the day when swaragini discovered adarsh to b the culprit……. adarsh was hurt on his neck so AP asked him to come with her n she will do his first aid…… so he left glaring swaragini n then suji asked Ragu about her health as she fainted earlier ( in serial she acted but in my ff she really fainted but swara misunderstood it as her acting). Ragu said that she is fine now n started to go towards her room but felt dizzy.
n swara n suji held her from both the sides…. n made her sit on sofa….
Su:- chori sambhalke…… ye ke ho raha hain tanhe???? aur tu bol rahi hain ki thik hain….!!! khak thik hain chal baith athe main tere liye nimbu pani laati hu jara thik lagega tuze ussase………. swara jara tu jara ruk iske pass….. yeh sab tum choriyonke daiting ka affect hain…..
Sw:- maa dating nahi deiting a ur affect nahi effect…. says she smiling….
Suji:- ha vahi toh boli me…… chal tu ruk athe….. baato main lagadiya manhe…….. saying so she left murmuring something to herself n left towards kitchen…..
Sw (worriedly):- Ragu kya hua tuze achanak???
R:- achanak nahi swara Hume subahse ajib lagraha hain…… n I even puked in evening…. thori der pehele bhi Maine natak nahi kia that sachme mujhe chakkar aaye the…..
Swara was about to reply her suji came n made ragini drink lemon juice forcefully…….
Suji:- ja swara ise iske kamre tak chodke aa ( n to ragu) aur chori ab tu chup
chap aram kr….. both swaragini nodded n swara helped ragini to climb stairs n just then all gents came n laksh became worried for ragini watching her condition…..
L:- ragu what happened???? why are u looking so dull???
R:- nothing laksh….. hum thik hain…..
Sw:- kya thik hain ha…..??? laksh kuch thik nahi hain ye….. she fainted 2 time till now from evening due to weakness……
L( glaring ragini):- can’t u take care of yourself ??? come let’s go to our room you need rest….
R:- par aapka khana….????
Sn:- ragini humari dinner meeting thi so humne khana kha liya hain….. tum humari chinta mat karo u take rest…. to which ragini nodded n laksh held her one hand in his hand n other was on her shoulder….. but she was too weak to walk n again felt dizzy but laksh held her n they both shared a beautiful eyelock n all smiled at their bonding…..
laksh broke the eyelock n carried ragini in his hands in swift n took her to their room…….
@raglak room,
laksh made ragini lay on bed n he sat beside her n covered her with comforter n was about to leave….
but he sensed a tug on his wrist n found ragini holding it with her hand…. n she sat up on bed in half laying position……
R:- r u angry on me???
laksh turned his face in opposite side and his eyes weld up…
R:- sorry…. she held her one ear with her free hand n her voice started chocking as if she was on the verge of crying ….. I didn’t did it intentionally….. I was not feeling good since morning and was about to tell you n even tried to talk to u but u were tense about ur deal n said we will talk later…..
before she could complete laksh hugged her tightly and started sobbing…..
L:- sorry ragini I became so careless that didn’t even bother to hear u……. today all I have is only due to ur faith on me n ur support but what I did is like always I.e to b careless… now u take rest tomorrow we will go to doctor…..
R:- no need of it laksh…..
interrupted by laksh,
L:- chup…. now n sleep…. its final that we will go to doctor tomorrow k…..
ragini nodded like a child in yes and laksh smiled at his wife’s antiques…..
he stoodup to get changed n the again sat down and gave a long forehead kiss to her…. to which she smiled closing her eyes feeling his touch…..
n then ragini interrupted,
R:- laksh I need to change….. will u plz call swara to help me my whole body is paining badly…… plz….
L:- why swara when ur hubby is here??
R:- because my hubby is tired said she circulating her arms around his neck n both smiled n laksh quickly peaked her lips…….. she blushed hard n her chick turned red due to shyness…..
L( in a husky voice):- by the way you were looking beautiful like an angel today in your lehenga…… n he woke up…. he helped ragini to getup n handled her a night saari of her n lead her to washroom…… and then changed his dress too till she came back n when she was back he made her lie on bed n coved her with a duet n he laid beside her n coved himself too with same duet n switched off the light….. ragini hugged him tightly with her head on his chest and laksh too hugged her tightly and both dozzed off…..
NEXT MORNING…..
@RAGLAKS ROOM,
Laksh opened his eyes n found the space of bed beside him empty n got worried about ragini…… just the he heard some sounds from washroom n rushed their only to find ragini vomiting badly……. laksh pat her back…
L:- ragini calm down bachha n he brought her towards bed n made her sit……. but as a turned for taking his phone to call doctor he was shocked as ragini was lying lifeless and unconscious on bed….. his heart skipped for a bit n he started to pat her chicks….. he made her lay properly and called her out……
L:- Ragu open ur eyes damit….
hearing his shout all the Maheshwaris rushed their n were shocked to see this state of ragini…… swara too sat near ragini n opposite to laksh…… n started patting raginis chick but no use….
AP:- hey baghwan, laksh yeah kya hua ise aur kaise hua….????
Suji:- ha chore ekdm achanakse ye bahosh kaise hogayi???
L:- pata nahi chachi, kal ratse voh bohot weak feel kr rahi thi aur uparse use vomiting bhi ho rahi thi….
DP:- sab vo chodo sanskar tum doctor ko phone krke bula lo jaldise…..
Sn:- ji bade papa…..
n swara took waterjug to sprinkle water on raginis face to bring her in conscious…. but it was empty….
Rp:- uttara ja jake pani LA…. khatam hogaya hain…..
U:- ji papa…..
n she went hurriedly to fetch water from kitchen……
After some time doctor came n examine ragini n smiled…. all became confused about this reaction of doctor and doctor sensed it n said….
Dr:- nothing to worry actually their is a good news for u all….. ur daughter in law is expecting…..
all were shocked at first but later their expressions changed to happy one
L:- n doctor ragini??? is she fine????
Dr:- ya nothing to worry its just due to weakness…. she may feel neusia in initial months….here are some vitamin tablets for her n give her juices n coconut water if she feels weakness n let her take maximum rest as she is too weak…..
Sw:- yes Doctor we will take…. come I will take your suitcase…..
saying so they both went away….
Ragini slowly gained conscious n all left a sight of relief…..
DP:- come let’s go down she need rest…
all nodded n AP came forward n kissed raginis forehead and suji cared her cheek…. n they left…. swara too was taken away by sanskar…..
Ragini was looking at all of them in confusion and as all left her gaze shift to laksh who was sitting beside her holding her hand between his hands…. he smiled among his tears n this increased raginis confusion.
laksh sat best her n encircled his arm around her shoulder….. ragini rested her her on his chest and continued
R:- laksh whats all this….????
laksh smiled at her innocence n kissed her forehead n later look her hand n placed it on her stomach….. ragini looked shocked first n then looked in laksh eyes as if questioning him to say it is true or false….. laksh nooded in yes n then ragini burst out in his arms hugging him tightly….. still she was smiling among her tears n sobs…..
L:- bachha bas…. ab roneke din Gaye…. hmmm….??
R:- laksh aaj hum bohot khush hain…. ab sab thik hojayega jab humara prince hame saath hoga….
L:- sab thik hojayega lekin hamare prince nahi princess ki vajahse…
R:- haww laksh I knew it that it will be a prince…..
L:- nope it will be a princess….
ragini broke the hug n pouted making a sad face……
laksh laugh at her antiques and kissed her pout n hugged her again n said ….
L:- whoever it may b he or she…. it will be our angel, our life….. symbol of our love n
togetherness…..
n then they both were lost in the dreams of their baby…….
just then laksh’s phone rang n they broke the hug…
L( on call):- yes Mr Joshi… good morning… suddenly u called, is everything OK ??
J:- gm Mr Maheshwari….
ya everything is absolutely fine….. infact I have a marvelous newsfor u….
L:- a news for me??? said laksh sounding excited n looked at ragini….. ragini ask what happened by raising her eyebrows….. to which laksh shook his head in no as nothing to worry…..
J:- the news is that Maheshwari groups team under ur leadership have won the temple tender…… congratulations……
L:- wow that’s great news sir….. thanks…. I will call you back in a while……
J:- sure gentlemen have a nice day……
laksh cutted the call n engulfed ragini in a bone crushing hug……
L:- ragini I love u……. love u soo much….. saying this he peak her lips living ragini shocked n then……
L:- I love u too baby….. u r papas lucky charm….. saying so he removed her Pallu from her belly and kissed her their…..
Ragini still was confused about her behaviour…… n laksh noticed that confusion on her face and said….
L:- Ragu the team who was working under me for Maheshwari constructions cracked it…. n your laksh proved himself…… ragini hugged laksh in happiness n then said…..
R:- u first get ready we will go down and say this news to all….
L:- but Ragu u r not well….
R:- I m k laksh…. n u r with me right????
laksh rolled his eyes and went to get ready and ragini burst into a laugh watching her husbands antique……
they both shared the news with all n all were happy for laksh….. a party too was thrown for laksh’s success…. all was grt during sonography it was ditected that ragini was carrying twins…. all were on cloud nine…. n were pampering ragini with lots of love….. her every wish was completed without delay….. everyone in MM was instructed about not hurting her n every wish of her was fulfilled instantly….. her mood swings were like a shock for laksh but he enjoyed it…… ragini had a grand Godhbharai in her 7th month and Shekhar wanted to take ragini to baadi for delivery but laksh rejected so ragini was taken to baadi just for a day but that to was very hard time for laksh….. during raginis delivery laksh was supposed to go abroad due to some work but sanskar insisted laksh to wait for ragini as she need him and he went in place of laksh….. ragini had a nornal delivery as AP N Dadi took good care of her…
she gave birth two boys…
raglak named them as vansh n Ansh………. The screen freezed on happy faced of raglak with ragini carrying vansh n laksh carrying Ansh…..
I hope so u will like it mickey…..
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Awwwww KITKAT ……. 🙂
The tile suits the os soo much…….
ITS A PERFECT STORYLINE…………….. 🙂
THANKS ALOT FOR AN OS ON RAGLAK ,DEAR CHOCOLATE GIRL. :-P(KITKAT)
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loved it cant wait for it
Amazing….. & Thanks alot for the OS…
Best of luck for the Exams…
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Love uuuuuuuu sooooooooooo muchhhhhhh????????
Thank uuuuuuuu soooo much..
For this lovely gift ??????
It was awesome……
Loved it ????
Keep writing like this…???
love u too mickey…..
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Outstanding os dear and loved Raglak scenes a lot. Plz write more Raglak stories
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