Hey Ishqies ….This is Renima Ishqie with a new ff. I felt Priyanka’s character has boosted up in Ishqbaaz and we all witnessed our sweet prinku’s pairing with dev. Well as per tracks I don’t know what cv’s have planned for their pair. But I think this time I should write an ff for Prinku as she is the sweet sister of Shivaay, Om and Rudy…..And ishkara, shivika, rumya fans…..we are getting lot of ffs to read….So guys…..I think this is the time to write an ff for prinku….In this ff ishqies I have put some changes to the original pridev track and made slight changes in all characters also …Since my work pressure and leg pain are standing like swords on my head….Ishqies ….. Well to get rid of that I thought why don’t I write an ff …….So inspite of time shortage and obstacles am writing this ff ….Please support me with your comments, views and opinions…..
Scene- 1 {@ Chabra Nivas}
{The whole Oberoi family arrives @ Chaabra’s house….as they are invited by chabra’s since Mr & Mrs. Chabra are celebrating their wedding anniversary. Both of the families are happy to see each other… Pinky, Jhanvi, Dadi and Mrs. Chaabra were engaged in their talk…… Mr. Chabra, Sakthi and Tej also got busy with their talk. Rihaan introduces Dev to Shivaay, Omkara, Rudra and Prinku….}
Rihaan : Hai Shivaay Bhaiya…. Meet my bhaiya Dev…..
Dev : Hello {he is ready to give a shake hand….}
Shivaay : Excuse me….{he just ignores dev and walks….Dev feels bad….}
Omkara : Dev…please don’t misunderstand shivaay….Am sorry….
Dev : Actually I am used to these things…..Just because I am here……as…
Rihaan : Bhaiya…. You are my brother…..And don’t worry….
Dev : Rihaan….just because you say that I am your brother truth will not change…. Media itself leaked the fact that am paapa’s illegitimate son and he decided me to announce his son just because my mom passed away …..Else I would have remained as Dev only…..Not Dev Chaabra…..
Omkara : Dev I know you have hurted a lot….But this surname doesn’t depicts any criteria to show a person’s identity……As…{Their conversation got interrupted as Shivaay called Omkara as “Om” Omkara says “ I have to go, please excuse me” and leaves….}
Rudra : Hi Dev….Am Rudra….
Dev : Hi Rudra…..
Rihaan : Hey Rudra, how are you ? Actually I want to tell you about an interesting person….About a girl…who is a big fan of you….
Rudra : Really ??
Rihaan : Not here man….mmm…
Rudra : Prinku….Dev…we will be back within few minutes…..{They leaves}
Dev : Ok Guys…..{smiles and stares @ Prinku….Prinku also smiles with bit tension….}Hi…
Priyanka : Hello…
Dev : So you are….prinku….
Priyanka : Am Priyanka…..
Dev : But your brothers are calling you prinku….
Priyanka : Actually shivaay bhaiya started me calling prinku….My brothers are much attached with me…..
Dev : You are lucky…..Priyanka…..
Priyanka : Actually I…..
Dev : What ?
Priyanka : Nothing {she just shake her head and smiles}
Dev : I think you are bored….
Priyanka : No…..But why you asked so ?
Dev : Because am getting bored…..And I need some one to talk…..So shall we become friends?
{He raised his hand to shake her hand…. Priyanka was bit confused…. But the way he stared @ her with a beautiful smile really surprised her a lot….And she was unable to say No and she also stared and smiled @ Dev}
Priyanka : Yes…..{She slowly raised her hand and was ready to accept his friendship….But suddenly Dev receives a phone call and he attends the call…. Dev got tensed with that call ….Priyanka observes it….Dev cut the call and smiles….}
Priyanka : I think you are tensed…. Any problem?
Dev : Nothing serious….Priyanka….Would you like to have a cup of coffee ? Please…..I really need it….as I want to refresh myself….Won’t you ?
{She just shake her head and smiles …. Dev also smiles and orders coffee .Both dev and prinku sat @ the corner and stares each other….}
On the other hand Shivaay and Omkara were talking about Dev
Shivaay : I really don’t understand why Dadi forced all of us to attend this wedding anniversary? I just hate this chabra family….From the media the whole world has witnessed that Dev is the illegitimate son of Mr. Chabra…not his actual son….And if they really want to invite our family @ their function then they should have send their illegitimate son some where else
Omkara : Shivaay, Dev is Mr.Chabra’s son…..
Shivaay : Om…Dev is his illegitimate son….Not his blood….
PRECAP : Tej – Mr. Chabra argument….
Well, ishqies…this one is very short……But ishqies I wrote it just to get relief from my tension and ill health….So this one may have lot of faults…..and ishqies….please forgive me for the mistakes and faults…..
15 Comments
Guys need your comments as this is just an attempt to do some thing new……I will try to make next one long when i will get time
di it’s awesome .it is really nice apart from other couples.I am waiting for next
Thanks shivani…actually it is just an attempt to lime light prinku and dev…..and i will try to submit next part by tonight….
Mistakes makes a person perfect renima di … Thanks for entertaining us inspite of pain please take care of yourself as your valuable gem for us ..
# Emotional Queen ke FF pe cute comments toh bante hai …..
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This line fits for us writers gang lafzon ka rishta hai yeh ….
Am I right friends gang ???
Thanks a lot bshama…..oh dear….lafzon ka rishta….bshama thanks yaar
It’s nice renima… but is there gonna ishana and anika in the ff?
Well can’t tell much…just wait and see….that’s all…dear..if i will reveal then suspense ka kyaa?
Thanks 4 commenting
Awesome
Thanks dear
Renima….?dear it is really good…??.something different…. Simple nd sweet…..love to see our prinku ,dev lovestory
Thanks aarya
Good one
Thanks shilpa
Amazing di So unique pridev love story
no one thinking about priyanka as main lead for there ffs
Its so sweet and unique one
Get well soon di
take care
Thanks 4 sweet comment and wishes