Ragini-Laksh FF
This FF starts when Ragini gets Kidnapped by a masked person. All the family members where tensed thinking about Ragini.
Laksh- Mujhe toh lagta hai yeh phir se Ragini ki hi koi nayi chhal hai. Ussi ne khud ko kidnap karwaya honga.
Annpurna- Chup karo,Laksh, bilcul chup. She shouts on him.
DP-Kucch bhi kahne se pahele socha karo Laksh, yeh mat bhulo ki Ragini tumhari patni hai. Shaadi hui hai tumhari usse.
Laksh- woh shaadi nahi papa, ek dokha thha aur yeh bhi ek dokha hi hai.
Somewhere in the dark, Ragini was lying unconcious but murmuring something.
A mask person comes and see her condition. He thinks bahut kucch saahaa hai tumne Ragini,nahi karna chahta thha main yeh sab tumahare saath lekin kahte hai na, “Gehu ke saath ghunn bhi pish jaata hai” ussi tarah tumhari iss halat ke jimmedar bhi woh Maheshwari ‘s hai. Lekin abb waqt aa gaya hai ki tumhari sachai unhe bata di jaaye. Kuyki abb main unse aamne saamne larunga. He calls someone and asks – kaam hua ki nahi, woh packet Maheshwari’s tak pahucch jana chahiye. He cuts the call & looks towards Ragini with pitty in his eyes. He thinks “I am sorry Ragini, ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena un sab cheezo ke liye jo maine tumhe blackmail kar ke karwaya.” Tumhare begunahi ka sabut tumhare parivaar ke pass pahuch chuka hai. And he goes away.
There in Maheshwari mansion. Laksh was going to his room when someone throws a packet from outside. It have a CD and some documents. All are shocked to see “Ragini Gadodia ki Sachai” return on the CD. Sanskaar checks outside but no one was there. They play the CD.
CD starts-
They see Ragini is entering a garage. She is in anarkali suit, no sindoor, no mangalsutra. Its dark in the garage. She is looking scared. She shouts Kaun ho tum, kya chahate ho hummse aur kuy bulaya hai tumne yaha? Then a voice comes Bahut sawal karti ho tum ragini, sabhi sawalo ke jawab mille gey tumhe pahele tumhare samne jo chair rakha hai usspar baitho toh sahi. She sits. Toh tumahara pahela sawal thha Ragini ki main kaun? Toh tum mujhe apna dost,dushmaan,subhchintak kuch bhi samajh sakti ho. Tumahare dusere aur teeshre sawal inter connected hai. Kuy bulaya aur kya chahata hu main. Chalo pahele tumehe teeshre sawal ka jawab deta hoon. Toh main chahata hu ki tum Laksh Maheshwari se shaadi karo,the voice said. Ragini look shocked and shouts kya bakwaas hai yeh, hum Laksh se shaadi kuy kare, hum unsse pyaar nahi karte aur waise bhi Laksh ki shaadi Swara se honi hai, samjhe tum.
In M.M-Maheshwari & Gadodia were shocked to listen to this. Laksh felt like something pinched him.
In cd- Ragini gets up & turns to go. Hahaha a laughing sound comes. Tumhe kya lagta hai Ragini Gadodia main tumse request kar raha hu, nahi main tumhe order de raha hu. Ragini was about to say something when the voice says- aur agar tum ne aisa nahi kiya toh apne Maa- Baba ki maut ki jimmedaar tum khud hongi. Ho sakta hai ki kal dukaan jaate waqt tumahare baba ka accident ho jaye ya ghar lautte hue koi tumhari Maa ko goli mar de. Ragini was freezed, tears were flowing from her eyes. She was not able to say anything. She gathers courage & says Kuy kar rahe ho tum aisa, kuy karna chahate ho hamari zindagi kharab. Kuy hamme aise aadmi ke saath bandh rahe ho jise hum kabhi pyaar nahi kar sake gey. Kuyki hum kissi aur se pyaar karte hai.
In M.M- All are standing shocked. Tears start flowing from Laksh eyes hearing these words from Ragini ‘s mouth. He cant belive his ears.
In cd- Hahaha the voice laughs, socho lo Ragini tumhe apna pyaar chahiye ya apna parivaar. 2 ghante hai tumhare pass. Uske baad mein tumhe call karunga. Aur ha yaad rakhna main Sanskaar Maheshwari nahi jise tum double cross kar sakti ho. Main janta hu kis tarah tumne Sanskaar ki madad karne ka natak kiya aur usse double cross karte hue swara aur laksh ko karib le aayi. Mere saath aisa koi bhi game khelne ki koshish mat karna, mere adami hamesha tum par nazar rakhe hue hai. Ab tum jaa sakti ho. Ragini was in tears and she walks out.
In M.M- Tears were flowing from each and every eyes. Even Sujata was crying seeing what Ragini has to go through. Laksh was totally freezed. He has always taken Ragini for granted but know he knew that she does not love him. It was pinching him from inside. He thinks “yeh mujhe kiya ho raha hai, mujhe bura kuy lag raha hai yeh jaan kar ki Ragini mujhse pyaar nahi karti.” Other family members were just freezed specially Swara, Sharmishta, Shekhar, Dada & Dadi. They cant believe what they heard and they saw. There were some documents too. Adarsh picked it up and was shocked to see it. That was the hospital bills which Ragini paid for treatment of Swara. He pass it on to others. They remember how Ragini was also missing for sometime when they were searching for Swara. There was one more document & that was Divorce papers of Ragini & Laksh. They had the singnatures of Ragini and was dated just a day after Laksh & Ragini’s wedding. Maheshwaris & Gadodia were just shocked to see all these. In between the papers there was one more cd. Adarsh played it.
In Cd- It was wedding time & laksh announced that he wld marry Ragini. Sharmishta comes and gets Ragini ready. Sharmistha leaves as someone calls her. A masked man enters & says mubarak ho Ragini Gadodia ab kucch waqt mein hi tum Ragini Laksh Maheshwari ban jaoo gi. Mat karwao humse aisa paap plz tum humse jo maango ge hum tumhe denge lekin hamari zindagi barbaad mat karo. Ragini says & breaksdown infront of mask man. Hahaha agar tumne yeh shaadi nahi ki na Ragini toh jis ghar mein abhi khushiyaan hai uss ghar mein maatam chha jayega, laashe girengi yahan par, aur iski jimmedar bhi tum hongi. Isliye chup chap yeh shaadi karlo, samjhi. And he lefts. Ragini closes the door & cries her heart out. Cd is over.
In MM- Dadi breaks down shouting Laddo. She says itna kucch sahti rahi tu aur mahare ko khabar bhi na hone di. Kuy Laddo kuy sahti rahi tu yeh sab akele. Kam se kam mahare ko toh bataya hota. Sharmistha tries to console her but dadi shouts on her. Chuna mat mahare ko bangalan. Thare aur thari iss beti ki wajah se mahari laddo ko yeh sab sahna pada. Bahut shauk hai na tum maa beti ko mahan banane ka, lekin mahanta usko na kahte hai, mahanta usko kahte hai jo mahari laddo ne kiya. Tumhari jaan bachane ke liye puri duniya ke samne buri ban gayi woh. Sirf tum donno ki wajah se.
Precap- Police finds Ragini. New Entry.
So how is CH-1.
24 Comments
I have been a silent reader till now…bt ur ff is seriously awesme…i loved it…I really lyk Ragss….she is jst super
Awesome yar waiting for next part 🙂 🙂
Awesome loved it h
Superb yar but don’t separate raglak aur ye kya Ragini laksh se nahi balki Kisi aur se pyar karti hai.
Plz upload next part soon. I can’t wait
Super awesome it should be true..we love it a lot..but pls write it in English..we feel better
good but I think its story is copied from facebooh(raglak fanclub)
Good.Continue.Who does Ragini love?
intrestingggggggggggg…..IT’s reallyy good yaarr
it’s completely different ………it’s good ……..update next part soon
Wow……..SUPERB……I M JUST DYING FOR THE NEXT EPI. Nd for LAKSH’. Rection also……Plz….dear upload the next episode soon plz……u know I’m a big fan of RagLak.nd u know what Jb show me ragini ki sachchai sb k saamne ayi thi toh main Bilkul yahi soch rhi thi but unfortunately this wasn’t happen….u made my dream come true nd iss liye also i just love it……..I LOVE YOU…..MUAAAH
Please can u update in English I don’t know hindi yaar that’s why
I also want to say the same. Update in english plz. Many non-hindi readers are here
plz in English
nice.. one… continue soon..
plz update in english
It’s really nice……but I don’t understand one thing…..has dadi again started hating swara n sumi……
can u write in English please
Unable to understand…
wow.what a.story.yaar.simply.awesome
i am a silent till now..but after reading your ff i have to say that….you are just awsome.. wating next part
What the hell is this????????!! Why are you copying others ff?! This isn’t right.. mehnt koi kre or tum…. Guys this is Rup’s ff!! She post on facebook RagLak’s page… she posted it some days ago!!
yes.. there are many similarity with my ff… Sorry.. I don’t stop you to write the ff… but you can’t take all the merits… I saw that you write it in a very good way.. but take your own ideas.. 🙁
Hello, rup ya got this idea when I read it on facebook.actually it klicked me so I just wrote here with changes such as garage scene, double crossing sanskaar, dadi outbrust, marriage scene . If you feel its copied then I apologize. And I will take care from now onwards that it does not match your ff.?
plz write in english as i dono hindi