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raglak one shot…

administratorBy administratorApril 10, 201638 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys…its Roshni again back but with os of raglak……n its my first attempt don’t knw how I portrayed…if its not at all gud then plz pardon me….guys I hope u all suport me like u did to my previous ff what is this connection???so lets begin….

As usual I (Ragini) was going to college….
Just then I got a call from my best friend swara….she ordered me to come fast as there was a concert of mine…..i came to auditorium n saw him again flirting with swara….i just went n dragged swara n warned him not to come in front of her as every time…..but for my goodness he didn’t fight with me…..coz he always used to search opportunity to fight or argue with me…..but I thought to ignore him n concentrated on my concert….
Then I went to stage it was not d first time for me but didn’t know I was feeling very much nervous……n I started to sing…soon my eyes got struck when I saw him….i was shock to see him…coz it was d first time that he came to c my concert….n that to he was staring me but this time not in anger but in love…just then my all nervous flew away…n then in finished my concert….

I was returning to home….I was just thinking about him….didn’t knw y there was change in his behaviour…..but I was disturbed when i heard a sweet n firm voice telling ex cuse me….voice was quite familiar so I turned n i was shock to c him..I in mind laksh????
Laksh:Ragini….
N this was another shock to hear my name from him….coz I knw him from my childhood but from these many years not even once he called my name…..
I: Laksh??????
Laksh came closer to me but I didn’t know y I couldn’t move back….n was busy in staring him….
Laksh came in front of me n kneeled down…
I was wondering what he is doing????
Laksh then took rose n forwarded his hand holding rose…n proposed me…
I couldn’t bear these many shock in one single day…..but I stood like a statue blinking my eyes 100 times….
Laksh: I know this must be most shocking one…but its truth that I love u….i really love u ….i know from these many years I not even talked to u….n my love is not from 2 or 3 days but from my childhood…yes Ragini I started to love u from my childhood…n I was just pretending that I was angry on u…n fighter with u…but daily I used to punish myself for behaving like that…but I tried not to love u by fighting with u…coz whoever I used to love they left me alone…..i cant bear this loneliness Ragini….i don’t have anyone to share my feelings …..but whenever I used to c u….I was feeling happy…trust me Ragini pls give a one chance to prove my love…just one chance…while saying he was having tears….
I wasn’t able to c him like that…it was d first time i saw his another face which is filled with loneliness m sorrows.. I felt like hugging him n support him…he was eargerly waiting for my reply….
I made him to stand n soon I hugged him….
I: laksh from now onwards ur not alone I will always be with u….i love u too laksh ..ragini n laksh r one n d same…both compete each other…
Then I wiped his tears n told him to be strong….he then took me to his house…I was shock to c his room..coz I was fully my pics….i looked at him in a confused manner…but he just gave a broad smile….i just melted like a ice by seeing his smile…I prayed god not to let this smile go away from him….
I hugged him….n he to responed me…
I: Laksh itna pyaar karte Ho tum mujse….
Laksh :ir my life tell me who will not love there life….i will protect u even by scarifying my life…i kept my fingers on his mouth n told him not to tell like that…he then wiped my tears n hugged me….

After some days….
My parents even agreed to our relationship….
Then he took me for a long drive….tht day v both enjoyed by eating ice cream chats…roaming everywhere…..I thought that this day is my best day …but I didn’t know that it will soon become worst day for me….i didn’t expected that destiny will turn my life like this…..

That day while walking laksh fainted…this happened to him many days but he was telling that due to weakness n ignored that…but I was telling him to consult doctor but he didn’t….soon I took him to hospital…don’t know why they immediately took him to icu….then I called my parents…they came n supported me….
Soon doctor came…i rushed to him n asked about him….
Doctor:sry we couldn’t save him…
For a moment when I heard that I couldn’t believe him….i felt the loneliness….i cried n begged him not to tell like that…
Doctor:actually he was suffering from brain cancer…n it was in last stage so v couldn’t do anything…..
I stood like a ideal not even a single drop of tear came out….then my parents did all rituals but I was standing like that only…my mom asked me cry whole heartedly but I just ignored her n went to his room n locked myself….
I took my mobile n saw d pics wich v took on that day…then I saw a book on table….i went n opened that it was personal dairy of him….he had written each n everything about me…..i just turned pages n started reading tears unknowingly came…then there was a note…..where he had written…
Laksh:Ragini I will be always there with u…if not in front of u but in ur heart…there is no place better than ur heart…..i live there…if at all I leave this world early ….then promise me that u wont fallen weak…promise me that u will move on….u said that u want to become a singer n its my dream too I hope u will full fill that…u should not cry for me….coz I am nowhere but in ur heart….u only said that raglak r one n d same…I love u Ragini……

Just then I wiped my tears n said that I will fullfill our dreams…..yes wat if ur not der in this world but ur given a special place in my heart …..i love u too laksh. ….
N now I fulfilled our area by becoming a singer……i can do anything coz my love is with me…..love is everything…..

The end …….

Guys I its was not nice then I am really sry….plz comment guys….love u alll…..Roshni…..

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38 Comments

  1. Sunehri on April 10, 2016 8:43 am

    Heart touching story … I cried when I was reading …. it’s one of the best one short good job

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:12 am

      Tysm sunehri….i am glad that u like it…sry for making you to cry…..

  2. soundarya on April 10, 2016 9:01 am

    Wat a os…its simply best…..i am still crying…very good job….

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:14 am

      Tysm soundarya….i am really happy that u liked it…

  3. rakhi on April 10, 2016 9:03 am

    Awsm dear..vry emotional

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:16 am

      Tysm rakhi….i really felt happy to receive ur comment……

  4. heena on April 10, 2016 9:03 am

    it was amazing yar.. U nailed it dr… I m still crying emotional… Really heart touching…

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:19 am

      Tysm so much heena…its great compliment for me….ru d same who wrote heart connection?????if yes then must say ur really blessed to write…..love u dear…sry for making u to cry…

  5. aradhya on April 10, 2016 9:15 am

    Its just fab..no words to say….can u write one more ff on swasan…..

  6. kriya on April 10, 2016 9:21 am

    amazing last part was emotional……

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:22 am

      Tysm kriya n aradhya….it means a lot for me…

  7. Riya on April 10, 2016 9:31 am

    Short but simply amazinggg! Loved it like anything!!

  8. pavani on April 10, 2016 9:34 am

    Hmm a sad story but awsome

  9. Sritha on April 10, 2016 9:35 am

    Its oosm…it made me remember my love….??

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:24 am

      Tysm Riya,pavani,n sritha I am glad u all liked it…..

  10. vavachi on April 10, 2016 9:41 am

    Very emotional

  11. Anaita on April 10, 2016 9:41 am

    unexpected ending…

  12. Kerthana on April 10, 2016 9:42 am

    It was soo emotional but I love it

  13. ragini on April 10, 2016 9:51 am

    Seriously its very emotional….one of d best one shot….loved it…

  14. zuha(Asya Fan) on April 10, 2016 9:52 am

    I am speechless after reading this “TRMENDOUS” didi . Just awesome , the way u potrayed it , it just stole my heart.

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:34 am

      Ohh…that’s really so sweet of u zuha….that’s again a big complement….tysm for commenting sis….

  15. ruhi on April 10, 2016 9:55 am

    Ending was very much emotional…..its heart touching os…..

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 10:31 am

      Tysm vavachi,anaitha,keerthana,Ragini,n ruhi…..I am glad that u all liked this OS…

  16. Ammu on April 10, 2016 10:16 am

    Superb dear and very emotional.

  17. anonymous on April 10, 2016 10:54 am

    it is so simple yet created it’s magic………awsome

  18. Ani on April 10, 2016 11:19 am

    I made me cry roshni… It was very heart touching and emotional os…while reading the last part tears were flowing frm my eyes… Super os…

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 12:00 pm

      Sry dear for making u to cry…..n tysm for commenting….i am really happy that u liked it…..

  19. Ani on April 10, 2016 11:20 am

    *U

  20. swati on April 10, 2016 11:30 am

    So emotional

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 11:57 am

      Tysm ammu,anonymous,n Swati…..i felt happy to c ur comments…..

  21. Dhara on April 10, 2016 11:50 am

    While reading it i felt like someone is stabbing my heart.very emotional.u r an awesome writter.u really made me cry.

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 12:03 pm

      Ohh I am really sry dear for making u to cry…n I so happy to receive such a complement u made my day…..tysm….

  22. lovely on April 10, 2016 1:01 pm

    nice

  23. taiana on April 10, 2016 1:09 pm

    Awesome… it is a heart touching one…

  24. Nita on April 10, 2016 1:11 pm

    It was lovely dear….

  25. megha on April 10, 2016 2:25 pm

    Very emotional I really felt like crying dear

    • roshni on April 10, 2016 4:24 pm

      tysm lovely, taiana, nita, megha for ur comments. ….I am glad u all liked it…

  26. Naimi on April 10, 2016 4:08 pm

    wow…super

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