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Part 16
Ragini scares as someone has kept hand on her shoulder. That hand moves Ragini tightly towards him. And, nothing to worry.. it’s Laksh himself. Ragini gets her life back after seeing laksh but he was looking at her in anger.
Laksh: how dare you to go away alone like that? this is other country and behave yourself…
When Laksh was scolding like that, Ragini suddenly hugs him. Laksh amazes. she was shivering and crying. He understands that she was scared.
Laksh: ok ok.. nothing to worry. I’m here na..!
Ragini: why did you take this much time to come out…??
Laksh: you ran away fastly. I came in search of you. Are you scared..?
Ragini breaks the hug. ‘No..! I’m not scared..! I’m a brave girl..!’
She wipes her tears. Laksh smiles. He takes her suitcase also into his hands.
‘let’s go.’ He says. Both walks out.
They reach the hotel. Ragini runs in their big mansion like room allotted and opens all the curtains enjoying the beauty of nature. Laksh was looking at her smiled.
Ragini sits on the bed which was extremely soft and if she sit on it, it was going inside.
Ragini falls on bed and rolls on it as a kid. In that process her T-shirt goes up slightly revealing her waist a little. Laksh sees and then he moves away his head again.
‘why this girl always tries to do such things which make me lose control..? and, if I go near a big war happens..!’
He thinks arranging things here and there.
Now, Ragini is jumping on the bed. She makes a call to her parents with Laksh’s foreign mobile.
‘Mom, this bed is like trampoline. I’m like going to hit sealing’ hehe..
She was acting childish. Laksh never saw this angle of Ragini. She was always a studious girl and serious with her studies. But, today she is totally different.
Laksh was just looking at her and seeing his works, he happened to come near bed with his laptop and then Ragini while jumping accidentally falls on him and laptop slips from his hand.
Now, Ragini is top of Laksh. They have brief eye lock, but Laksh looks for his laptop and shocks to see it was showing vibgyor colors instead of any programs.
‘Gosh..!’ Laksh sighs and goes near Laptop moving her aside. Ragini looks on.
Laksh tries to do something. But, the laptop gives some ‘beeep’ sound. He holds his head.
Laksh: now how..? all presentations are in there. I have to show a project tomorrow in conference.
Ragini: laksh, nothing happened. You need to just take out battery…
Laksh with bit angry: enough Ragini. Enough is enough..!
Ragini looks on.
Laksh: can’t you sit properly. Why do you jump here and there..?
Ragini’s eyes start forming tears,
‘I have ever did such crazy things first time in my life. What I know, it will happen like this?’
Laksh: now, stop that water tap.
Ragini wipes her tears, ‘I’m not crying. Give me that lappy. I know what to do.. I’m computer science student.’
Laksh shows his hand stopping her. she looks on.
Laksh: I got nothing from you till now Ragini. First, you banged my head later broke my heart and now you destroyed my career.
Ragini: why are you saying those past incidents again Laksh..? that matter was finished right. But, this one I know what to do…
Laksh keeps his laptop on the sofa angrily.
Laksh: do whatever you want. However, it’s damaged now..!
He says wears his coat and about to go somewhere.
Ragini: where are you going Laksh..?
But, he goes away silently. Ragini remains calm… she was sad again.
It was evening when they reach the hotel. It has been two hours Laksh went out and he didn’t come yet. Ragini keeps laptop in front of her and removes the battery first.
Later she, places the battery again. She keeps the charging and does some changes in program, it starts working normally.
Ragini: that’s it Laksh. For this only you got angry on me..?
She sits sadly on the couch.
Then the door sound happens. She looks from the glass lens. It is Laksh. He was standing with bunch of red roses, a teddy and a basket full of swiss chocolates. Ragini smiles a little. But, controls her smile.
She opens the door.
‘I’m sorry Ragini..!’ says Laksh.
But, Ragini silently goes aside. He comes inside and closes the door. She sits in balcony chair. Laksh kneel downs before her with those things he brought.
Laksh: I said sorry na Ragini. You know about my anger right..! I didn’t even shout a loud. Just said one word.
Ragini: one word is enough Laksh.
Laksh: I know that. chalo, these things are common for us. Now, excuse me and take these chocolates.
Ragini feels tempted to eat them but controls herself.
‘I want nothing’ she sits with folded hands and looks other side. Laksh smirks and opens wrap of one chocy. That smell keeps tickling Ragini’s tongue. But, she controls herself but she takes a gulp helplessly.
Laksh smiles: ok, I’m going in. it’s getting cold.
He goes inside. But, Ragini still sits in balcony.
Laksh: umm..! she is too stubborn as always. don’t know how her parents tolerated her.
Laksh goes near table and keeps some food ready for their dinner.
The fog starts spreading out. He goes out.
‘Ragini, come inside. You will catch cold’
‘No. I will stay here. I like to stay here.’
Laksh keeps face upset and goes inside. He brings a blanket and keeps it around her.
Ragini: I don’t want anything…
She is about to remove and then she sneezes. Laksh looks around it was too cold.
‘Ragini, now at once come inside. You will get fever.’
Ragini nods her head negative.
‘Stubborn piece..!’ Laksh says and lifts her in his arms.
‘Leave me..!’ Ragini shouts and Laksh takes her in and throws her on bed. She falls on it.
Ragini shouts: Laksh..!
Laksh: what..?
She sneezes again. ‘aahh’ she holds her head.
Laksh checks her temperature placing his palm on her forehead.
Laksh: see, you got fever. I said you to come inside.
Ragini silently bends her head.
Laksh brings a bowl of some food.
Ragini: I don’t want to eat anything..!
Laksh: Ragini….. I said sorry naa… tell me what shall I do still..?
Ragini looks at him. She liked the way he was trying to convince her. she wanted it more.
Ragini: I said I don’t want anything. Leave me alone.
She said but she was scared that Laksh might get angry again or may grow impatient.
As she thought, Laksh got up. Ragini looks other side being scared will he be angry again. But, amazingly… Laksh cups her face and kisses her forehead. She looks at him.
Laksh: Ragini, it really hurts when my love sleeps with hungry. When she is suffering with fever. Show anger on me.. but not on food. If you starve, I hurt so much..! it’s paining here Ragini..!
Ragini in tear rolling eyes: Laksh…
Laksh then dips a fork attached with bread in that creamy substance in bowl and feeds Ragini. Ragini keeps looking at him in tear eyes.
He wipes the cream falling from her mouth with his finger.
Laksh: is it tasty..?
Ragini nods her head.
He makes her eat other piece. Ragini was just looking at him emotionally. To avoid more emotion, Laksh starts telling,
‘You know, this is swiss food. Fondue. This is…’ laksh was telling something and feeding her. but, she was not listening anything just looking at him.
Her vision is becoming blur as she can’t see because of her tears.
Laksh finishes feeding her and he gives her some tablet for fever. She just sleeps on bed and looks at him. He sits near table and about to eat.
Ragini: laksh, come here and sit naa… I want to talk to you…
Laksh nods his head and goes near her. he sits on bed beside her.
Laksh: yaa tell me..!
Laksh says and eats that food. But, Ragini was just looking at him. He looks at her only to see Ragini’s unturned eyes from him.
Laksh: you want more..?
But, she don’t even nod her head.
Laksh was eating it nervously. The cream comes out from edge of his lips. Ragini takes it with finger and she licks that finger.
Laksh looks at her and he takes other bite of the bread dipped in that cream. Again, other drop falls on his lips.
Now, Ragini moves towards him. And places her tongue near his lips and licks that cream. Laksh amazes.
‘My dinner is over.’ He keeps bowl aside.
‘I will sleep on couch’ says Laksh and about to go. Ragini holds his hand.
Ragini: sleep here..!
Laksh: Ragini..?
Ragini blinks her eyes. Laksh smiles. He sleeps on other side far from her. Ragini moves near him hugs him and sleeps.
Laksh: Ragini…
Ragini: good night Laksh..!
She silently hides her face in his shoulder. Laksh smiles and offs the light.
To be continued…..
/* no shock… no shock… don’t worry. There are no more shocks. but, the thing is.. maybe next episode will be last. Or last but one.. */
66 Comments
Wow…asthu it’s awesome..i loved it..
See na Ragu laksh can’t be in anger mood with you for a long time…
And raglak scenes were awesome dear…especially while laksh says show your anger on me nt with food..ragz jmping on bed and I told u na Ragu that it would be laksh only na..bt u only feared..hehe!!
That licking scene was the highlight..you gonna end it…nt fair bcz it’s my fav ff dr?…
Waiting for the nxt update post it soon dear…
thank you so much darshu.. sorry ya, i will try to extend more,,,
Awesome as usual dear.
thank you gayu
awesome
thanks dear..
awesome episode di
i so love these duo’s fights then their ways of convincing each other
waiting for the next episode
thank you so much dear..
Awesome
thanks sinni..
Awesome
thanks dear..
Awesome sis…!!! Laksh doesn’t hold his anger for some more time… Wat a cute nd sweet husband???? Ragz childish behavior, laksh love and care for her is amazing..!!!!.raglak moments r lovely… this is my favourite ff dear …Its going to end ah !????? Plss don’t end it so soon dear ….!!!! Take care . !!
thank you so much for the love mintu.. i’ll try to extend more..
Awesome
thank you vk..
Amazing
thanks ammy..
Awesome
thanks dear..
Aww really cute
thanks dear..
Superb dear friend
thank you dear..
Pls dont end it soon dearr…give some cute romance of raglak dear…CVS killed d beautiful love story of raglak already…v gt d cute love story of raglak through ffs…pls don’t end it soon yaaarr???
thanks a lot dear.. ok, as you wish.. i won’t end this too early. i will try to show their romance more.. yes, u r right. that cvs has really disappointed all of us..
Thanks dear
Amazing dear
thanks dear..
Wow Akka. Superb, excellent, brilliant ???…. Love this caring laksh a lot ???….. Waiting for the next update Akka
thank you so much dear…
Why r u ending ur all ff together dr. It was one of d best raglak ff on tu.
Every epi was really awesome . I loved ur concept it was really different from usual love stories.
Hope u will cm back soon with gud ideas
thank you so much dear. i will try to extend this ff more…
Hi Astra
U just nailed this epi this was really cute and I could even imagine this scene in front of my eyes thanku so much dear for giving us this raglak ffff
Just luv u sis keep writing
thank you so much aadhya…
Astuuuu….. I’m back…. Ya Allah this ff going to end… After ending what I’ll do…. Ohhhh God….please astuuuu keep writing such a amazing story’s…ragini is really very cute yaar…. And laksh awesome…. Wow they sleeping one bed…. I’m blushing hehe hehe… Believe this ff was the best… I’ll never forget it… Astuuuu do you know… I sheared this story to my friends also… They’re just fan of u… A spl thanks from there side….I was very bzy… Today I read ur ff… Bcoz I free time today…. Keep writing yaar… I’m waiting for next means last episode?
thank you so much dear… for the love and support.. i will try to extend dear..
aww that was so cute…. laksh is really a very good husband and human being. ragu?? what was that u have became so naughty suddenly. update soon
thank you so much dear…
Interesting episode and Raglak scenes are so cute. Loved it a lot. Eagerly waiting for next part
thank you so much ammu..
haan haan man lia k this epi has no shock but still I’ll read next chappy in a dry environment coz I don’t trust u… 880 volt ka jhatka qab aaega bata v toh nai sakte…
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Hey the epi was gr8
im more of a silent reader but thought to comment on this one☺☺
thank you so much aps, happy to see your comment..
Astra you better write their romance in detail here.No more bluring screen do you get that?Hehe
hehehe, sure sure. no more blurring scenes. i will show in detail next..
Loved it sis… it was an amazing episode.. I was waiting for Ragini to accept laksh..
thank you a lot dear…
Awesome
thank you dear..
cute and ragini is such an original girl xx
thank you dear..
But Pleaseeee don’t end this soo soon.Why you always end your awesome ffs just after starting their love story :'(
ok aim, i won’t end it early. i will try to extend…
fabulous dear….loved it alot…..ohh my ragu….u r tooooo cute dear….love u dear….i love their fighting and convenience scenes….laksh u r soo caring husband dear….i love that nature….and ur dialogue awesome dear….
and licking scenes osam dear….loved it alot….eagerly waiting for nxt one….plz don’t end it soon dear….tkcr dear….
thank you so much dear..
Amazing yaar keep going
thank you dear…
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
thank you….