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If it’s destined or planned?
Part:1
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In the city of Delhi, the sun was rising, shinning and waking up the people to start a new day. The new dawn was creating a sense of happiness and excitement for the residents, some were busy in praying, some were busy in quarreling or some were all set to start their work. But at Mishra’s house a young girl wasn’t like those punctual persons she wasn’t getting up from her beautiful bed, she was sleeping like a baby. Her room was all messed up with various things, nobody could say that it’s a room of some girl. A woman entered inside her room with a frowning expression and starts putting off the curtains
Woman: utho Sanchi, aren’t you getting late?
Sanchi, who was already inside comforter, hides herself more while rolling to the other side
Sanchi: maah (in a pleading voice) five more minutes please
Jaya: no more minutes (while sitting beside her) come on get up fast
Sanchi removes comforter from her face due to which a cute, innocent but naughty face gets visible
Sanchi: (sighs) what time is it?
Jaya: (with a mischievous smirk) it’s 10’o clock beta
Sanchi: (gets up in a jerk) 10’o clock? No way tell me you’re jocking
She looks at the wall clock and then shifted her gaze at her mom with a serious face
Sanchi: maah this is completely rude (while rubbing her eyes) it’s just 8:30 yaar, let me sleep ten more minutes
Jaya: (patting her shoulder) your ten minutes are equal to an hour and now I don’t want to listen anything get up go and take shower else don’t even think of blaming me if you got late
Sanchi: (kissing her mom softly) ok fine but please smile a bit
Jaya smiled at her silly daughter and stands to leave while signing her to go inside washroom.
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Malhotra’s home:
In a well furnished, neat and clean room a boy was standing in front of the mirror, he was fixing his shirt while looking at the mirror. A woman entered inside and looks at him with a smile
…: Ready as always
Boy turned his head to the voice with a curve which was appearing on his lips
…: Don’t know when I’ll come to wake you up Veer though being punctual is good but sometimes you should also be like normals
Veer: maah you’re saying as if I’m abnormal, you know very well that I don’t like laziness and unpunctuality
Savitri: yeah I know very well (while making him wear the coat) now come on breakfast is ready, today I’ll not let you leave without having it
Veer: yes maah even I don’t want to see your anger through refusing you for breakfast
Savitri patted his face lovingly and moved outside leaving Veer behind.
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Mishra’s house:
Sanchi came downstairs in formal jeans and shirt, her hairs were tied up in a high pony tail. She walked towards the dinning area where her parents were already sitting and waiting for their daughter
Jaya: (looking towards Sanchi) finally you’ve come, it’s been an hour you’re getting yourself ready and in the meantime I’ve cleaned the whole kitchen and even served the breakfast
Sanchi: woh actually my hairs weren’t tieing properly that’s why…
She stopped in mid as she was getting short of words
…: Now leave all this and let’s eat I’m starving
Sanchi: (sitting on a chair) my cute daddy come on let’s start
Jaya: have you seen the condition of your room (while serving the food to her husband) I don’t know why you don’t keep the things at their respective places. I’m so fed up now whereas Sanchi bowed her head while eating as she knows that her mother is really mad at her and if she’ll argue then maybe circumstances will get worst, her dad noticed her condition and smiled
Sunil: it’s just the start of day Jaya don’t get start, (winking at Sanchi) let my daughter concentrate on her breakfast
Jaya: (shaking her head in disappointment) you’re the person who is spoiling her, don’t know when last time you had scolded her
Sunil: so you want me to scold her (smiles looking at Sanchi) I’ll do this right now (with a fake angry face) Sanchi from today your room must be neat and clean else.. (taking a pause) else imagine something bad
Sanchi bursts into laugh after listening her dad whereas her mom was looking at them impossibly
Jaya: I don’t know what you’ll do after marriage Sanchi
Sanchi: you don’t have to think about that maah because I’m not going to marry
Jaya: like I’ll listen to you, deykhna I’ll find a really strict and serious boy for you
Sanchi: maah you can’t do that bad with your daughter
Jaya: I’ll do this beta
Sanchi: (looking at her dad with a mischievous smile) daddy if she’s my real mother?
Sunil: (trying to control her amused smile) haan why if you’ve any doubt?
Jaya: will you both stop or should I go
Sanchi: maah you may sit as I’m going
Sunil: Arey complete your breakfast first
Sanchi: no I’m full and I’m getting late too
She stands up from the chair and walked towards her maah and gave a light kiss on her forehead
Sanchi: don’t get too much angry, you know I love your smile
Jaya smiles at her and kissed her back on her cheeks
Jaya: take care and drive safely
Sanchi nodded like an obedient child and after biding bye to both she leaves from there
Jaya: don’t know when she’ll grow up
Sunil: don’t worry she’s a sensible girl
Jaya sighs thinking about her daughter’s antics.
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Malhotra’s home:
Veer was standing at the doorway while calling his mom, his mother came towards him with a tiffin box
Veer: mom what was the need of all this, I can eat anything from outside
Savitri: that anything is a problem naa, I want my son to eat hygienic food
Veer: (smiles) maah you know I would never eat unhygienic item
Savitri: yes I know (handing him the tiffin) that’s why take it
Veer takes it from her and turns to go but then again moved towards her
Veer: take care ok
Savitri: haan I’ll take care but I get too bore
Veer: then go for some shopping or anything
Savitri: I’m tired of shopping now, if a naughty, bubbly daughter-in-law will come in this house then..
Veer: you know I don’t want to get married and you’re talking about naughty girl (taking a deep breath) I can’t even imagine
Savitri: deykhna I’ll bring such a naughty, unpunctual and loud girl that you’ll change seeing her
Veer: impossible mom, but anyways I’m leaving it’s getting late, we’ll discuss the rest at night with a cup of coffee
Saying so he walked off leaving his mother behind who was shaking her head in disappointment.
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Main Road:
Sanchi on her scooter was heading towards her direction when she saw some children who want to cross the road but couldn’t do so due to the heavy traffic and even traffic signal wasn’t present. Sanchi stared them while driving and within a minute she parked her bike and gets down from it, once getting off she walked towards the children and helps all those children in crossing the road one by one. As she was busy in doing this, the traffic blocked unintentionally, all cars were waiting for Sanchi to complete her work, and in that traffic jam Veer’s car was also stuck, he was cursing the reason of that blockage
Veer: don’t know what the hell is happening at front (looking at the wrist watch) I’m getting late for my conference yaar
Driver: wait sir I’ll go and check out
Veer: no you may sit I’ll go and see
Saying this he got down from the vehicle, as he was walking his eyes fall on a helping lady. She was standing in the way that her back was facing him, she smiles a bit on her nature but then he hid his smile behind a frown and moved further
Veer: Miss can you please move from here, we’re getting late for our work, due to this traffic jam
Sanchi: (without looking at him) this work is more important then your work Mr.
Veer: (while walking along with Sanchi) actually it’s my conference so please move aside and once I leave you may start your helping procedure again
Sanchi: (lifting her brows) see Mr if you’re not ready to wait then change your way but please don’t eat my brain
Veer: (with surprising expression) how dare you? (taking a deep breath) why don’t you join some charity house if you love doing social work
Sanchi: I haven’t asked your advice Mr. Over smart
She turns her face to the boy standing at his back but before she could see him, he turned back saying “Crazy fellow”. Sanchi giving a sharp look murmured “Selfish and akroo person”. After completing her work she proceeded towards her destination making traffic normal like before.
Screen freezes!
Precap: Sanchi was coming out from a departmental store in hurry when she collided with Veer who was going inside. Both looks at each other with irritating faces.
Thank you for reading!
Hey everyone! So as I promised here I’m with the first episode, how was it? Hopefully it was up to the mark. You’ll get the next one till Saturday probably, as I’m writing one more story and now I’ve to work on it then along with studies I’m doing a diploma too so hopefully you’ll understand and will wait. Do share your opinions before leaving this page.
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18 Comments
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Amazing story Maha waiting for next episode ?
Thank you so much Ishi! You’ve to wait till Saturday dear. Keep reading!
Opposite attracts.
Superb chappy.loved it to the core.one strict mom one caring and sweet mom,Beti naughty chulbulli,beta strict punctual hahabah maja aayenga.
Thanks bro! Glad you liked it. Keep commenting.
love it it’s different story amaz ing waiting for next
Thank you so much Shabnam! Keep reading.
Ummm that was so nicely portrayed ; I saw each scene in front of my eyes that was simply amazing dear ! Keep going ! U nailed this one !
Thank you very much Trisha for your good words! Keep supporting.
Maha dear…it was splendid…all the scenes were awesome….love you loads
Thanks a lot Moon for loving this. Keep reading!
Maha_Aijaz it was superb one.. i read ur article for the first tym …i regret why i missed to read previously.. but promise i will be a regular reader from now onwards. U r an amazing writer.. being a Kanchi fan, despite that i am sure i will gonna enjoy ur story dear.
Good day
Hey Khamoshi! You can call me by Maha only. And about your lovely comment. I’m so touched seriously, thank you so much for loving my work. I hope I’ll keep you entertained.
Awewome..loved it..eager for nxt..
Thank you Sayali! Keep reading dear.
Amazing Maha… It was outstanding… Awesome… Loved it…. Eagerly waiting to read further..
Thank you so much Jessicca. I’ll surely post the next one till Saturday. Keep reading dear!
Maha dear, kya likhti ho yaar!!!!!!!too good, just too good………I was speechless yaar………luv u dear……
Thank you so so much Riya! I’m really happy that you liked my work. Keep loving dear! Love you loads<3