How are you all…. I hope all will be fine…. I tried one shot about Rikara if you liked this OS please give your comments….. Now let’s get into the story….
The story starts with one boy who is hurriedly searching…. He says to himself I have only 30 minutes but I can’t find anyone of my belongings…. Don’t know where she kept my things…. Oh sankerji she is just impossible, who told her to go to her mother house it takes two days after she reaching there but till now she didn’t called me and also didn’t attend my calls also…. Shivru comes there by seeing the room condition they loudly shouts Om….. Om turns back…. Rudy why you messed the whole room…. Om sits on the bed and says I can’t find my wallet and watch and file and my tie stops by Shivaay Om I can’t believe it it’s you only…. Rudy yes, from when you start search for your things, usually you only get ready by yourself….. Shivaay obviously….. Om it’s all because of her only Shivaay…. Now I am totally addicted on her…. Rudy I think you’re there for to save our O’bro prestige but now you also changed…. Om asks I didn’t get that…. Shivaay I can’t do any work without Anika and Rudy can’t do any work without Sowmya…. Rudy now you also can’t do any work without Gowri bhabhi…. All laughs…. Anika Sowmya comes there and asks why you all are laughing like this…. Shivaay vo vo Anika…. Rudy bhabhi we are doing laughing meditation…. Animya looks at each other and asks what…. Shivaay yes Anika yesterday we heard it’s good for our health, how much we laugh that much our health will be good… one proverb also there na….. they gives a suspicious look at them then they looks at the room…. Sowmya: Om bhai why you messed up the room like this…. Om explained everything…. Anika says I will help you…. then Om leaves to his office…. After finishing his meeting Om called his Gowri…..
First two calls she didn’t attend it….. again he calls her by saying what she is doing…. at the time Gowri attends the call but Om didn’t noticed this he continues as she thinks herself as queen after going to her palace she completely forgot me…. She even didn’t call me and also didn’t attend my calls that much she is busy…. Gowri says oh dramabaaz I had attend your call… Om starts to scold her such as you idiot what you think about yourself can’t you attend my calls… don’t you have a sense to inform me after you reaching bareilly……. That’s why I told you we will go together at next week but you didn’t heard my words…. Gowri says oh sankerji please save me…. Om: no one can save you from me…. Gowri sorry baba she asks as a pleading tone after hearing this he can’t continue his anger but he didn’t speaks… Gowri I am missing my mom so much Om, that’s why I think to visit her…. next time we will come together….after reaching here I tried to inform you but I think you will be busy with your work that’s why I didn’t disturb you… Om: idiot you think it’s a disturbance to me…. Did you know how much I am longing to hear your voice…. Gowri: oh baby day before yesterday only I am leaving but you’re missing me this much…. If I leave you forever then what you will do?…. Om shouts just stop it Gowri….
If you said this again sure I will not leave you saying this he cuts the phone…. Gowri calls him but he cuts the call…. Gowri sends a voice message, sorry baby please attend the call…. In next ring Om attends the call but he didn’t speak to her…. Gowri says oh baby I said it just for fun nothing more than that… Om says please don’t speak to me like this Gowri you also know I can’t live without you he says in a crying tone… Gowri Om please don’t cry you also know how I can leave you…. Om: now itself I want to see you…. Gowri oh baby within two days I will be there…. Om: what did you know na it’s take two days after you’re leaving there but again two days….. Gowri: just two days only na baby… Om thinks if she forgot my birthday tomorrow is my birthday na… Om asks, Gowri did you forgot something… Gowri: which one Om….
Om: tomorrow… Gowri smiles and asks what special in tomorrow baby…. Om thinks it’s my first birthday after our marriage…. Gowri: Om… Om: yes he says in irritating face…. Gowri: what special on that day… Om: nothing you enjoy there, I will speak to you later saying this he cuts the call…. Gowri laughs her mother asks why you’re playing with him Gowri…. He will get angry with you…. Gowri: her anger will be gone after seeing my surprise… ok mom now I have to leave then only I catch the train, next week I will come with Om…. Gowri’s Mom: ok beta you go safe…. You will go alone… Gowri: no mom after reaching Mumbai Shivaay bhai will pick up me…. Gowri’s Mom ok beta, convey my wishes to Om… Gowri sure mom…. Gowri reached Mumbai… Shivaay and Rudra waiting for her… in car Rudra bhabhi what is your plan… Gowri explained which was muted… Shivaay you are just amazing Gowri sure this birthday is most memorable day for Om….
In Oberoi Mansion, Gowri goes to their room after seeing their room condition she says to herself, he can’t do any work, how he messed up the room…. Anika how he can do a work without his Gowri… hearing this Gowri blushes…. Sowmya says didi you know what happened in morning…. Then they explained everything to her… Anika: you totally changed him Gowri, we are happy for you… Gowri smiles….. Then she arranged their room…. In evening Om comes from office…. He straightly goes to his room…. After seeing their room condition he says if she is come back from bareilly…. He goes to Anika’s room; there Gowri explained her plan…. Om tries to enter the room but stops by Sowmya, Om bhai when you come from office…. Hearing Om’s name Anri gets shock and hurriedly Gowri goes and hides in under bed…. Om now only Sowmya saying this he enters Anika’s room…. Om: bhabhi why you’re standing there… Anika gets nervous nothing Om, you’re here did you want anything…. Om: actually bhabhi if she returns back… Shivaay: who Om… Om: Gowri… hearing this all gets shock and asks what…..
Om: why you all are get this much of shock…. Rudy: shock, why we are getting shock Om…. Saying this he laugh as acting…. Om: actually morning I messed up the room but now the room is totally cleaned…. Gowri thinks oh sankerji…. Anika says vo actually maid only cleaned it… Om: no bhabhi its her work only…. At the time Gowri hits her head in bed so shouts in pain ahhhhhh…. Om its look like Gowri’s voice…. All gets tensed Gowri got more…. Rudy says we didn’t hear any voice… Om: really you didn’t hear… ShivRu and AniSow also says no…. Rudy I think you missed bhabhi so much that’s why you feel your room cleaned by bhabhi and bhabhi voice… Om but…. Rudy stops him, oh come on O if you get doubt please call bhabhi and ask her as where is she…. Om says good idea…. All are angrily looked at Rudy (because Gowri’s phone is on dressing table)…… Then only Rudy understand what he says… Om searches his phone but didn’t find it and says Shivaay I forgot mobile in my room… please give me your phone…. Shivaay vo vo actually I have to call Kanna to speak important saying this he leaves…. Om suspiciously looked at him…. And he asks Anika, bhabhi give me your phone…. Anika vo actually Om my my mobile is dead…. Om asks what… Anika gets nervous and says mobile charge is dead…. Om then turns to Sowmya before he could ask Sowmya says my phone is in my room bhai…. At last he looks at Rudy, Rudy thinks to himself all are escaped now what I will say to him… Om calls him, but he didn’t hear it….oye idiot Rudy says yes….
Gowri says Rudy please don’t prove it as you’re idiot, Anika and Sowmya hears it and smiles… (because they are stands near Gowri only) Om can you please give me your phone…. Rudy takes his mobile Om tries to take it but Rudy says O here no signal and he tries to put in his pant pocket but Om stops him by says why you’re blabbering then he calls her number…. All are shockingly looked at Om….. Gowri prays to god…. At the time Shivaay enters and shouts Om…. Om gets jerks and turns…. Shivaay now only I speak to Gowri… Om: but you says you have to speak to kanna na…. Shivaay stammers and says after calling him Gowri called me…. Om oh what she says…. Shivaay thinks why he ask this much of question….
Om shakes him… Shivaay she said she will come day after tomorrow…. Om thinks she is totally forgot my birthday but Shivaay knows this na then why he didn’t say to her…. Om: if you didn’t say to her… Shivaay: what…Om: you also forgot it… Shivaay I didn’t get that Om say it clearly na… Om: are you forgot tomorrow’s special…. Ruday: what special in tomorrow O…. Shivaay says oh my mata how I forgot this…. Anika tomorrow is one important meeting please wake up me earlier saying this he leaves to closet…. Om thinks how these two also forgot my birth day…. Om asks bhabhi Sowmya you didn’t remember anything…. They asks at the same time what…. Om says nothing and leaves sadly to her room…. Gowri comes out and says thank you sankerji… Shivaay also comes and says Om gets so hurt…. Rudy also nods….. Anika oh please stop this sentiment drama only two hours there after that he will be get a big surprise…. All nods…. Then they does their arrangements….. Gowri says now all gets ready….. Anika says it’s totally amazing Gowri… Shivaay says fifteen minutes only there for his birthday…. Rudy oh my mata, then please go bhabhi and takes him…. Gowri asks what me…. Rudy yes you only bhabhi… Sowmya no if bhabhi goes then our surprise level will be decreased…. Anika says exactly…. Shivaay then how he will come to this place…
Gowri I will call him in mobile you all go and hide in somewhere…. All nods…. Gowri also goes and hides…. Gowri called him in first ring itself Om attend her call…. Gowri: till now you didn’t sleep…. Om thinks I know you will call me at correct time to wish me…. Gowri: Om are you there…. Om: yes dr… Gowri why you didn’t sleep till now… Om: how can I speak without my wife… Gowri blushes…. Om: I am badly missing you Gowri…. Gowri: really…. Om: pinky promise…. Gowri: but I didn’t miss you…. Om: why… Gowri smiles herself and says because now one person is beside me to remove my loneliness…. Om angrily asks who the hell is that…. Gowri you only…. Om blushes and asks how…. Rudy says I think we have to make her remember for what the reason we all are here… Sowmya smiles…. Shivaay yes Rudy they are lost in their dream world…. Anika be silent guys let’s we watch…. Gowri says I am seeing you in the moon…. Om blushes…. Gowri if you miss me come to balcony… Om asks what…. Gowri scold herself and says I mean go to balcony…. Om nods…. Gowri after going there call me…. Om says ok…. Gowri puts her phone in switch off…. Om reached their balcony the whole place in dark…. Om puts his right leg on inside the balcony at the time all the lights gets on…. The whole place is totally decorated with red roses, some rose petals are on the floor like a grass mat to walk…. In wall Om paintings are there even his first drawings are also there like hanging in the wall…. Seeing this Om totally lost in it and he goes near those painting and touches it at the time happy tears are sheds from his eyes….
He hears his mother voice as before twenty two years in this day I feel I am complete after hearing your crying but today I don’t want to see the tears in your eyes…. Om turns back but didn’t find his mom instead of he sees his mom on the wall (video plays on wall by using protector) his father comes near Janvi and says this day is most memorable day for me because one new person come to us by the symbol of love…. Om smiles…. Tej says I want to see you like this always Om… Tej and Janvi says at the same time thank you for coming to our life Om and wish you many more happy returns of the day…. Om smiles and says thank you mom and dad…. Dadi says Om usually all gives their present to who will be the celebrator but on the first birthday of yours you presented me a one most essential gift….
Dadi shows one frame in this frame one old grandpa’s drawing there….. this is drawn by you Om its only your first drawing….. if your grandpa is there sure he will be the most happiest person in the world by seeing your success…. Dadi cries and says but his blessings are always with you Om and mine also….. Wish you many more happy returns of the day Om…. Om says thank you dadi… Sakti and Pinky says after Shivaay you’re our second son Om…. Don’t forget we are your second parents…. Om nods by crying… Sakti and Pinky says like this you get all the happiness in this world….. Wish you many more happy returns of the day Om…. Om says thank you chotipapa and chotimaa…. Then his beloved bros are there to wish him…. Shivaay you’re my second brother but all the time you only behave like my elder…. Always teach me good things….. Whenever I got angry you come to me to console me….. This day is very special day for me because in this day only I take one little boy in my arms….. now also I am there for you to hold your hand till my last breath…. Rudy: bhai give me some time to speak to him… Shivaay and Om smiles…. Rudy: O I know you’re older than me in age only but in girls I am your Guruji na…. Shut up Rudra but it’s didn’t said by Om…. Rudy: I only said that Om you know it’s my golden word…. I want you for say those golden words….. You also know without Shivaay bhai and you I am nothing…. I love you O…..
Shivaay and Rudy says together as Wish you many more happy returns of the day….. Om says in teary eyes as Thank you Shivaay and Rudy…. Anika: always you’re there for me to support me in every situation…. Thank you so much Om…. I am also there for you to support you….Wish you many more happy returns of the day Om…. Sowmya you’re my second bhai in any critical situation I didn’t get any fear because you’re there na to save me…. Om nods…. Wish you many more happy returns of the day bhai…. Om thank you Sowmya…. Om wiped out his tear…. Now are you forgot me…. Om looks at her and smiles…. I think you had missed me but you didn’t na…. Om: such a dramabaaz how can I forgot her…. Gowri: I know that idiot…. Om eyes wider… Shivaay holds Gowri’s ears and says how can you call my bro as idiot…. Om nods…. Rudy: I know bhabhi it’s truth only but how you said in public place…. Om angrily looks at him…. Gowri I am sorry bhai please leave me na it’s paining…. Om also nods…. Shivaay ask is really paining Gowri…. Gowri winks at him…. Om and Shivru smiles at her…. Shivaay and Rudy side hugs her….
Gowri says thank you Om because of you only I got two bros and two sisy and two mom and two dad and one dadi….. all smiles at her because of her speech….. even Om also…. Gowri I pray to god for this happiness continuous in your entire life…. Till now I didn’t say those words to you but today is your birthday na so its my birthday gift, I……. l…o…v..e…. y…o..u Om…… Om gets happy and says I love you too Gowri….. wish you many more happy returns of the day Om…. Om says thank you Gowri…. At the time all shouts WISH YOU MANY MORE HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY OM……. Seeing all Om gets happy and hugs them….. then all gives their present….. Shivaay Om did you like this surprise….. Om: I loved it Shivaay…. Rudy: you didn’t want to know whose plan is this…. Om: who…. Anika: guess it Om…. Om: I know it’s all of your plan only…
Sowmya: no bhai we are executor only but this credit goes to……. Om excitingly waiting for their answer….. all shouts Gowri…… Om gets more happy…. All are separately moves in two direction in the middle Gowri stands….. after seeing her Om eyes sheds tears and runs towards her…. Gowri also runs towards him….. Gowri hugs him by standing in her toes….. they totally forgot others they lost in their dream land….. Om whispers in her ear as thank you so much Gowri…. Gowri smiles….. Rudy: O don’t forgot we all are also there…. hearing this Omri gets separate and gets embarrassed…. Rudy: now bhabhi you will give your gifts to O…..
I will stop here guys…. I hope you will like it…. it will be end in next part….. please give your valuable comments…. till then bye this is from your maha…. Love you all….
By,
B.K.Maha…
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???????????????I loved it to the core maha???????U have done a fantastic job sister….Loved om-Gauri’s mobile Conversation???totally loved Gauri’s suspense wala plan???☺☺☺☺Please do write more OS like this For my rikara…Rudy unmailiye oru Comedy Peice?????Keep rocking maha?????
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It’s really awesome ?? pls do write more for our favourite Jodi rikara pls pls and u r really rocking? semma mass
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Awwww….it was so good….i loved it….esp loved gauri….it was wonderful
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Aww.. so cute.. update next part soon.. I’m waiting to know what she gifts him
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Wonderful os dr.I loved it to d core. I’m also a huge rikara fan.tysm 4 dis lovely os dr.gauri’s surprise prty 4 om was awesome.waiting 4 ur another os/ff Bye dr tc
N eagerly waiting 4 prt 2 of dis os also. Plz post it asap dr
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Short and sweet! Loved it, waiting to see Gauri s present.. Post soon.. ?
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Wow wow, wow..this is certainly a 10!! There were so many mixed emotions in this story. It really was enjoyable I am so looking forward to the rest of it.
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AWESOME BEST CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT ROMANTIC SUPERB????????????
Dear Maha
I Knew It It’s Your Story?OmRi Talk?ShiOmRu AniRiYa Scene?Gauri Surprise For Om?Family Wish Om?All Is Awwwesome And Mind Blowing??????Excited For Next Part?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
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