Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 28
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Episode 25
Episode 26
Episode 27
Actually,yesterday’s comments,honestly didn’t expect you all will like that episode,was randomly written n I was not satisfied,they were around 15 new names,those who comment daily,I know the names now,in reply to a silent reader under 27th episode ie. yesterday’s ,I have written,that ,now I truly wish all silent readers commented ‘once’ under my ff,it is just out of a curiosity to know how many of you are reading my ff,don’t know if u all will consider this,ah,then coming to the story,as I have quoted Christopher Booker before,there are just 7 basic plots,all stories said so far falls into it,there are debates for and against that view,I am not a writer (don’t think,I am thinking low,it is a fact),so your guesses may be right,let’s see whose guess matches closely with my thought,please keep reading,thank you for the support,Swasan will be united but how,when,where….?quite predictable ,but let us see…..
Scene 1:Next day evening,beach……….
Sanskar is waiting for Swara,Swara arrives after some time,her face clearly shows her heart ,Sanskar looks into her eyes,the puffiness around clearly conveys the amount of tears the previous night and that day witnessed,Swara asks him, “Sanskaar,one last time,I am asking,tell me,what you told me yesterday,is it a lie?if yes,I know all your responsibilities,I know you are not ready for a marriage now,but,one word,Sanskaar,please,not for me,to convince my family,if you think it is for my well being,don’t ask me to go,please,”Sanskar just listens silently and then tells her, “Swara,shall we go that side,you think I am lieing to make u go from my life?no dear”,he takes her along with him,he opens the door of a blue car parked there,a girl steps out,she looks at Swara,Swara looks at her in shock ,her eyes are filled but she is struggling to hide it,she feels like running away but composes herself and smiles,Sanskar tells the girl, “Sanjitha,this is Swara,”,he slowly turns and tells, “ Swara,this is Sanjitha”,Swara is struggling to hide her pain.she looks at her and brings a forced smile and says, “Hi”,Sanjitha responds, “Hai Swara,Sanskar has mentioned about the three of u,SwasanRaglak,that’s how he says,nice to meet you,I am so sorry Swara”,Swara says, “Oh,please don’t say sorry,I am sorry,I wished for,actually I don’t deserve,sorry,I am happy to meet you,you both make a very good pair together “her lips are shivering while saying that,she continues, “Actually,now ,I will leave,before making a decision wanted to….later ,should not feel,no?,that I went wrong,still,don’t know,if it is right or wrong ,but….have to….ok,nice meeting you Sanjitha,you are leaving this week,no?,all the best ,bye”,she turns to go,then quickly goes back and holds Sanjitha’s hands,she removes her ring from her finger and makes Sanjitha wear it and says, “you should be knowing clearly,he must have told you yesterday,I have loved your guy all these years,but it is my mistake,I should have thought from his angle too,I am very happy for you,I will also pray for all the obstacles to vanish,your parents will agree,his parents and sister,they are very nice people,wont hurt you,wont hurt any one,then,don’t know when we will meet again,this is a small gift from my side and all good wishes in advance ,she hugs her and takes permission to leave……
She calls Sanskar to a side and tells him, “I am happy that you got a very good girl,this life ,you belong to her,but in next life,will you be mine?”,a tear rolls down from her eyes,she wipes and says, “I am so silly,no?how can I ask that?,you will wish to live all your lives with Sanjitha,no?sorry,ok,may be we were not born to be together,it is ok, sorry,I am unlucky ,good wishes to both of you,today I will agree to what mom and dad told,only for you,only because you made me promise that I will agree”Swara waves a bye to Sanjitha and walks away,she goes to the direction where her scooty was parked,she is walking but crying her heart out closing her mouth with one hand and is also trying to compose herself to prevent Sanskar and Sanjitha from seeing her shoulder moving ,she reaches near her scooty and stumbles,Sanskar was watching her,seeing her going to fall,he calls Swara and moves forward but Swara is at a distance where she couldn’t hear that,he sees Swara leaving and goes near Sanjitha and thanks her..
Sanjitha tells him, “Sanskaar,tell me honestly,you brought me here to meet her because you don’t love her and wants her to move on in her life,are you sure,you don’t love her and that is why you made me pretend like this?”,Sanskar replies ,”Yes Sanju,I don’t love her,I don’t want her to wait for me,I want her to accept the proposal which her parents brought,but thank you so much for helping me,for coming to see her”,Sanjitha responds, “Sanskaar,before leaving I had plans to meet you,what you have done for me and Vicky,I cant do anything in return for that but I came and promised that I will never let Swara know the truth of our friendship for you,because you’re my good friend,if you had not supported, me and Vicky would have never been able to carry our relationship thus far,though bitterness is still there between families,atleast ,you could turn his mom in our favour”,Sanskaar smiles and says, “yea,those moments,still,don’t know ,how aunty agreed to meet you and all,ah,thank God,and,thank you Sanju ,once again ,for this big help,should I come along?”,Sanjitha continues, “You know something Sanskaar,I met your family today,na?they are so loving,Swara is right,and you just now told me that you don’t love her,but look at you Sanskaar,you are talking,you are smiling,but your heart is not here,I am telling about my friend who I have known for the past 4 years,Swara was in pain but you looked more hurt,Swara stumbled,you moved forward to hold her calling her name,I wish she noticed it but poor girl ,can understand her heart,what is it Sanskaar,is it that you haven’t realised your love for her?or am I totally mistaken ?your heart ,really,doesn’t want to stop her?please think about it, my friend,if there is a chance,don’t let her go,12 years,poor girl,accept her,na?when I return I wish I could see you both together,please think about it,now,let me leave”she leans and hugs Sanskaar,Sanskaar opens the door for her,he again asks her if he should accompany her,she tells him again to think about it,suddenly she opens the door and steps outside again,removes the ring from her finger,holds Sanskaar’s right hand and places it in his palm and tells her, “Oh,I would have left with this,the girl who walked away a few minutes back with a broken heart, doesn’t know that I don’t deserve this,but you know that,I wont take this,I feel, this belongs to that same girl in all its sense,whether you agree or not,I feel so,ask your heart Sanskaar,before it is too late,I will surely pray for you both”,she gets inside the car after saying this and wishes him bye and leaves……
Scene 2:Sanskaar is seated at the seashore
The sea is very calm,he looks at the sea,he has Swara’s ring in his hands,he stares at it,tears blur his vision,he slowly kisses the ring and looks at the sea and says, “best friend,no?very calm today,but all the waves are inside my heart,I wish I died this moment,can you help me?can you come angrily and take me along with you now?no,cant wish for that also,have a family who needs me,but,life?do you have the slightest idea about the condition of my heart now?I am tired,I am tired ,the day she came home for the first time,felt she was born to be mine,every moment spent with her made me feel,we were destined to be together,wanted to spend this life with her,wanted to give her all happiness,her name was attached to every dream that I saw,from one end I was struggling to untie the knots but from the other end destiny brings a new challenge,now lakhs for Papa’s renal transplant,his condition is bad,don’t know if his body is ready for another surgery,but have to,because I want him,all I have with me to give to Swara is my love,but that is not enough,I don’t want her to struggle with me,Akshay’s proposal is a really good one for her,let her move on,love is not always about living with the one you love,it is also about letting your love live happily,I broke her heart,but,after marriage,she will accept him,she will get all the love… now what more will you give me life?,what is new challenge in store for me,I have never complained,have I?now also,no complaints,no demands, can accept any number of pains again ,because the biggest is losing my Swara,already did,I made her walk out of my life,she is my heart,I cant accept that she wont be mine but give as much pain as you want in this life,but if there are 6 more lives,I want 6 more,to spent with my Swara,give me the blessing to give this love back to her,to hold that hand which I just now rejected,she has loved me for 12 years,I wish I could go and tell her that I have been loving her since the day she came home when we were in 8th standard,that I had understood her heart even if she had not told anything,that distance was never a problem in understanding her,because I carried her in my heart,,that I was born to be hers,life………..why are you making me helpless?,it is enough ,you broke my heart,but all my pains,God ,I am not questioning you,I know you give struggles to people who you love the most and I know you love me God,so ,please keep my Swara happy, after her marriage,let Akshay give her all the love and happiness that she deserves..he again kisses the ring and keeps it inside his fist and keeps his hand on his chest,he closes his eyes and tears roll down ,after some time he gets up and walks towards the water,he stands there still ,for a long time,then comes back,kneels down,takes the beach sand in his fist,slowly opens it and allows the sand to fall down,he then cries,looking at the sky…………….
140 Comments
Omg
So emotional
Waiting for next update
Thanks dear for commenting,29th episode s also uploaded.
It was amazingly written veena I just loved it you made me cry continuously from the start u write so well that I could literally imagine that happening in front of me. Love you vini and your fanfiction. Update soon dear
Thank u very much yr,your first comment,no?thanks dr,humbled n honoured reading your good words, it is just an attempt,glad that u guys liked it.
ohhh my god again u made me cry vinni…….both sanky nd swara are right in their places bt i hope sanky should have told the truth to swara so that she cant feel this Mich pain bt even sanky is going through lot of pain its just shows ur awesomeness in describing the feelings of two people…..nd vinni r u a CA student…..??????
Oh sorry for the pain in these episodes,actually my previous ff was a feel good one,I mean, I think so,but this one,have tried to give a lil identity to characters, so some incidents in theur lives,required,and ,no yr,I completed my BDS.
hai vini… Iam a silent reader of ur ff…. I like ur ff so much…plz update next epi fast
First of all,thank u so much for the comment,glad to know that u were reading,thank u for the good words,29th is also uploaded…
Wow very very emotianal i had a tear in my eys
Thanks yr.Good to see you back,sorry for the tears,story required all these,hope u liked.
U finally said sanskar pov.. tq.. it’s so emotional.. good episode.. waiting for sanskar to shower love on swara..
Thanks for commenting yr,have noticed ur comments before ,u had asked for Sanskar’s point of view,no?thank u for liking this episode,this is a silly track,don’t know from 30th episode what u all will say, most probably will ask to stop.
I’m a silent reader of your ff but I had to comment to this episode,
In your last episode, I cried when he said he didn’t love her and there’s someone else in his live but honestly OMG I knew it,
I knew he loved her too, please unite SWASAN soon
Thank u so much for the comment, good to know that u were reading,yes,swasan will be united for sure..and u guessed it,nice.
Really nice….please update next part soon…
Thanks for commenting,I think u have commented once before under my ff,thank u for liking it,next one is uploaded, hope u will check it.
Awesome
Thank u dr ,though we haven’t talked ur name n emblem is too familiar,thank u very much.
wowwwwwwww……..
i was an silent reader of ur ff but u made comment its so nice
Thank u for the comment yr,happy to know that u were reading,humbled n honoured,hope u will keep reading.
U made me cry……..but such a touching story
Sorry for the tears yaar ,thank u very much for the comment,first one here,no?story ,I may mess up,I feel so,an advance sorry, I have to say for that.
Omg so much love how can anyone love at dis extent pls unite dem
Yes dear,they will be united,thank u for the comment dear,pls keep reading.
Awwwe phir se rulayaaa????….n yeah me jnti thi ki sanky ki koi gf nhi h yesss?…kitna pyarr krti h na swara se wowww..amazing di…mmmuuaahhh
Oh Mickey baba cried?sorry dear,oh u knew it,clever girl Mickey,how is ur practice going on?thank u dear for the support here,take care.
Very nice episode
Thank u for the comment,first one,no?thanks yr,pls keep reading.
Hey even I am silent reader not totally bcoz sometime I do comment….any ways today epi is totally emotional ….I thought sanskaar is dng dis for swara n in ur story same happened so my guess is r8
OH u guessed it right,good to hear that,and I remember ur name,u have commented,good to c u bk,tc,hope u will keep reading…
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di polichuuuuu…….
i loved it………
small small moments……..starting me swara ki halat,her lipes r shivering, apni baat puri na kar pana,aur bhi bahot sare moments hai yr………… sanskar and sanju ka conversation ne humne sanskar ki bday pe swara air shruti ka conversation yaad dilaya…….
swara ka sanskar se puchna fir se,kahi tum jhooth to nahi bol rahe ho na…?
is janm me to hum ek nahi ho sakte par kya agale janm me???????? kitni pagal hu me tumhari to wish hogi na ki tumhe sanju ka sath mile………..
mind blowing………..
swara ka sanju ko ring dena,sanju ka wahi ring sanskar ko wapas karna,sanskar ko us ring ka feel karna…yr super se uper…………
sanskar-agar aur 6 janm hai to wo mujhe swara k sath bitane,give me d blessing to give dis love back to her,wo hath thamu jise maine abhi thukraya hai………
hourt touching………………….??????????
har ek word supeb hai,kamaal ka hai yeh episode………..
hey ishq,
tera har rang hai nyara….koi tere chahat k samudar me duba hai to kisi ko uski majboori tere ek lehar ko chhune tak ki ijjajat nahi deti……kabhi kisi deewane ko ek lehar k sath kinare par fek deti hai….
sach hai aashiqui imtahan leti hai………
humre f.song ki kuch lines
shama ko pighalne ka arman q hai,
patange ko jalne ka armana q hai,
isi shaukh ka imthaan jindgi hai…………………..mohbbat jise baksh de jidgani nahi maut par khatm uski kahani………………
again lengthy……
guys sorry di ka updates aur thand dono humare sir chadkar bhangda kar rahe hai…..hehehehe
ok..now no more app..tum hi kahungi..
wowwwwwwww joya..kya likha hai tamne..i just simply love it..just keep it up dear..u can write all book on poetries n shayaris..
very very well done..
thank you niti……….
book ???????
itni kabiliyat nhi hai yr…..
par tum sab k liye kuch jaroor likhna chahenge………..
i completely agree with Niti..u can write full book of poetry n shayari..bz u use proper words n write like skilled poet..try jarur karna..
First of all,polichu???u mean it?how u got it dear?thank u so much for that ,then the lines starting from Hey Ishq ,I don’t want any one to be my fan or my ff’s fan but I am your fan No.1 n I am saying this from my heart, you should write dear,there is a very good writer in you,as Shraddha says, start a blog,I wana read,then about my ff,thanks for every word my dear,and before I wind up,honestly,I am feeling very happy to have met you thru this,may be after completing this ff we may not be in touch,but m very sure the word Punekar will surely bring Joya( Sheethal ) to my mind,also our Mickey,Shraddha,Vinita ,Niti ,Sethooty….then Appu,Leku,Navi n all…I think the last three chat with me only…but m very happy that I got to know you all thru this site.
I meant the word Pune… Also ,length doesn’t matter at all,cos every word touches my heart.You can write poems or shayari’s as Niti n Kriya said..looking forward to it.
this is too heart touching update I couldn’t control my rolling tears u know by reading this update…….some old memories r hunting in my heart..this today’s ff is mirror of my heart…..
First of all,a new name under my ff,thanks for the comment yaar,then ,glad to know that u felt the episode but sad to read that it brought some memories cos somewhere getting a feel that those might have hurt you,if this was the mirror of your heart, all I will wish for now is loads of happiness to your heart…
Omg.. he also loves her for 12 years.. they both love each other.. and they both know each other’s feelings. But swara cofesses her feeling to him and he lies about his feeling bcos of her happiness… it is awesome.
Dear you upload very late.. please next part upload fast and it must be today..please please please..
Thank u for the comment dear,sorry for the late updates,have uploaded the next one actually,since scenes are not planned,it is a task wen I sit to type,that is why m late,sorry, I can understand.And our Sanky’s character is a Mr.Perfect,will accept any amount of pain, in real life I think people belonging to that category will be a minority for sure…
Vini..Again u made me cry
Vini ..my emotions are in peak..wat to say..thanku for d tears in ma eyes
Hei dear,wen u all say that u all cried,I think I should read it once,may be cos m writing,m not able to feel anything,I m not very satisfied also,for the same of posting minimum one I am posting,not even proof reading now, still,so kind of u,u guys accepted it ,no?.
wow..at last it is proved that sanskar also loves swara but wrong timing…wen will swasan bcm together….waiting very eagerly fr that….aww today it was very emotional …
Thanks yr,good to c u bk,of course,swasan will be united,even I am waiting to c how when n where? have to plan it.
Waiting for next part update it fast …by d was a heart touching update …
Hope u read 29th episode,30th haven’t typed,thank u for the comment yaar,hope u liked it
wow!!!!amazing….when swara said at least for next birth would u b mine…she asked like a small child really I cried a lot….fabulous….even then sanskar don’t show anything to swara he controlled his emotions nicely….superb…..waiting 4 next episode update soon
Thank u for the comment dear,glad to know ur feedbk regarding those scenes, hope u read 29th..
very emotional episode yaar waiting for next one
Thank u for the comment yr,u have commented before,no?glad that those emotions got conveyed.
I m silent reader i always read your ff i juat loved that episod
First of all,thank u for the comment,glad to know that u were reading,thank u,happy that u liked it.
oh finally, he poured out his heart to his bestie… that’s so sweet!!! swara’s convo with sanju nice!!! loved it!! waiting for next one!!
Hope u read 29th,thank u for this support dear,happy to read that what is just typed casually s getting conveyed to u all.
Vini….. this was so touching….. I could feel sanskars heart condition. you are a good writer. update next soon.
U have commented before ,no?emblem not sure,but name,I think I have seen,thank u for the good words,hope u read 29th episode.
ohhh Di…!!! i am speechless right now..it was just very very emotional epi..i was disturb yesterday due to swara’s pain..but today i m much more disturb due to both..i was right sanky rejected swara due to his financial position..but i think mukesh’s promise is going to perform important rol here..may be positive or negative..but at the same tim i m happy that sanky also loves swara form last 12 years..lets see what happens..u again make my heart cry like hell..today to sanky bhi roya..i can’t see him like this..Di just see effect of ur ff on me..till now not a single ff or serial story has made me this much disturb..i can feel each n every single line..Di now my eyes are moist so i will comment after sometime..
Hei dear,m very happy to read ur comment,so u could feel both Swara n Sanskar’s pain,but while writing,may be cos I am typing in a hurry, m not feeling anything ya,wen u all say like this I feel I should read it.Missing our chats ,I mean our Joya,Mickey ,Shraddha, Vinita,Sethooty,busy nowadays, that is y,next episode I mean 30th I will send tomorrow, actually,totally blank,that stupid twist ,I have to think how to incorporate it in next one.
Hiiii vini dear …. Again u made me cry yaar …. It is too emotional dear …. Ur simply supb yaar …. I’m eagerly waiting for ur next update dear.. Loads of love ❤???
Oh thank u dear,second time,no?humbled n honoured reading your words,don know if it will be interesting later,loads of love to u too,stay happy.