Hello to all my lovely readers. I know I’m too early than usual but I guess no one has a problem with it? Do you? Jokes apart. Well let’s start with the 17th episode of this Fan Fiction.
Enjoy Reading!
(Note :- The complete episode is in Kunj’s voice)
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Episode 17
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“You want to know why? So listen…Yesterday after dropping you at Taneja Mansion…”
(Flashback is shown.) (Flashback is in narrative voice.)
Kunj reached Sarna Mansion, after leaving/dropping Twinkle at Taneja Mansion. He parked the car and headed towards the living room. He noticed that the lights of Usha’s room were still on, resulting him to wonder why so? He marched to her room, to find Usha lying on the bed while Bebe is beside her. Kunj knocked at the door and sought permission to enter but both Usha and Bebe ignored him. Kunj walked in and muttered, “Ma…” but Usha said cutting him off, “Bebe, switch off the lights. I’m feeling sleepy.” Bebe got up and was about to do so when Kunj stopped her stating, “Bebe, leave it. You go, I’m with Ma.” Bebe left.
Kunj came and sit next to Usha and asked, “Ma, what happened? Why are you behaving so?” Usha turned her face to the other side and said, “Don’t call me ‘Ma’ Kunj!” Kunj held her hands and exclaimed, “I’m sorry Ma, I know I said a lot to you in the morning but you know I can’t tolerate that girl, and after all I never wanted to marry. Not only to twinkle, to anyone else as well. Marriage for me is a cage which makes me feel suffocated. You and Dad also married but what was the result?” Usha turned her face towards Kunj and said, “Kunj, it’s not necessary that what happened to our (Usha and Manohar) marriage will happen to yours (Twinkle and Kunj) marriage!” Kunj uttered, “But, ma…” Usha said, “No, ifs and buts. You’ve to give proper space to Twinkle, try to understand her. Give your own self some time and then decide, whatever you’re doing is it correct?” Kunj spoke, “Sorry Ma, but I can’t!” Usha gave up and said, “Do whatever you want but I’m telling you if you do anything to Twinkle or ever beat her up then you’ll see my dead face!” Kunj was taken aback and without any option he had to comply on what Usha said.
(Flashback ends!) (Kunj’s voice continued)
“Kunj…” I heard Twinkle calling me out. I turned back to look at her, her eyes were full of tears. She continued, “I’ll just ask you one question, will you ever accept me or I’ll mean nothing in your life throughout?” I said, “Don’t worry Twinkle, I can understand that living with me is like a hell for you. But, don’t you worry after 3 months, I’ll divorce you and then you’ll be free from this chain of relation.” She looked on and asked, “What about Mummy ji?” I looked to her questioning eyes, which had tears full of pain and replied, “Ma…I’ll make her understand!”
I was about to leave when I realized her holding my hand with a stream of tears down her eyes. It ached me, yes it did! She exclaimed with a choking voice, “Kunj…I don’t know whether you ever liked me or not, but for me the moment Ma, showed me your picture I fell for you. Maybe that time I wasn’t aware of this side of yours but still, I loved you with all my devotion. And now…”
I looked on as she confessed, “Now also, I don’t feel any shame in accepting that I’m in love with the beast who once was my knight in the shining armor. Yes, the night of our wedding when you revealed your truth I was angry, furious and disappointed over you as I’ve had some expectations from you and all were ruined in a, maybe a mini-second! But I can never say that I’ve ever hated you. That day, finding you with Alisha, I burst over you not because I felt disgusted to find her with you, but because was jealous with the fact that you’ve been with some other girl. I didn’t hate you hat day, instead I hated that bi*ch! Yesterday, when you raised the hunter over me, I felt pain, not because of the bruises it gave me, but because the hatred in your eyes pierced my heart. The next day, when you came near me and acted sweet, my heart melted for you Kunj! And I’ve no fear of your beatings but I fear for your hatred, as I can never bear to see hatred for me in the eyes of my LOVE! Yes, Mr.Kunj Sarna, I love you! Your wife loves you Kunj, to the moon and back!”
I was shocked over her confession, how can she love a person who’ve given so much pain to her, who’ve hurt her to each and every extent, who’ve betrayed her, who’ve played with her. But still she loves him like anything. I cursed myself for doing so but that’s a fact that I can never love, anyone, any girl! I looked at her, she’d already broken down on the floor, crying. I bend near her and whispered as softly as I could, “Twinkle…” She looked up to me, with her big hazel brown eyes, which had tears. She stood up, and so did I. She said wiping her tears, “I’m sorry…” I shushed her by placing a finger over her lips. Her tears were piercing my heart. “Twinkle…I’m sorry…I’m sorry, not only for 1 time but 100, 1000, 10000, 100000, 1000000, to all the numbers in the entire universe. But, loving you…”
She cut me off stating, “No Kunj, I can understand, love can never be forced. I loving you is my choice. And asking for the feelings which you never had for me is iniquity! I’m not asking you to love me but a peaceful and a pleasant life!” I said, “But Twinkle….” She again cut me off, “Kunj, let me speak. I know it’s not easy for you. But let’s start up being friends! What say?” ‘Yeah this sounds good!’ I thought. I smiled, as I complied. She forwarded her hand with a big smile on her innocent face and I also smiled back and shook hands with her stating, “Friends…” And she continued, “Forever!”
We smiled on this new bonding of ours 🙂
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Next Morning
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I was wandering here and there in the living room, glancing at the clock. I remembered Ishana’s warning about the worst Christmas present. I felt a hand on my shoulder, turned to find Twinkle, dressed in a long tea-pink colored gown touching almost the ground, with a dupatta pinned to her shoulder and a coti in silver color. She signaled me, but I wasn’t able to understand and asked, “What?” She said, “What, what?” I replied, “You tell.” She asked, “You asked…”
“No you aksed”
“You..”
“No, you” and we continued arguing. But we finally stopped when we heard a cough. It was Bebe, when we realized that the whole family was in the hall and was laughing over us. We were left embarrassed, and bowed our heads down and cursed each other.
Ishana stepped inside the hall, and all stopped laughing. I noticed Rudra’s face turning black and he suppressed anger and was about to leave from there but Saumya held his hand. ‘What’s going on between them’ was going in my mind but yes, I was agitated to see Ishana passing a sly smile to me. She said, “Good morning” Twinkle replied to her while others didn’t utter a single word. Ishana moved towards Twinkle and I, with a smirk. She said, “Well, I sincerely apologize for ruining your Reception ceremony.” But my wife, or better, I should say my friend who’s a great human said, “No, need to apologize Ishana. As far as you’re staying here you’re part of our family and family members don’t apologize!” ‘Family member? Like seriously…She’s here to ruin everything!’
“Well, that’s so sweet of you dear but I’ve something here to compensate with you!” She said handing us an envelope. I asked bluntly, “What’s this?” She replied, “You better open this and check yourself!” I opened the envelope and all came in my mind was, ‘What the wuck?’ Ishana continued, “A 10 days vacation or I better say Honeymoon package for you guys in Paris!” I said rudely, “No need of this. Thanks!” But Twinkle held my hand tightly and said, “Thank you so much dear. That really means a lot!” I stared her and she glared me back, with justifying eyes.
‘There’s something really big going in her mind!’ I thought looking at Ishana. As all dispersed out of the hall, and only she and I were left she came near me and whispered in my ears, “Merry Christmas Kunj! I’ll follow you guys as a shadow but I promise to make sure not to disturb you guys! Start counting days Kunj! Happy Honeymoon!” and she left. I really curse Twinkle for accepting her offer!
(Scene shift to Twinj’s room)
I asked angrily, “What was the need to accept her offer?” Twinkle who was busy packing replied, “At least I’m not like you, Rude!” I said, “Do you love creating problems? Oh..I forgot you’re a Siyappa Queen!” She turned into an angry bird and yelled, “How dare you? Then you’re Sadu Sarna!” I fumed and said, “Impossible!” She exclaimed, “Yes, you are! Sadu Sarna…Sadu Sarna…Sadu Sarna!” I screamed, “Twinkle…” and started chasing her, and she also started running. I must say she’s a good runner, but I’m also Kunj Sarna!
“Gotcha!” I yelled as I caught my beauty in my grip. But, it’s actually an awkward moment for both of us, as I was holding her from her waist. I left her the very next second, and we avoided eye-contact. I said, “Sorry!” She looked at me and I looked at her , and the very next moment we were laughing like hyenas and ended up falling on the couch.
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Precap : ‘Say hello to Paris!” … Honeymoon begins!
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The update ends here and I hope you all enjoyed. Sorry I wasn’t able to reply to all your sweet comments but I’ll soon (Insha Allah)
Please do leave down your views regarding the update!
Love you all!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
45 Comments
Hey zuha its just aesome over it d love u do ppsy asap
Hey Presha,
Thanks for commenting! I’m glad that you enjoyed and I’ll try to post the next episode ASAP 🙂
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Really awesome yaar happy seeing the closeness between them
Do continue and post soon bye
Hey Sohi,
Well thanks for your appreciation and I’m really glad that you enjoyed the episode and the bonding between Kunj-Twinkle 🙂
Stay tuned to the Fan Fiction and I’ll try to be regular (though it’s impossible 😛 )
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Hey Zuha,
This episode was amazing! So glad to see a bond coming b/w Kunj and Twinkle. Really excited for the honeymoon track and also what Ishana will be doing next! Post soon! x
Lovess! xx
Hey Monica,
Thanks for commenting and appreciation . And I’m glad that you enjoyed the update and the bonding between Kunj-Twinke and for the honeymoon track….
Let’s see what’s in store for you guys 😉 And yeah, I’ll kinda make sure to post soon!
Loads of Love and Support 🙂
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Wow zuha I loved it pls show kunjs love for twinkle soon and thanks for posting this early and I hope we’ll get the next also early
Hey Sushmita,
I am really happy to know that you enjoyed the update and about Kunj’s love towards Twinkle, let’s see when the feelings arise in his heart!
Well, I’ll try to be early but I guess this time I’ll be a little late! Anyways, thanks for commenting and sharing down your views over the update.
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Zuha!!
Fabulous dear…….
Luved it…….
This kunj is far more better than the beast one….. liked the way u started their relationship…… n…… twinkles confession was awsum dear……. excited for their honeymoon……. waiting for the next post dear…… plz post soon…..
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Love u??
Take care ??
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Aamna
Hey Aamna,
Thanks sweetie, for your wonderful and encouraging comment which made me smile, a million dollar one 🙂
Anyways, thanks for sharing down your views. Also, about the honeymoon track, you’ve to wait and read what I’ve in store for you guys! I’ll try to post soon and not making you guys wait for my ‘Boring’ Fan Fiction 😛
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Hey zuhu
Woaah??❤️!!! That was just amazing ??lovely. So glad to see a new relation between kunj and twinkle. Loved it.
Omgg so much of suspense. Waiting for the honeymoon ??
Post soon
Love u❤️
Hey Chiku,
Thank you so much dear, for your unconditional love and support towards the Fan Fiction. Really, if you guys won’t have been there so this Fan Fiction would’ve never worked out. You guys make it worthy reading 🙂
Yes, it’s true that a lot of suspense is there but ‘When I’m here then no fear’ I’ll reveal the suspense but not so soon 😉 Well, I’ll try my level best to post soon!
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Amazing exited for honeymoon sequence
Hey, Thank you so much!
Hi zuhu,
Ashiya here. ..A silent reader of ur ff. …I’m commenting for d 1st time on dis ff
I don’t need 2 tell dat ur ff z amazing. …Girl, I’m a fan of ur writing. ……
It’s one of my favourite ffs here….
Nd dis epi was too gd…. very happy knowing dat twinj have become frnds. …nd super duper excited for d honeymoon. …
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Please post soon…
nd wd u like 2 b mah friend. ….I’m in 8th grade…do tell me abt urslf……
Loads of love ?stay blessed dear?
Hi Ashiya,
Well you’ve got no idea how it feels when any of your ‘Silent reader’ breaks its silence. When I read your comment I was on cloud nine, and a big wala curve appeared on my face. Literally, you made my day sweetie by this wonderful comment of yours 🙂 Love you so much for this!
Well, someone being my ‘Fan of writings’ is definitely something freaking, but really thanks for so much of your love! I don’t know how to pay a token of gratitude as words always fall short in front of the immense love and support by all of my loving friends!
About, the upcoming honeymoon track, I guess you guys are a lot excited so now it’s over me to make it really intriguing (though I’m no good at writing) so that I don’t disappoint you guys 🙂 And definitely I’d love to be your friend sweetheart 🙂 And about me, I’m a Pakistani Muslim! I’m also of your age I guess…I’m 13 and yeah, I;m studying in grade 7 but assume grade 8 as in my school they teach the syllabus of one class ahead 🙁 Anyways, I’ll be posting soon (IA)
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
That was cute nd amazing
Hey, Thank you so much!
awesome amazing fabulous marvelous epi
Hey, Thank you so much!
Hey Zuha,
That was a fabulous update. I’m so happy to see a bond developing between Twinj. Also, I’m damn excited to know what’s up with Ishana. Honeymoon!? I’m excited already. Try posting soon.
All love,
Ria.
Hey Ria,
Thanks for your lovely comment. Also I’m glad that you’re enjoying the Fan Fiction and the upcoming track, has a lot for you guys so stay tuned!
Anyways, I’ll try posting soon!
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Oh my god…my cuteiiii sista..
becouse of ur writing m fallen in love with u day by day…and..Really 4 me ur sach big shining armor star..who can only keep people awestruck by her writing….sry i can’t praises well…..But u deserved better then this…
This epi was totally amazing.. Love it to the core.. Love twinkle confession and twinj talk very much.. The new start of friendship b\w twinj just loved it..bcoz friendship is the first stage of love.. Now waiting 4 ishanas new plan or should say their so called honeymoon r8..lol..
Now m very happy coz u post ur ff early.. Keep posting like this i want to read more from u..sooo plz plz post ur next part soon…
Stay happy and keep smiling…
Love u sooo much sista…
Hey Sista,
Well, you’ve left me spellbound by your lovely comment! I don’t know what to reply as words are falling short to thank you for your immense love and support! Though, ‘Thanks’ is too small in front of your love but still ‘Thank you so much’ for all the love and support you’ve showered upon this Fan Fiction and over me 🙂
Well, I don’t deserve praises as I’m no good of a writer but I’ll always try to come across the expectations of the readers and try to gear you all to my ‘Boring’ Fan Fiction!
I’m glad knowing that you guys are enjoying the episodes and the growing bond between Twinkle-Kunj! Well I’ll try to post soon, sista! Stay blessed…
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Hey Zuha
this has been the best update ever
please try to post the next one soon
loads of love
Hey Simyy (Api),
Woah, ‘best update ever’ that’s really not expected. Thank you so much dear. Your comment made me blush so hard! So happy to read your comment!
I’ll try posting soon dear!’
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Hey zuha…
Finally you kept up my promise and posted the soonest. Ok! So the episode is amazing like always and I’m glad to see twinj opening up more… Well I’m too excited for the honeymoon track !! Try posting again the soonest.
Love you !
Hey Adya,
Look, I’m true with my commitments 😉 Well I’m glad that you enjoyed and I’ll try to make it more interesting so that you guys can enjoy it more!
I’ll try posting soon 🙂
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
I am a silent reader of us ff . Ur ff is one of my favourite. Today’s epi was cute and amazing, loved it to the core .waiting for next epi.
Hey teja,
Dear, thanks a ton for breaking your silence and opening up! It really encourages the writer when a silent reader comments! Thank you so very much!
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
The epi was amazing as always.. loved twinj’s scenes.. finally they became friends.. as friendship is the first step towards love??.. excited for their honeymoon trip and waiting to know what ishana will do next.. do cont soon ❤
Hey Yashvee,
Thanks dear for your lovely comment and I’m glad that you enjoyed 🙂
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Awesome Loved it 🙂
Twinkle’s confession was superb 🙂
Finally Kunj and Twinkle are atlas friends 🙂
Loved the episode and the next episode ….. waiting for it 🙂
Love you 🙂
Post soon 🙂
Hey Shruti (di),
Thank you so much ? I’m glad to know that you enjoyed Twinkle ‘s confession and the episode. Also I’ve submitted the next episode, let’s see when it gets uploaded!
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Looving ur story Zuha…
Its awesome….
Hey Shreya,
Thank you so much ?
Wowww zuha awesome
Now twinj have became frnds so cute loved it loads of love keep smiling
Hey Rmaya
Hey Ramya,
Thanks for your lovely comment ? I’m glad that you’re liking the track. I’ll try to make the story more interesting ?
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Oohhkk.. so it ws amazing update.. atleast got to see twinj as frnds at d end..
Hey Aanya,
Thanks for your comment dear.
Hi Zuha my sisso my cutii my darlo my bachha firstly I’m really very sorry for not commenting on last two episode actually bahot busy thi toh TU se gayab hona pada…sorryyyyy ab try karungi ki na gayab houn…
By the way epi ki tareef baad main karungi pehle mujhe ye batao ki tum sach mein 13 years ki ho? mujhe toh doubt ho raha hai bcz itni choti age mein itni understanding n maturity? yaar its unbelievable… I can’t disest it bcz in your age I was totally buddu n immature… sach mein yaar jhooth nahi bol rahi hun… the way you discribe everything emotions expressions etc its really outstanding n you were asking me ki from where I writes dialoges… so now you tell me ki itni chotu se age mein tum cheejjon ko kaise samajh leti ho? I’m really speachless after reading your ffs what to say… really yar you are a great writer….
Well todays episode was superb… loved the way you discrbe twinkles dialoges n her feeling towards kunj… it was really mindblowing… n now I’m happy you make my kunj good for twinkle n now they are friend… waiting for their honeymoon in Paris… post next soon….
One more thing congratulation for for Gold medal in your anual sports compitition…I’m really happy for you… May god give you success n acheivement everywhere in your life… mera bhi ashiravaad tumhare saath hai my bachha…
Love you♥♥ keep smiling always♥♥
Hey Neha (di),
Please…I can’t digest so much of appreciation at a time. You’ve left me spellbound by your comment, I seriously am out of words to what to reply back as your sweet comment has left me dumbstruck. Itni sari tareef. .. that also mine?
I don’t even know how to thank you. Well yes I’m a chotu sa baby of 13. Mature? No way. I’m the biggest jhalli of this world. Nat khat bhi hoon! But jo bhi hoon Itni tareef ki haq daar nahi. I’m no good of a writer! That’s all your love which makes my boring writings worth readings ?
Love u 2!
Keep smil
Hey zuhu
it was amazing dear above all this kunj’s side was nice in this update
waiting for the next update dear
and yes plzzzzz read my ff also dear
loads of love
Hey shrutu,
Thanks dear. Also I’ve commented on your FF as well! Also I’m glad you liked the episode. Take care…Stay blessed!
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂