VIDHANI FF : UNBOUNDED BOND OF LOVE [Part 9, By Renima]
Hello, Ikrs friends….Big big big sorrrrry for updating ff tooooo late……Guys am busy with office work and my schedule is really much much hectic…….And certain personal issues also came across and am almost sucked in all those things……Ok….guys…hope u have not forgotten me and this article, won’t u ? And to write this one was actually very hard for me…..not only of the story but also what all am facing in my life….. sorry I was not able 2 write well……so this one is too short…..Pls forgive me….for this short update…. And pls pls,….after reading this don’t get angry on me………
So here are links for previous parts…..
Pls read all and express ur views on it…..
Fb scene -4 {@ Haridwar……Hospital}
Viplav tries 2 console everyone and finds dhulari in bed…..Dhaani was still lying unconscious only…….They makes dhaani 2 lie down on the stretcher beside dhulari….. Attenders started covering dhulari’s body with white cloth. Suvarna and rajjo burst into tears……
Suvarna : Viplav….bhai…. do some thing…..Dhaani….If she will not get up soon…. She will never be able 2 see her maa’s face…..Pls….
Viplav was standing motionless only, his eyes were almost filled in tears……
Rajjo : Maaji…..can’t go….any where…. Suvarna…tell these people 2 go away……
Attenders didn’t listened 2 rajjo….They have almost covered dhulari’s body with white cloth and was about 2 cover her face…..only…..But soon viplav stopped them by holding their hands…..They stared him in confusion…..
Viplav : Until and unless dhaani will see maaji’s face no one will cover it…..[attendors left, viplav removes the white blanket …..]
[Viplav moves the stretcher close 2 dhulari……] Dhaani……get up…..see ur maa needs u….. pls dhaani…..get up….. maaji……pls get up….[viplav places his hand on dhulari and dhaani’s hands respectively and burst into tears]
In the midst doctor arrives there……Doctor : What’s going on here ?
Viplav : Doctor……dhulari maaji has not dead,….And dhaani.,….why she is not telling any thing ? Pls…..do something doctor…..
Doctor : Relax….let me check her……
Viplav : Pls check both of them….
Doctor : Why don’t u understand…..maaji has dead….and abt this girl…..I will heck her….
Doctor checks dhaani and gives an injection…..After some time dhaani slowly opened her eyes and find viplav, suvarna and rajjo before her eyes……
Dhaani : Maa!!!
Doctor : Thank god, she is safe……now……Excuse me …[doctor leaves]
Viplav : Dhaani…..see ur maa…..she is with u…..just look there…..[viplav points out his finger and dhaani finds her maa on bed]
Dhaani : Maa!!! Maa!!! [ screams]
Rajjo : She is no more……
Dhaani : Suvarna….she is lying, won’t she ? Rajjo…..this is not true….why u all are silent ?
Rajjo : Dhaani…..truth is bitter and u have 2 accept it….Ur maa has passed away…
Dhaani : No….I won’t believe it……Maa can’t leave her buchiya…..No one is believing me……
Viplav : I believe u dhaani……[viplav hold dhaani’s hand and sits beside her]
Dhaani : U believe me…..viplav…..
Viplav : Haa dhaani…..am sure if u will take her name from heart, certainly she will come back……Pls trust me …..Now just call her…{viplav helps dhaani 2 get up from the bed}
Dhaani : If I maa came back….then……I will…..{dhaani burst into tears and hugs viplav}
Viplav : Dhaani…..don’t cry…..this is not the time for crying…..i know dhaani as the bold girl who has strong determination and nothing is impossible for her…..Dhaani….suvarna….. rajjo….pls convince dhaani…..
Suvarna : Enough viplav, why are u giving wrong belief 2 her, it will break her heart only….. dhaani…..dhaani….look @ me……[Dhaani released from viplav’s hug and stared suvarna….] Dhaani……just cry……as much as u can….u used 2 praise white color always……Just look this white color…..this is truth and soon maaji’s body will be covered with white cloth and she will be taken for…..
Dhaani : [interrupts] No…pls don’t say that…..suvarna…..viplav tell her pls…..that……maa will come back…..
Viplav : Haa dhaani….U just call her…..[viplav holds dhaani’s hand and makes her 2 come more close towards dhulari]
Dhaani : Maa……[dhaani screams] Maa….maa….[ There was no reaction from dhulari……]
Viplav : Just call her…dhaani……
Dhaani : Viplav..….maa…..[dhaani literally cries]
Viplav : Dhaani…..don’t lose hope…..Am sure she will not leave u soon…..If any one can bring back her, then it’s u dhaani……With all ur strength…..just call her……dhaani……
Dhaani was unable 2 tell any thing…..Viplav sits beside her and touch her hands…… Vidhani stare each other with teary eyes……
Viplav : Dhaani……U can do it…..Am with u…….[dhaani gets mesmerized with viplav’s words…..] Come on dhaani…….Call her…..maa…..
Dhaani turned her face towards dhulari and screamed…”Maa……She lie down on dhulari’s body] Maa…..speak 2 me…..buchiya is incomplete without u….maa….U can’t leave ur buchiya like these……..Maa….maa…can u hear me…..” she burst into tears]
Viplav was in a dilemma……But still he was not ready 2 lose hope ……He stared dhaani for a while……and closed his eyes and folded his both hands and prayed in his heart ……”Dhaani never demanded anything except her aashram’s well being……For her maaji is inspiration and her life……If her love towards maaji is true then please don’t separate maaji from dhaani so soon…..”
Suvarna : I can’t see dhaani in pain……Why rajjo , this is happening with us ?? Maaji who brought me back 2 life, is now……..
Rajjo : Suvarna…..This white color……it will not leave us so soon…..it’s our fate……..When a man dies , his wife is supposed 2 wear the white color throughout her life…..And when she dies, still she is covered with this white color only…….
Suvarna : Viplav can bring filament smile in any one’s face…..But he can’t bring life 2 our maaji…..And for few minutes he can stop people from covering maaji with white colored cloth……But when she will be taken for cremation, she will be covered with the white color only…….Rajjo…..[suvarna and rajjo burst into tears and hug each other]
Mean while dhaani was still lying on her mother’s body and was calling “maa” only…..Viplav gradually opened his eyes and stared dhaani……He was not able 2 look @ her face long as the tears which he suppressed in his heart was breaking down only…..Viplav turned his face towards dhulari’s legs and was trying 2 rub his tears only…..Few drops of tears from his eyes fell down on dhulari’s leg…..Viplav was almost broken down…..He just waved his hands through her legs…..All of a sudden he felt some thing is moving and he finds that dhulari’s leg’s finger was moving only…….Viplav gets surprised……He scremed…..”Maaji is alive….. dhaani……..dhaani….”
Dhaani raised her head from dhulari’s body and finds that dhualri’s leg’s fingers were moving only…..
Viplav : Dhaani……God has heard my prayer……Maa ji is safe….I will call the doctor……
Viplav rushed outside the ward….Mean while suvarna and rajjo find viplav was telling truth only…..They rushed near dhualri and placed their hands on dhulari’s forhead….
Suvarna : Maaji……
Dhaani : Suvarna…..nothing will happen 2 our maa…….
Rajjo : Haa dhaani……
In the midst doctor arrives and checks dhulari….He tells vidhani, suvarna and rajjo 2 wait outside as part of treatment…..After some time doctor assures vidhani that dhulari is alright …..When dhulari was not responding 2 medicines they felt she has dead……
Doctor ; This is a miracle only…..
Viplav : No doctor…..this is not miracle…..this is the victory of a daughter’s heart, her determination and her unconditional love towards her mother only…….
[Dhaani overhears it and she feels heavenly]
Dhaani : Viplav….[dhaani fold her both hands towards him ] Who are u ?? Today when every one told that maaji has dead and I was not ready 2 believe it was u who filled belief in me…..and regained my strength…….And for me u are like bhagwan ji only……[ dhaani cries and touches viplav’s feet]
Viplav : [shocked] Dhaani…..pls….[viplav makes dhaani 2 get up and stares her eyes] Am not bhagwan and whatever happened because I know that god is not so cruel….Some times we don’t understand his games, but we have 2 trust in ourself….
Dhaani : Ur trust has won today, viplav……
Viplav : U are wrong…..Our trust has won……[ viplav hold dhaani’s both hands and stares her with a smile ……Dhaani felt viplav like a supporting shadow who is pure and innocent, who is willing 2 stand with her @ any time without any barriers, conditions and priorities…..She couldn’t take her eyes from him …..Her tears were continuously falling on viplav’s pam only, viplav stared her with teary eyes and slowly took one of his hand form hold] Filament….[ viplav signed 2 smile dhaani with wet eyes]
Dhaani was unable 2 express any thing, she simply shook her head and smiled with teary eyes only…….Vidhani share an emotional eyelock…..
BGM.. ….“Kyaa khoob rab ne kiyaa….bin maange itna diyaa…..
Warna ho milte kahan….hum kaafiron ko khudah……hasratein abbh meri,tum se he jaa mili
Tum duaa abbh meri…….aakhri ban gaye……Haan hasi ban gaye…..haa name ban gaye…
Tum mere aasma…..Meri zameen ban gayi……oh….oh….”[film-hamari adhuri kahani] plays
PRECAP : FROM HEART EVERY ONE WEEPS IN PAIN, BUT EYES WILL BLOCK TEARS AND PAIN WILL ALWAYS REMAIN IN HEART ONLY…….
10 Comments
Hey Reni! It was nice yaar. Loved viplav’s trust and his supportive behaviour towards dhaani.
Phewww! Finally kaaki’s alright. The way you created suspense was cool?
Keep rocking dear!
Take care.
Thanks mahaa…..i hope u are not feeling bad while reading this episode…….thanks a lot
No why I’ll feel so? You’re doing great. Don’t worry we’re enjoying your work ?
Just felt 2 ask. so…..yaar
Renii….awesome episode….yaaar…in starting of this episode u explained scenes like i cant stop my tears….
Renii….if u dont feel bad then i want to tell u something…first i will tell then u tell me u felt bad or not ok???
In many olden movies i saw that this scene where hero dies but when heroine came and touch him he will come back…
Ok now coming to the episode…it is really very nice….viplavs trust and the way he given strength to dhaani…was awesome…
update next episode when u have time…
bye….
take care dear…
Thanks lalitha…..actually, the idea 2 make dhulari as alive is just because 2 bring vidhani closer, if u not remember the first episode, let me tell u my story is actually a flash back of vidhani…… and in first episode dhualri and suvarna welcomed dhaani , she went for city for a particular purpose and all….Ok woh sab batane mein kaafi episodes lagega…..ki kyun dhaani chali gayi…and kaise vidhani love start hua and all…filhal dhaani ko viplav par trust karna zaruri tha and i didn’t find any better idea rather than 2 make dhulari maa alive only, haa agree thoda bahut filmy thaa…..par mere dimaag mein aur kuch aayi nahi……so aisi hi likhi…..waise mein kuch plan nahi karti ki kya likhna hein….jaise hi kuch likhti hun, kabhi long hoga, kabhi short…..ek point pe aake rukti hun…..and kuch naa kuch thought precap mein daalkar submit karti hun….shayad isliye bahut saari galatiyaan hoge…and i never felt bad….u said ur view only…….waise episode toh post ho gayi…..toh kuch nahi ho sakta……and hope the way i show vidhani trust made u feel gud …….actually mera mood kuch theek nahi hein…isliye mein joh bhi likh rahi hun……woh abbh crap bante hein…..and i know may be u felt bad while reading episode…..sorry for mistakes……and will try 2 update next one ….as early as possible,……
arrey..really i didnt felt bad…i really enjoyed whole episode…
Trust and ViDhaani… Kinda synonyms …. Right….. Superb job Reni….. Loved it….m
Waist I apologise for not commenting the day I read it okay….just back from college …. Loved how Dhaani finds someone whom she can trust ego can give her to reason to have filament on face.,, that smile…. Loved how viplav was standing by Dhaani and giving her words of courage…I have a different interpretation of Dulaari mai coming back to life… The main motto was to show that how someone can fill in the courage in you and genuinely show that they believe in you..,, trust me this the power of love Reni …..love you for this okay…. ???
Keep going dear ?
Sujie…thanks for the comment ….I don’t know what i should say…..2 u……ur comment means a lot dear……Sorry for making u guys feeling bad……
Arrey…there is nothing like we felt bad ??? you also don’t need to feel so….. Instead we are happy that Dulaari mai came back to life and strengthened Dhaani Viplav’s relation of trust and respect….Which is gonna add love in their life…keep rocking like this dear ????