hii everyone thanks a lot for the comments I think this 1st episode is a bit boring so rotten eggs shoes tomatoes are accepted ?? but I promised that next episode will be mind-blowing and but still hope you guys like it
ya sorry it not Shiv it’s shakti sorry Oberoi’s siblings chote papa ..
So let’s start …
Intro :
Introduction
My ff start :
(the Rana has already shifted in Delhi ) Ishana has shifted her academy in New Delhi .
A big beautiful mansion is shown “ Oberoi’s Mansion ” . Inside a woman is scolding a servant :
Pinky : – where is the lemon juice ?? It’s going to be 7 u haven’t prepared it yet . My Guriya Rani is about to wake up. You are meant for nothing. You are fired. I will make it myself .
Just then a man ( Shiv ) come with a doggy (cooky )
Shiv -pinky calm down what if my guriya found that you are firing him just for a lemon juice she will be angry na
Pinky – what my guriya she is my guriya too haan nahiin to .. He smiles and leave ..
She goes in the kitchen .
The scene shift upstairs: A man is scolding someone on the phone
The man – what are you doing ? You can’t even do something properly
someone – I’m sorry shivaye sir but this lawyer is not ready to withdraw this case
Shivaye – I will handle her myself then
He cut the call angrily and start thinking how to deal with this lawyer ??
Just then a beautiful lady come there :
Beautiful lady – Shivaye beta is everything alright ?? why are you looking stressed ?? What happened ??
Shivaye – nothing happened maa
Jhanvi – let me guess business problem na
Shivaye – how do you know ma??
Jhanvi – after all I’m your mother
Shivaye – love you ma
Jhanvi – love you too my Bacha
Shivaye – ma where’s om ??
Jhanvi- you know him na he has already gone to his gallery
Shivaye – and Rudra ??
Jhanvi – this dumbo is still sleeping I’m going to wake him you go and get ready and I will send your expresso you have a important meeting today naa
Jhanvi leaves and shivaye go in the bathroom
Jhanvi is going to wake Rudra just then she meet pinky
Pinky – di ap
Jhanvi – haan pinky I going to wake dumbo oberoi
Pinky – Didi ap bhi naa I’m going to wake Guriya Rani
Jhanvi – haan today foreign tourists are coming naa
Pinky – haan lets go and wake them together
Jhanvi – good idea pinky
They go and enter Rudra
jhanvi – wake up dumbo Oberoi you will get late to college
Rudra – Baby I love you but let me sleep
Pinky groan the curtains and …
Rudra- Sheena let me sleep baby
Jhanvi – I will show him now
She goes and take a glass of cold water and split it on him
Rudra – it’s raining and it’s so romantic
Pinky laugh : he will never stop ..
Pinky – wake up now mera bacha
Rudra wake up and make an angry face
Rudra – ma choti maa thats not fair
Jhanvi – acha Bachu and who will go to college and who’s Sheena and tell me the truth or I will call your dad
Rudra – how will I know ?? I don’t know her and don’t tell rajnikant please or else he will murder me
He see the time and
Rudra – oh shot I need to go
Pinky – go and get ready the breakfast is ready
Jhanvi and pinky go in another room( fully decorated with butterflies and stars )
They enter the room and saw nobody
Pinky – guriya where are you ? Guriya
Jhanvi – maybe she is in bathroom or doing yoga and thank god she is not like Rudra lazy after all whose daughter is she ??
Pinky jhanvi at the same time – humari beti hai and they laugh
Just then a beautiful girl comes out the bathroom with a beautiful white dress beautiful long hair bina makeup she looks totally like a pari and ma choti maa ap yahan
Jhanvi – princess we have come to see if you have wake up or not ..
Pinky – here your lemon juice
Sumo – thank you choti maa choti ma who have you fired today ??
Pinky – nobody but they are all lazy
Sumo – hug both them love you both
Ma where’s papa I need to talk to him
Jhanvi – what happened princess ??
Sumo – nothing much ma all is well don’t worry
Pinky – guriya I forgot to tell you Anika has call she said if you are coming to NGO today
Sumo – haan choti thank you I will call her and tell her that I’m coming
Jhanvi – OK then get ready quickly and the breakfast is ready
Both jhanvi and pinky leave and sumo call Anika
The scene shift in a gallery lab a guy alone and is making a ganesh idol he is Omkara suddenly his phone ring
He answer the call
Om – good morning shivaye
Shivaye – good morning where are you ?? I was looking for you
Om – I’m in my lab gallery what happened every thing alright naa
Shivaye – don’t worry just papa is looking for you he said that he needs to talk to you
Om : tell him that I will talk to him later I’m busy
Shivaye : OK all the best I will come to meet at your gallery in the afternoon see you then
The scene shift in the living room where a beautiful lady “ dadi ” is talking to a photo : ji it has been 30 years now that you have left us
Our elder son tej and our shakti are the richest men in this country
just then Tej and shakti come and take dadi blessing and says
Tej and shakti – Good morning ma
Tej : how is your health ??
Dadi – I’m fine and u seemed to be tired
Tej – haan maa I hve lots of work and meeting
Shivaye come
shivaye : Don’t worry dad today will handle all the meetings today u rest
Tej : nahiin beta I will manage
Shivaye : no papa I said noo
Tej : OK baba maa he is coming very stubborn
Just then jhanvi come
Jhanvi – anyways who’s son is he ?? Yours naa
dadi laugh and continue talking to the photo
Dadi- your 2 daughter in law don’t let me do anything
Pinky comes there and both jhanvi and pinky take blessing
Dadi bless them
And continue
Dadi – your grand son shivaye handle all business sumo this house princess help in business and handle an hotel Omkara became an artist the statues he made are sold in crores and Rudra aka dumbo Oberoi who is more ahead than you he never stopped when he is asked to stop running after girls
Now I wish that this stay like this and your grand kids get love in their lives ishqbaazi should be equal
Everyone goes to the dining table sumo and Rudra come there and …
Sumo – good morning dad good morning chote papa
Tej- good morning princess
Shakti – good morning guriya
Sumo – today don’t worry day papa I will take care of all meetings and u rest
Jhanvi – but today your foreign customer are coming na and NGO …
Sumo – don’t worry mum NGO work won’t take long and priyanka my manager she will handle it .. Today I won’t go to hotel
Tej – OK then today I will be a house man
Sumo – bhai can you drop me to the NGO plze cuz my car get repaired
Shivaye – ya sure everything for you princess but then how will come to office
Sumo – don’t worry bhai till then mechanic will drop my car there so don’t worry
Shivaye – OK then let’s go
Suman shivaye Rudra leave the house
Aftersome time they reached a place (NGO )
Sumo – bye bhai see you in the office
Shivaye – see you princess
Shivaye saw that she has forgot her phone and think I should give it to her
He goes inside and collides with a girl and all the paper from her hand have fallen down
Shivaye without seeing her say sorry and collect the paper that have fell down and then …. The scene freezes ….
Recap: AnSh meeting ( we know that they are meant for each other but what will happen will they have a tashan ishq or first sight ishq guess ?? ) OmIsh meeting and RudYa meeting ……
Sorry guys if it’s boring ??
29 Comments
Sorry I made some mistakes ??
no prob di
thank god Anika nahi thi warna again espresso Shivaay ke upaar dal deti and pani bhi dal deti…hahahaha? sry if u mind it was a joke
you know I have few friends name Anika
I tease her calling her Shivaay ki Annika hehehe
really gud epi bt wen will Shraman meet???!!!
pls clear dis confusion and pst soon
lots of love- Neeti
*one special friend whom I tease
Hii neeti I didn’t mind me too love cracking jokes they will not meet now but soon ?? thanks lots of love ✌✌
Di,Very nice ..
Thanks ??
It was not at all boring lovely episode post asap
Thanks Maya ??
Hi yuv di! Don’t even dare to feel sad and say that it is boring?? it was really nice sweety
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Coming to this topic if u don’t mind talking abt it – I just love p. Louis. Lots of love. Keep writing.
P. S. – am from india
Post soon. Lots of love di???? keep writing. We all are always here to support u writers????????☺☺☺??
Thanks nandu it’s so sweet that u love it ?? and I will post it soon ✌✌✌
hey yuv its amazing I love ur ff soooo much its too good and good to know u r from france well i m from singapore gonna be 18 next week and well i also write ff i make millions of mistake 😛 urs is still better and i loved the way u made oberoi brothers n sumo siblings and haha tashab-e-ishq that show used to be big fan of that too once upon a time until the leap
Hiii thank you so much me too I used to love this serial now I don’t like it I also read your ff and I just love it ??✌✌
Haha looks like our choice r quite similar i m really happy to meet u haha
Me too ??
Wow yuv…!! It’s great n amzing….!! Ohoooo who said it was boring not at all dear….!!loved it to d core…n Han waiting despretlyyyyyy fr d nxt 1 plzz yr post ASAP… 🙂
Take care
Love ya……
Thanks Marie and ya I will try my best ✌✌
It was superb epi
Loved it
Loved ur imagination
Love u
Byeee
Take care
Yuvi di
Thanks prettypreeti love u 2 and take care
@Fatarjo
Am from SG too
????????? no words can describe that how good u have wrote actually I love reading and ur one is interesting????
Thanks mukul ✌✌✌
I am from Singapore as well
Oh i was planning to come there with my family but maybe in 2 years I will come there ✌✌
amazing yuv, lykd it a lot.. waiting.. ??✌
Thanks ya I will upload it soon cause now today and tomorrow I will be busy so o think I will upload it tomorrow or Wednesday ✌✌✌
Didi, the story was really nice. Please post soon! Eagerly waiting for it
Thank u Ria I will update it soon ✌✌