Yeh dooriyan
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Recap : swara’s stupid try to elope succeed.l. Again sanskar found her. Sumi’s slap
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“ma m sorry. Sachhi, I won’t go “swara sobs
” no Beta m sorry.. I should have slapped u that day when u Ran for the first time.. “sumi said
“maa m..” she moved towards sumi n starts to feel dizzy
“swara!! “sumi supports her
“maa m sorry” she said in weak Tone
“I don’t want any sorry.. Trisha, swati please take her in.. “sumi avoids her
As soon as swara escapes her sight she spoke” annu bhabhi can I prepare something in ur kitchen ”
” ofcourse sumi bhabhi bt for whom n at this time? “ap ask
” for swara.. I know her.. This girl na.. She didn’t have anything… M sure”saying this sumi ran in kitchen
@guest room
Swara was crying miserably and trisha, swati n Shlok tries to calm her
“swara stop crying.. It will affect your health “trisha said
” bhabhi I know I hv hurted u all.. But I ran cz I don’t want to give you any problem “swara said
” but swara it was mere stupidity.. Cz of ur this act.. Chachi n sanskar were so tensed.. Sanskaar went from home in morning n he was just searching for you ” swati said
” di.. Please help me na.. Neither sir nor ma is talking to me..”she cries
“princess chachi can’t stay angry from you.. So don’t worry.. “Shlok said
But she wasn’t ready to stop crying..
Here sumi gave some food to sanskar “aunty why 2 plates” he ask
“beta I know you too hvnt eaten anything since morning like swara.. N now develop habit of calling me ma “sumi said
” okay aunty, ooops.. Ma” sanskar smiles
Sanskar enters her room n signals everyone to go.. All follows same
Sanskar forwards plate to her
“sorry sir.. Fight with me but please don’t stop talking to me.. I will die “she said crying
” ohh really n when u did that stupidity to leave me.. Then u don’t think even for a second about me.. Haan.. N y would u think.. U don’t trust me na.. U hv trusted those idiotic superstitions.. But u didn’t trust me.. Hai na” sanskar said in frustration
She without wasting any moment she threw herself in his arms.. He too welcomes her decision.. “never ever dare to do this again” he said
“sir I won’t but.. At least listen to me.. I did that only for you m really unlucky I hv proof too”she said
Sanskar gave her “r u serious look”
“okay then, explain me.. Ur so called proves”he said
“sir look it’s been just a week since I engaged to you.. N u got hurt.. (pointing towards his bandage on hand) .. N ur company suffered loss after 25 years.. N moreover only coz of me bhai is not talking to swati di.. “she cries
” hey.. Who told you about that 25years?? N yeah I wanna know who told u that I had choosen u over my family “he ask
She didn’t reply
” tell me swara!! N where is ur locket?”he ask
“I think I hv lost that. Just like I lost ma’s trust” she said n again starts to cry
“ssshhh… Don’t cry.. “he cares her hair
” sir.. Ma is very angry with me na.. N moreover she must be angry from herself cz she slapped me.. U know sir ma never scold me.. Sir please u go n check her na.. Please “she pleads..
” swara don’t worry shlok is with aunty.. U now take rest.. U hv taken too much stress “he said
” but sir ma” she again spoke
“do you trust me “he ask
She nods..
” then stop stressing ur little brain n hurting ur big heart.. Aunty will talk to you just give her some time. okay? Now Sleep ” he said lovingly
” sir may I?? “she ask pointing towards his chest
He immediately open his arms n spoke” ofcourse mera bachha”
She put her head on his chest.. The most relaxing n peaceful place for her.. She slowly fall asleep..
He was caring her hair.. N recalling how he went to temple.. How he told his problem to the priest n how that priest told him that swara is at his home.. Then how he makes her agree to come back by emotional blackmailing… N slept there..
@sumi’s room
She was crying for slapping her own daughter..
“I should not have slapped her.. I can explain everything to her calmly”she cries
“no chachi.. To be honest ur slap was shocking for us but it was indeed needed for swara.. She has done mere stupidity not only once bt thrice.. N kab tak sanskar use dhone me lagega.. She should act mature.. N u r her mother so u hv right to slap her, to love her” shlok consoles
“no shlok.. I never even raised my voice on her n today I slapped her.. My little girl is very emotional.. She must be crying pathetically.. M very bad mother “sumi continues
“chachi.. Sanskaar is with her.. So u don’t worry.. N please don’t feel guilty.. U r world’s best mother.. U know those 3 years which u hv spent with us.. I never feel like my ma is no more.. N again u r giving us same love ” shlok said
” beta u all r my kids n I never wanted to leave u.. Bt ma was adamant in proving swara inauspicious.. N after shonali.. She has crossed all the limits so I hv to go “sumi said
” leave all that chachi.. Now u take rest. The day was too hectic for all. “shlok said
” but beta swara” sumi was worried
“chachi.. Sanskar is with her…don’t worry.. U take rest”shlok said n left
But sumi has tears in her eyes instead of sleep.
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MORNING
Sanskar woke up n saw swara sleeping.. Then he noticed tear marks on her face and his shirt wet.. Which was evident to prove that she has cried.. He planted a lingering kiss on her forehead and makes her lie on pillow..
He was going to his room when ap called him “sanskar”
“yes mum “he said
” beta today pandit ji will come.. To fix ur marriage date.. N match making..” ap said
“ma.. When we all hv accepted her why to make match.. Kundliyan nhi milengi tab bhi mai swara se he shadi karunga” he said with determination
“beta we also want u to get married bt kakisa want this to happen.. So it would be just formality ” ap said n left
” y dadi ask this.. When my alliance was fixed with swati she didn’t do any such things ” he thought
@afternoon
“ma.. M sorry” swara said
Sumi didn’t say anything n left.. Swara has tears in her eyes
Soon pandit ji came n match their kundli
“Itz perfect match.. U both are made for each other “he said
” pandit ji now fix a date for their marriage “dp said
” there is a good date after a month.. “pandit ji suggests
” ha ha m done with that” sanskar immediately agreed
Everyone laughs at his sudden reaction n swara turns crimson..
“ha ha beta.. We will get u both married soon.. Till then hv patience “ap said
Pandit left… And sumi went in to bring sweet
She Feeds everyone n congratulates them.. She feed swara too bud didn’t utter any word…
” ma ab bhi baat nhi kroge” swara ask with tears
Sumi wants to hug swara n wipe her tears.. But she composes herself..
@sumi’s room
She was having tears in her eyes.. But this time these were of mixed feelings.. She was happy for her daughter’s marriage bt at the same time she was sad cz now her daughter was no more her’s..
“ma. “swara called her
Sumi immediately wipes her tears… Swara came in with the help of sanskar.. He make her sit comfortably n left…
“ma.. Please na.. I can’t tolerate ur silence.. If u want u can slap me.. But please don’t do this “she cries
Sumi didn’t say anything.. But her tears were explaining her pain
” ma.. We only have one month n after that u will not get trouble cz of me.. After that we will not live together… I won’t be there to disturb you… To hv fun with you.. To fight with you.. To cry with you.. “she broke
Sumi hugs her and cries” never ever try to do that again… I hv already lost my one daughter… I can’t lost you”
“promise ma.. I won’t do anything like this again.. Sachhi ” swara said
” now stop crying or else sanskar will fight with me”sumi wipes her tears
“ma.. Vo.. I want to tell u something “swara spoke
” ha ha beta.. Tell me.. N one more thing we are best friends first n mother daughter second.. So u can tell me anything “sumi said
” ma.. Vo when I left from car.. I hided. Myself behind a small Hut nearby.. Then someone sprayed something near me n I fell unconscious.. Bt before that.. I can see that, that person has same locket as urs in neck”swara told
Listening to this sumi’s color faded…
“did you tell about this to anyone else ” sumi aak
She nods no..
” beta if u see that person again.. Or u feel anything suspicious tell that to me.. Okay? ” sumi said
Sanskar was listening to their talks n got worried..
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3 WEEK LATER
“ma.. M taking swara to hospital.. N then we will go to shopping “sanskar shouts
” okay, but beta be careful.. Swara ka plaster aaj he katega” ap said
“annu bhabhi.. When sanskar is with swara u don’t need to worry “sumi said
” correct ma!! “sanskar said n left
@hospital
“swara u just sit here.. I will come in two minutes.. Next turn is urs.. If they call u then just go in.., okay?” he said
“sir please come back soon “swara said
” definitely “he said n left
Here swara peep into the room n doctor was cutting plaster of a 5yr old kid.. N that kid was crying… Swara got scared by seeing the instruments which are being used to cut plaster
” oh god!! No way I don’t want my plaster to cut.. Yeah m fine with this”she thought n left
Sanskar came back m saw swara missing.. He panics.. He searched everywhere.. At last he went towards his car n saw swara sitting in.. He felt relieved
“what are you doing here… Come next turn is our ” he said
” n-no.. Sir.. I don’t want my plaster to cut “she said
Sanskar give her” are you serious “look
” sir please na.. They are using big big.. Dangerous weapons to cut plaster.. N m scared of them” swara said in nervousness
Sanskar burst out laughing listening to her..
“why are you laughing.. “she ask
” oh god! Mera bachha u r so cute.. ” saying this he pulls her cheeks..
” sir please na.. Lets go back.. M fine with this plaster shell” she said
“nothing will happen.. Trust me.. “he forward his hand
She held his hand and unwillingly went in n finally her plaster is removed..
” hmm.. Her hand is fine bt still don’t strain this.. Okay.. N continue these medicines for 2 more weeks” doc said
“thank you doctor “sanskar thanked him n left
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@car
“so lets go to shopping” he ask
“what’s the need of shopping sir.. I hv so many things “swara said
” those things belongs to swara bose n these things will belong to swara maheshwari “he said
” sir, won’t you feel embarrassed cz of me.. As I belong to poor family “she ask
” yeah I will be embarrassed ” he said
These words bring tears in her eyes.. But his continuation makes her smile
” I will be embarrassed cz I don’t hv so much love like u.. M not selfless like u.. M not that much rich by heart like u… In short cz m not swara ” he said
” thank you sir” she said
“ya ya. Love you too “he said
Precap: new entry
Thank you so much guys for ur b’day wishes.. It means alot to me.. For the first time I got bday wishes over the world.. Lol.. But seriously.. I love you all..
When I joined TU some 4 months back.. I never knew that u guys will shower ur love on me..
Luv u all
87 Comments
Awesome dear.I missed ur ff aloooooot.
When will swara will call sanskar by his name. Keep that scene like sanskar asking swara to call him by name n she rejecting n sanskar fake anger n finally he succeed in making her call his name.if possible keep it.precap is interesting.
Will be waiting for next part.post asap. When will u post next part
Thank-you so much dear!!!
She will call him by name soon…
Will post next asap..
Awww….Meher baccha…frndship mein no thanks…..we r happy that we could contribute ittu sa to make u happy on your bday….
N mast chappy…..n i can say simple sa happy happy wala chappy without any twist…but u cant stay long like that…so then waiting for the new entry in next episode…
Baby that wasn’t ittu sa… that was huge!!!
Lol.. yeah I can’t stay without that.. ?
It was awesome dear…. Loved it????n the new entry….???? Hope he/she may be positive…. Update soon dear….
Thank-you so much dear…
Umm I still have not decided the shade.. let’s see??
awesome update dear
Thank-you
Awesome update meher…
Thank-you
Its awesome and very emotional…. I cried during swara and shomi part… Even swasan part…. Very nice….
Thank-you so much dear!!!
it was awsm meher…
nd i am glad tht we brought smile on your face on your birthday…
n really excited abt the new entries….
update soon…
love you…
Thank-you dear…
Hwz u now? Take care.
Luv you loads
so sweet………..
Thank-you
Nice….new entry????
Plz upload soon
Thank-you..
Will post asap
My dear meher… Another awesome chappy… Loved it..i was waiting for ur ff…missed it so badly…update kuchh iss tarah 2 asap..eagerly waiting to see sparsh-swara-sanskar..
Atlast swara promised that she will not elope.. Thank god..swasan conversation were nice…loved swasan alot… Swasan rockz…now their marriage date is also fixed… They r made for each other…Yipee..glad to knw this happywala news..i thought that dadi may create some mess there too…but nothing happened..waiting to see our swara as swara sanskar maheshwari…
Now sumi talked to swara…u did a good thing by not dragging silent treatment drama..
Its the first time u r giving a episode in which vamp dadi n her deeds r not there..to be honest this was a good episode without any evils..
Who is that person who sprayed something near swara that made her unconsious??..they didnt harm her but made her unconsious.. But why..feels something fishy..is that to take the chain from swara..they may know that the chain has microphone n gps.. If it is so then how that person came to knw that.. Is the culprit among themself…sanky u save ur bachha from evils around u..that person has the same chain as that of sumi..who is that..dadi or someone else..will sumi’s daughter return back??.. Will anything happen like that.. Who is that new entry.. Hope that the person is good n will never create mess in swasan’s love life.. Will he share a positive or negative shade??…eagerly waiting to know that..
Hospitalwala scenes were funny enough.. Also loved the talk b/w swasan especially sanskar’s.. He is indeed a precious gem..also our swara..
Update next episode asap..waiting for it..also update my fav kuchh iss tarah 2…really missed u…by the way hw was ur b’day..hope that u enjoyed it to the fullest.. Love u so much dear…take care
OhMyGosh aedfhjjccgjvxssgj! Little princess! A loo000nnnnngloo000nnnnng leengthhy comment ahem ahem *looks pointedly at u*
I will post kit2 day after tomorrow…..
Yeah even m excited for their marriage.. cz I HV to give a good marriage here..?
Yup an episode with emotion only no evil
That person will play an important role in Swasan’s life.. yeah that’s only because of her locket.. that person is indeed an insider
Sumi’s daughter will return or not this we have to see… The new entry will be positive or negative will depend.. I haven’t decided the shade yet…
I will post kit2 soon..
Bday was osm.. after all u all gave me soooooo good wishes…
Luv you loads
awesome…
Thank-you
Awesome dear..soo cute
Thank-you dear
Awesome …
Thank-you
OMG I’m cho cholly Di I didn’t wish u on ur b’day. I’m really really really really really cholly. Happy Belated Birthday ?????????????????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Episode was awesomeeeee! But when will Swara start calling Sanskar by his name? Pls make her do it Na?
Love,
Rain
Thank-you so much dear!!!
She will soon call him by name
Luv you
Waoooo……loved it. .great part….sanskar s love to swara is dooo lovely. ..vvv sweet and great episode ??
Thank-you so much dear
Aww my baby! U made me cry *sobs like a small kid* but seriously I’ve missed a number of chapters *sighs*
This epi is emotional *gives tissue paper to everyone to wipe their tears*????? XD
And that love which we’ve for u is only because of u sissy so thanks to u for coming in our lives:’3 ^^
*showers flowers on everyone and gives dairy milk to u meher * happy birthday once again
When’re u giving me treat haan?
*shouts out ur name ‘meher meher meher’ *??? ;P
Sorry to make you cry??
No no u all love me cz u love me nothing else?
I want dairy milk silk fruit n nuts…
Treat!?! Ye Kya hota hai????
It’s simple meher,’ T’ for treat . just like T.R.E.A.T . I think u got this;)
hi meher u know i have became fan of urs . lovely episode, and sorry HAPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY belated BDAY. MAY GOD GIVE U AL;L HAPPINESS, LOVE AND ALSO BIG DAIRY MILK SILK CHOCOLATES, yummy na soch kar muh mein pani aa gaya. u should be thinking who is dis idiothi i m parul new 2 here and i an idiot MEANS INTELLIGENT DOCTOR IN OPERATION THEATRE LOL . i know it was pj ok bye tc and lots of love anddd last but not d least mujhse fraandship karoge ,yes then ok and no to phir koi baat nhi parul bette luck next time. now i will stop my bak bak n making u bore last byeeee
Thank-you so much dear for these lovely wishes!!!
Lol!! I love the full from of idiot???
Umm friendship… Vo.. actually.. Kya hai Na.. vo… Umm…
Of course kqrungi year…! Ye hai puchne wali baat hai!!
awesome meher, loved it and i am sorry i dint wish on ur bday. i wish u a happy belated birthday. love u keep smiling 🙂
It’s okay dear,
Thank-you for your wishes..
Luv you
Thank God, everything is fine now.?
Loved swasan bonding ????
Omg????new entry,positive or negative ???
Overall, awsm chappy.Waiting for nxt.
Plz update KIT 2?????
Take care ? ???
Thank-you so much dear!!!
I will update that day after tomorrow…
Luv you loads
Hi meher nice episode love swasan bond but hwo is the person seats talking about and that locket looks like something interesting eating for next part please update next part soon
Thank-you so much dear…
Hope you will like that too…
Luv you loads
meher dear it was stuoenduous as always i am tired of saying it every day lol loved swasan bond evry much swasan rocks dear being a swasanian i love this ff and kit2 to the core of my heart dear and about wishing u happy birthday u really deserve more than that for giving us such a wonderful ff from now we are sisters dear i have posted one shot here is the link for you http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-os-sriya/ hope you read it dear anyways love u loads sissy keep smiling always
Thank-you so much dear…
Of course we are sissies
I will definitely read that dear
great and awesome!!
Thank-you
Di why can’t I stop myself from commenting on ur ff’s? U r always so so very frsh in ur approach and ur concepts are so very new and realisitic….and when Sanskaar calls Swara as mera bachha….I jus love it….simply love it….imagining that I was Swara obv….but di….when will Swara call Sanskaar by his name instead of that silly sir? The precap looks interesting di…and di….though I’ve wished u on ur bday still again I’m saying may u celebrate many many more such bdays and always stay happy…love u di??
U can’t stop urselfcz u love me dear!!! Thank-you so much dear..
U know I too love when he calls her mera Bachha!!
Soon she will call him.. but after marriage
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Aww thank-you so much…
Luv you loads
Awesome Di….aapne toh b’day ke baare me bolke mujhe senti hi kar diya????? n ya thank u for the wishesh…u know u were the first to fish me..n yup about chappy…it was as always ekdum mast..???
So sweet swara n sanskaar…???
N yup post soon….coz school se aate hi me pehle aapki story dhoondti hu…n my mom is like beta Ghar me mobile chord ke hum log bhi h????
N ya meri treat… This is not fair ha?? aapne dp bhi change nhi ki??????
Lol.. to or Senti! Hahahaha
Yeah I know I wished u first..?
I will post asap.. mumma ko bola.. tu PE terko Teri copy mill hai?re
Treat!!! Ye Kya hota hai
Mumma ko bolungi ki meri kumbh meme khoyi hui behen mil gayi???
Or haa maine private settings me aapko block nhi kiya h..
Haha haha ye theek h..
Mine b block no Kia ye sb tu ki sazish h iska mtlb
Yeah tu par aaj kal se ki park Bhabhi ka asar ho raha hh?????
awesome
Thank-you
Loved it ❤️ it was awesome but plz dont seperate Swasan ❤️
Thank-you dear!! Don’t worry
awsm..
Thank-you
Happy b’day dear…..n chap. It’s just awesome…..enjoy ur day…..
Thank-you so much dear
Hey sissy.. to be very lated happy bday.. sry I coulnt post IWL on ur bday.. bt I posted today.. In dat part I also mentioned it that next part will be dedicated to u.. do read sissy.. Its very special part..
& Episode was as usual fantastic.. excited fr new entry.. hope it will be a positive character.. 😉 😀 .. hehe.. Dont mind.. jst kidding..
Thank-you so much Sissy
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Let’s whether it will be positive or negative…
Luv you
Mystry toh badthi hi jarahi hai??
Ab new entry bhi hai?
Waiting for the new entry?
Ep toh bohottttt accha tha.
Mera bacha??? u used it and i loved it??? perfectly timed?
Well hamsabne wish kiya lekin humara treat kahan hai???????
Waiting for treat too???
Lots of love???
Aur baaki sab FAMILY MEMBERS.
Where r u all?????
I only saw bhai and bhabhi.
Where r others????
Haan ji new entry bhi…
Yeah I know u loved that that’s why m using that????
Treat Kya hota hai???
Family members gayab ho Gye hai yr.. police ko btana pdega
Treat ka matlab hota hai ki aap humhe apni taraf se party de???
Police me complain kar na hi padega.
Cuz sab ek sath gayab ho gaye hai.
Lagta hai kisine kidnap kar liya hai??
Achha ye hota h treat!!!
But main Kyu Doon…?????????