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Here comes the next part. Thanks again for your sweet comments and for the likes.
It was 9 o`clock in the morning and Saanchi opened her eyes. She found herself in a big bed in a completely new room. She was never here…
When she sat up straight, she looked around. The room was smaller than Kabir`s room. Then she saw two small round shaped glasses. And outside there was water…
Saanchi thinks: God. Is this a yacht?
She got up, took Kabir´s shirt which was lying on a chair and walked the stairs up.
Then she saw Kabir infront … He was shirtless and adjusting the sails.
When he saw Saanchi he smiled.
Kabir: Wait, I am coming. I´ve already prepared breakfast.
Saanchi: What? Wait. First tell me how and when we got into this yacht. And where are we?
Kabir: As you see we are in the ocean. I got you in the yacht last night, but you were already asleep.
Saanchi: Do you really think Catherine is so dangerous that she can harm us?
Kabir (took a deep breath): She´s emotionally unstable Saanchi. Such people can do anything.
Both went to eat breakfast and then they sat down on the front side of the yacht. It was windy and Saanchi´s hair was moving beautifully in the breeze. She looked out of the yacht with a smile on her lips. Kabir was admiring her beauty. She looked flawless. Kabir then turned the yacht and in the afternoon they came back. As Isha and Pragya were home Kabir dropped her at her place.
Kabir: see you tomorrow evening Saanchi ? I will come to the hospital.
Saanchi: Yes oke ?
Both smiled and kissed slowly. When saanchi saw that Pragya and isha were staring she stopped and hugged Kabir again.
The next day Saanchi and Pragya went to hospital. Pragya had a half day work , while Saanchi had to stay till the evening that day.
After work she was in the wardrobe. While she was packing her bag she heard some steps. Afraid that it was Catherine she turned back, but it was Raghav, her senior.
Saanchi: Hi Raghav. What are you doing here? Isn´t your wardrobe on the other side.
Raghav: Well Saanchi Mishra. Yes it is, but I wanted to talk to you about some serious issue. (saying this he came near her)
Saanchi What exactly? ( Saanchi slowly stepping back but then she hit the cupboard)
Raghav (not stopping walking ahead): If you are already so keen in sleeping with seniors, like Kabir just to get good positions…..
Saanchi couldn´t move an inch and was very afraid
Raghav continues: Then dear Saanchi, I suggest that you should sleep with me. I can give it to you like no man has ever given it.
Saanchi was now disgusted and she felt his raw hands on her face
Raghav: So instead of Kabir you should do it with me Saanchi!
Saanchi took his hand, twisted it back and defended herself with kicking with her knee.
She opened the door and ran out of the hospital where Kabir was already waiting with his Chauffeur Stevens.
Saanchi had tears and couldn`t get a word straight.
Kabir took her in his arms.
Kabir: What happened Saanchi? Tell me.
Saanchi: That.. Ragh… Raghav. He tried to.. He tried to touch me Kabir !
Kabir: That Bastard. (saying this he wanted to go in but sanchi held him back)
Saanchi: Please Kabir don´t let me alone. Please
Kabir: I won´t let you alone (he hugs her and nod to Stevens to go in)
Few hours later Saanchi and Kabir were sitting in Kabir´s room. Kabir was phoning. When he finished:
Kabir: It´s done.. He is suspended
Saanchi: So fast?
Kabir: Yes… Now let´s eat something . It was a long day.
Saanchi got up and sat down on his lap.
Saanchi: I love you
Kabir: I love you too. I wanted to ask you, if you want.. you know you can take some clothes and I can give you a key to my flat.
Saanchi: Mr. Kabir. Are you asking me to move in?
Kabir: You could say so Ms Saanchi.
Saanchi: I would like to…. Then I have to get my clothes tomorrow.
Kabir: Okay. I will drive you if you go in the morning.
After a beautiful night they woke up.
Kabir and Saanchi drove to Saanchi´s flat. Pragya and Isha were already gone.
Kabir: I can come with you
Saanchi: No it´s oke. I have to come another time anyways to get everything. I am just taking some clothes and some essentials.
She went up into he flat and she searched for her things. She turned back after finishing and saw Catherine. She looked the same… Depressive… But this time an gun in her right hand was pointing to saanchi´s head.
Saanchi was in shock..
Saanchi: I know you are Catherine. Calm down. Kabir always talks about you. Everyday. He misses you.
Catherine: Stop it. What do you have that I don´t? You can´t give him what I did. Obedience. What does make you better?
Saanchi: Nothing. I am nothing.
Catherine: But he sleeps with you in his bed..
Saanchi: How do you know?
Catherine: He is different with you. Completely different. You are allowed to call him by his name. I loved him
Saanchi: I know. But
Catherine shoots on the ceiling and Saanchi was like frozen. The next second Kabir came in and he looked at Catherine. He told her to point the gun to him. Then he took her gun and told her to kneel down. And she knelt down.
Saanchi was shocked about what was happening.
Kabir: Told her to go out. He told stevens to get her home.
Saanchi slowly went out but instead of going with stevens she walked away. She couldn´t believe what she had just seen. So much obedience. Even in this situation. This was Kabir´s past life and he needed it. He looked at the photo of Kabir´s mother in her bag. She was tall… slightly brown and had very long hair… She thought about everything.. She didn´t look at her watch and it was already dark and rainy when she finally got to Kabir.
Kabir: Where were you Saanchi? I was so worried. (he hugged her) I know you must be shocked
Saanchi: I was shocked to see her with the gun. But the greater shock was you Kabir. Your way of handling it. Her obedience.. I can never give that to you Kabir…
Kabir: I don´t need anything Saanchi. Not anymore. I just need you!
Saanchi: But you were so dominant..
Kabir: I am not dominant. I am sadist. I like to torture women who ..
Saanchi: Who look like your mother
Kabir: Yes.. And I know how creepy that is. But I changed.. For you.. for us.
In the night Kabir was dreaming bad and Saanchi cups his face with her hands.
Saanchi: Shhh.. Everything will be alright.
Kabir opened his eyes and saw her.
Kabir: Will you marry me?
Saanchi: what?
Kabir: Will you marry me?
Saanchi: Kabir … You are talking while sleeping..
He closed his eyes and Saanchi smiled.
She hugged him and slept. Whatever happens.. she felt safe in his arms.
PRECAP: Saanchi asks Kabir if he remembers anything he said last night…
Thanks for reading ? Next episode will be the last one. I have plans to start a new one which is based on Turkish drama Ask laftan anlamaz (or the Pakistani dub version: Pyaar lafzon mein kahan). Please drop your comments if you like that idea…
15 Comments
Superb..The idea of the story is nice..
Waiting for the next update..
Post it as soon as possible..
Take care..
Thank you Aafia!
Awsm n amazing
Thanks Risuu! 🙂
Amazing episode miya, the idea of new ff is superb, waiting for next part of 50 shades
Thank you Samidha 🙂
Amazing
Thanky Amnaa 🙂
Amazing dear but I like if you continue this .. I read 50 shades of grey and series but your story is really amazing with kabir and sanchi ….& Yes it’s also good to plan a story based on pyar lafzon me kaha{ also my fav one} but still I want you to continue this one.if possible
Thanks Anne! I will try but can´t guarantee.. So happy that you like the new ff idea 🙂
So so amazing and emotional episode yaar……….kanchi ka bonding bhot sweet and beautiful laga…….. Thanks dear for give us this beautiful story……….love u dear……..tc yaar………..
Thanks Anu 🙂 Thanks for your support 🙂
superb ff and you starting a new ff and which on my favorite serial ask laftan analmaz….. i just watch all episodes of it it was superb serial…….i just thought once if kanchi will be in place of murat and hayat in that show??? and you will write ffs on it thank you for it…..RS should learn something from them……..please post that ff soon…..
tc and love you….
Aww Thank youu Dhruti! I am also a big fan of Hayat and Murat 😀 Thanks for your love and support 🙂