Loo it’s me Afa
Continues
Doctor in low voice:sorry to say…..she is no more…
Boys:what!!!!.
Chumzz felt like their bloodcirculation is stopped…chumzz holds their hand each other…They don’t want believe that their shona is no more…
Sanskar stood like a wood…. his heart stopped beating….only tears was falling from his eyes…Sanskar was about fall…boys holds him…
Manik:Sanskar…
Sanskar holds doctors collar:what…If you say that again…I will kill…how she can leave us…doctor please check her once again…
He holds doctor’s leg..
Sanskar: please doctor….. give my shona back…I want to leave my life with her…I want to shear my happiness with her…she is my life…I love her…I can’t leave without her…Please doctor…
Kunj:Sanskar…
He makes him to stand…
Chumzz was shocked to know Sanskar loves swara…
Chumzz goes near swara…who was lying on bed…very calmly…
Twinkle:shona its enough…wake up…
Nandini:we know you’re big dramabazzz…
Mahi:hai pattaka…Please simle once..
Sam holds her hand:shona…For last time…If you not wake up..We never going to talk to you….
Ragini with filled eyes: please yaar…
Chumzz was not able to say anything more…because words was stacked in their throats…only tears was speaking…
Out said the room…
Doctor in sad tone:sorry…
Nile holds Sanskar’s shoulder…
Sanskar:guys don’t worry…nothing will happened to her…
He runs from their…
Uvi:Sanskar…
He was about to go behind him…
Laksh:no yaar…leave him alone…
Sanskar goes near one idol…He drops his knee…He joints his hand each other…
Sanskar:god give me my swara back only you can do it….you can’t close your eyes in front of my love…you have to give my swara back…you made me to feel for her…I started to love her at first sight…The day when she proposed me…I need her….I am asking you… give me my life back …If you can’t then take me and give her back…hey zindagi chalto rahi thi…but when she came to my life I started to live my I started to love my life….Please god give me one chance…Please…
He shows his hand to fire…I will take my hand…when you give my shona back to me…(there was no more tears in his eyes to cry)
It’s not your fault…Its my fault I believed in you….
In room…
Chumzz:shona…Sanskar loves you….Please open your eyes for him…
There was any reply from swara…
Chumzz Holds Swara’s Hand Tightly…
( Out said the room…
The fire was hit his hands..but he bear that pain for his love…
In room…
Chumzz try to wake up swara….
( Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Chahe tujhko rab bulaa le
Hum na rab se darne waale
Raahon mein dat ke khade hain hum
Yaaron se nazrein chura le
Chahe jitna dum lagaa le
Jaane na tujhko aise denge hum
Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin
Do kadam ka yeh safar hai
Umr chhoti si dagar hai
Ek kadam mein ladkhadaya kyoon
Sunn le yaaron ki yeh baatein
Beetengi sab ghum ki raatein
Yaaron se rootha hai saale kyoon
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Maa ne khat mein kya likhaa tha
Jiye tu jug yeh kahaa tha
Chaar pal bhi jee na paaya tu
Yaaron se nazrein milaa le
Ek baar tu muskura de
Uth ja saale yun sataata hai kyoon
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge nahin
Jaane nahin… denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe… denge)
Playss…
Chumzzz leaves Swara’s hand….They was about to go…
Swara Suddenly:HHHHHHHHHHHHH (Takes Long Breath….)
Chumzz turns towards her…
Ragini by a huge simle:shona….
Radika:Doctor…..shona…
Doctor comes:what happened…
Sam:doctor shona…
Doctor was shocked to see miracle: please go out…
Chumzz kiss swara….They leaves from their…
Boys:what happened…
Twinkle:shona ( she was not able to speak in happiness…
Laksh: please say what happened….
Chumzz was not careing about boys….They was lost in their happiness….
From back sharmishta and shekar….
Sharmishta:shona….
Chumzzz:aunty…
Shekar :how is she…..
Sharmishta was crying bitterly…
Ragini:Anuty…shona is…
Doctor comes….
Shekar runs near doctor:doctor how is our shona…
Doctor:she is fine now…
Sharmishta:can I see…
Doctor: of course….she need rest…and take care of her…
Boys:Thank you god…
Kunj:were is Sanskar…
They started to search him…
In said the room…
Sharmishta:shona…
She hugs her and kiss her forehead…
Swara:mamma I am fine…Please stop crying…
Shekar: stop it shona…you don’t know what was our situation…We love you beta…
Swara:I love you too Mr shekar…hahaha…
Sharmishta:tum bii na shona…
Shekar:keep laughing always…
Swara:if I laugh always people will think I am mad…
Chumzz from back:you all ready a mad what to think…
Shekar and sharmishta: we will meet doctor..come just now…take care of her…
Chumzz:done…
They both leaves…
Chumzz tightly hugs swara…They started to kiss her…
Ragini kiss her forehead…
Sam kiss her one cheek..
Mahi kiss her another cheek…
Chumzz looks each other…
Swara tightly sheds her lip…chumzz started to laugh….
Nandini in teasing tone: we no need your lip…
Outside the room…
Near idol..
Manik: Sanskar what are you doing…
Kunj holds his hand: enough..
Laksh:Sanskar…swara is fine…
Sanskar in shock…
Nile:ha Sanskar…she is fine…
Sanskar runs from their…
Room..
Chumzzz:shona…Sanskar loves you…
A cute simle spreads Swara’s face….
Sanskar enters to the room…He stopped they by seeing smiling face of swara…
Twinkle:I think we should go from here…
They leave….
Sanskar moves close to her…
Swara:mutoo…
Sanskar hugs her….
Swara:what is this mutoo…why are you crying…
Sanskar: I can’t explain…what I am feeling now…
Swara:ohh…really…
She saw his hand..which was burned…
Swara:what happened to your hand…
Sanskar:nothing…
Swara :really….who told you to burn your hand…
Sanskar:my heart…which was beating for you…I don’t want to lost you…I can’t think about…
A simle spreads on her face…but she hides it…
Swara: so what you’re burning your self this not good.
Sanskar:I will do anything for you….
Swara don’t what to say….she changes topic: Sanskar your smelling a bad smell… you doesn’t bath…
Sanskar in anger:it’s not me..its you..
He pulls her close to him…
Sanskar:swara…wo I…
Swara: please go and bath first….
She laughs…
Boys:can we..
Swara: always…
Laksh :we was very happy…at last your disturbance is going to end…but our bad fate..
Swara:I am not going to leave you guys very easily…
Kunj:how you’re felling now…
Swara:I am feeling to dance…
Manik: swara you killed us yaar…
Nile :babhi…I mean swara…
Swara blushes…
Uvi:ohh god…I can’t believe swara is blushing…
Everyone laugh….
The ends with their happy face….
After 3days
MORNING….
Big bungalow is shown…door bell rings..tin tog…
A Beautiful woman opens the door….
Woman:who are you….
Twinkle:I am twinkle…kunj’s partner…
(This is kunj’s mom Usha…)
Usha:come beta…so your twinkle…kunj always use say about you…
Twinkle takes blessing from her…
Usha keeps hand on her head:be happy always…
Twinkle:aunty…I want to meet kunj…
Usha:of course…He may be in his room…upstair first room…I will bring something to drink…
Usha moves from their…
Twinkle to herself: kunj I am going to give shock to you….
She moves towards his room…door was close… so she knocks the door….no one replied…she opens the door…and enters to the room…Room was arranged very perfectly…Each and everything placed very neatly…
Twinkle to herself:wa kunj…room is just amazing…
Suddenly she sees one painting…..which is Done by kunj…..It was her painting…Twinkle was mesmerised to see that painting…
Twinkle:how sweet…
Suddenly kunj comes from wash room…
Twinkle hides in said curtain…to give surprise to him…
Kunj feels strange feeling in his heart…He looks at that painting…and takes that painting his hand…
Kunj started to sing: Kisi Roz Tumse
Mulaakat Hogi
Kisi Roz Tumse Mulaakat Hogi
Meri Jaan Us Din Mere Saath Hogi
Magar Kab Na Jaane Ye Barsaat Hogi
Mera Dil Hai Pyaasa
Mera Dil Akela
Zara Tasveer Se Tu Nikalke Saamne Aa
Meri Mehbooba…
Ohhh god time…
He keeps that painting…He gets ready for college…He sees twinkle through mirror….
Kunj: Twinkle…did she came from that painting….Twinkle…
Twinkle started to laugh…
Kunj:No kunj twinkle is not here…
Twinkle:kunj…
She can’t control her laughing….
Twinkle: kunj…how cute you’re…
Kunj:twinkle…tum ya haa…I can’t believe…
Twinkle: kunj…
Kunj hugs her:twinkle…how…. when did you came…
Twinkle: I came when you was in washroom…
Kunj:ohh god…why did you came here…
Twinkle puts his shirts buttons:wo…I thought to give surprise to you..and today is our last day of competition…kunj I am going to miss you…
She keeps her head on his chest…
Kunj hugs:when you miss me close your eyes…. you can see me…
twinkle breaks the hug…her hair stucks on his button…she pulls her hair…by mistake both falls to bad…now kunj is above her…kunj slowly moves his hand on her waist…pulls her close to him…her hot breath was hitting on him…They close their eyes…They was about to kiss…
Usha knocks the door….
They both comes back to scene…
kunj:mom….
Kunj runs and opens the door…
Usha: what you both were doing here…
Kunj: I was teaching her some chemistry….
Usha:ohh…
Twinkle:kunj…I think we should leave…
Usha:No…first breakfast….
Kunj:mom…
Twinkle:ok aunty…
Usha:good girl…
They both does breakfast…They leaves to college…
At college…
In class….
Chumzz:yaar today is last day of our competition…After that exams…projects….oh god
Laksh: this is last round….don’t know who going to win this competition…
Manik:you don’t know… but I know…
Nandini:who…
Manik:we…unicorn winners…
Chumzz:born to win…
Suddenly kabir enters to the class room….
Kabir: hello everyone…
Boys:hey…
Kabir sits near Sam…
Kabir:hey Sam…will you like to come with me…
Sam looks at chumzz…
Chumzz sing through eyes to go…..
Sam:ya…
Kabir:thank you so much….
They both leaves…
Uvi :were is that Nile….
Nile :good morning guys…
Chumzz and boys:hey..
Nile:girls were is Sam…
Mahi:she went with kabir…
Nile in shock:what..where….when…
Kunj:soo many questions….
Nandini:just now….
by hearing that he runs from there…
Boys:suddenly what happened to him…
In garden…
Sam and kabir…
Kabir holds her hand…
Kabir:Sam I want to know about you…your life your taste….I want give you every happiness…when your near me…I feel very special…I love you Sam..
Sam takes her hand:woo….kabir…
Kabir:do you love Nile…
From back Nile in anger: Sam….what are you doing here….did you forgot today is our last day of competition…
Sam feels happy…Nile is shouting at her but she can see his possessiveness….
Sam smiles…
Nile:sorry to disturb….Sam come with me….
she did think a second…she said:ok….
She goes with Nile….
Kabir felt very sad…but he understood…. they loves each other very much….
In class…
Ragini started to vomit…
Laksh:Ragini…what happened to you suddenly…
Chumzz:haa…laddo…what happened…
Boys in teasing tone:Laaakkshhh….
Laksh:shut up….Ragini please say something….
Ragini:Laksh don’t be tensed…I am fine…don’t why I feeling to vomit…
Chumzz:come let’s go to hospital…
Ragini:no way….today is last day of competition I have to be here…..
Boys:for us more than competition…your important…
Chumzz:we will manage laddo…
Ragini:but…In any cost we have to win…
Chumzz and boys: promise…
Ragini again vomits…
Laksh:Ragini look at yourself….
Ragini:I am fine…
Laksh:stop it and come with me…
They leaves to hospital….
In ground…
Chumzzz:without laddo and shona….its boring…
Boys:don’t worry after competition….We’re going there itself na…
Twinkle:don’t know what happened to laddo suddenly…
Mahi:hope everything is fine….
Radika:were is Arjun sir…
Manik:looo sir came….
Arjun:good morning….
Radika:good morning sir….
Arjun’s eye started to search for Ragini…
Nandini: sir….what you’re searching…
Arjun: were is princess…
Kunj: princess…
Arjun:I mean Ragini….
Uvi:hooo…..Ragini is not well….
Arjun: what….happend to her….
Sam: suddenly she started to vomit….
Arjun:were is she…
Twinkle:in hospital…laksh toke her to hospital..
Arjun:I want to see her now…
He was about to go….
Princi:good morning everyone….today is our last round of competition…
3 teams are in finale…All the best to all….so from each team today I am going to call the competitors…from bluster rocksss krishana and piya….
From star strangers….Roshan and payal…
From unicorn winners…Laksh and Ragini….
Boys and chumzz:ohh god…
Boys:what we will do now…
Princi:be ready for last round…who wins this round their winners of this competition….so do well…
Nandini:laksh and Ragini is not here….
Princi goes near unicorn winners:all the best do it well…where is Laksh and Ragini….
Kunj:wo….
Radika:Ragini is not well sir….so laksh toke her to hospital…
Princi:what….shitt…you guys are telling me now….
Uvi:I think we should quite this competition…
Princi:what….how can you say like that…i believed in you guys…at last moment you guys cheated me…….
Nile:any one of us can participate…
Princi:no….you guys play each round nha….now Ragini and laksh’s time…
Arjun:me and adika will play this round for Ragini and Laksh…
Radika:but sir….how can we….
Arjun:your not ready to play for your friend…
Radika :yes…
Princi:wo…
After couple of minutes..
Princi: okay…but in any cost you have to win this competition…
Arjun in his mind:I will do anything for you my princess….I will win this for you Ragini…
Arjun:yes….
Princi announce: this is 7th round of this competition….so this last round is bike race…haa one more thing instead of Laksh and Ragini…Arjun and Radika going play this round…Best of luck…
Competition starts…
Arjun:Radika hold me tightly….
Radika:sir….
Bike race starts…
Arjun in high speed…
Again only ten minute is remaining to reaches at finishing point…
Suddenly someone pushes Arjun..
Arjun loses his balance…He falls….
His hand hits ground…
Radika was safe….
5 minutes is remaining…
Princi lost his hope to win….
Chumzz and boys holds their hand each other….
Radika:sir….are you fine…
Arjun:ya I am fine….
But his hand was bleeding…
Radika:I think we can’t win this competition….
Arjun:no…I want to win this competition…
In his mind:for first I’m going to do something for my princess….I will…
Arjun started his bike again in high speed…
Radika tightly holds him….
Only two minutes remaining….
Arjun and star stranger….reaches fishing at same time….
Every one was confused about winners…
Judges checks in cctv photo age…..
Everyone cross their finger for best…
Chumzz close their eyes tightly….
Arnav:so here is result…winners of this competition isss star strangersss not….unicorn winners….
Raman: the last round winners are unicorn winners…
Abhi:congratulations….
Princi: thank you so much….my students…
Radika:sir….We won….
Radika hugs have Arjun….
Chumzz:eeeeee….We won.
Boys:at last Arjun sir did it….
In happiness they don’t know what to do….
Princi:congratulations team unicorn winner…
Chumzz and boys:born to win…
Princi: I arranged party tonight…For everyone….and we will distribute prices for winners…The party will be held at college…and I plan dress code….Once again congratulations for team unicorn winners and other teams all the best for further….
Arjun leaves from their to hospital…
In class room…
Mahi:Chumzzz move fast…
Twinkle: ya come let’s go…
Nandini:ohh god tonight party…I need go parlour…..
Sam:ho Ho…tum bi na Nandu…
Kunj:we can’t wait any more we are leaving…
Radika:ok come let’s go…
Mahi:I hope Ragini is fine…
They all leaves to hospital…
In hospital….
Laksh to doctor:doctor how is she….and what happened to her…
Doctor:she is fine….her body is week so she vomited…but now she is fine…After one hour you take her…
Laksh:thank you doctor…
Doctor: she is not taking food at Time…so her body is week…don’t worry…
Doctor leaves from their….Ragini was sleeping bcoz of medicine….
Laksh cares her hair…He kiss her forehead…
Ragini wake ups…she holds her collar…
Ragini: Mr laksh….don’t worry I am fine…
Laksh:shut up….your so careless…
Ragini kiss his hand:your with me na….why I should take care myself…
Suddenly Arjun enters to the room…
Laksh was embarrassed by his sudden entry…
Arjun runs to Ragini…
Arjun with filled eyes:Ragini….what happened to you…
He holds her hand…
Ragini:sir….I am fine…
Arjun:wait I will bring juice for you…
Ragini:no sir….I am fine…
Ragini coughs..
Arjun gives water to her:are you fine…
Ragini with tears:kaash I had brother like you…
Arjun was shocked by his her words…In his mind:how to say I am your brother…
He was about to kiss her for head…
Laksh in anger:sir….wo
Arjun:haaa….If want you can go….
Laksh:no…..I don’t want to go…
In his mind:what happened to this sir…. the way he behaves with Ragini…no laksh nothing like that…leave it…
Boys and chums:hi guys…
Radika:sir…
Nandini:laddo we won…
Laksh:what…
Manik:Ho Laksh competition…
Ragini:what….We won…I can’t believe..Thank god…
By seeing Ragini’s happiness…A cute smile spreads on Arjun’s face…
Arjun was about to go…
Radika:Arjun sir won this competition for you….
Ragini:for me….
She holds Arjun’s hand….
Ragini:thank you sir…
Arjun keeps his hand on her head….
He goes from their…
Twinkle:laddo are you fine now…
Ragini:now I am fine….
Laksh:Ragini are you sure….
Nandini:then let’s go to shona’s
Suddenly laksh’s phone rings…
Laksh:hello Sanskar…
Sanskar:laksh what happened to Ragini….
Laksh: nothing yaar now she is fine….and good news we won competition….
Sanskar:what really….
Kunj takes phone from laksh’s hand:haa….We won….
Manik:were are you….
Swara:in my house….
They puts phone in speaker….
Twinkle:shona….how are you…
Swara:I am awesome…
Nandini: Princi planed party for us…
Swara:woooow….
Ragini:today you coming to party na…
Swara:ha…why not…how are you…
Sam:she is fine…We miss you badly…
Swara:me too…
Mahi: shona we have to wear saree tonight…
Swara:what….
Boys:ohh god they again started their bakwas…
Sanskar ends the call..
Ragini:come let’s go…
Nandini:ok…
They leaves…
While going Uvi pulls Mahi to one corner….
Mahi:Uvi what are you doing….
He pins her to the wall…
He moves close to her…
Mahi in low voice:Uvi…
Uvi:mmmm…
Mahi:come let’s go…
Uvi:I want to spend some time with you….
Mahi:Uvi wo….
From back chumzz and boys clears their throat…
Uvi and Mahi comes to scene….
Mahi:wo…
Everyone laughs at them…
Night at Nandini’s house….
Nandini was Trying to wear saree…
Nandini to herself anger:what the hall….ohh god who identified this saree….I feed up with this….
And that Princi who told him to make dress code….and mom today itself she need to go nani’s house….
Suddenly someone folds her eyes by hand…
Nandini:haaaaaa….
Manik :shhhhh…shhhhh…Please chup hoja…
Nandini:tum…what are you doing here…
Manik: I came to buy fish…
Nandini: please don’t disturb me…
Manik:Nandini I will help you to wear saree…
Nandini:really…
Manik holds her belly:haa…
Nandini:thank you so much sweetheart…
Manik started to help her to wear saree…
At last both stacks in saree…
Nandini:Manik what is this…
Manik:woo…If you didn’t wear saree today no problem…
Nandini anger:shut up…
Manik:Nandini…whatever…your looking hot in saree…
He pulls her close to him…slowly his lip touchs her lip….she close her eyes…
Nandini breaks lip lock….
Twinkle knocks the door:Nandu….what are doing their open the door…
Nandini:haaa coming….Manik go fast…
Manik:but…
Nandini: please….see you later I love you…
Twinkle:Nandu…
Nandini:haaa baba opening..
Manik:bye love you too…
Manik goes from their…
Nandini opens the door
Twinkle: Nandu what you were doing….Nandu look your self in mirror…
She started to laugh…
Nandini:don’t laugh…twnkii help me please….
Twinkle:ok….my dea sweetie…
At college….
Arjun were busy in preparation….
Radika comes early bcoz she have some work ….she was looking stunning in red saree….Arjun was mesmerised to see her….
Radika: hey sir…
Arjun:haa…. hey(he act as he didn’t care her)
Radika felt sad…In her mind :kadoos Arjun…what happens if he looks once at me…and give compliment
She was about go….Arjun holds her hand and pulls her close to him….He puts his hand on her belly…Radika close her eyes….
To be continued….
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