episode 35
Continues…
Looo guys it’s me Afa…here with boring ff…chappy starts…
Ready…
Steady….
Go…
Arjun tightly holds her bear belly…Radika closes her eyes….He moves close to her ear..In low voice:For first time my
heart beats stopped by seeing you…words may be less to described you beauty…
Aaj chand bhi mhujse narraz hoga kyu ki…. uske sabse keemthi our sundhar tara Aaj mere baahon mai hai…
Arjun hugs her tightly….Radika was enjoying his touch…Arjun leaves her…Radika goes from their….While going she stops near one mirror…she looks her self through mirror…A sweet smile spreads over her face…
After 1 hours…
Laksh, Manik, Kunj, Sanskar, Nile, uvi…were waiting for girls….All were looking very handsome and dashing….
Sanskar:yaar…where their…I can’t wait anymore…
Manik:ohhh.. ohh…Sanskar is very eager to meet swara…
Kunj:Sanskar keep some patients….
Boys laughs…
Sanskar:stop yaar…
After a few minutes…girls enters….
Girls was looking very hot and beautiful in saree…
Nandni weard ink blue saree…she left her hair open…In light makeup she was looking marvellous….
Ragini weard baby pink saree….she just fold hair in simple way…her baby pink lip was very attractive….she was looking outstanding…
Mahi weard black saree…she curled her hair…she give high eye shade to eye in kajal…she was looking fab…
Twinkle weard dark pink saree….she left her hair open…In simple makeup…she was looking mind blowing and very attractive….
Sam weard white saree….she simple ponytail…dark lipstick…she was looking stunning…
Swara weard sky blue saree….she low twisted her hair….she did simple
Make up…she was looking awesome….
Boys was mesmerised…
Sanskar:Swara….why you’re so late…
Nile:haa swara…He was waiting for you last one hour…
Swara:really Sanskar…
Chumzz:ohhhhh…how sweet…
Sanskar:no…okay leave it…come fast party is about to start….
They moves to college hall were party is held…
While going Manik holds Nandni’s hand…
Nandni:what happened Manik…
Manik:wo…your Looking…
Nandni:I know I am looking hot…Please don’t tell again and again…
Manik: no…your looking like miss Attitude…
He started to laugh…
Nandni:very funny…Manik look how boys are starring at me….
Manik: Nandni look how girls are starring at…
Nandni:were I can’t see…
Manik:I will show you….
He moves close to her…
Nandni:Manik…what are you doing…
He moves even more close to her…Nandni close her eyes…
After few second…
Manik:Nandni…why did you closed your eyes…
Nandini opens her eyes: wo…
Manik:wo…what…I took my phone…which was kept behind you…so I moved close to you…
Nandni:I thought…
Manik:what you thought…haa….
Nandni pushes him: why… I should give explanation to you…Please leave me alone…
She was about to….
Manik stops her: I won’t leave you alone…
Nandini:by the way Manik…your dashing in this dress…
Manik:I know…
Nandni: what you know….I was joking…
He pins her to wall..
Manik:Really…your were joking…haa..
Nandni:ha…
Manik plates one kiss on Nandni’s cheek…Nandini I love you…
From back boys…
Nile:ohh god…Manik tum yaha romance karha hi Ho…We were searching for…
Sanskar: Please Nandni leave him alone for few minutes…
Nandini:guys not me…He stopped me here…
Manik:oohhh jutti…when I stopped you..
Kunj:Manik we know who stopped…so don’t play more come fast…
They leaves from their…
In hall…
Arjun:good evening everyone and welcome to our celebration…We all know why we gathered here…For last 5 months…We were hard working for our competition…so today unicorn winner won this competition…congratulations guys…I feel proud to say that I’m their coach….enjoy the party..
Everyone gives huge applause to him…
Princi distributes trophy…
Chumzz and boys: eeeeee…Unicorn winners born to win…
Everyone appreciates them….
Princi:students enjoy the party…
Arnav:hey guys…The day came to say goodbye to this college…This one month we enjoyed a lot…I will miss you all…
Raman: kashhh this night lest forever…I don’t want to say goodbye…really yaar I am going to miss this college again…
Abhi: enough this is our last day in this college…let’s enjoy…
He singsong…
( Darwaaze ko kundi maaro
Koi na bach ke jaane paaye
DJ ko samjha do,
music ghalti se bhi ruk na jaaye
Thaka thaka jo feel kare wo jaake dou RedBull gatak le
Aur jisko dance nahi karna
Woh jaake apni bhains charaye
Bas aaj ki raat hai
Kal se wohi siyaape hain
Jee bhar ke naach lo
Na ghar waale na maape hain
Sab pe apna raaz hai
Darne ki kya baat hai
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai
(Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai)
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..)
Everyone claps for him…
Twinkle:chumzz…I will come just now…
Ragini:but were twinki…
Twinkle:washroom…
Swara:should I come…
Twinkle:no…I will come just now…
She was about to go…
Twinkle:Chumzz take my phone…
Radika:come fast…
Twinkle leaves from their…
Swara:ohh god..I can’t handle this saree…
Nandni:really yaar…
Sam:guys I am hungry…let’s have dinner….
Radika:wait…yaar let twinki come….
Suddenly someone pulls Mahi to one corner….
Corner was very dark…
Mahi:haaaaaa…she was about to howl..
He closes her mouth…
(This our uvi)
Uvi pins her to wall:shhhhhh..
Mahi was trying to free herself…
Uvi in low voice:Mahi spent some time with me…
He slowly frees her…
Mahi:uvi…
Uvi moves his to her waist….
Uvi:Mahi your looking beautiful in saree…
Mahi keeps her hand on his chest:Thank you…
Uvi: only thank you…
Mahi:ohh sorry…your looking very handsome…
Uvi:ohh god…Mahi…not that…
Mahi in confused expression:then…
Uvi moves close to her: wo….
He touches her lip by his…
Mahi close her eyes….
After five minutes they break lip lock….
Uvi:Mahi did you got it…
Mahi:mmmm…
Uvi:Mahi I love you..
Mahi :I love you too…
She hugs him tightly…
Mahi:the secure which I feel now…It can’t replaced by anything…
Uvi hugs her back:I am lucky to have you….
Mahi:come let’s move…
Uvi:ok sweetheart….
While coming back from washroom…twinkle fell as her blouse dori is opened…she touches her back by hand
Twinkle to herself: ohhh god my dori…what I will do now…
She stick herself on wall to cover her back….
My phone….how I will call chumzz…I am going to miss party…shitt….ohhh god please help…
Suddenly she here’s her voice:Twinkle what are you doing here…
She opens her eyes…
Twinkle:Kunj…thank god….
Kunj:what happened…
Twinkle:what are you doing here…
Kunj: I was searching for you…
Kunj moves towards her….Kunj in low voice :Twinkle….you look very s*xy in saree…
Twinkle:shut up Kunj….chi…shame on…
Kunj:why I should shame to give compliment to my love…
Twinkle:if It’s over….Please can you call chumzz here…
Kunj:why….kabab mein haddi….
Twinkle:don’t say anything about my chumzz…
Kunj:okk baba sorry…tell me why you need them now…
Twinkle:wo…wo…its secret between me and chumzz…I can’t share with you…
Kunj:I don’t believe you…your hiding something…
Twinkle:ohhh…you don’t believe your Twinkle…
Kunj moves close to her: no….
Twinkle herself sticks on wall…
Kunj:Twinkle…what happened to you…why you’re behaving strange…
Twinkle:nothing…
Kunj holds her waist and pulls close to him…He sees her back her dori is opened…
Kunj leave her waist and moves a cap from her….He turns his face..He feels embarrassed
Kunj:I’m… wo…I will call chumzz…
He was about to go…Twinkle holds his hand…
Twinkle:Kunj please can you tie my dori…
Twinkle turns…Kunj slowly moves his hand to her back….He moves her hair to one said… ties her dori…His hand was touching her bear back….hi kiss her back…he slowly moves his hand on her bear belly…Twinkle close her eyes…He hugs her from back very tightly…he keeps his face on her shoulder….
Kunj: Twinkle I love you….
Twinkle turns and hugs him tightly…she keeps her head on his his chest…she slowly close her eyes: I love too Kunj…I don’t know to explain what I feeling now….its very special feeling for me…
Kunj:Twinkle…I am ready to die for you…but it’s not that I am afraid to die…It takes that if I die who will love you as I do….
Twinkle:stop it Kunj…I am not going to give you to any death…even our death can’t separate us…
Suddenly Kunj’s phone rings…
Kunj:yaar Sanskar’s call…come let’s move…
Twinkle: ya…
They both moves to hall…
Nandini:guys…I have one idea…
Swara:what….
Nandini: paper dance…
Laksh:awesome….
Manik announces about it:hey guys…feeling bor na…I have one idea…let’s play paper dance…
Everyone:yeeeee…yah sure…
Manik: for winner couple….princi going to give…amazing gift…
Princi in shock:what….me…
Manik:come on sir…
Princi:ok..
They starts game….
Nile forwards his hand to Sam:Sam will you dance with me…
Suddenly kabir:Sam come let’s dance…
Sam gives a small smile…she forwards his hand to kabir:yes…Of course…
Nile felt someone hited his heart very hardy…
His eyes was filled…but hides his tears…
The game begins….
They started to dance…
Kabir and Sam was very close to each other…even they can hear their heart beats…but Sam was just looking at Neil…
Neil goes from their bcoz he don’t want to see his love in someone’s arm…Sam goes behind him….
In garden…
Neil hardy hits his hand on stone….He repeats….His hand started to bleed…
From back Sam:Neil….
(Neil stops hitting his hand….)
Sam:Neil are you mad….what are doing…ohh god your hand is bleeding…
Neil suddenly hugs her:Sam I love you….I know…I not deserve you…but I can’t see you in someone’s arm…
Sam : I love you too Neil…I was scared to say my feelings to you…I don’t want to break our friendship…
Neil: I am sorry….
Sam breaks hug:Neil…your hand…
From back kabir comes towards them by smiling: then what about me…so my role is finished…
Sam and Neil in confuse:role…
Chumzz and boys: haa…
Kabir:I will say from first…This all was their plan…They asked me to play a small drama…
Chumzz: we understood that you both loves each other…..
Boys: so we play a small drama…Thank god at last…Our plan got success…
Kabir: guys…your lucky to have friends like them…and Sam I had small crush on you…
Sam smiles…
Neil:Thank you guys for understanding us…
Boys:ohhhhh formality
Chumzz: after long time Sammy smiled….
Sam:Neil your hand…
Chumzz and boys:ohh ohhh…
Neil:yaar…
Sam:let’s move to hall…
Swara: okay….
Sanskar :guys I want to talk to swara…
Boys:ok till…
Chumzz:shona…All the best…
Swara: but I don’t want to talk…
Boys: okay continue your cat fight…
They all leaves…
Swara:tell…
Sanskar:swara…wo…
Swara:wo…
Sanskar:swara I love you…
Swara:but I not loves you…
Sanskar: pakka…
Swara:haa…
Sanskar pulls her close to him:In 24 hours you will say I love you to me…
Swara:hai mutoo are you challenging me..
Sanskar:ya….
Swara:done…
Sanskar moves his hand to her waist:I really I love you…pattaka…
Swara:Mutoo tum…
Sanskar runs from their…
Swara to herself: I am not going to leave you…
(But she was not able run bcoz of saree…)
Ohh god this saree…Idiot….
In hall…
Ragini: let’s have food…
Mahi:haa…
Laksh stops Ragini…
Laksh:Ragini…come with me…
Ragini:where…
Laksh drags to one corner
Ragini:what happened Laksh…
Laksh: Ragini…
Ragini:Laksh say fast..
Laksh close his eyes…
Ragini understood what he need…
Ragini:Laksh not now…
Ragini was about to go…
Laksh holds her pallu…
Ragini: laksh…
He pulls her close to him…
Ragini:laksh….Please leave me….
Laksh:no….
He pulls even close to him…her bear back touches his chest…
Ragini:laksh…what are doing…
Laksh:Ragini my jaan…
Ragini:laksh what happened to you…
Laksh slowly moves his hand to her belly….
He pleat kiss on her neck…
Ragini frees herself:laksh…I think we should go…
Laksh:Ragini…
He holds her hand and pins her to the wall…
Laksh moves close to her lip…He was about to kiss…
From back Arjun in anger:Laksh ?….
(It was a common anger…like every brother feels when they see their sister with other boys..The same possessive which all brother feel..He was not able to control his anger towards laksh)
Arjun holds laksh’s collar:how dare you to touch her…what you thought about your self idiot…stay away from her…
Laksh:hai…. who are you to say all this…take your hand from my collar….and I know what to do….don’t teach me…
Arjun :You….
He rise his to strike him…
Ragini holds Arjun’s hand:stop it…Sir who are you to interfere in my personal matter….Please stay from us…and don’t show your softconer on me…I know how to leave my life…I hope you got it…
Ragini and laksh leaves from their….
Arjun was broken like glass pieces….Ragini’s each words hurted him…tears drops from his eyes…
Arjun himself:I am not…A good brother today I hurted my princess…For whom I was waiting to see once from my childhood…today I hurted her…I am sorry Ragini…I love you so much…
He falls in his knee…
In hall…
Ragini: sorry laksh…
Laksh:Ragini…no need to be sorry…
Kunj:what happened laksh…
Ragini says everything to them…
Manik:why sir reacted like that…
Mahi:I can’t believe…
Radika: Where is sir now…
Laksh:In varranda…
Radika:I will come just now…
She leaves from their…
In varranda…
Radika: sir…
Arjun wipes his tears…
Radika:sir…are you crying…
Arjun:Radika…what are you doing here…
Radika:sir…I am asking you something…
Arjun:Radika please leave me alone…
Radika: I need answer for my question…why you are always being sensitive about Ragini…
In hall…
Ragini:did you saw my phone…
Laksh:no…
Ragini:I think I left my phone in varranda…I will get it…
Sam:come fast…
Ragini:haa…
She moves to varranda…
Arjun:Radika….. I said leave me alone…
Radika: no sir…I need my answers…what relation you have with Ragini…
Arjun: okay…then hear she is my sister…For whom I was praying to god Dailly…For whom I am leave…she is my princess….my little sister Ragini khanna…
(Ragini was near to varranda…..she hears their conversation….she was shocked to know the truth…she was not able belive her ears)
Arjun tells everything to Radika…from first to last..
Radika: sir…that means Ragini…ohh god…
Suddenly they both hears one sound from back…
Arjun sees Ragini runs from there…
(Arjun understood that Ragini heard every thing…He runs behind her…)
Ragini in ground….she cries bitterly…which she control till 20 years…she was not able to control her tears…For past 20 years how she controlled all things…how she was silent for each and everything…. she don’t know how to react…)
From back Arjun pat shoulder….
Arjun:Ragini…
To be continued…
(Hey,hello,Asalamu alikum, Namaste…..I know Every is angry to me…I am ready accept any punishment for you guys…Thank you so much my sisi, friends, readers…I don’t how to thank you all for your support…I know my ff is just boring and the way I write my ff is disgusting…you guys very expansive for me…your pression time on my ff…Thank you may less for you guys…silent readers keep reading try to comment…love you all…take care..I hope you guys will reply me in comments…)
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superb dear
haii you’re my silent reader wooooowwww…Thank you sooooo much babes
How dare u to call this ff boring !! It is awesome !! I love it !! PLS continue and yeah update it regularly
lol sorry for saying boring….Thank you so much for your love and support…and you too my silent reader omg…
Yeah I know I was a silent reader ☺
so your agreeing you crime hahaha…what is your name
My real name is Pooja !! Yeah I know I committed a big crime ! So am I gonna get a punishment ??? ???
Of course you’re going to get punishment for this…your punishment is today on wards we’re friends
Oh my god it is awesome I loved it??
kashfia….I have one friend named Asfiya….Thank you so so so much babes
U now what dont you dare to call this ff boring ok. And secondly dont get late next time ok…AND IT WAS EXCELLENT LOVED IT….Love your ff and u
hahaha sorry yaar…okay I will post it fast….Thanks dear….keep reading…
love you tooooooooooo
raglak scenes,arjun ragini scenes are good
Thank you thank you so much….lovely….
Loved it dear and it’s not boring. I’m eagerly waiting for next episode. Plz update next episode ASAP
Loved it dear and it’s not boring. I’m eagerly waiting for next episode. Plz update next episode ASAP…
sorry yaar…I will try to post…I too want post regularly…but nowadays I am bzy
it was an awesome episode
Thank you so much for your support babes…take care
Loved it yaar….. And don’t uh dare to call this ff boring…. ? twinj and swasan and manan ??? love der moments so much
eeeeee you breaked your silence…Thank you so much for loving my…Thanks yaar
Kya fida di….itta late koi krta hai? Aur aapne agar phir se iss ff ko boring bola to main nhi padhne wali haan. Aur haan di….maine twinj pr ek os likha hai…..plzz do read…. http://www.tellyupdates.com/eternal-bliss-twinj-os/
Thank you soooo much cutie…nahi kahuga pakka…try another os with ragini laksh…I will try to post
My next os will be swasan and raglak together….I thought for only swasan….but I’ll include raglak just for u….and no side roles….two female proteas and two male….
so your excepting you crime hahaha…what is your name
ishu it’s not for you….Thank you so much my jaan…All the very best for your next os…
Afa it’s not boring, it’s very interesting you nail it, well done. 🙂
di when you’re going to post next epi…I can’t wait anymore please make it ASAP…Thank you soo much di for encouraging me..
love you
I post rectify part 6 today, Afa you could start reading it now. 🙂
Don’t dare to say it as boring ….wrna u know na what I can do ….lollzzz
Saying boring to such a extraordinary ff is such a big crime that u also don’t know…..
Episode is fab….fab..fab…awesome…
Everything was super duper perfect …finally the truth is revealed…
Can’t wait for next one…nd plzzz post soon ….love u ..
IN Ramzan I did crime by saying ff is boring…yaaa Allah please forgive me…Sayeeda I was laughing while reading your comment…tum bhi na…sayeeda can you give your nick name sayeeda is long too type..hahaha…Thank you thank you soo much…love you toooo…Haa I forgot did you posted your 5th epi it’s not getting if yes can you give you link please…
Hey afa hw dare u to tell tht ur ff z boring ???? dnt u dare to tl it again ……. it z jst superb yaar ……. rly i love ur ff a lot ……by d way r u so late ??? i was eagely wtng fr ur ff……. pls post d nxt one soon ……… and dnt u dare to tl ur ff boring again ……. it z jst awesome ……
okay sorry meri maa…now ramzan na so I am late…Thank you so so so much…love you babes
From which angle u think ur ff boar us
Don’t dare to say it again
And ya pls don’t delay this misery
hahaha you didn’t feel my ff is boring it’s enough for me…Thanks dea…keep smiling
surperb……
Thank you dea…keep reading..
nice ep cant wait for next
Thanks babes.. I will try to post.. keep reading..
Arre if ur ff was boring then why would we read this. I love ur ff. Todays ep was Awesome. Atlast Ragini came to know the truth???. Waiting for nxt dear.??
Love u???
sree did you started new ff…don’t forget to give link haa remember it okay…sorry for say it’s boring..keep reading..
Walaikku.msalam ssorrry sorrry epi wass awessommee I loved it it was amazing take care api I love uuuuu stay blessed Allahafizz
hai chull bulli did you posted your epi…haa you got your tab back…when you’re going to resists…don’t know what happened to my phone…Thanks yaar…love you tooooooooo…tc..Allahaffiz
Ya I have posted and also got new tab alhamdolilah
One of the best ff pls post next episode plz dear
vavachi…Thank you so much for your support and love…keep reading..tc
I’m happy that u felt good while reading my comment …
Nick name…. ummmmm..u can call me Sayoo …
Nd yah here’s link for my chapter 5
http://www.tellyupdates.com/cant-stop-loving-u-twinj-love-chapter-2-2/
Thank you sis
awesome yr..and dare u call it boring I will punch u hard…jst kidding.. have faith in urself…it is jst amazing…and managing so many characters at a time is cery difficult but u r doing a great job…keep it up dr.love u
Thanks dea…no again I am not going to say my ff is boring…I have faith but sometimes I feel I my is worst…Thank you dea…keep reading
Thanks dea…no again I am not going to say my ff is boring…I have faith but sometimes I feel I my is worst…Thank you dea…keep reading..love you tooo
Aapi ur ff isn’t boring at all. Why u think its boring???? Today’s epi was fabulous . Plz try to update regularly plz. Take care aapi 😉 ;-*
Mahi my sis your from Pakistan isn’t….by seeing other ff I feel my ff is boring…Thank you so much yaar for encouraging me…love you…Haa what is your real name
No api I’m not so much talented. Moreover I’m a lazy bug. So I won’t even try to think n write a ff ;-P 😀
Aapi actually I’m from Bangladesh. My real name is Mahi. No need to say thnx. I’m glad I’ve encouraged u. I truly like ur ff 🙂 lots of love for u. <3 😉
wooooww thank you so much babes…you made me happy my dea…I am from kerala…Thank you so much for your support and love keep reading…love you babes and keep calling me api
But u r my api ………………. Very bad api ufaq is angry on u
Of course. I’ll keep calling u api 😉 😀
Mahi did you observed ufaq’s comment…she is cute little sis…In my next birth Insha Allah I will be her elder sis…Mahi first she called me api…she is from Pakistan…ohh ufaq I love you baby…Mahi I love you too
Don’t worry Ufaq Afa api is still ur lovely api 😀 Hope u won’t mind considering me as ur sis 🙂
I love u too Afa api :-*
your my sweet sis what to consider in that…do you write any ff
it is not boring at all….pls dont say like that… its lovely…
ohhh how sweet babes….no I am not going to say like that…Thanks yaar…love you..
di superb epi the way arjun praised radhika was amazing plzzzzzz post nxt epi soon nah
luv u tc muah
miss bak bak how was your exam…Thanks my little sis…love you sooooo much
fida it was just awesome……………
keep smiling…………….
Thank you so much dea…
awesome episode
my last commenter…Thank you so much babes…love you
osm afa yr u wr amazing bt a lil late pl post asap bcoz i jst luv ur ff