Hey friends… hope u all r good.. remember me… No… okay so last time I posted an OS on Mitali aka our khamoshi’s birthday…. In my previous os I said after that one I will be posting one more OS and that would be last…. but this one is not last because this is not originally written by me. Yey u read right this is not written by me… Actually sometimes I do read swaragini fanfiction’s that too one shots only… today I saw an os and after reading I felt it was a very beautiful story giving a meaningful message. So I took permission from the author and just did a few changes in character names as this is SDCH fanfiction and posted here.
Let’s start….
Kabir is driving car rashly..he is very much upset with the news of eloping of his girlfriend Aayesha khurana on the day of their marriage…Aayesha was his fiance who got ready to marry kabir so that she can help her lover Mr. Veer Malhotra ,who is also biggest Rival of kabir by revealing details about kabir’s business contracts and deals…Kabir met aayesha in a business party from where their friendship starts and last month they decided to get marry…but today morning kabir got to know aayesha’s real face, her dirty plans..and how she trapped kabir..
Kabir is hell frustrted with all this..so he called his friend Ankit to accompany him in a bar…later, in bar both are drinking wine sitting on the bar counter..kabir tells ankit all about aayesha and her plans to ruin kabir business…
Kabir is not able to forget this insult because he is the most successful business man of the city and most eligible bachelor too..All news related to kabir kapoor are covered on the first page of every newspaper n magazine..and after today’s incident media is not gonna leave big chance to cover this news too..
After listening all from Kabir ,Ankit takes kabir along with him to an unknown place.
Ankit: Kabir..come with me..i will help you to remove your pain and frustration.
Kabir is under wine effect so agree with all what ankit told.
After few minutes they reach in a Chawl..Where after knocking a door ,a man in his mid fifties opened the door and welcome ankit.Ankit talked everything with that man.
Ankit(pointing kabir): he requires a girl for a night.
Man after observing kabir left from there and after discussing with his wife comes back..
Man: I agree with this deal.but i need Rs.50,000 for that.
Ankit:Okay..we are ready.
Man:Chalo..let’s come..i will show you the girl.
Kabir, Ankit left with that man to another house within the chawl.
After knocking the door , a girl in mid twenties opens the door.She is the niece of that man..
She is Saanchi ,who lost her parents in childhood..after that she is living with his chacha chachi…who just used her beauty to earn money..they sell Saanchi to random men for spending nights,who satisfy their lust by abusing her .In return they get good amount of money…They never cared about saanchi’s will and respect…saanchi always agrees to her chacha chachi demands to safe herself from their beatings..
Saanchi (standing on the door): yes chacha ji.
Kabir is spellbound to see saanchi’s beauty and innocence.he is mesmerized after listening her melodious voice.
Man: saanchi..today you have to spend night with this man(indicating kabir).they have given good amount for you.
Saanchi(looking down):okay
Man(to saanchi ): Enjoy sir.
Ankit and that man left from there leaving kabir at saanchi’s house . Saanchi close the door when kabir enters inside. Kabir keenly observe the environment of saanchi’s room. Kabir after removing his coat sits on the bed.. saanchi is wearing a simple red ghaghra choli having deep neck.
Kabir : why are you standing there?come near me.
Saanchi(nervously): ji
Kabir (taking swara hand in his hand): you are so beautiful.
Saanchi feels uncomfortable listening kabir’s compliment.
Kabir then keep his head on saanchi’s lap and starts telling her about his pains and sorrows.
Kabir: I don’t know why i am sharing with you all my pains..but i want to share.
Saanchi starts caressing his hairs and deeply listen his all pains.
Saanchi : In this world we cannot trust anyone…everyone use us from their own benefits.
Kabir keep staring in saanchi’s eyes..they share beautiful eyelock which saanchi broke.
Saanchi (removing dupatta from her neck): you can do for which you came here.
Kabir sees sincerity in saanchi’s eyes . He picks saanchi in bridal style and make her lay on the bed and lay beside her taking her in his embrace.
Kabir (staring into her eyes): I want peaceful sleep. Please stay near me.you can share your sorrows with me saanchi .
Saanchi looks into eyes..she feels to share her all fears pain n sorrow with kabir .
Saanchi : after my parents death.chacha chachi brought me here..they care for me like their child..but i never known about their hidden motives…when i was 15 years old my chacha ra**d me in drunken state when i told chachi about this she told me to never share this matter with anyone..they stopped my education too.After 3 years of that when i was 18 they started selling me to random men who used to satisfy their lust torchering me whole night.I tried to commit suicide one day but they both beat me with iron rod..after that i accept my be its my destiny.
Telling this saanchi starts crying loudly.. kabir also have tears in his eyes feeling saanchi’s pain..he tightly hugged saanchi..
Kabir : hey mishri…plz stop crying..i will take you out from this hell..thats my promise…now sleep.
Saanchi nodes….and both slept in each other arms peacefully…tonight saanchi had good sleep after long time…saanchi felt good seeing kabir’s gentle behaviour..in past every man who came to spend night with saanchi never showed any emotion and sympathy for her..they ruined her dignity.but after seeing kabir’s behaviour saanchi felt that some goodness also is still in this world.
Next morning saanchi wake up first..after seeing kabir sleeping peacefully a beautiful smile crept on her lips …she slightly pecks his forehead.
Saanchi(to herself):what is happening to me….why i kissed him.
She tried to come out from kabir’s strong grip..kabir gets up feeling movements.
Kabir(sleeply): what are you trying to do?
Saanchi (stammering): wo..i have to get up.
Later after hearing a knock on door both get up from bed..saanchi wearing her dupatta around her neck opens the door.and finds his chacha on door.
Chacha(to kabir): hope you enjoyed last night..now you can go.
Saanchi feels bad listening this…
Kabir : i want to take saanchi with me.
Chacha and saanchi gets shocked for what kabir said.
Chacha: No i can’t give saanchi to you ..she is the our only source of income.
Kabir (sternly): how much money u want ??
Chacha(thinking): 10 lacs
Kabir calls to his PA to come with 10 lacs rupees..later Pa arrived at chawl with suitcase full of 10 lacs rupees.
Kabir (throwing suitcase on chacha): Now can i take her with me…dont even dare to come near her in future otherwise you will see the worst of me.
Chacha gets scared listening kabir’s warning. Kabir holds saanchi’s hands and leaves from chawl in his car.
Saanchi is very happy after coming out from the hell..where she lost her dignity, happiness etc.
In Car
Kabir : Now you are a free bird . U can do anything you want.
Saanchi (happily): yes…thanks for everything you done for me..but now where will i live? I don’t have anyone in this city.
Kabir ( hesitantly): if you don’t mind you can stay at my house.
Saanchi nodes because she doesn’t have any other place to live and after observing kabir’s care last night, she is sure that she can live with him at his house.
At kapoor mansion
Both reached kapoor mansion..all servents are confused to see an unknown girl with kabir . Ignoring all gazes both enters in the mansion.
Kabir (shouts): Damini ! Damini!
Later a lady worker comes there hurriedly.
Damini : yes sir
Kabir: she is saanchi …she will stay here in this house. Show her guest room.
Damini takes saanchi with her . And makes her comfortable in the house.
Kabir leaves for the office after getting fresh .. full day saanchi spend roaming at kapoor mansion and talking damini about kabir.
At night kabir comes back to house..where saanchi welcomes him smilingly…later both had their dinner.
At dinning table
Kabir :what are your future plans? How wanna continue your studies?
Saanchi : yes..i wanna join fashion designing course. But i dont have money now.
Kabir : you can trust me .we are like friends. Tomorrow i will talk in college for your course.
Later both left for sleeping. Both have peaceful smile at their lips.
Next day kabir joins saanchi good college.
Days passes ….their friendship grows into love…both start loving each other . But never confessed.
One fine day, one of old friend of kabir visits kapoor mansion. After watching saanchi at kabir’s house . He asked kabir.
Kabir’s Frnd: what is this pr*stitute doing at your home…have you hired the paid mistress kabir?
Kabir tightly slapped his friend…holded his collars and threw him out of the kapoor mansion.
Kapoor instantly went to saanchi’s room . Where saanchi was crying vigoursly..kabir tightly hugged her..and starts patting her back to calm her.
Saanchi(crying): why my past is not leaving me?
Kabir: dont think about your past.think about our future.
Kabir deeply looks into her eyes..now its time to confess his love.
Kabir (lovingly): I love you saanchi … I want to spent my whole life with you… will u accept to be Mrs kabir kapoor ??
Saanchi : I love you too kabir..but I don’t deserve this love and happiness..afterall I’m
a pros….
Kabir puts his fingers on her lips and stop her to say further..
Kabir puts ring on her finger to give answers to all her questions…Saanchi happily hugs kabir .
After few months they both get married..it is a private affair with only few guest.
Later both were blessed with a baby girl kaanchi kapoor …Saanchi started her fashion designing business.In these years kabir supported saanchi to overcome her fears and helped her to forget her painful past.
The end_________
In this story kabir is the ray of hope in Saanchi’s life who filled her life with happiness & love …..
EVERY LADY IN THIS SOCIETY DESERVE RESPECT, HAPPINESS AND LOVE… WHETHER SHE IS A PR*STITUTE , A RAPE VICTIM OR ANYONE ELSE…. A WOMAN IS A MOTHER, SISTER, DAUGHTER, WIFE …. WHO PLAYS VARIOUS IMPORTANT ROLES IN ANYONES LIFE ….. SO RESPECT WOMEN !!!
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I hope u liked this story and most important the message this story tried to give… friends we think that this is right this is wrong… people should this…that everything we observe and think but never try to take step… when somebody does then we say… wow the person really did well and if somebody does wrong then very easily say how can somebody do this…. but never try to take step ourself…. we only want to see the people change but never try to change ourselves. We should try to bring the change in ourselves first what change we want to see in the world .We always forget that we r also somebody for another person….there are many things wrong going in our society and we cannot change it at once ….. no one is saying to do something big..just try to take small steps against wrong… no single person can change everybody’s mindset but yes if we start to change ourselves…. it will take time but definitely a big change will come in future . We always fight with these words only “what people will think and say”. And these words force us to take our steps back so it depends on us what we do.
○ All power is within you ,you can do
anything and everything
○ Take risks in your life
If you win you can lead
If you loose you can guide.
○ Stick to truth and we shall succeed ,
maybe slowly but surely
BY SWAMI VIVEKANADA
I don’t know whether you guys agree or not but what I feel I wrote…… now u can give ur reviews in the comment box regarding this n if not then u can simply press ?or ?.
And as I told this is not my writing so regarding the story so I won’t reply to your comments… but yaa if you want to say anything about the message I will definitely reply..
As I told previously also I’m saying again next one will be last os… I would have posted earlier but u know what……that os I have been writing from last 2 months…Actually that one is also related to a social matter only… now u might be thinking it’s good that I’m not posting as again u will get bored…. I wrote 3 times… first I thought to post on 1st January but that time I didn’t had any idea about how to portray in a story …. n I wrote 2 incomplete story but both got messed up.. I myself couldn’t understand what I wrote so I didn’t wrote further and rejected them…. after that when I got an idea , I decided to post on Republic day …. I had typed almost 20% but unfortunately the file got deleted. And now my laziness… as soon it goes I will type again but these days I’m busy with my studies so let’s see when I will come again to disturb u all ???…
Ok now enough of my blabbering because I don’t want to be killed by u all so early ??.
Lots of love
Be happy and healthy
Take care
Regards
Priyanshi
17 Comments
So so amazing and mind blowing and fantastic and wonderful and awesome and superb and outstanding story yaar………I don’t know how to comment on this……..I am speechless and I am became emotional reading this story…….. Thanks a lot priyanshi and that writer for giving this outstanding story and message……..take care you both dear……..lots of love for both of you……..and one request to you two please yaar give us this kind gorgeous and beautiful story……. please priyanshi dear don’t leave us dear……..I don’t know dear my comments are really suitable for this story…….this story touch my heart so much dear……
Actually I read this story already so I read your pov only……sorry for that…..but I want to say that yes, you are right……?Mujhe rula diya. Kuch kehne k liye words nahi hain ab?.
Love you jinny
Sorry I forgot to mention the writers name… credit goes to Japnazz_Gill …. Actually I had mentioned while submitting but by mistake I had submit again so I think it didn’t saved..☺☺☺☺
Fabulous writing..
Wonderful message.
Whatever you said was true.
Girls and women must be respected…
Hats off to you…
beautiful
Nice one, you give us nice thought to examine ourselves, whatever we all are today is because of our thoughts, hum jo sochte hai life hame wahi deti hai, so thank you nd keep writing such a beautiful stories
amazing and fab message dear…no words just loved it
awesome….amazing msg….take care..
awesome….amazing msg….take care.. and post soon
o7m my jinny u olwz nailed it…u olwz leave me speechless…i dnt hve words to describe ua skills…although this was nt ua idea bt still u wrote it…mehnat to lagi na…i completely agree with u…luv u jinny…by…tc
superb priyu i just loved this story………………….and you made me speechless…………..i really have no words to praise you for you writing skill………………………..tc…………………………..love you khubsaraaaa……. come back with new story……………..
Wonderful Priyu ??? you and the other writer gave us an amazing story!! And yes everything you said is true. Women become pr*stitutes or rape victims or etc not because they have a choice. The society itself is to be blamed. We should understand they’re humans too. People shouldn’t judge anyone. We can’t change others points of views. But we can change ours and think with humanity.
Priyanshi????…..it is awsmm Nd mind blowing….mera 1 kaam kr dena ki jis writer ne ye originlly likha h na Jahapanazz Gill ne….usse mri trf se thankuh bol dena…aur haa tjhe bhi thanku kyuki hamare tak ye story pahuchane k liye……..aur iss OS pe comment krne ki mri toh koi aukaad hi nhi h ab…….i just…means ab ky bolu…..yhi ki aisa OS aaj tk nhi pdha mne aur padh k 1 internal feeling bhi aayi ki yess every girl deserve respect
I totally agree with you….. The message you conveyed was right… And love how u coveyed it
Every one deserves a better life. Hats off to your wonderful thought. It’s not always so glitzy or fairy tale. Sometimes it can be sour. ???
Amazing message though I already read swasan version of Japnazz di …..& again I read Kamchi one …..Thank u priyu for writing this here & conveyed message to everyone ……Lots of love
amazing dear….and amazing message dear.