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Avni was in her room sitting on the bed all ready to go back to her sweet home…..She had been waiting for Neil for very long time but still he had not came.Now Avni was starting to get worried.She started to walk here and there in the room. When suddenly someone came in the room and put black cover on her face so she could not see anything…..
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After a while Swetha and Ali came in the room to get Avni…..they did not found her anywhere……both of them went out of the room…..
Swetha: Ali tu tillu ko phone kar ka pouch kahi Avni ius ke saath toh nahi chali gayi…..
Ali: Swetha aunti….aap tension maath lo……yeh neil ka plan tha…
Swetha:Plan…..kaisa plan……mujhe nahi matha hai…..agar avni ius se zayada naraz hogayi toh…..main kuch nahi kahu gi…..main toh fully apni bahu ka saath du gi…..baath rahi hoon main tumhe….
Ali: Acha….abhi aap chaliya….
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At Khanna Mansion everyone was waiting for Neil to bring Avni home. Suddenly Neil came in the house but Avni was not with him…..
Bebe: Neil……Avni kaha hai….
Neil: Yeh aap kya kah rahi hai bebe…..Avni toh Ali aur mom ke saath aa gayi thi…..toh mujhe kya paatha….
Ali: Par tum ne toh kaha tha ka tum Avni ko damakhay dhar si entry ke liya apnay saath lay kar aay gaay……
Neil: Par jab main hospital gaya tha…toh nurse ne kaha tha ka woh apni family ke saath chali gayi hai…….
Just at that moment DD rushed in the house with a worried expression on his face…..
Swetha: Hoy…DD tu yaha….
DD: Neil sirji…..vidyut baagh gaya hai…..
Neil: KYA!!!!!! DD woh tum logu ki zimadari tha……Avni….
Neela: Avni…..Neil mujhe aisa laagh raha hai ka meri bachi kisi mushkil mein hai……Neil….
Swetha: Toh yeh tha meri ba…..
Before she could even complete, Neil’s phone started to ring…..
Person: Hello Neil Khanna…..Main ne socha ka tum Avni ko goodbye hi bol do…..aur kya hai na……aaj ke baad waisay bhi woh meri hi ban ka rahnay wali hai……
Neil: VIDYUT!!! AGAR AVNI KO KUCH BHI HUA NA TOH MAIN TUMHE……
Vidyut: Haray…..officer itna gussa acha nahi hota….yeh lo apni Avni……na…na na meri Avni ……woh sirf meri hai……aur ab hamesha hi meri rahay gi……tumhe ius se kiya……bye..
Neil:VIDYUT…..
DD: Sirji…..vidyut toh mandhir mein hai……
Ali: Par woh mandhir mein kya lanay gaya hai…..
Neil:DD, Ali….tum dono yeha par rukhu…..main aata hu…..
Parkash: Neil tum kaha ja raha ho…..
Neil: Dad ab main Avni ko apnay saath ghar lakar aayu ga….yeh kabhi bhi nahi aayu ga…. saying this Neil rushed out of the house..
Neela: Meri Bachi……
Everyone were consoling Neela and were also worried for Avni….
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In the Mandhir Vidyut was forcing Avni to marry him but Avni was not listening to him…..She tried everything to get out of his grip amd ran away….but she could not….
Vidyut: Woh Neil tumhe nahi bachany aay ga……iusay main ne phone bhi kiya tha…..par patha hai ius ne kiya kaha………ius ne kaha ka avni mujhe nahi chiya….Neil ne kabhi bhi tum se pyaar nahi kiya tha yeh iusay hai aur woh kabhi bhi tumse pyaar karay ga………kaisay kar sakhta hai…..tum toh meri ho…..
Avni: Mera Neil aisay nahi kah sakhta…..woh mujhe bachany zaroor aay ga…..aur aik baath yaad karhna Vidyut R. Main ne kabhi tumhari thi, hu, ya kabhi bhi hon gi……Avni Ayesha Neil Khanna hamesha se Neil ki thi, hai aur martay daam thak rahay gi……
Vidyut was feeling very angry and he slapped Avni due to which she fall down and her cheek got all red and swollen….
On the other hand Neil got to mandhir and was full on in angry mood…….When Vidyut’s men saw Neil coming they started to fight with him….one of them hit Neil with a bat on his head…….due to it Neil was bot able to fight any more with them…….Vidyut’s men started to beat Neil so badly…..par kahtay hai Mohabbat chize hi aisi hai jo har kisi ko himat dathi…..Aur Avni ki Mohabbat Neil ki Taakhat hai…..
Inside the mandhir vidyut had forcefully did 3 pharay with Avni…..while Avni was trying to get out of his grip……in her heart she was praying that Neil could come fast…….
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Neil had beaten up Vidyut’s men so badly that now they could not even move a bit………he ran up the stairs to go in the mandhir…..
What he saw next made him so mad……Vidyut was forcing Avni.
Neil: AVNI!!!!
Avni: Neil…….
Vidyut: Bohat late entry mari hai hai….sach mein police walay hamesha kaam ho janay ka baad aatay hai…..bad….very bad……Par tum theek hi waqat par aay ho….humaray pharay toh mukamal hogay hai…..ab sindur ki baari……Vidyut was able to put sindur on Avni when…….
Neil faced Avni to him and with his blood that was dripping from his hand, Neil filled Avni’s hairline………
Neil: Hamesha sachi Mohabbat ki jit hoti hai Vidyut…..tumhari tara ki mohabbat kabhi nahi…..Avni meri thi,hai aur ab Hamesha meri hi rahay gi…….tum ki tumhary jaisay lakh bhi meri Avni ko mujhe se chine sakhtay…..
DD who had came with other family memebers said…..
DD: you are under arrest Vidyut R……Sach main tum apni ma se bohat pyaar kartay ho……aik din bhi bahir nahi rah pay…….par fikar maath karo ab puri zindagi jail mein hi rahna…..
DD and other offices that had came along DD took Vidyut with them and left to jail……
Avni: Tumhe andaza bhi hai….agar tum na aatay toh kya hojata…..
Neil: Haa…tumhari aur vidyut ki shaadi…..waisay aik baath bolu….tum dono ki jori perfect honi thi…..Avni glared at him….Saachi….
Avni: Toh phir iusay meri maang mein sindur barna datay…..kyu rokha…….woh tumhe kis ne haq diya hai mujhe sindur lagna ko….. Acha hota ka tum late hojatay….ab main ius ki biwi hoti…sach kaha tha Vidyut ne tum mujhe se pyaar nahi kartay ho…..Agar tum sach mein mujhe se pyaar kartay hotay toh itnay late nahi hotay aur tumha pata hotay ka tumharay late honay par kiya ho sakhta tha…..
Neil: Main late nahi ho….Kyu ka main Apni biwi se bohat mohabbat karta hoon…..aur mera pyaar itna kamzor kayi hai ka woh mujhse door hojay……Woh sirf meri hai aur rahay gi……..ius ka mamlay mein main kabhi nahi late hota……
Avni hugged Neil and started to cry……
Avni: I love U Neil……
Neil: I Love U too Wifey………
Everyone was watching them and had happy tear and smile on their faces after seeing their kids together……No one know what future had held for avneil…..but they know one thing that were their love…….if they can overcome big things with their love Mohabbat that they had……they can get out of aby storm no matter in what shape it is……..
I hope you all had liked it…….i am sorry if it had made you bored……or fall in sleep……but please do like…………..and comment……..so I know if you had liked it………..and if you want I can continue to update and write new os ss or ff on them………plz ignore any typo………
14 Comments
Awesome story ??? keep updating
Actually this was the last part and don’t worry I will update some more too but not now because I am busy…but will soon thanks for commenting ??????????????
Please write in english. Little difficult to read.
Sure dear????
Amazing dear………i hope i am the first one to comment……..yes plz continue to write……………..
Sure will write more
loved it!!!! write another one soon please with more avneil romance
J will try too but to be honest I am not very good at writing romance but will try to for you?????
Superb dear ….Continue your writing….loved it to the core ?
Thanks dear it meant a lot…..??????
Awesome… Wonderful story… Very very very nice…. Bhaiya…. Update more ?
Thank you very much…..I am hap p y that you had Iiked it……no more thing…..I am a girl not boy….so no bhaiya please???????….it’s okay mistakes happen. ….but everyone will update more……thanks for commenting
I am sorry for my mistake… When you will be free then update more… ?
Thank you all. Of you who had commented and liked my story. Right now I am busy so could not update anything……but hope fully will do very soon and sorry for replying late???????