DON’T NEED YOU
EPISODE 72 ( again )
The Next day , It was a sunny morning .
Angel was doing her boxing practice outside her Hostel in the garden .
Veer comes and stands in front of her .
Veer : I need to talk to you .
Angel : But I don’t want to .
Veer : I know you were there at the Minister’s house last night .
Angel : Yes I was , I work there , It’s my Part time job .
Angel removes her gloves and goes to drink water .
Veer : Didn’t you know , That the Minister is A rapist .
Angel : what are you saying .
He holds her hand , Twist her around , Clutched her shoulders . Both of them had their mouths close .
Veer : Why don’t you tell me , That you are My Pari , why You are doing all this .
Angel’s sparkling eyes were looking into his .
Veer : You know 3 years ago , Everyone Forced me to believe that Pari is dead , But it was only me who didn’t believed .
Angel : I don’t know what are you talking about . What is the problem with you ?
Veer : I don’t know what is the problem with you ? Tell me why are you doing this !!.
Angel : I’m not your Pari , I’m Angel , Okay , Go away .
Veer : Okay if you Are not Pari , Then why are you wearing this ‘ Mangla Sutra ‘
Angel : Because it gives me power and strength.
Veer : This is that , Which I gave you 3 years ago .
Angel : Yes this was given to me by my husband .
Veer : Where is he ?
Angel : I don’t know !!
She pushed him back . Veer Had trust in his god . He was disappointed
Veer goes and sits down on a bench .
Angel looked him from behind .
Angel to herself – (( I’m hurting you , Just to Keep you secure , I have to take a revenge , I need to take a avenge , Of my every single tear from him ))
Angel was in anger , She goes to her room . Takes out a Pen drive , Bangs her hand on table strongly , Blood comes out .
Angel : My plan is on the right track , Khan, Get ready , Now you are In my Game , it’s all about me tonight , Wait for me Khan ….
She takes a knife and scratched Khan’s picture .
It was now Breakfast Time .
Aunt : How’s food ?
Veer : It’s good Mam .
Angel : Yes .
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Angel and Veer were having breakfast.
Veer : From now you will not work with that Khan .
Angel : Who are you to tell me ?
Veer : He is not a good man .
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Khan was in aggression , Nikhil was with him .
Nikhil : How did it happened ? Who can do it ?
Khan : I remember , I was drunk last night , A girl was with me .
Nikhil : Who was she ?
Khan : Can’t recall .
Nikhil : You know what , I think , That girl , Your new Caretaker .
Khan : Can she ???
Nikhil : These girls , Think that they are very smart , But they’re stupid . Mark my words , From today itself keep a strict eye on that girl .
Khan : I think you’re absolutely right !!! Don’t worry I’m a master of masters .
Nikhil : Okay now I’ve to bye .
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Angel : I’ve to work , I can’t take my steps down .
Veer : I won’t let you go .
Angel : Oh really !!!
Veer told her what we came across last night .
Veer : Now you tell me , Who was that brave girl who saved them .
Angel : I can’t say , I left his home early and I was in a coffee shop .
Veer : Show me it’s Receipt
Angel : I threw that away .
She goes to her room .They were staying in a large living room separated by two bedrooms.
Angel : I’ve to do something , Somehow I have to make veer Believe that I’m Angel not Pari . Otherwise , My plan could be interrupted .
Veer comes in , She was sitting on the sofa , Holding a magazine .
Veer : Hushhh….From where is this Smoky smell coming from .
He goes and opens the window .
He saws that Angel is holding a book from where greyish gas was coming out . He removes that book .
Veer : Yeuwww,, You are smoking ?
Angel : Any problem .
She made a fake cigarette , Rolling a paper ….
Veer : Oh my Gosh !!! Give it to me .
Angel : Nope , I’m addicted to it , Since last year .
Angel in her brain ( Now you will be assured that I’m not Pari )
Veer : I can’t see this , I’m going out .
Veer moves out and walks across the streets .
Veer to himself ” How harder is to explain yourself that your love is dead when she’s just in front of you , Oh Lord save me ” , ” I don’t know when she’ll understand ”
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Angel : Oh It’s 4 I should leave now ,
Angel reached there.
Khan was distressed talking to someone : I don’t know , How did it happened , Where are those girls .
Angel : Hello sir , May I come in .
Khan: come , Do your work .
Angel : what happened sir , You look so distressed today .
Khan : Nothing , Mind your own business .
Angel goes to Kitchen , The waitress Asked her ” Mam are you okay , I got to know that yesterday some abducted girls were released from this house ”
Angel : Yes !
Waitress : Who did all this ? Mam you need to take care of yourselves .
Angel : Don’t worry , It was only me who did this .
Waitress : what !!! , This man should be put behind the bars .
Angel : Ya , I’ve this ( shows her a pen drive ) , All the clues are in this , Once this is in public , Khan would be in prison .
Waitress : Boss !!!( Completely terrified )
Angel turns back
Khan : So my suspicion was right , It is you only ,,, Tell me who are you ??
Angel : I’m a fire , I’m flame , You bright can burn your whole body
Kahn : Shut up , Guards catch this fish , Let’s see how it will taste .
Three guards come and attacked on her , She Throw them away on ground .
Angel : How weak you are ?? Never underestimate me !!! I’m out of my mind now .
Kahn ” You are super fool.
He hold and pressed her neck .
Khan : Give me that Pen drive , Otherwise I’ll kill you right here .
Angel : No one can stop your Destruction now .
Khan grasped her hairs and threw her on the floor .
Khan : ‘ Latoon ke bhut batoon se nahi mante ‘ ( morons can’t understand until beaten )
Khan Took a rod and goes to beat her .
He raised his hand , Angel turned her face away , Someone comes in front of her .
Angel : Veerrrrr !!!!!!!!
Khan : who are you !
Veer : A Savior , Protector of truth .
He snatched the rod and beat him . He tied him with a rope .
Veer comes to her ” Angel are you okay ”
Angel : How did you come here ?
Veer : I was worried about you , I came here to see you , Then I met the waitress at door , She told me everything .
Angel : Thanks .
Veer : Years back My wife also protected me like this , She took the hit of a whip on her body .
Angel’s eyes filled with tears .
Angel : Thanks for being here .
Veer : Let’s go .
Angel : No something is left .
She was completely warmed with anger , Eyes red hot like a volcano .
She took a rod , And moves slowly towards Khan
Angel : I told you , Don’t underestimate me , I’m a fire , I can burn your eyes .
((((Background music –
Looks like a girl, but she’s a flame
So bright, she can burn your eyes
Better look the other way
You can try but you’ll never forget her name
This girl is on fire
This girl is on fire
She’s walking on fire )))
She recalled how girls suffered due to people like him .
She goes to him and beat him Once , Twice , Thrice with rod .
Angel : Now now one can stop you from being behind the bars .
They both left .
Khan shouts : Catch them , Snatch that pen drive from her .
Guards were running behind them , Veer and Angel goes and hide in a shack ( cottage) .
Veer : How mad you are , It could be so dangerous for you !
Angel : You need not to worry about me .
Veer : Why not , You are my wife , You are wearing this Mangla sutra
Angel : Why can’t you understand I’m not Pari .
Veer : Then why were you after that Minister.
Angel : Because I want to eradicate crime from this world .
The night was growing more darker and Cooler , Their phone’s weren’t working due to network issues .
Angel : Oh lord we’ve to spend out night here .
Veer : Yes , Just because of you
Angel : Me ??? !!!
Angel was shivering , She became lame , She already had used her power .
Veer : I can’t understand you , You are a puzzle .
Angel : I’m going from here .
She tries to move out . But he holds her arm .
Veer : Now where will you go Ha!!! Already we’ve put our lives at risk .
Angel : I can’t live here ,Bye .
Veer : Shhhhh!!! See you have fever . Sit down .
Angel : How can we light a fire here .
Veer : You smoke , You must be having a matchbox with you .
Angel : No I don’t have it .
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EPISODE 73
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Angel : Why are you staring at me ?
Veer : Just trying to read what are you hiding in your eyes .
Angel Looks some other way .
Veer : Anyway , Let’s sleep now , It’s too late .
Angel : No I can’t sleep here , It could be dangerous enough.
Veer : Don’t worry , You should sleep , I’ll guard .
Angel : I Know how bad are you at Night watch , Remember When … ( She was excited to speak but later stopped)
Veer : When ? Tell why’d stopped .
Angel : No , Thanks .I’m not gonna sleep
Veer : There isn’t any word like ‘No’ In my dictionary .
Angel : Oh really from where did you bought such stupid dictionary .
Veer : From Angel’s store .
Angel : So funny
She stood up and Goes to her bag , She saws a Black rod like thing over her bag .
Angel to herself : Oh is it a Stem of tree or what is it ?
Veer was laying down on the floor , Suddenly Angel screams and cries .
Veer : Ahhhh !!! There’s a Ghost over here .
He stood up and saws Angel holding a snake .
Veer : Why are you holding a Snake !!! ( Surprisingly )
Angel : I thought it was a Stem of old tree over my bag
Angel : A AAA !!!! Help me .
Veer : Don’t throw it here .
Angel : Have you gone mad .
He came to her and holds it from her hands . And threw that away .
Veer : Oh God see your face , You look completely horrified .
Angel : What !!! Have you ever hold a big snake in your hands !!!
Veer : Okay come let’s sit here , And relax .
Angel : I can’t sit here
Time passed , She was standing there , Whereas Veer was sitting down comfortably.
Veer : For how long you’ll just stand , Come .
Angel : NAa …
She got an idea she took out Veer’s shirt ( which he covered her with ) , Lay it down and sits on it .
Angel : Now it’s kinda okay for me .
Veer : You know how costly this shirt is.
Angel : Don’t worry I’ll Pay .
After some time , Suddenly
Angel : Snake snake ( shouts)
Veer stood up and started dancing .
Veer : Help, help me !!! Snake Snake .
Angel : Hahha I was joking PK
Veer : Pk !
Angel : Nothing , I’m tired let me rest Now ( Trying to cut off the previous talks )
The night was growing darker , And finally moon sets and The sky becomes lit .
Veer woke up and Finds Angel is missing .
He finds a note in his phone ” Don’t worry about me , Go home – Angel ”
He runs to his hostel .
Aunt : Where were you both last night?
Veer : Were busy in some important work , Where’s Angel .
Aunt : I don’t know . Just turn on Television , My favorite show is gonna come .
He turns on T.V , The news reporter spoke ” Mr.BK Khan , The state government minister of Mumbai , Who was living Here Since Last three years Arrested By BANGALURU police after a video became viral in social media saying he’s a rapist ”
Aunt : what !!! who did it ?
The news further said ” This is shared by some ‘ Anonymous ‘ , Who is this Unknown personality ??
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Inside NIKHIL’S home
Nikhil : who is this ‘ Anonymous ‘ , Who ???
” I was living in this house , Enjoying , Even though I’ve jailed for life time , This minister was helping me a lot , Now what will happen ”
Nikhil: Whatever the cost may be , Now I’ve to find his ‘ Anonymous ‘ , And the day I’ll find , I’ll crush this person under my feet .
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Veer : Really her plan worked
Aunt : whose ??
Veer : Nothing , I’ll just come .
He goes out of the hostel and saws Angel coming in .
Veer : Angel !!
She comes and hugs him .
Angel : My plan worked , I’m successful ( She was sobbing , Voice very lame)
He keeps his hands over her head .
Veer : Pari !!
She freed herself and goes straight to her room and locked from inside .
Veer runs to her , ” Pari open the door , Please ”
Angel : ( In a great Anger ) I ! Am ! Not Pari .
Veer : Okay Angel , Open the door .
She didn’t .
He stood outside , Puts his ears over the door and tries listen to what’s going on in .
Angel’s eyes were burning out of anger , Holding a picture of Nikhil in her hands and screaming ” 3 years ago , You said that I should die because you have POWER in your hands , Today I took away that power from you , Get ready it’s your turn Now ”
Veer couldn’t hear everything ,But he could listen her saying ‘ Because of you I
have to separate from My love , Get ready ‘
Veer to himself : There’s something fishy here , I’ve to solve this mystery .
Instantly Angel opened the door and comes out .
Veer : Are you okay , What’s the matter ?
Angel : I’m good .
Veer : I saw the news .
Angel : Did you ?
Veer : Yes , You’re awesome .
Angel : Thanks .
Aunt calls them for lunch ..
Aunt : I’m really impressed by that person who shared that video about the corrupt minister .
Veer : Ya me too , But the person is still ‘ Anonymous ‘ ! ( Seeing towards Angel )
Angel : But may be some people know who is that . ( Showing off to Veer )
Aunt : Yah!!! I’d like kiss that person .
Veer : Ohhh wow Well Me too , Once twice and thrice .
Angel : Akkhh akhhh ( Making noise in throat )
Aunt : Just come with me , I need your help
Veer goes to his room .
Veer : Oo My charger isn’t working . I just go and Take Angel’s .
He goes to her room .
Veer opens all the drawers but he couldn’t find . Then he opens her cupboard .
Veer : Wow Angel has Very good clothes .
He was Pushing all the stuff here and there . Suddenly he saws a black colored file there .
He took that out . And opens it . He opens first page and saws a 8 over which a red cross was made . He was awfully dumbstruck when he goes further .
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That’s it for today, working from out of home ,So my mind isn’t working , Please please Like and comment .
Love you all
Kira .
19 Comments
Thanx Kira for episode 73 . It was awesome .
Love your ffs . Waiting for nest suspense .
Have a great day ??
Zain,plz tell all ur friends and all who u know to watch naamkaran on TV on 9pm plz pass on the message to everyone plz.
Nice episode dear………
Waiting for the next episode……
BTW, how is your grandmother now????
Dbrsr1822, plz tell all ur friends and all who u know to watch naamkaran on TV on 9pm plz pass on the message to everyone plz.
I will try my best Hiyori….
Superb Kira di…. ?
Thanks to everyone please keep supporting . Your comments and likes ,even dislikes really required….????
It was amazing.
Love your ffs but can’t understand the last
part ie, 8 with a red cross over it ????
Hi Kira di . Your ffs are amazing , lovely and awesome . Hats off to your writing skills . I am new to your ffs but I am in totally love with it and Naamkaran AvNiel .
I am addicted to these Naamkaran world .bi am in habit of reading Naamkaran written updates and there I saw these off and surely read all in a single day .
Can I call you di . I am youngest in this group ( born in 2005 ).
By the way when will the episode 74 release .?????
Hey muskan and Addii thanks for loving my ff .
All the questions raised in your mind would be solved in upcoming parts
Muskan I’m sorry dear i don’t like to share my personal information .
Thanks
Bye
Di…. Can you please say me the time when you will post Episode 74??
Off course bro
Maybe around 8 pm or if could then around 2 ….pm
Thanks di….
Episode 74 ????
Coming soon dear
Thanks di .
Please post Episode 74 ASAP!!! It will be awesome if you post the 75th Episode along with the 74th ? because nowadays you are not posting an episode per day ??? which make me sad ?
What about episode 74 ????