Heyyy!! Guys I’m back after so long time….but this time I come here with an amazing surprise for my jaan, my lovely friend cum Sis…She have beautiful voice…she is a Rock star…and I’m going to wish her Happy birth day….which was on 3 march…..and guys I was wished her before but here I want to give her surprise in my style….so that’s y…I’m going dedicate this OS to her. …
And you guys are thinking who that girl….So let see
A Girl is sitting on the scotty wearing helmet….ridding fastly…..reaches hospital…..everyone are giving smiles to her…she too meets with them very nicely……She is walking in the corridor and sees old man on the wheel chair is upset…she sit down and says…Arrey uncle ji aap ko aunty ji ki yaad aarahi hai? Don’t worry aunty ji bhi aap ko yaad kar rahi hongi…. will u miss ur wife? Don’t worry, she will definitely missing you.
Uncle…no beta I’m missing my girlfriend.
He…he…he uncle gf?
Yes…my gf….I have so many gfs
Achha….aunty ji knows about them?
No…. Not…promise me you won’t tell her…
Ummm OK promise.., but before that you must have to complete your treatment…. Hmmm??
OK beti.., but usse nahi batana…
Hahaha uncle don’t worry about it.
She stands and walking… She sees her wrist watch… Put hand on for head….. Shitttt kitna time hogya yeh log abhi tak nahi aaye…..I have to message them that come quickly…. She takes mobile from purse….start typing….she pressed send…then gets happy…. Now screen is rounding her face is shows she is smiling… Her hairs are flying in air….a unique attraction comes by her face…. (Now guy’s u all know her) she is none other than our Priyanka (riyarocks)……
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Girl is…lying on the bed her phone vibrates… She holds phone opens one eye sees priyanka’s msg… Quickly jumps from the bad…..god now she will kill me…said chhotu sa brain Niyati…..
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Girl doing brush in her bathroom….her mom enters in her room. She says to her….Ruwani beta tera phone pe kisi priyanka ka msg aaya hai…..Ruwani stop brushing quickly comes out from bath room….her mom says beta brush to pura kar leti….
Mom she will kill for getting late….I have to reach at SDCH fast.
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Girl standing in front mirror caressing her hairs….asking from mirror, mirror on the wall…tell me who is the most beautiful… She gets msg…. Then saying to mirror…No I have to go…till than think about it…I will listen after coming back…says Abhilasha (missing her a lot)……she takes purse goes from there…..
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Hand free on girl’s ears….she lost in song….she sees msg….throws hand free aside…omg how I forget it… Thank got she remembered me….now don’t know what she will be doing with me…..says Mitali (KHAMOSHI)….she is running to hold her purse…
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In the washroom she is doing dance steps….Wow….her Mobile rings….she comes out….hold her phone her eyes widely opens….yeah tu bhi na….coming Di..says Mannat (khan_Sanahh) runs hastily.
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A girl on the dining table eating bread with butter or may be jam takes glass of juice…start drinking. Her Dad saying… priyanshi Kisi priyanka ka msg aaya hai.., she chocks… Her dad says…..what happen? Is everything allright? She smiles No dad I have to reach hospital urgent… She takes her phone left from there… Her dad…Priyanshi breakfast…I will do in hospital… Bye dad tc….
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Girl is standing in her cup board…and thinking. Ummm I wear this or this… What should I have to wear…? Then she sees msg on her phone….kuch bhi chalega boss…she randomly selected dress rushed in to washroom for getting bath….now she is ready to go…. Dhruvi..
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La la la umhm hm hmmmm….she is standing in front of mirror… Looking her dress….takes phone for selfie….then she remains dumbstruck to see msg…O my mata….replies the msg…Coming dear….runs Niyaa.
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Girl is running behind dog….her foot is sleeps…..she is laughing madly…. Then sees phone smile fades from her face she stands….o goshhhh…I have to reach hospital immediately….says bebechnaa(Anonymousa))…. She takes purse and rushes to hospital.
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A girl is sleeping on the bad……phone rings….she takes phone says…kis ka mathaa kharabb…opens eyes…. Then quickly wakes up….ohoooo coming my sweetie….says Dhruti...
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Then they all reaches at hospital….and they meets with other girls includes…Amna, Aafiya, Puja, Samidha, Swetha, Vanu, ZiyaRasheed, priyankashaurya.…who are already waiting for them……they all gossiping about something…then they sees that priyanka(Mita) is coming towards them…they all are greats her good morning…..she too great them back with sweet smile…then they all went on their own duties…Priyanka(Mita)…looks on….and thinks what happens??…they all are don’t know about my day…why what is this??….she becomes upset.
She performs her duties very well…then in the evening she went to kaanchi’s home…where kabir and Saanchi also not wish her…she spend time with them then she gets call from some unknown number.
Hello, Mita Aka Priyanka
Hello vello ko goli maaro, you need to come some isolated place urgently otherwise I will your Friends Anee.
Mita tensed…No no you can’t I’ll come there please don’t do anything to her…she worries about her…kabir sees her asks What happened?? Why are u looking tensed?? Is everything is all right??
She looks him…Kabir My friend Anee’s life is in danger….and the kidnapper wants to meet with me….I have to do something for save her life…she saying to remembering Anee.
While kabir is also worring for her and Anee
He tried to console her….then he along with Saanchi goes to inform to police about the same…In fact they told her to that they are going to inform the police..
Mita…reaches at the place where she saw everywhere darkness. She not finds anyone to there….she surprises….and falls into deep think.
Then spot light comes on her…she shocks….and another spot light shows a handsome hunk, our hero Dr. kabir Kapoor…he is singing songs for her…he is holding guitar in his hands….and sing the song…
Song:
Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
Na Dhoop Chune Na Chhaaon
Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
Kisi Thor Tike Na Paaon
Ban Liya Apna Paigambar
Tar Liya Tu Saat Samandar
Phir Bhi Sookha Mann Ke Andar
Kyun Reh Gaya
A big smile spread on her face…..Then Mita also holds the guitar and joins him in the mid… Both are singing like Rockstars….
Re Kabira Maan Jaa
Re Faqeera Maan Jaa
Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira Maan Ja
Re Faqeera Maan Ja
Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi Kaisa Harjaaiya
Tooti Chaarpaai Wohi
Thandi Purvaai Rasta Dekhe
Doodhon Ki Malaai Wohi
Mitti Ki Suraahi Rasta Dekhe..
Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
Lab Namak Rame Na Misri
Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
Tujhe Preet Purani Bisri..
Mast Maula, Mast Kalander
Tu Hawa Ka Ek Bavandar
Bujh Ke Yun Andar Hi Andar
Kyun Reh Gaya..
Re Kabira Maan Jaa
Re Faqeera Maan Jaa
Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira Maan Ja
Re Faqeera Maan Ja
Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi Kaisa Harjaaiya…
Finally they completes the song and Lights comes. Every one wishes her…
Happy Birth Day Priyanka…..Within loud Voice…
She is extremely happy….and she thoughts who was called me…then a boy hug her by side she turns to see him, he is her Bhai Sakash….
Then she hugs to all….then priyanka cuts the cake….all claps for her.
Party on.
The end.
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So, Priyanka aka Mita Hope you like it dear……bye tc…
Your
Anosha(Anee)
35 Comments
What an amazing os, I am smiling continusly while reading this. Happy Birthday to Priyanka.
Thank You Samidha
thnk u for adding me………and priyanka….happy birthday to u…where ever you are.my good wishes are with u
Thank You Priyanka dear….and yeah she got ur wishes as well.
HeY sorry birthday party pe nahi aa payi 3 march ko board ka first paper tha naa iss liye??? but the birthday u described is amazing dear loved it. ??? tc dear love u
Hhii Meri RJN..how r u yaar.. good to see u after so long. Missed u yaar
ohhh meri mitu dii!!! kaise ho aap? mai mast hoon. maine bhi tumhe bohat miss kiya! chalo kamse kam aap se baat toh ho payi. aakho mai aasoo aa gaye. hehe! love u loads loads loads and missing u very badly. take care dii. jaldi exams khatam kar ke wapas aa jaoongi.
Ohh Sorry Vrushti….pata nahi kaise tujhe bhull gayi…By the how are you??……Thank you….best of luck for ur exams…I Love you too….bye tc
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hehe! its ok dear. meri absenty ki wajha mai aur ye stupid exam hai tum kyu sorry bol rahi ho? thanks a loooot for ur wishes. love u dherrrr sara
OMG OMG OMG!!!!…….anee…what a idea yrr…wat a grt idea….thanks 4 adding me……and this oS is gonna be 1 of my fevret……and Kabira song ko toh mne mita ki awaz m assume krhi liya…..and its awsmm…keep writing my twin sista
THANK YOU!!….Twins Sis
Happy belated birthday to riya…. Amazing party Anee…. Loved it very much
THANKX AMNA MY SISY.
thank you for adding me in your story anee and i just love the last part……………tc………..keep writing………….love you anee……………..post next story asap…………
THANK YOU!!……Dhruti
AWwww….anee yaar tere dimaag ki to dat deni pdhegi…kya likha hai tune maza aagaya….ye os mera fav ban gaya hai…mita gaati hi hai itna acha man krta hai ki uski awaaz mai doob jav bt yaar wo mjhse naraaz hai…lv uh loads meri pyaari anee
Heyy…..Sana….Thankx yarrr…..aur ab mita bhi tujh se naraaz nahi hai na??…bye tc…luv u.
Wow……….. what a amzing os….. ??????????????
THANK YOU!!……ArpitaKrish
Awesome one as always Anee ???. Thank you so much for including me on this beautiful os!! But I forgot to wish her ?? she’s definitely gonna kill me ???
Hey Ruwani….Thankx Yaarrr.
Hey Anee dear!It’s amazing.You described every scene very well.Superb…I unexpected the last line you added me.That’s so sweet of you.Thank you dear.Bye.Take care.Keep writing many more???
“BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY RIYU”???
???…Missing you and your comments very much.Please come back dear.Bye.Take care???
Heyy!!…Sakash….Thankx dear….That’s my pleasure…and yeah Mita saw ur comment…she replied but not published…bye tc.
Oh ok dear…Thank u…Bye.Gud n8.Take care dear???
soooo beautiful dear…
THANK YOU!!….Swetha
Wowwww amazing article and gift yaar.. i came on TU agn after so long time just bcoz of u..and i am not regretting it..u made me so happy by ur brilliant writings that. Now i will be regular here. Thanks for making me a part of it ❤❤❤ HBD Priyanka..as u got ur biggest happiness in form of VikramSakhalkar’s wish.. hime bhul mat jaana Secret Superstar.. Party de kanjoos hum aa rahe hai ??
Mitu…..Ab pata chala…yahn ab bhi kuch log hain joh tera intezaar karte hain…..lekin tu….ab yahaan aajaya kar pagal….aur yeh shukriya vukriye ki kiya nautanki hai…..you are the most important member of our group tujhe kaise bhul sakti thi…Luv you yarr….bye tc.
So so amazing and superb story yaar…….our kanchi family is rock dear……… sorry for commenting late dear………many many happy returns of the day priyanka dear??we miss u si much dear………come soono us dear………. Thanks a lot anee for give us such a beautiful and mind blowing story………love u both of you dears……..tc dear
THANK YOU!!…Anu dear..and So sorry to forget you….I’m so sorry…hope u forgive me for such a big mistake…bye luv u tc.
Am really very angry with you that you forget me so I decided a punishment for you…….your punishment is that you write a dhamaka dar kanchi os for me dear????kaisa laga punishment……..app aegyae maja mujko vul jana…….or ak band….next time agar you forget me then i can’t forgive you ………yaad rakhna……….love to dear??tc yaar………one request dear please don’t stop writing if kanchi is not happening in real serial……..rs mam kanchi ko pair banaye yaha nahi banae that’s does not matter yaar……..but if you are all stop writing then I know what I do……. please yaar it’s my humble request please don’t stop writing……….????
itna sweet punishment kis ko accept nahi hoga…done dear i accept that….and yeah you are right we can’t stop to write on our kaanchi…but dill toh tuty ga na ager kaanchi nahi hua toh..waise main khud ko sambhal chuki hun…par phir bhi…but dear u don’t worry…luv u too..bye tc.
My sweetie pie It is such a beautiful OS….Thank u for including me….Glad to see our kanchi family …..Happy Birthday to Prinku di …..You describe everything beautifully sweetie pie….loved It to the core….Love u ?
THANK YOU!!..Oops…Nahi bolungi…my chhotu sa brain…..LOVE U TOO…BYE Tc.