I am newly writing this story because I cannot bear seeing the original script making Saumya as villain/negative roll. So, I write this story according to my creativity. Please accept this story even there is a lot of lacking in this story.
Now they showing Soumya as a villain. As per my story, I would like to portray her as a saver of the Oberai’s family.
The Oberai family united and humiliate Soumya because creating the problem in Rudra-Bhavya marriage. She gets humiliated and being push out of the house. They also accused that she is the cause of Rudra-Bhavya marriage stopped. Yes, the marriage of Rudra-Bhavya stopped because the havoc that happen due to Aryan statement but it resolve already and the Oberois find out it is Veer’s plan. Back to story;
Rudra: Get out from this house, Soumya. I thought you re my friend but I didn’t aspect that you.
Anika: Ha Soumya, I thought as my sister, we didn’t aspect this kind of attitude from you.
Kalyani dadi: (Sadness voice) Kyu putthar, why you doing like this? You are my best friend granddaughter, then how could you do like this?
Saumya: I don’t have answer for all of you question now.
Saumya going to left the house with the luggage. She turn around and look at all. She cry in her heart. She say in her mind (never mind saumya, you did everything for good of rudra and oberai’s family. It’s my family too even though rudra never though me as his wife.)
The Oberai’s seeing Saumya left the house with relieved feeling even though they feel the sadness and heartbroken as the same time.
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Two years later,
Saumya now staying at Australia. She continue her studies. She try to forget all things that happen in her life two years ago. One day, she having her lunch in seaside restaurant. While having her meal, she waiting for her friend to join with her. Suddenly, she saw Rudra on the other side of the restaurant. She was shock with the presences of Rudra in this place. She feel hesitate whether wants to talk to him or not. But she keep silent and walk out from that place when she remember all the humiliation that received from Oberois and especially from Rudra who she loved one.
She is walking in the street with tears while remembering all the incidence happen in her life.
To be continue……
Precap,
Suspense, it’s depended on the responses to this stories. Please do comment regarding this story line and if there is any improvement, please do comment in the comment box.
Thank you.
15 Comments
Good start, dear…. Please continue it… I’m also not liking the way they portrayed Soumya as negative and RuMya’s marriage as fake…
please continue I eagerly waiting for ur next update
Superb. Please continue this story. I too can’t accept soumya as villian. But what to do cvs won’t care about viewers feelings. They will do whatever comes in their mind. But soumya will always be my cutie and love angel. Please continue this story and please be regular too.
Pls.. continue yar.. I’m not liking Sowmya as Villan.. plz continue
AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING SUPERB ??????
Dear sukaen
It’s interesting ?????? continue soon ? waiting for RuMya union and next updat??
Keep it up ?
Take care and stay safe ?
Hi….. it’s really nice story please continue with your ff and I too don’t like the way they made somya negative in ishqbaaz it’s really bad to see somya playing the negative role. …. let it be u continue with ur ff ….
Good start…
PLease do continue .. I would like you to portray soumya as a strong character.
It is nice one dear
awesome update dear ………….
please update next part soon
Hi Sukaen,
Hru. 1st u for thank u for this ff dear. becoz even i cant c somu di in negetive role. im totally dispointed wt cvs as made her role. I was really waiting for ff based on rumya tq for this…. on wt base ur taking the ff i wt tht in serial so tht somu di being oberies saveir…but it cant but in this at least v can hope it.
N SUPER START PLZ CONTINUE IT. WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATES..N PLZ ONCE SAY AT WT TIMING U WILL UPDATE THE EPISOID … TQ
Hi Jeevi,
I am not quite sure with the timing.
I am work out with the continues story and will upload soon.
Thank you for yr support.
oh soumya was kicked out.happy that ruvya marriage got stopped.did bhavya back out believing Aryan is rudra’s son?soumya saw rudra in Australia. wow.waiting for rumya meeting beautiful banner
Thanks to all for the comment. Please support me more in next FF.
The next FF will be upload soon.
Hi sukaen,
Why is ur next episode waiting. Upload fast.. Tc