Jeet Gayi Toh Piyaa Morre 13th April 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
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Devika comes to lounge and says to Lajjo that I am tensed, will everything be fine? Maasa comes there and says I want everything to happen nicely, I want that this drama ends for you nicely, you just get married to a nice guy and I will get my property. Devika says I promised you so I will fulfill it. A man brings Devika’s injured father there. Devika runs to him and asks what happened to you? Father says I slipped on road and got infront of cars, this man saved me and brought me here, he helped me a lot. Guy says he needs rest, lets take him to room. Guy supports father and takes him to his room. Guy and Devika comes back in lounge. Devika asks him to have a seat. Guy says dont worry he will be fine. Devika says I will never forget your debt. Guy says this is no debt, people help each other to make this world better, I was just passing by to meeting, I have to meet a match maker. Devika says really? Match maker comes there and says Dr. Alek I was waiting for you and you came here. Alek says their father got injured so I brought him here, I didnt know our destination was this. Varun comes there dressed as chef, Alek asks who are you? Varun says poetry and says I keep everyone happy here, he says people have to do a lot for love so I became a chef. Maasa coughs. Devika asks Alek to tell about himself. Alek says I am from a business family but I became doctor, we have parents, siblings in house, they believe that happiness doubles when you get married, so I will take care of your parents and you will take care of my parents. Varun makes noise and gives them tea. Match maker asks if proposal is confirmed? DEvika gets tensed. Alek says dont take haste decision, marriage is a life long commitment so take your time, you should never regret your decision. Devika says there is nothing to regret, you are a nice guy, I like you, you took care of my father too, I dont have to think, I am ready to marry you. Varun coughs and offers her sweets, they share eyelock. Devika says yes this is a happy occasion, we should get engaged tomorrow. Something falls, Devika bents to pick it up and her cleavage is shown, Alek eyes is lustfully. Varun sees it and picks it up, he glares at Alek . Devika doesnt see it and says I got cheated so I have good eye to recognize nice people, relation is confirmed from my side. Match maker asks Alek to say yes. Alek says okay I agree with this proposal, he shakes Devika’s hand and smirks. Varun is jealous seeing their hand shake. He thinks that this Alek is not like he is showing, his eyes and hands are roaming in different direction, I have to find his truth, I wont let wrong man come in Devika’s life.
At night, Devika is trying to tie her blouse’s dori. She thinks its her mom in room and asks her to tie dori. Varun is standing on door and smiles at her. He comes inside and holds her dori, he ties it but keeps looking away. Devika feels his presence and sees him in mirror, she asys what are you doing here? how dare you touch my dori. Varun says I am just your slave, you asked me to tie it so I did, it happened before too. Devika says why are you here? Varun says I am going to find truth of Alek , he is not like how he shows, something is wrong. Devika says nothing is wrong, go to Mumbai and do act, you can be any kind of human but you are a nice actor, you became prince and made me.. he says made you what? Devika says Alek is a nice person, I am doing right by marrying him, he send me poetry too. She reads it. Varun says its a song. Devika says dont be jealous and leave. Varun says I am going but to return, I will bring Alek’s truth out before engagement. Devika says if you dont find anything then dont hide your face. Devika’s bangle get stuck in Varun’s shirt. Varun says fate is keeping us closer. Devika says its reminding me of my mistakes, leave now, he leaves. Devika says what is happening? I am getting attracted to him. Lajjo comes there and says you said yes to Alek so soon, you took time for Varun. Devika says I did mistake before but not now, Alek is a nice man, he is good, intelligent and.. enough. Lajjo says but he is not Varun. Lajjo says Varun and you won best couple competition, and just for a small thing.. Devika says he cheated and I wont forgive him. Lajjo says people do mistakes, if you forget it for sometime then you will see goodness of Varun. Devika says I have taken decision. Lajjo says its your decision in the end.
Devika prays to Lord and asks if she is doing the right thing by marrying Alek.
Varun comes to streets to find something about Alek. Varun sees a woman on road and shows her picture of Alek, he asks if you know this man? Girl says who are you? why you are asking about him? I wont tell you, she leaves. VArun is confused and says I wont leave till I find about this Alek.
Devika sits in her window and says why do I feel like something is wrong? am I doing the right thing? Devika recalls her moments with Varun.
Varun is sitting on bench in park and thinks that I miss Devika, she doesnt even love me. Naina plays as they both miss each other. Varun wipes his tears.
PRECAP- Varun is returning home. Devika and Urmi dances in her engagement. Alek and Devika are about to get engaged but Varun comes there and says stop! I told you I will come on time and I havent come alone, I have brought something with me. All look on.
Update Credit to: Atiba
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Lakshmi…i’ve run across to Faysal Quishi dramas that seem very good, this one called Mol…https://www.dawn.com/news/1192912 And this one called Naraz http://pakdramareviews.blogspot.ca/2016/04/naraaz.html if you haven’t you should watch them, they sound really good…don’t worry i’m not expecting you to triple your work..would love your opinion though.
I meant “Two” lol
Continuation Episode 2
In the staff room ,Mariam’s friend says that she should thank Allah for saving her from getting married to Umar…another colleague opines that it must have definitely hurt her to see the doctor with another girl…. And thanks her stars that her own husband ,Saif,,though very rude,is not like that….tne naughtiest of the three tries to taunt hervsaying that she has seen her husband Saif with another girl many times….what is she boasting about….as she starts getting tensed ,Mariam ,telling her to stop her jokes,cautions her that she will understand someone’s hurt when she herself faces such a situation…..Changing the topic,Mariam says that she has opted to teach extra hours and will be attending the interview..and asks them if they are going to join her…one says that her husband won’t allow her and another cheekily replies that she doesn’t have time for social service..
When everyone is asleep ,Mariam sits outside looking at the moon partly covered by the clouds. Reminicising Umar’s words that he would never leave Saira,she thinks why people feel so lonely when they part ways with someone they have hopes on…
Tasleen is shocked to hear her friends’s view that Mariam should not have refused to marry Umar even if he has a girl friend…reminding Tasleen that it is always a girl who should compromise,she tells her that no one would believe them if they say that Umar was rejected by Mariam…the society will always find fault with the girl only.Telling her that Allah has allowed men to marry four times,she finds fault with Tasleen for not teaching her daughters the facts of life…..Tasleen feels wretched when she tells her that the whole neighbour hood is laughing at them…
Aamna becomes sad when Mariam tells her that she will be coming late from school as she has opted to teach extra hours….complaining that she will feel bored without her sister and friend,she requests Mariam to reject the offer…Reminding her that she is her younger sister and not her mother,Mariam asks her not to give instructions to her…Aamna,annoyed ,says that she doesn’t know her sister is so stubborn…as a last resort ,she becomes offensive and says that she knows why she is trying to spend more time outside….a girl whose marriage is called off will try to avoid her home and family and she is doing the same…Mariam replies break ups happen when there is a relationship ,in her case everything happened before the relationship was not even in the budding stage…so where is the question of break up….Aamna feels bad for hurting her sister’s feelings for her self interest.
Umar’s mother tells him that no girl from a respectable family refuses to marry, that too after the dates are fixed,without any valid reason….saying that that she is suspicious of her own son ,she says that instead of searching for another girl,she will approach Mariam’s parents again…Umar says there is no such need to get humiliated and asks his mother to look for another girl…
Tasleen ,after speaking to someone,gets really annoyed and shows her frustration on Mariam…saying that their neighbours and relatives are bad mouthing them ,she blames Mariam for bringing shame to the family…when Mariam asks how she is responsible,Tasleen says that she should not have refused Umar after the matter was cleared by his mother …feeling hurt Mariam tells her mother that she had decided not to tell anyone about the confirmation of her suspicions by Umar himself but now she has no other alternative to appease her anger…she tells her mother how Umar called her up to inform that she did the right thing by objecting to the marriage as he would never have left Saira…when Tasleen asks is it true,Mariam replies she knows that her daughter has never lied in her life…if she still thinks that she is at fault ,then she wish that she could have married Umar irrespective of the consequences ,atleast her parents and neighbours and relatives would have been happy…Taken aback at this revelation ,Tasleen says that now she doesn’t have any complaints and Infact thankful to Allal for saving her daughter…seeing her mother in tears Mariam requests her mother not to cry for her as she is absolutely fine …as long as her family is by her side,no one can hurt her…her father who comes there appreciates hs daughter for her confidence and courage…
Umar’s mother, inspite of her son’s instructions, visits Tasleen to know the real reason behind their refusal….and shattered to know that her son has been lying all the time and never told her about Saira…after going home ,she becomes furious for not telling about his girl friend…When she questions him who is Saira,he just leaves saying that he will tell at the right time…
Mariam with other candidates waits in the reception to be interviewed by Zyan…as her turn comes ,she opens his cabin door and asks for hs permission to come in…for the first time Zyan sees Mariam…
End of the episode
Cathy,I don’t know what happened to the first part of Adhoori Aurat that I posted at about 3pm this afternoon….I will see if the second part will be published or not before proceeding with Episode 3….I will certainly watch the two serials that you mentioned as now I am obsessed with Faisal ‘s serials…but I must say that his female leads are in no way less,they are very impressive….Right now I sm watching another of his all time hits Aap ke liye….
Cathy..you can see that episode 2 continuation is already here…but it is only the last 14 minutes update….let us hope the first 24 minutes also appears….as it takes atleast an hour to rewrite again…
Still not clear wat happened to the first 24 minutes episode..it was awaiting moderation when I closed my I pad…anyways in short the story is…
.Zyad ‘s mother and sister make every effort to make Zyan meet Faiza and Afsa invites her brother for dinner not telling that her sister in law Faiza will also be there…..when Faiza arrives at her brother’s house,Zyan leaves without even having dinner saying that he has an important official obligation…leaving his sister and brother in law stunned and Faiza disappointed…..later his furious mother declares that she is going to fix his marriage with Fauza even against his wishes.
Umar’s mother brings her son to the professor’s house explaining that her son has no need to hide anything from her as she gave him full freedom to marry any girl of his choice and Mariyam is his choice….the girl they saw in the restaurant was only his colleague and nothing more….as Umar also tenders his apologies for causing them unnecessary tension,Mariam’s parents feel somewhat comfortable but Mariam who has seen Umar moving closely with Saira doesn’t get convinced…once they leave,she conveys to her parents that she can not marry Umar and returns the ring to the shock of her mother who gets worried about Mariam’s reputation and her future marriage prospects after this break up.
The episode mostly portrays the mental turmoil of Mariyam after rejecting Umar…may be Umar is innocent…but Umar after coming to know that Mariam has rejected her ,rings up and informs her that her fears are absolutely true and she did the right thing by refusing to marry him as he would never have left Saira…
Cathy ,ths is the summary of first 24 minutes, which could n’t be published may be due to some error …. Continuation is here…From the third episode,Mariam comes into Zyan ‘s life…
It hasn’t shown up, maybe it was a glitch, but second one did so all is well.
Episode 3. Adhoori Aurat
Mariam comes for the interview and Zyan asks her to take a seat…looking at her Cv,Zyan remarks that her education record indicates her to be a bright student…when asked what is her teaching experience,Mariam replies all the info is in her cv only…When he insists that he wants to hear from her,Mariam says One year experience….next he asks her why did she take up teaching when she could have got better jobs with her excellent educational qualifications….hearing her say that she ls doing it because she loves it,Zyan gets sarcastic ….means she is doing it not out of necessity but as a hobby…then comments how many girls can pursue their hobbies in Pakistan…..they get married after a year or two,then all the hobbies take the back seat….Reminding him that most of the women he interviewed so far are married only ,Mariam insists that women can not only manage home and job perfectly as they are very sincere but can handle pressure situations better than men…Zyan looks impressed with her reply and the rest of the interview passes smoothly..
Ajji returns home from her village all ready to handle Mariam’smarriage responsibilities ,absolutely unaware of what happened in her absence of just one week….as she shows the embroidered dresses that she brought for Mariam,she gets excited showing one particular dress that she got it embroidered ,herself giving the intricate design….when Ajji suggests that from the next day onwards ,they should not allow Mariam to go out so that her complexion looke really rosy on the marriage day….as there is no response for anything from Tasleen ,Ajji,concerned ,asks her what is the matter…why is she looking so dull…..When Tasleen breaks the sad news that Marism’s marriage is called off,Ajji,shocked ,wonders what could be the reason for the boy to reject Mariam as it is almost impossible for anyone to find faults with her…..and gets even more shocked to hear that it was Mariam who rejected Umar…
While going home from Zyan’s office,Mariam’s friend Aayesha asks her what was that he was interviewing her for almost an hour…Mariam ,thoroughly exhausted replies that he has simply eaten away her head by continuously asking different questions on various subjects ,all the time with a smile on his lips…..Ayesha says that if she were Mariam ,she would have got up after ten minutes and come out….why should they take so many pains for just 30%extra salary…when she advises Mariam to back out as it is not too late ,Mariam ,changing the topic asks her what could be the problem with Batun ,their other colleague.,that she has not come to school so far,Ayesha suggests that she must be crying at home after getting slaps from her husband again….when Mariam asks how can she imagine such callous things,Ayesha replies that she is saying only facts and reminds Mariam the countless times that their colleague came to school , sometimes with swollen eyes and sometimes with marks on her cheeks….Mariam tells her enough and she will check on their friend on her way back home…..Ayesha asks Mariam to convey her message also that she should divorce her rather dictator husband as she doesn’t have children yet from him….as Mariam looks shocked ,Ayesha tells her that we should live in reality and reality is always bitter.
After listening to everything ,Ajji consoles Tasleen saying that there are no dearth of matches for Mariam …when Tasleen expresses concern that they got a bad name among their relatives and it is almost made into a scandal,Ajji sternly asks her why is she getting worried about these so called relatives who just knows blabbering but none come to their aid when in problems….telling her own experience with her mean relatives in the village,Ajji advises Tasleen to concentrate on her children’s future and pray the almighty that Mariam gets a caring and loving husband ….and they say Ameen to that,
Afsa visits her mother after their flopped plan to tell her that her husband Khurram did n’t talk to her for almost two days because of her brother Zyan’s insulting behaviour….Her mother explains how she scolded Zysn that day and even declared that she would be seeking Faiza’s hand for him….Exasperated,Afsa tells her mother that they can not force Zyan to marry Faiza,,,both of them should sit with him and discuss in detail….when her mother remarks that Zyan never finds time to sit with them and nowadays he has added some more work to his already busy schedule ,Afsa enquires where is her brother so busy nowadays ….her mother sarcastically says that now his mission is to get the poor children get educated,,,and for that he himself is conducting interviews…
As Mariam is busy checking copies in her room,Ajji comes to her complaining that nowadays she is busy even after coming home…and no time at all for relaxation… Mariam explains that she is giving her spare time to a good cause and she really gets satisfaction if the needy are benefited from her free time,…Ajji advises to cater some time for herself also as first we have to look after ourselves…Mariam gently tells her that with her there l ooking after every need of theirs,she has enough time to help others….and conveys her gratitude for coming back as she need not get worried about her mother now who got really disturbed due to the cancellation of her marriage…..Ajji comforts her that all the mothers are like that only,they can not see their children sad particularly daughters…Telling her she will leave in the morning and come back only in the evening,Mariysm requests Ajji to take care of her mother….Ajji says it is her duty…
To be continued
Continuation
Afsa requests her husband Khurram to give permission to his sister Faiza to work as a teacher for some time….when he says that his sister has no need to do any job,Afsa ,explaining about the new project that her brother has taken up,says that Zyan ,right now is conducting interviews for selecting teachers and if Faiza joins him in this noble mission and works without salary,he will certainly be impressed…Moreover if they work together ,there is a chance of them coming closer….Annoyed ,Khurram says that her brother behaves as if he is the prince of some kingdom …and asks is it necessary to mould his sister to his ways with the hope that he will marry her….Feeling offended,Afsa says if he and his sister are not interested in Zyan,then fine,why should she do all these planning and take so much pain….Seeing his wife in a foul mood,Khurram says sorry and consents to send Faiza to work as a teacher but asks his wife to tell Faiza herself…
As Faiza makes every effort to look attractive and gets ready to go to Zyan’s office to entice him,Zyan ,already in his office ,takes a small break after disposing of some files…reminicising his conversation with the demure yet strong willed Mariam ,he smiles to himself …immersed in the pleasant thoughts of Mariam,he gets a rude shock seeing Faiza there wishing him cheerfully.Not showing his dislike,he invites her in and shows the chair….immediately ,she complains that his security were not ready to allow her inside but when she told them about her relationship with him,they had to keep quiet….He asks her what relationship ….then deciding to overlook her stupidity,he asks her how come she is here this morning….Reminding him that this is the first time she is coming to hs office ,she taunts him ,is n’t he going to offer a cup of tea or coffee…..not responding to her small talk ,he asks her to tell him the purpose of her visit as he has to attend an important meeting in another five minutes….Faiza says that she is so impressed with his initiative to educate the poor children that she has decided to join his campaign and help him in his endeavour….when he thanks her for her kindness,she informs him excitedly that inspite of her sister in law telling her to take her cv along with her,she has not brought as she knows his requirements and he ,her qualification….Zyan supports her saying that her cv is not required,…as an elated Faiza blabbers on and on,he coolly tells her that the interviews are over and the teachers are already selected,…that’s why there is no need of any cvs…As Faiza gets stunned, he orders a cup of coffee on the intercom and leaves for the meeting requesting her not to leave his office without having coffee…
When Zyan gets a call from his sister later saying that he should not have insulted her sister in law like this,Zyan ,telling her that the interviews are already over,informs that he is not given this post of immense responsibility not to do special favours to relatives and acquaintances and advises her not to come to him with this kind of requests as he is not going to entertain them…Saying that he is on his way to attend a meeting,he disconnects the call.
Faisa ,hurt and furious ,goes to her room straight and starts crying…when her mother comes in to console her,she snaps at her saying that she does n’t want to talk to anyone….how can she forget her embarrassment and insult in Zyan’s office…and with how many hopes and dreams she went there to meet Zyan…and had to come back scorned and offended….her mother tries to pacify her saying that she has already informed her brother Khurram in the office and he will go and talk to his wife Afsa about her brother’s attitude…..Faiza shouts that her brother is just a pawn in his wife’s hands ..and will never take a stand …Her mother ,asking her to calm down ,reminds that just like her brother Khurrsm loves her very much, the same way Zyan also loves his sister Afsa …by putting pressure on Afsa ,Zyan can be pressurised to marry her as he can not see his sister’s married life going into dumps……advising Faiza not to cry and spoil her face ,she says that she will talk to her son Khurram and ask him to exert pressure on Afsa to bring down Zyan to his knees……Feeling confident after talking to her mother,Faiza takes her dinner….
As expected,Khurram comes home in a furious state and takes his wife to task….he asks her meanly how could her brother dare to insult Faiza like that that in his office…When Afsa tres to cover up saying that Zyan had a really tight schedule that morning,the reason why he had to leave Faiza abruptly,….Khurram ,not in a mood to listen to any explanations, asks what does her brother think of himself…is he some Prime Minister or President…why is he so proud of his post??…Afsa,trying to calm him down says that he ismisunderstanding her brother….still if he thinks that Zaun is proud ,egoistic and manner less,…then leave him to hs fate and look for another match for Faiza….why is he holding her guilty for her brother’s mistakes…Khurram ,becoming dangerous ,whispers that she is also showing her true colours now…she too doesn’t want her brother to marry Faiza….Afsa,scared now,begs him to understand that her mother wants Faiza only as her daughter in law,,,that’s why s he too is making all efforts to convince her brother and she is sure that Zyan will accept Faiza but he needs some time to get convinced and marry Faiza on his own without anyone’s pressure……Khurram ,becoming aggressive warns her that he is controlling himself for his mother as he wants Zyan only as her son in law,otherwise ,he would have given suitable reply for ths insult….asking her to take the required time ,he again cautions her that she should see to it that Zyan marries Faiza only….
Before the classes commence,Zyan calls for a meeting of all the teachers….after discussing all the issues like the teaching hours,teaching methods to be adopted,he asks if they have any suggestions….Mariam suggests that in addition to teaching hours ,they should cater some time for outdoor activity….if all the time the children are forced to concentrate on subjects ,they won’t be able to concentrate as they are not used to sitting in the class for long hours because this will be their first school experience….Zyan,saying that he appreciates her suggestion ,passes instructions that twice in a week ,the boys should be given some outdoor activity…Mariam objects and asks him why only boys ,why not girls…explaining that the times have changed and it is important to instill confidence in both boys and girls so that they can lead a better life in future,she asks Zyan to allow girls also develop some hobbies…impressed ,Zyan agrees and gives necessary instructions…
As Mariam comes to reception with her colleagues,Zyan ‘s PA informs her that the boss wants to see her…Ayesha jokes that she should go inside and request the boss to call her also…
As Mariam goes into Zyan’s cabin,he asks her to take a seat and says that she deserves to have coffee with him…To his surprise ,Marism thanks him but rejects his offer saying that it is not necessary…when she asks anything else,he does n’t have anything to say….and she thanks him again and leaves his room..wondering how to understand this girl,Zyan smiles to himself …later when he inspects the classes,he finds Mariam in one of the classes teaching the students…and stands there watching her till his secretary reminds him that he has other duties to attend to…
To be continued
Continuation episode 3
Zyan’s mother is pleasantly surprised to see her son at home that day …to her tauntings,Zyan replies that he too wants to spend time with his family but his job is such that he never finds time….Feeling happy,she says she would have called his sister and brother in law also ,had he told her earlier….Zyan tells his mother that he wants to confide in her something important….she becomes elated to hear that her son has decided to marry atlast….as she gets up to inform Afsa that her brother is willing to marry Faiza,Zyan informs her that he wants to marry Mariam …..not Faiza……and she immediately rings up her daughter Afsa to share the shocking the news with her …advising her not to tell it Khurram,she asks Afsa to come home immediately.
Afsa is surprised to know that her brother wants to marry an ordinary teacher…her mother also informs that Zyan wants to go to Mariam’s house the next day itself and propose to her..
When Zyan is in his room thinking about how to approach Mariam’s parents ,Afsa comes into his room to confront him…….Saying that she is not here to accompany him to Mariam’s house,Afsa tells that she is surprised and shocked as well at his rather absurd choice…how can an ordinary school teacher be compared to Faiza …agreeing with his sister that there is indeed no comparison between the two girls,,he adds that Mariam is very special for him…and as his sister ,she doesn’t have any choice other than accompanying him to Mariam ‘s house,if she wants to…When Afsa objects that Mariam is from a middle class family,Zyan ,asking her not to be childish ,says that he has n’t done anything wrong by deciding to marry a girl of his choice…..His mother joins Afsa to declare that only a girl of their choice should become his wife and come to her house as her daughter in law…and he can not marry without the consent of his mother and sister…To their shock ,Zyan says that he doesn’t want to go against their will….so he will leave his mother’s house and set up his own family…Afsa tries to influence his decision saying that his unwillingness to marry Faiza has become a big issue in her in law’s house which might even threaten her relationship with her husband ……Zyan reminds her that he has never said that he is interested in Faiza and he can not help if all of them have been expecting him to marry Faiza,…Blaming them for making it into an issue,Zyan makes it clear that there is nothing wrong with Faiza but she is not his type….Afsa on the verge of tears asks him what should she tell her husband….she has promised him that Faiza will l be married to her brother only…now what will be his reaction if he sees her going to an ordinary person’s home seeking his daughter’s alliance for Zyan……correcting her vocabulary,Zyan says that Mariam’s father is a professor who commands lot of respect in the society……but not listening to any of his explanations,both mother and daughter leave the room after giving him the ultimatum that they expect him to change his decision.
In the morning ,as Zyan gets ready and applies perfume,his mother comes in enquiring where he is going…he replies he is going on his own to Mariam’s house as his mother and sister are unwilling to come with him….when she says that no one will accept to give their daughter to a boy who doesn’t have a family,Zyan tells her that he doesn’t have any other alternative and who knows Mariam’s father might accept also seeing his job and status….leaving the room ,he turns back to tell his mother that he will be very happy if she comes with him…but it is o.k…if she doesn’t want to come…..and gets pleasantly surprised when she tells him to wait as she will come with him..
In Mariam’s house, Zyan’s mother tells them how hard working her son is and how ,after his father’s death,he studied so hard that he is in this position today…..Tasleen says that as Zyan ‘s mother,her good wishes and prayers must have given him the strength to work hard….Zyan’s mother asks her to call their daughter …she replies that Mariam will be coming home at any time….
Aamna ,waiting for her sister eagerly in the garden ,runs to open the gate when she hears doorbell .Mariam ,unaware that Zyan is in her house ,tells her sister sarcastically that some VIP is visiting someone in their neighbourhood…that’s why there is a cavalcade of cars outside with gun wielding security guards….informing that the VIP is there in their living room only waiting for her,Aamna asks her sister to fresh up fast as an alliance has come for her,but Mariam ,without even freshening up,goes into the living room to see who it is…Tasleen introduces Zyan’s mother ,Nusrat and says that she need not introduce Zyan …Nusrat ,seeing Mariam says that she has no objections and hope they don’t have any objections…The professor says they too don’t have any objections but ……without her father completing the sentence,Mariam,to everyone’s shock says she has objections….as Zyan looks hurt,she tells her parents to reject them…
After coming home,Nusrat taunts that the girl has taught him a good lesson by rejecting him….saying that her refusal is not a big deal,Zyan reminds his mother that their proposal was a surprise to her as he didn’t inform them anything earlier….Nusrat, furious ,says that the girl didn’t even think twice before saying no…atleast she should have said that she requires time to decide..Zyan smiles and says that he will try again ….she screams and starts using abusive language against Mariam and her family…when Zyan reminds that she herself taught him that abusing someone is not good,Nusrat cools down and says that she won’t use abusive words but will never come to their house again or allow him to go there …and now he should listen to her and do whatever she tells…Zyan asks what is that she wants,Nusrat tells him that he will marry Faiza before ths month is over….Zyan tries to stop but invain..
There in Mariam’s house ,Tasleen is furious with her daughter….she asks her does she have any idea what the boy does and from which family he is….when Mariam asks her why is she seeing only his post and family status,but not her likings,Tasleen ,completely out of mind ,tells her rudely that she can not keep her daughters unmarried for life long…and she has already taken too much advantage of their love for her…Ajji interferes and sends Mariam inside telling Tasleen that she will make her understand her mistake…As Mariam goes inside with tears in her eyes,Tasleen ,extremely disappointed,sits there crying …Ajji tells her that it is not good to shout at a young daughter like that…and Mariam is a very obedient daughter …she will do wheatever her mother wants her to do….
As Mariam sits crying in her room ,Aamna comes there to tell her sister that she didn’t do right this time….she could understand when she had rejected Umar ,but rejecting Zyan ,she can not understand ….what are the drawbacks in him to refuse so rudely…Mariam confides in her sister that she knows there are no drawbacks in him but after the bitter experience with Umar ,she doesn’t want to think about marriage now…..when Aamna says this is no reason to refuse Zyan,Mariam replies that is good enough reason for her….requesting Aamna to leave her alone,Mariam shuts her door and give way to her tears.
Afsa is annoyed with her mother for going to Mariam’s house and asks her what did she get….insult and rejection….Saying that she didn’t have any other alternative as Zyan was ready to leave the house ,Nusrst tells her daughter that one way this decision of hers has helped her indirectly……with that girl’s rejection ,now she can dictate terms to her son ….she tells Afsa how she told Zyan that he would be married to Faiza within a month …when Afsa taunts that her brother is not a child to do whatever she wishes,Nusrat makes it clear whether he likes it or not,thís time she will see to it that he gets married to Faiza..
Sitting in his car Zyan reminisces about Mariam’s refusal and how she even rejected to have coffee with him….thinking hiw she can refuse him like that he decides to ignore her refusal and try again,
End of the episode
Cathy ,don’t you think that Zyan and Mariam make a lovely couple….but this girl took my breath away when she rejected him outrightly but this guy will not be the one to back off…you will see in the next episode how he is going to bring her round with his charm and smiling eyes….yes,Cathy ,I love the way he looks at Mariam with that mischievous look in his eyes……but very very sadly……no I should not discuss it now…as and when the story unfolds,we will discuss….For now ,enjoy their romance…
Your right there is definitely chemistry happening between the two and by your cryptic remarks there are troubled waters ahead as with most love stories. lol looking forward to the next chapter.
Episode4 Adhoori Aurat
Ajji comes to Mariam’s room and finds her in a depressive mood….when questioned why she had to reject such a perfect match that every girl craves for,Mariam replies she has no answer….Explaining that good matches for girls come only till a certain age,Ajji tells her if she steps into her mother’s shoes ,she will understand the reason for her rude remarks,it is not that the daughters are a burden to the parents but her worry is what ,after them…who will take care of them,as brothers will have their own families..That’s why every mother wants her daughters to safely get married …Mariam says she knows her parents are worried on account of her after Umar’s escapades…but …when Ajji insists ,Mariam says she doesn’t want to talk about it as she is already worried…
Afsa asks her brother how he is expecting his mother to approach Mariam ‘s parents again when the matter is already closed with Mariam’s refusal …..Zyan makes it clear that he doesn’t want to argue ,and he won’t force them to come with him if they are not interested ….Reminding his sister that she too had kept Khurram’s proposal pending for almost six months,Zyan says that he is certain Mariam will accept…Afsa taunts him what is he going to do,,,holding her feet or begging her to marry him…..keeping his temper under control,Zyan tells her she need not be worried :whatever has to be done,he will do …Peeved at his obsession with Mariam,Nusrat asks her son what has he seen in Mariyam that he is not able to see in Faiza who is 100times better than Mariam….Equally furious Zyan tels hs mother and sister that so far he has never said anything against Faiza but he finds her too artificial ,vain ,immature and pompous.Whereas Mariam ,though not from a well to do family ,is exactly her opposite and he would like to marry her only…..aghast ,Nusrat informs her son that she is going to her daughter’s house now itself,and he can do whatever he wishes.As she goes up to do packing ,Zyan requests his sister to understand him but she ,being more adamant and stubborn,refuses saying that she can not leave her mother here ,so she will be taking her with her…..Shaken ,Zyan sits on the sofa confused,,,Afsa ,seeing him vulnerable,asks him is he ready to marray Faiza….Zyan nods ,Afsa smiles and says she will inform their mother…
Mariam’s father ,seeing his wife’s rude and indifferent attitude towards Mariam says that he too is not happy with what Mariam did but she should not hurt her daughter like this….Noticing Mariam laying dinner,Tasleen taunts that if someone doesn’t like her attitude ,they need not come before her….When Mariam asks her parents to have dinner,Tasleen refuses to come to the dining table……Hurt ,Mariam asks her mother what is that she has done to earn her extreme ire …blaming her husband for pampering the girls ,she storms out of the room….Mariam asks her father has she committed such a sin by rejecting Zyan …he tells his daughter that she should not have been so curt and rude…and he feels sorry that she has forgotten the rudiments of decency and hurt the feelings of Zyan for no fault of his as there was no need to show her anger and frustration on him…He felt particularly bad because he couldn’t find any faults in Zyan ,moreover there was no need to enquire about him as the whole city knows him……Anyways now there is no use of repenting as everything is over. Asking her to have dinner and go to bed,he tells her she need not be worried about her mother as she will become normal in a few days…
After dinner ,Mariam comes out into the garden and recollects all the bitter memories….her happly engagement with Umar,the later shocking revealation in the restaurant ,her rude reply to Zuan and his mother and her mother’s outrage at her impudence,her father’s kindness …Not knowing how to deal with so many facets of this complicated life and the relationships it created Mariam ,feeling lonely cries…
In the school,Ayesha brings coffee and asks why is she so silent…..when Mariam says nothing,Ayesha remarks that she can make out from her tone that someone has thrown a stone and disturbed the placid waters…Mariam ,showing her hand asks her to foretell her future as she is in the habit of saying many things about everyone…Aayesha says that she can see her marrying a very popular guy and because of him she too will become well known….Red faced ,Mariam takes back her hand ….Ayesha ,surprised asks her has she said anything wrong….every girl wants that only…why is she reacting in a different manner.seeing her still moody and dull,Ayesha suggests they should go home.
To be continued
Continuation
Nusrat ,after taking her son’s consent goes to Faiza!’s house to meet her mother and give her the good news…Khurram and Afsa also join to celebrate this joyous occasion …Saying that she always wanted Faiza as her daughter in law,Nusrat tells them that that they should fix the marriage date as early as possible because good and auspicious events should never be delayed…..Khurram ,congratulating the ladies suggests that they should go ahead with the ring ceremony may be the day after tomorrow itself ,then Nikka after a week….Afsa objects that they can not do her only brother’s marriage in such a Luke warm way …saying that she has many special plans for this special occasion,Afsa makes it clear that the marriage will take place only after all the rituals are thoroughly enjoyed….Khurram remarks that he too has only one sister,so he will take care of engagement and Nikka ,ant the other responsibilities are his wife’s…Afsa’s mother in law asks her to offer sweets to everyone…after fixing the marriage date that is just 15 days away,,Khurram ‘s mother asks where is Zyan…Nusrat informs them that she has told her son to reach here from the office but might have got busy with some work….Afsa jokes that it is not because of any busy schedule but she knows very well that her brother must have avoided as he is too shy to grace this occasion….As Faiza feels shy,her mother says that Zyan is a true gentleman..
Zyan is in a real dilemma ….he has consented to marry Faiza due to the threats of his mother and sister but can he do justice to this relationship….just then Khurram comes there ,inviting him for the evening dinner as Faiza and their mother will also be there ,so thst all of them can meet over dinner and discuss about other dates and arrangements….Zyan tries to convey his inhibitions but Khurram ,absolutely excited and elated ,doesn’t notice Zyan’s sober mood…After extending the invitation ,he hurries off saying that he has to meet Nusrat aunty leaving Zyan brooding over his decision to marry Faiza..
Both the families meet over dinner in Afsa’s house ,…..though Zyan attends ,his thoughts and concentration are somewhere ,but no one notices.
Later in the privacy of his room ,Zyan contemplates the options available to him and comes to a decision….
As the doorbell rings,Aamna opens the door and to her surprise finds Zyan standing there and asking for her parents….she informs him that they have gone out with her brother….on his enquiry about Mariam ,she replies that her sister is at home only …inviting him inside into the living room,Aamna goes inside to tell her sister,busy in making beds ,that Zyan is waiting for her….Taken aback at his unexpected arrival,Mariam whispers to her sister to go and tell him that her parents are not at home and she too has gone out with them….Feeling a little guilty for putting her sister in this awkward situation,Aamna replies that she can not do so now as she has already informed him that she is at home only and invited him into the drawing room ….as she doesn’t have any other alternative,Mariam goes out to confront Zyan…
Seeing her Zyan greets her but without reciprocating ,Mariam point blankly asks him why is here inspite of her refusal that day…Zyan says he is here to talk to her and ask her the reason for her refusal….Mariam reminds him that their so called relationship has not come that far for him to take this liberty of coming to her house directly that too when her parents and brother are not at home….ignoring her taunts,Zyan asks her explicitly why did she reject him….Mariam replies that she doesn’t think it necessary to reply to his query….Zyan responds that she is insulting him….Mariam retorts that he is misunderstanding her….Zyan says in that case he is ready to understand her if she cares to explain…..As he waits for her to respond,Mariam simply says that she has lost all faith in men…..When Zyan concludes that some guy with whom she was in love might be responsible for her losing faith in all men and castigating them as cheats,Mariam ,interrupting him ,says that she hates to talk about this subject….explaining that hatred is also a feeling like love ,Zyan wonders when she can feel and understand hatred ,why can’t she feel his love for her…Mariam ,becoming indifferent ,says that he wanted to know the reason for her refusal and she has obliged his request….Exasperated ,he reminds her that just like all the fingers are not of the same length,the same way all men are not cheats….and declares that inspite of what she said to him,,he would like to marry her only and no one else……and goes out leaving Mariam speech less.
Faiza visits the florist and selects a bouquet ….as Aamna readies the tray with tea ,,she sees Mariam and asks her if tea and biscuits are ok for the guest….saying that there is no need to take all these pains as he has already left,Mariam goes to her room…Aamna follows her sister and tells her in no uncertain terms that she has n’t done the right thing by refusing him again and makes it clear that there is a limit to everything….to her sister’s query that what does she actually want in life ,Mariam has no answer.
Faisa greets Zyan’s mother ,after exchanging pleasantries ,Nusrat ,seeing the bouquet in her hands asks if it is for Zyan,,,,Smiling pleasantly ,she tells Faiza that Zyan will be reaching home at any time….but Faiza requests her to allow her keep the bouquet in Zyan’s room…..Saying that his room will be hers also in a few days ,Nusrat tells her that she need not ask for her permission .
Faiza goes into Zyan’s room and looks for a suitable place to keep the bouquet …and feels shy and happy to see Zyan’s photo on the side table…keeping the flowers on the centre table,she takes out her mobile and takes a snap shot of his photo…
Tasleen unwilling to believe what she heard,asks Aamna repeatedly whether Zyan has really come and talked to Mariam….When Aamna confirms ,she says excitedly that the doors are still open as Zyan seems not to have taken Mariam’s refusal seriously …Ajji ,who is doing Namaz there agrees with her saying that Zyan would not have come again if he had taken Mariam’s rude refusal seriously ….Tasleen requests Ajji to convince Mariam atleast this time as good fortune does n’t always give a second chance…Ajji says Ameen…to Tasleen’s relief, Ajji confidently says this time she will see to it that Mariam accepts Zyan …
Zyan comes home and noticing the flowers on the center table,gets puzzles….wanting to know by whom the Bouquet has been kept,he looks for his mother in her room…not finding her there,he calls the house maid and asks where is his mother…she informs him that Madam has gone out with Ms.Afsa …on his enquiry ,who else has visited the house that day,she tells about Faiza…
Coming back to his room,he gets furious seeing the bouquet …Adding to his fury,Faiza ,in her own dreamland,forwards the snap shot of his photo ,to his number…Zyan stares at the photo sent by Faiza for sometime ,then looking at the photo frame on his table ,he understands what happened in his absence….After deleting Faiza’s message,he throws her flowers into the dustbin…
As Mariam chats with her colleagues in the staff room,she is informed that a student’s mother is waiting for her…Mariam tells her friends that she has called the mother of one of her students ,who is a very bright boy but whose performance has not been up to the mark for the last several weeks…she wants to discuss with his mother the reasons for his recent poor show in the exams…as she comes into the waiting room ,she is surprised to see Saira ,Umar’s girl friend there…….and she understands the reason for the child’s poor grades and tells the same to Saira.
To be continued
Continuation
Faiza ,in a very happy mood,tells her sister in law,Afsa that she wants to do all her wedding shopping with Zyan…Afsa advises her to stop day dreaming as her brother has never taken her or even their mother for shopping…shocked,Faiza asks her what does she mean…that Zyan will never take her for shopping …Afsa smiles and says that her only option is to change him to her liking after their marriage…but for now she can only request him ,and if he agrees ,she can consider herself lucky…..Faiza requests her sister in law to request her brother for her,but Afsa refuses saying she doesn’t want to interfere…and it looks right if she calls her would be…hesitating Faiza calls Zyan’s number.Seeing it is some number not saved on his mobile,Zyan receives the call and gets irritated to hear Faiza’s voice….Ignoring his sarcastic query,that how many more numbers does she own,Faiza asks him softly about the message sent by her….curtly saying that he doesn’t appreciate this type of childish things,he asks her the reason for calling him …..When Faiza tells him that she wants him to select her wedding dresses,Zyan disconnects the call saying that he is busy….Stunned for a moment Faiza tells herself that in a matter if few days Zyan and his complete time will be hers….
On her friend Ayesha’s insistence ,Mariam agrees to have lunch with her in an expensive restaurant ….as they enter the mall,Mariam tells her this is the first and last time she is obliging her as she doesn’t want her to waste her entire salary for just one meal in this high figh restaurant ….and surprised to hear Zyan greeting them….and he is there with a charming smile…..when Mariam looks at her friend Ayasha, Zyan thanking Ayesha ,says it is not her fault and she had to accept under pressure from him …As Ayesha apologises to Mariam,Zyan says he had to do all this as he wants to talk to her…..when asked what he wants to say, he says nothing other than he wants to marry her….When Mariam remarks that he is doing all this due to his ego,he contradicts her that it is not his ego that is making him mad but his love for her… Ayesha excuses herself….When Zyan explains he won’t be boasting if he says many girls are eager to marry him….Mariam coolly advises him to marry any one of them..when Zyan ,exasperated says that he can not marry any,other than her,Mariam returns that it is not her problem…..Accepting that it is his problem,he asks her to think again….Mariam wants to leave but he stops her saying sorry ….he explains that he won’t make any dreamy promises but assures that he will always love her and keep her happy till the end of their lives….Taking a pause he says that he knows she is angry with him and she should be also …..the way he brought his mother proposing to her without even informing her, later approaching her when her parents were not at home and now calling her here through her friend…..she must be peeved at his impertinence ,and if he were in her place ,he too would have reacted in the same way,…. Saying that he is seriously helpless,he accepts that he bis hopelessly attracted to her ….and he finds her attitude ,dignity simplicity and innocence irresistible …Telling her that he doesn’t want to pressurise her and the final decision will be hers,Zyan concludes saying that he expects her to understand and he is sure that they will live together happily the rest of their lives…Ayesha makes her appearance and says to Zyan that for today the class is enough as they are getting late…when Zyan offers to drop them ,Ayesha happily agrees but Mariam rejects his offer….when he asks for her permission to accompany them till the cab,Mariam doesn’t say anything …..On their way out,they come across Umar ,seeing him ,Mariam panics….Umar ,recognising Zyan ,shakes hands with him and asks Mariam is she with him….without answering ,Mariam moves away,,,,and Zyan looks at her thoughtfully…
To be concluded
Continuation
Nusrat conveys to Faiza’s mother that they don’t want any dowry ….Faiza’s mother says that giving something to her daughter actually gives her pleasure …Khurran and Afsa announce that the rituals will be commencing from the next week itself with the first being Sangeet and invitations are already sent to the ladies.
Ajji opens the door to see someone standing with a beautiful bouquet of flowers …giving it to her,he informs that it is from Mr.Zyan Ahmad to Ms.Mariam…in her room ,Mariam reminicising Zyan’s determination wonders why he is so much bothered about her….when there is not much of relationship between them,,, why is her rejection hurting him so much….Comparing Umar with Zyan ,Mariam recollects how she had rejected Umar also and the way he reacted by calling her and informing meanly that her suspicions were true…..and Zyan ,inspite of her rejecting him twice,he is still pleasant and determined to marry her but leaving the decision to her..
Seeing Ajji with flowers Maraim asks her if she has brought these lovely flowers for her….When she says no,Mariam looks at her inquisitively ….Explaining that she wanted to talk to her to make her understand her fault,Ajji tells her there is no such need now as these flowers sent by Zyan will tell her everything…she hands over the bouquet to Mariam and leaves her to her thoughts and Mariam could not help but remembering Zyan’s words that inspite of her rejecting him twice,he wants to marry her only…
After getting ready ,Faiza waiting for her friends ,opens a book but her mind is not clearly there….Afsa comes in complementing her looks and says she has taken appointment from her beautician and she should come with her….Faiza says she will cancel her programme with her friends and come with her…
Calling up Mariyam ,Zyan pleasantly tells her that he should have sent the flowers much earlier,and it was a mistake on his part but he can hope now that the lovely flowers would raise her spirits that are dampened by that unpleasant encounter with Umar…. Surprised ,Mariam asks how does he know about Umar……Saying that Ayesha has told him,he advises her not to give much importance to what the outsiders say because the world can never see you happy……and for her information ,she looks beautiful happy and smiling…When Mariam thanks him, Zyan asks thanks for what……she says for all his good advice,and she knows whenever she forgets,he will be there to remind her…..first he doesn’t understand the meaning of her words and when the meaning hits him,,,,his joy finds no bounds…When he asks her to repeat,Mariam gets shy and says that whatever he has heard her saying is true…..and prays the almighty that the flowers sent by him will never wither away….as she disconnects the call,Zyan feels elated that finally he could win her heart…..
End of the episode
Adhoori Aurat…..Episode 5
Nusrat is pleasantly surprised to see her son in high spirits…And Zyan accepts that indeed he is very happy….Unaware of the real reason for his happiness,Nusrat thanks god for her son’s happy mood and tells him that he has to accompany his sister that evening to select some clothes….Zyan hesitates for a moment then requests his mother to excuse him from all these shoppings ….Reminding him that he is going to get married in a few days,she tells him that certain things have to be done whether we like it or not,….Vexed with her demands,Zyan makes it clear that he wante a simple marriage …Blaming him for the stillness in this house ,she tells him about the activities that are going on in Faiza’s house…the friends ,the relatives ,their nok jhoks ,the beats from the Dholak ,….a perfect marriage environment ….Zyan says he doesn’t like,noise and crowds….Reminding Zyan that he is her only son and Faiza also the only daughter,Nusrat tells him that both the families want a grand marriage…ans noise and crowds are imminent ..
Sakra meets Umar in a restaurant to inform him that Mariam is her son’s teacher and she has recognised her…..now she has no other option other than changing hs school…asking her not to be stupid,,Umar says it will disturb her child’s studies….But Saira ,looking scared,,confides in him that Mariam may come to her house and inform her husband about their relationship…..Umar comforts her saying that Mariam will not do such a thing ,by chance if she does so,then he too won’t allow her to live in peace…And once again ,Umar and Saira declare their love for each other.
As Mariam feels shy,Ayesha announces to their colleagues that love is in the air….as they don’t know anything about what has been going on in Mariam!s life post Umar ‘s episode,,Ayesha explains that prince Zyan Ahmad has fallen for their darling Mariyam….when one of them wonders what next,Ayesha says it will be the usual stuff only….they will be married and live together happily ever after…
Zyan comes to meet Mariam’s parents …but as the professor is not at home,Tasleen decides to talk to him….Saying that Aamna has informed her about his previous visit,Tasleen tells him that they really felt very bad for Mariam’s impudence that too in front of his mother…Zyan replies that ,that is not a matter of a concern as every person has the right to convey his /her likes and dislikes….Tasleen says that she knows that very few can be as big hearted as him…..Zyan smiles and reasons may be he is different from others….refusing her request to have tea,Zyan tells her that he is here with a request…explaining that Mariam is the girl of her dreams and he doesn’t want to lose her for anyone….not even for his family…he asks Tasleen for her daughter’s hand…..Tasleen ,confused ,asks him where is his mother because such things should be discussed by elders….looking sad ,Zyan says that his mother might never come here…..
To be concluded on the 16th April page…