Hi guys.
Note.
As I read ur comments no one wants to accept ribir so I changed my mind.
Actually u guys don’t want ria and honestly speaking I dnt want sanchi. And I chose sanaya irani opposite of kabir.
Swarda will play guest appearance role as sanchi in fb.
So guys no ribir for u and no kanchi for me. It’s better for u and me. Share ur views.
Sanaya irani as Khushi
Jodi name will be khushbir.
Should I start but it will be small.
Episode 1
Malhotra Mantion
2 boys were praying to God when a boy cums to them.
Boy – hi laksh and Robin
So boys were rolaksh.
Rolaksh turns to boy and gets happy seeing him.
Laksh -sid
Rolaksh hugs sid.
Robin – I’m glad to see u happy sid after that…
Laksh cuts off
Laksh -after u became a successful doctor.
Sid -yeah iam glad to cum back.
Robin -sid how was your day
Sid – gud and bad
Laksh -y bad
Sid -coz I missed u both and…well I shall change.
Laksh -yes.
Sid went
Laksh -Robin what did u meant
Robin – I meant
Laksh -dnt take that day name infront of sid. U knw na wat happens.
Precap :??????
There is no Precap coz I dnt knw u guys will like this jodi. And if you won’t like it I’ve to quit. Decision on u
Do comment and tell ur views. SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS.
10 Comments
Osm… Pair ? I really like it…. Please do continue……
Ur story is nice…
But Arnav and kushi pair is nice..
I like ur story..
Nice pair .awesome idea . Please continue your update
I think that Khushi is better with Arnav
Sorry if you are offended by my opinion but still I stand firm on my grounds for Kanchi
The choice is totally up to you
Please do continue as the sequel is quite exciting and your plot of the story is good
off-course Ashu plz continue it….bcoz kabir ke saath koi bhi girl acchi lagegii.
It’s nice, continue, Post next part asap
Do continue… Good selection…
Nice pair… Do continue
dkh yaar kanchi kanchi hai ar arshi arshi hi…ab aage teri marzi tjhe kiske saath pair karna hai kabir ko but jinny ar mjhe kanchi hi chahiye…it was o7m chotu sa cute update…post nxt asap…lv uh ashuuu dheeer saaara??????
Ofcourse ashu you continue this story yaar……..I am really so so excited for this ff yaar because sanaya is my favorite actress…….so I am really so much happy to knowing that you write ff on her…….. Thanks dear…….love u dear……tc yaar…….