Aankhoon mein Teri
Episode – 13th
Recap :- AHIL Saves Naina’s grandfather , Naina tells her feelings .
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ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ 1
AT CITY HOSPI-TAL
Naina was holding grandpa’s hand , She was sitting beside him . Instantly , She felt those old wrinkled and weak hands were trembling .
Naina : Dadu ,
Grandpa opens his eyes , He was seeing her face after almost several months , A tear of sadness dripped down from his feeble face, He spoke weakly ” Naina , Mera bacha ( Naina my daughter ) ”
Naina : Dadu are you okay , Are you fine , How are you ?
Grandpa : Seeing your face my illness has gone away , I’m fine
Naina : If anything would have happened to you today , I would have killed myself .
Someone standing at the door spoke ” And I would never let it happen ”
Naina got up and ran towards Ahil and Hugs him ” Thanks a lot Ahil , This is just because of you , He’s alive today ”
Grandpa : Ahil , Who’s he ?
Naina : He’s Ahil , My friend .
Ahil : Hi Uncle how’s you now .
Grandpa : I’m good Son , Come sit here .
Grandpa : You’re Ahil Sinha , AD Diamond’s next heir .
Ahil : Yes , But how you know
Grandpa looks into his eyes strangely ” How did you met Naina ”
Naina : we’ll talk about all this after Grandpa .
Doctor comes in ” Sorry Ahil now you should leave him alone he needs some rest ”
Ahil : Ya ! doc , Naina come let’s go .
Naina : Please not so early just a few minutes more
Doctor : Sorry Mam , Please try to understand it’s for his benefit only
Naina : Dadu we’ll meet very soon , Ha ! , Take care .
Naina moves out of the room , While Ahil says ” Doctor , Is everything fine now ”
Doctor : Yes, The operation was successful , It’s all fine now , Okay ”
Doctor says and turns back towards the monitors placed there . Ahil ” Okay , Bye , We’ll see you soon grandpa , Take rest ”
Ahil steps forward , Momentarily Grandpa holds his hand .
Grandpa ” Help her ! please ”
Ahil : What ! ( Low – confused tone )
Grandpa : My daughter is in ( He starts huffing ) d….a…..nnnnggg…
Ahil : What happened to you Dadu , Doctor
Grandpa wasn’t loosing his grip ” Kamini will ,,,,,( heavily breathing ) Ki….llll…….. her …….”
Doctor : Nurse , Injection hurry up .
Doctor injected needle into his body and soon he closed his eyes .
Ahil : what was it ! You said he’s okay
Doctor : Ya he’s ! but it seems like he has something to say , He’s hiding in him , It’s something which makes him angry or afraid every time he thinks of it .
Ahil : Doctor you please see him , I’ll come later .
Ahil lefts in dilemma thinking what he wants to say about Kamini and Naina .
Naina was sitting outside mute , Ahil comes and sat with her .
Naina gave him a bangle ” This is gold bangle , Will this be equal to the amount you’ve paid for me ”
Ahil holds Naina’s shoulders ” Are you silly , What are you saying , You yourselves said we’re friends , Then what is this ? ”
Naina : I don’t want to take load of all the favours you’ve done for me , I ought to pay them back , So that we’re equal then
Ahil : Naina what’s in your mind , what are you saying ? Please stop talking all this
Naina : Yes we’re friends , But only and just friends , You’ve to be there for Riya always , She’s for you , It’s decided , Please take this .
She keeps the gold bangle on his hands .
ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ – 2
SINHA’S HOUSE …
Janki : what are you serious , Ahil had withdrawn 18 lakhs from bank .
Man on phone : Yes , Mam , I thought there would be some problem so I just called
Janki : Problem ! I didn’t even knew about it , Thanks for calling .
Janki : AD did you heard , What is going on ?
AD : wait let me call Ahil and I’ll ask ( He calls )
Ahil : Hello , Hi Dad
AD : What I just heard is that true ?
Ahil : What !
AD : You withdrew 18 lakhs form bank , What happened ?
Ahil : Nothing dad , But I used for a good cause only
AD : Still you should consulted us before . ( Janki snatched phone )
Janki : I know Ahil why have you done this, For some friend , Right
Ahil ( little reluctant ) : Yes but it’s not wasted
Janki : You just wait and watch I’m coming to your Hostel right now
Ahil : what ! but why mom .
Janki shuts the phone .
AD : Janki see this ( he was dumb shocked )
Janki comes and sits with Him . AD shows her his phone
AD : Because of the party and all arrangements we didn’t saw the social accounts , See this .
Janki : Me too , I didn’t gave my phone a single look .
AD : These pictures shows Ahil is actually yours Son .
Janki : Wow ! ( She claps ) , Now he’s my Son , Yesterday in the party you were shouting , He’s my proud
AD : Thanks that Media didn’t got
to know anything , I’ll erase these pics from internet
Janki : Now I’ll go and interrogate Ahil , Who’s in this pictures
AD : And now he’ll not live there in hostel , we’ll Ask him to come back
Janki : Don’t worry now he’ll not go away from my eyes .
ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ – 3
RAI’S HOUSE …
Ahil drops Naina to her house .
Ahil : Okay Naina don’t worry , Dadu ( grandpa ) will be okay soon
Naina : Thanks a lot Ahil
Ahil : Okay bye then
Naina : So you’re leaving from here
Ahil : Yes , I’ve to , For how long I’ll live here disguising myself .
Naina : Hmm you’re right .
Ahil turns back , Instantly Naina holds his hand ” Wait ! ahil ! ”
Ahil turns back , Naina gives him a cloth .
Ahil : What is this !
Naina : Open it
Ahil opens and finds his face embroidered on that white cloth .
Ahil : Me , Is that me .
Naina : That day when you saw me I was sewing your face , I want to say you thanks for everything you did for me
Ahil : But how did you made it ?
Naina : I asked Pinky to tell me and she helped me a lot , Did I sew nicely
Ahil : It’s so beautiful , I’m totally surprised , And Yes sorry
Naina : Sorry why ?
Ahil : Because of me needle pricked your finger
Naina : It’s okay it didn’t hurt me
Ahil : I promise you because of me you’ll never get hurt .
Abhay shouts sitting in car ” Ahil let’s go now ”
ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ – 4
AHIL AND ABHAY REACHED HOSTEL …
Rahul : Ahil is everything okay now
Ahil : Yes , All’s fine now
Rahul : Aunt called she’s coming here to meet you
Abhay : Oh really
Ahil : Yes she’s , I don’t know what will happen now
Abhay : Don’t worry we all will help you out .
Ahil Sat down on Sofa , He thinks ” What was grandpa trying to say to me , What ? ”
Abhay : Ahil , I think Aunt is coming here to ask about money , we’ve taken out from bank 18 lakhs
Rahul : Ahil now what will we say to them
Ahil : we’ll say the truth we hadn’t done anything wrong .
Rahul : What will you say to them , That you helped Naina
Ahil : Yes I will , what is wrong in it ?
Abhay : You know Janki aunty very well ! Don’t tell her this
Rahul : He’s right !
Abhay : You don’t understand , I’m worried , Aren’t you afraid
Someone’s heavy voice growls ” Afraid ?? Why ?? ”
Rahul surprised : Janki Aunty
Janki comes in , She looked Little worried ” Ahil , My son ” She keeps her dark hands on his face , She was wearing large stones on her fingers .
Janki looks into Ahil’s eyes ” Tell me is there any tension my Son ”
Ahil holds her hands ” No Ma ! All’s fine , I’m fine ”
Janki : Then where did you spent 18 lakhs , Ha !
Ahil : Mom , Come be seated here
Janki sits , Ahil : You’ve only taught to help others , I just helped one of my friends with money
Janki : who’s this friend of yours , Is that person of high status
Ahil : You know it very well I don’t care about status and class in friendship .
Janki : Tell me who’s that ?
Ahil : She’s Naina
Janki stood up shocked ” What She’s !! means it’s a girl ” , ” It’s amazing , who’s this girl ? ”
Ahil : I’ll tell you about her but now be calm
A Strong , masculine voice interrupted ” How’ll he tell , I’ll tell you ”
Ahil looks , It’s ADESH SINHA
AD points his finger into his phone ” This is the girl , Yes or no ”
Ahil in his mind : This is Riya They think it’s Naina
Ahil : No , Dad it’s !!!
Abhay exclaimed : Yes , She’s Naina only .
Ahil stares him , Abhay ” Aunt and uncle we’ll tell you everything , But first let’s have lunch it’s , Time for food ”
Ahil : Ya ! Rahul please arrange everything .
Abhay : I just go and get some water for you
AHIL excuses and goes to Abhay .
AD to Janki : See he’s having a girlfriend for whom he spent lakhs , See these pictures how’s he enjoying the match in stadium , See .
Janki : Shut up AD he said he’ll tell us
Ahil to Abhay : Why did you lied ?
Abhay : Are you mad didn’t you saw how much angry they were when they saw you with a girl , What will happen when they’ll get to know that Naina is a blind and you love her
Ahil : So what , I’ll tell them truth
Abhay : See one day we’ll tell them truth but now situation is critical , Try to understand .
ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ – 5
RAI’S HOUSE …
Pinky : Naina how’s Dadu now
Naina : He’s very good now
Pinky : Thanks to god , Ahil really helped us
Naina : Yes, I know
Pinky : So did you told him your feelings , I mean what you think about ..
Naina : No , How could I even say that , Don’t you know what happened ?
Pinky : I know but for how long you’ll keep on hiding the secret .
Naina : Forever , AHIL is for Riya not for me , That’s all I know .
Naina in her mind [ Flashback ] – Naina is dropped down on the floor , The room is completely dark , Kamini is holding a knife in her hand
Kamini scratches Alphabets A H I L on her arm and puts a cross over it .
Kamini roar : Remember this girl , I want that Ahil should marry my Riya so that on his property my daughter’s right is also there , And she could live her life as Queen
Naina sobbingly : But Ahil dosen’t loves Riya .
Kamini : I know it very well , I heard Pinky saying that Ahil loves you not Riya
Kamini grasped her throat : I don’t care about that , What I want my daughter to bring a lot of money to this home and nothing else
Naina : Why are you playing these gamed for money , No , I won’t let it happen
Kamini : Really , You know what Doctor was saying that if we didn’t pay them the monthly fee then he won’t treat your grandpa
Naina : Please, Please save my grandpa , Please
[ Flashback ended ]
Naina says ” TUJHSE DUR JANE KA KOI IRADA NA THA ; PAR RUKTE KASE JABH TU HI MERA NA THA ” ( I don’t want to go away from him , But how can I be for him when he’s not made of me )
ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ- 6
At hostel
Abhay : See bro for now it’s right to lie , And another thing is that we even doubt that Naina is their real daughter or not , Okay understand me
Ahil : I don’t know , Let’s go now
All sat at chairs outside to talk .
Janki keeps the pictures on the table : Who’s this girl Naina , And really she’s your friend
Ahil : Yes , She’s my friend , She’s Naina Rai , He father has a jewelry store
AD : Wow , What a friend you’ve got
Janki : A jewelry store , We’re Diamond’s manufactures , Really
Ahil : So what Mom !
Janki : Okay what’s girl’s qualification , Education
Ahil : I don’t know but she really sings well , She is kind hearted and she can do good embroidery
AD laughs ” AHIL , are you serious , She’s not educated , She does embroidery
Janki : Ahil what are you saying
AHIL : I don’t want to talk on this topic any more now , Please
AD : And what about those 18 lakhs
AHIL : Don’t worry I’ll Pay them back to you
Janki : AD , Please , It’s okay Ahil , Come let’s go home now , Now you’ll not live here anymore
AHIL : what mom are you serious , I’m not going
AD : I know he’ll not, He’s to wander whole day like those illiterates , Isn’t it
AHIL : Dad it’s not like that I’m okay here
Janki : Everyday I’ve to listen alot beacuse of you , Today you’ve to come with me , Or else forget that you had a mother ever
Ahil : Mom !
Ahil thinks : Oh god how can I go now , Naina needs me , She’s in trouble , But how should I explain to them
Ahil : Mom please try to understand
Janki : Not at all, No way , If you said No now I would never like to see your face again
Ahil looks towards his friends .
AD : what are you thinking , Your university isn’t that far from home , You’re coming with us , Okay .
Ahil in his mind : How’ll I meet Naina again then .
Abhay whisper into his ears ” Ahil say yes , Otherwise they’ll doubt , Don’t worry we’ll think about it later , Trust me ”
Rahul : Yes , Ahil say yes . In few days our course would be over then we’ll be free , Say Yes .
Abhay : Then we’ll plan , Don’t say No .
Ahil loudly : Okay I’m Ready
Janki : Wow , My son Is coming with me , I’m so happy
AD : I can bet his friends must have planned something , How can he get Ready so easily
Ahil : Please dad ! I’m your son , Why are you questioning me like a thief
Janki : No Ahil , He’s you Dad , You know him very well .
Ahil : You guys go now , I’ll pack my stuff and will reach home till evening okay
Janki : Okay son we’ll we waiting Ha ! bye .
ᔕᑕᗴᑎᗴ 6
Pinky : Naina don’t hide the truth , You know you love him
Naina : what should I do then , Things are not clear , I’m really confused
Pinky : You know that Kamini aunt wants this marriage only for money and nothing else
Naina : So you want that me to loose Grandpa for Ahil , Really , Do you think this way
Pinky : No you’re getting me wrong
Naina : whatever Pinky , We’re friends and will remain friends and one day he’ll marry and will go away , So I should now try to move on .
She leaves the place and went away .
Precap : Janki decided to visit RAI’S house , Ahil meets Grandpa , Grandpa tells him a secret , Kamini asks about Ahil’s and Riya’s alliance .
Good night , Hope u liked it , Put a thumps up if u did ??, Do comment .This is few shots story , End of this would be attached to new ff on Avneil ., Bye ??
14 Comments
Awww SwadhArsh !!
Hope you’ll like it ?
Good night didi
Meet u in tomorrow’s episode
Sorry I won’t be commenting long ones because at this time I am heartbroken so now i am only crying bcoz of star plus
That is why my mind and heart is somewhere else
So I will see u in your upcoming episodes but I may not comment
It’s okay but u can share your sadness with us , Why re u heartbroken ??? ,, Good night , Hope u get smiling soon
Bcoz on 18th may naamkarann is going off air ????
No I can’t bear it , Please tell it’s not true , Plz don’t do this ,,,??????????
Nice episode Di… a shagun is right, naamkaran will end on 18 may ? and Di I am sorry for late, actually I am not in my home, I am in my mausi’s house for some days,so my phone is not with me, so I am commenting from her phone.. And here is very much network problem, so I could not comment earlier, yesterday I tried very much but it was vain…
And I today my logo will change bcoz i am commenting from my aunt’s phone and may be E-mail will not match…
That’s okay , It’s fine . But I’ll really cry hearing this that NAAMKARAN is going to end , No ways , No please ,,,somebody do something Yaar !!!?????????????
I also can’t bear this but It is true
There r many shows which have less trp than naamkarann but naamkarann will only go off air
In replace to this krishna chali london will come which surely be super duper flop
Hmmmm oh lord please listen to NAAMKARAN fans , I’m it’s die heart fan ??
Me too didi ??????
If the trp is ID increased then maybe naamkaran will stay, so we should watch naamkaran several times to increase the trp. We have just two weeks to save naamkaran..
You’re right ??
By mistake I have written Id