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Avni’s home…
Nevia comes with Rama uncle…
Avni; aree…my jaanu came soo early…
Nevia happily runs to her and hugs her tightly…
Nevia(in mind); I will never let you get hurt maa….
Avni; Nevia….is everything ok?? why feel you are disturbed by something…
Nevia; I am 100% ok mama…you are with me naa…then how can I be not okie…
Avni; okie…you fresh up… I will make your chocolate shake for you…
Nevia; ok mama….
On the other side….
Neil was standing lifeless… the words of Nevia was getting repeated in his mind…Tears roll down his cheeks… he falls on his knees lifelessly…
Neil; Is Nevia, my and Avni’s daughter?? I should find it…and the only one who can answer me is Avni… I should meet her…
He calls someone…
Neil; I want Avani’s address right now….message me soon
He ends up the call and sits at the desk nearby…. Nevia’s face comes running through his mind…her words comes running through his mind…
Soon he receives the message and leaves …..
After sometime…
At Avni’s home…
Neil comes there in the car… and was standing outside the house looking at the house….
He slowly starts to walk towards the house but stops hearing the sound of another car stopped at the home……He turns to see who that was…
Neil was shocked to see the man in the car…it is the same man he saw with Avni years back… he remembers all that hurting memories comes running again in his mind… he was getting more hurt thinking about it…he gets angry at him….He thinks to go from their…and to get his answer later…
he opens his car’s door and was about to sit… but two hands stops him and closes the door and stands there.
Neil; what the hell do you need?? you snatched everything and why are you stopping… No one dares to stop Mr Neil Khanna…did you get that…
Man; Ok Mr Neil Khanna….But I won’t let you go without saying the truth today… last time you just went taking the truth as what you see…you didn’t give a chance for Avni to say…
Neil; I have seen Truth with my eyes years back… I don’t want to hear anything…
Man; That’s not the truth Neil…do you know who I am ?…who I am to her…? I am her elder brother Aman…
Neil; Aman?? no…that can’t be true… I won’t believe you…
Aman; that’s the truth… years back before you both meet… I fell from a hill while we went on a trip… everyone thought me to death… even they didn’t get my body… but I was saved by an old man…he saved me...
Neil; Then why didn’t you come home the time…
Aman; Because I was slipped into the coma for years… and when I come out of it… I was to come home.. but my body was weak …so I told the old man about my family…and he finds out about Avni and called her…That’s the truth…you get it…
Neil stands there lifelessly…he holds the car for his support…
Neil; What? What have I done? I want to meet Avni…..
But before he goes inside…Aman holds his hand in front of him not letting him go inside
Neil shockingly looks at him with tearful eyes…
Aman; Go away, Neil…I don’t want to see Avni getting hurt Again……as you left the house that day I was to come to you to say truth but Avni stopped me saying..she have belief in you..you will give her a chance to say truth…and she itself will tell you…but all her beliefs was broken by you…you didn’t give her a chance to speak…you throw her out of house… If you could have given her a chance… Avni and Nevia would have been with you…I told you the truth now as you should stop hurting her again and again…
Neil; Nevia?? is my daughter?
Aman; Yes she is your daughter… I am sorry I am making you away from them, but after what you did… I have to do as I can’t see them get hurt…so it’s better you get away…get out Neil… don’t come here again..
Neil stands their shockingly hearing the truth…He takes his car and leaves from their devasted
Neil drives his car harshly on the roads….He stops his car in the apartment and goes inside… Prakash stops him “What happened Neil.. we are going back today naa…” Neil falls in front of him in his knees and cries hardly….. Prakash shocking looks at Neil…Shwetha, Ashish and Aisha to come there…
prakash holds Neil
Prakash; Neil what happened?
Neil hugs him and cries.
Ashish; Neil what happens…say, Neil…
Neil looks at him and Aisha. He recalls how they supported him a few years back…how he becomes the reason to make their daughter away from them…not only daughter..but also their grandchild and their son whom they think they have lost years back… their son was to come back to them…but didn’t come… It was all because of him… he feels guilty…he cries looking at them
Shwetha who was tensed seeing her son comes to Neil and asks; do you get to know the truth.,..do you get know Avni hadn’t cheated him…
He looks at his mother and nods thinking how she always said to show belief in Avni she can never cheat him….
Prakash, Ashish and Aisha were shocked to hear it…
Aisha took a step back and was about to fall..but supports the table…
Flashback;
Neil angrily comes to Khanna …..
Prakash; Neil…What happen? you should have been in office…why you come here…any problem..why your face is like this…what happens?
Neil Hugs him and says that all he sees…
Shwetha, Ashish and Aisha get shocked here all this…
Shwetha; No Neil…Avni can never do this…
Avni comes there crying… She sees Neil standing lifelessly holding Prakash…
She runs to him and says Neil please listen… there is nothing like you think..let me explain…
Neil pushes her away and Avin was about to fall but supports a table…and stands there holding her stomach…
Avni; Neil..please hear me once…
Before she says anything else…
Aisha holds Avni asks…” what is he saying? is that true?? does he see you like that?”
Avni; maa…let me explain.
Aisha(angrily); does he see you like that? answer me Avni.
Avni; yes..he sees me like that..but what he thinks is not true…
Aisha leaves her hand from Avni…
Avni gets shocked seeing her mother thinking wrong about her…
Avni; maa..you too thinking your daughter can do like that…
Aisha; You lost the right to call me maa…Please call me like that…You made me hate you…
Avni stands their shocked hearing that.. she remembers the moment Neil said I hate you…now her maa hates her...She cries hardly…
Neil; go from here…
Avni looks shockingly at Neil…
Shwetha; what are you all saying?
She goes to Avni and holds…
Shwetha; I know you Avni you can’t do that…tell me what is the truth…
Avni nods and says; No..maa…..i thought Neil will show his belief in me..but he didn’t even I thought my mama and papa will show that..but they don’t believe in me…..
Neil; get out from here Avni..before I throw you out...
Avni cries thinking within how in a few minutes their love changed into hate…
Avni stands there looking at him…
Neil holds her hand and drags towards the door…
Neil; go away…never try to come in my life… I hate you…
Shwetha comes running and holds Avni… “Neil….what are you doing…give her a chance to say..”
Neil; no maa…there is nothing to here… I have seen everything with my eyes… Avni I said to go away…
Shwetha; Avni I will also come with you… I won’t leave my daughter be alone…
Avni leaves Shwetha’s hand from her and nods no…
Avni looks at Neil; you will regret when you come to know the truth…
Saying that Avni leaves cringly…
Shwetha breaks down crying…
Aisha, Ashish and Prakash cry thinking about Avni’s memories with them…
Flashback ends…
Prakash; what?
Neil cringly says all the truth…
Everyone was crying thinking about harsh words they said to Avni…
Aisha and Ashish were not able to be happy knowing their son is alive…they were regretting everything they did…
Aisha; what have I done… I lived with the loss of my son for these years.. when I should have heard my son is alive… I made my son and daughter away from me…didn’t give my daughter a chance to say …
Ashish holds and they cry holding each other…
Neil runs to his room..and throws everything he gets in his hand…
Neil; What have you done Neil…Why didn’t you show the trust at her…Now she hates you…its all because of you…she hates you a lot… even your daughter…for the first time you see her…for the first time she talked to you but she ends up saying She hates you… You made them hate you …You made your Avni away...
He cries remembering all the harsh words he told to Avni..He remembers how Avni plead to listen to her and give her a chance to speak….He cries thinking how she said he will regret after knowing the truth…
PRECAP; Juhi’s plan…Avni at danger…Nevia hates Neil…
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11 Comments
Nice episode.. Finally Neil got to know that truth… Nice
Excellent episode…..nice way of portraying emotions….
Eagerly waiting for the next update…..☺☺☺
Keep up the good work and take care ? ??
Very nice Episode,egarly wating for the next one,and if you can post it today then please post it today please .?
Very nice Episode,egarly wating for the next one,and if you can post it today then please post it today please .??
Beautiful episode
Wowww at least in ff truth is out…
Excited for further updates..
Beautiful episode.
I love your ff it’s so different POST SOON.make sure they don’t forgive Neil easily
wow finally the truth is out
you portraying each emotions in a nice way
excited for the next episode
waiting to see what neil will do for his loves to forgive him especially his daughter
update soon
i love your ff it’s really amazing do update soon
Nice episode?? gopika….good work???
Woow… amazing FF.. from chap 1 i already in love with this story. Im become your fans now. Thanks for the FF AVNEIL. hope more come like this