I don’t want to waste the time so let’s start
Morning 3:00am
Sanchi and Kabir reached Munnar it was a four days trip to set the right location
They went to their respective rooms to rest
8:00am
Kabir thought to call veer and stopped why to disturb the love birds. I will call Bittu(love birds will be revealed afterwards)
Kabir- Bittu I reached
Sanchi- then
Kabir- what then know only I reached I want some advice what girl’s like most like chocolate, icecream, flowers,teddy ?
Sanchi- this things are very common all girls are not same
Kabir- what to do girl’s like only silly things. Ok give me a suggestion what should I gift her
Sanchi- if your love is true you don’t need to gift anything ,make yourself presentable in front of her and try to protect her from all the troubles, be with her in all ups and downsand don’t forget to love her till the end
Kabir- I think you are watching so much films it’s ok atlest say which colour shirt I should wear
Sanchi- dark blue will be best it is my favourite colour
Kabir- I hate it I won’t wear that
Sanchi- if I said it will be correct choice only then it is your wish.bye
Call ended
Kabir bathed and came out
Kabir- which colour shirt ok let’s try dark blue I hope all will be ok
Kabir came out Sanchi was waiting for him at the entrance
Sanchi was stunned to see Kabir in that attire
Sanchi- you look great Kabir,blue is my favourite colour
Kabir- thank u sanchi.it is my favourite colour also we have same taste
Sanchi- I think there are many things common between us ok let’s go
Kabir-sure
They reached the client place
In between Kabir went to wash room
Kabir messaged Sanchi (Bittu your idea worked thank u yar) today I am going to ask her for date I hope she will say yes
Sanchi mess back- super I told na she likes blue go ahead
Kabir- I am at the verge of winning my challenge
Sanchi- ok I accept you won but not without my help
Kabir- ok dear thank u bye. I love u so much.
Sanchi- what
Kabir-ok bye I think she is waiting bye.
Sanchi- love u so much. you said it so lately kabirrr
Kabir meet the client and they finalised few places
@car
Kabir- can I ask something did you ever went for a date
Sanchi- no because I am from rich family no one dared to ask me for date.why
Kabir- will you come for a date with me Sanchi
Sanchi- wow you are so brave I am impressed and my answer is yes.
Kabir- I will meet you at ABC hotel @7:00pm
Sanchi-why can’t we go together
Kabir- suprise
Sanchi- ok then I am eager to see
Kabir went to his room and freshen up
Kabir- let’s ask Bittu he called her
No answer
O this girl why she is not picking my call. Ok it’s getting late let her call
Kabir wore a black suit and bow tie
He booked the whole restaurant for Sanchi with cancel light dinner
Sanchi came there with black gown with high heels and matching earrings
She was amazed by the decoration
Kabir welcomed her with a bouquet
Sanchi- you booked whole restaurant for me quite impressive
Kabir- this is just little. there are more surprises waiting for u. Ok let’s start with wine
Kabir poured two glasses of wine
Suddenly his phone started to ring its Bittu
Seeing the caller ID Kabir shouted Bittu
Sanchi- who is Bittu
Kabir- nothing give me a sec
He rushed to wash room
Kabir- why are u calling me now
Sanchi- what ya you called me na so that I am calling you back
Kabir- ok I will talk to you later I am in date
Sanchi- wow congratulations you won the challenge
Kabir- ok I will call you later my beauty is waiting for me
Sanchi- you forget me seeing her don’t forget I am the one who helped you.you can’t talk few words with me
Kabir- I don’t care I will call later understand my situation
Sanchi- bye here after don’t call me
Kabir-bittu o god this girl, I think she is feeling jealous
Ok I should go out
Sanchi- who called you
Kabir- it’s Bittu
Sanchi- who is Bittu your girlfriend
Kabir- no,no my friend that’s it
Sanchi- girl or boy
Kabir- what to say sometimes we should lie boy
Sanchi- ok, let’s continue eating
Kabir- ok .( but he is tensed thinking about Bittu)
He dropped the food down
Sanchi- where is your concentration Kabir
Kabir-nothing (but he is thinking about Bittu I shouldn’t talk to her like that)
Sanchi- let’s dance come kabir
Kabir- ok
Both were dancing for Janam Janam
But Kabir was diverted in his own thoughts
He twrils her she tripped Kabir failed to catch her she fell down
Sanchi- ouch! I am going u seem to be lost bye
Kabir- wait Sanchi..
Sanchi went out
What I did why I constantly thinking about Bittu
Sanchi car stoped in the half way to her hotel
Sanchi- o shit this car
Driver- mam give me few minutes
Sanchi- do it fast
Driver- ok mam
Some goons come there they noticed Sanchi
Goons-come with me darling I will give you lift he held sanchi’s hand
The driver ran away seeing the goons
Sanchi- you fools leave me otherwise
Goons-what will you do they started to laugh
Sanchi stamped one of their goons leg with heels
Goons-you
He raised his hand to slap Sanchi
But instead of that someone slapped him back
It is none other than Kabir
Sanchi- kabirrr she hugged Him
Kabir beat all the goons and they ran away
Sanchi- thank u Kabir u saved my honour
Kabir- it’s my responsibility
Sanchi- sorry for spoiling your day meet me tomorrow in boat house I want to say something
Kabir- even I want say something
Sanchi- ok bye she finally hugged him and gave a peck on his cheek and ran away
Kabir- why I am not feeling anything
@room
Sanchi- I am 100percent sure tomorrow you will propose me. I will seek my revenge, what you think Kabir if you save me I will forget the revenge no way.
@night
Kabir- tomorrow I hope I will propose her but why I am not feeling happiness I am finally going to get what I needed
Let’s share this with Bittu
He called her
No answer
Why she is not picking any call
I am not able to sleep
Finally he slept at 4:00am
He woke up at 8:00am I am already late she told me to come at 9:00am
Ok let’s call Bittu no answer
Kabir- BittuU
Sanchi- is waiting for Kabir(this is the happiest moment in my life finally I am going take my revenge)
Kabir arrived there 9:30am
Sanchi back is shown
Kabir- hi I wanted to say you something
Sanchi- I am waiting for this moment say
Kabir- I …. I don’t love you
Sanchi was shocked to hear this
She turned to see Kabir
Kabir- I am really sorry Sanchi mam I don’t love you. Actually I love Bittu I discovered my feelings know only
Tears were rolling down from kabir’s cheeks
Kabir- I am an orphan my parents left me in hospital from that day I was grown in orphanage then veer became my friend then swara came in our life he told the full story from beginning to end the bond between swara and don’t know when I started feeling for her I hired her to the extend but she forgave me now I realise I started feeling for her the moment I spoke to her this thing become so clear when I meet swara again before coming here
Flahback
Kabir was busy in packing
Swara meet Kabir in his appartment
Kabir- what a suprise you came to meet veer right , he is sleeping if he came to know you came here he will be so happy
Swara- no Kabir, I came to meet you
Kabir- me, ok come in, what you want to say
Swara- sorry Kabir
Kabir- for what
Swara- you have done many things for me but I am blind not to see anything, I just loved veer but he betrayed me it’s my mistake for believing him you know what Kabir now only I understood you I love …..
Kabir- stop it swara, this is not love. you are just trying to prove veer you are not weak. yes I loved you later only I came to know it not love it is infactuation , but veer loved you truly you can’t get a true love like that. He will do anything for you. Even he sacrificed his love for me. I am very thankful for God to give me a such a good friend. When you left he never changed his mind he was thinking only about you . You know what he said I am sure one day she will surely understand my love.
When Kabir was talking emotional ly tears rolled down from swara’s eyes her eyes became red
Swara- I challenge d veer that your friend will not care for u . I just thought if I say I love u to you.you will just accept it. I am sorry I understand know veer is in such a situation he cannot go either side if he propose me he will lose you so he decided to choose you (she sits down on floor and started crying)he tried to make me understand but I didn’t listen to him once. Now even I can’t meet his face he will not accept me anymore. I made a such a mistake
(She noticed knife in the kitchen she rushed to kitchen) I am not worth of living anymore
Kabir- swara stop
Swara- sorry veer she about to cut her wrist
(Suddenly some one grabbed her in tight hug) the knife fell down
Swara lifted her head to see it is veer
(Veer was silently listening to the whole convo)
Veer- what you thought if anything happens to you then I (swaara closed veer’s mouth with her hand)
Swara- I am sorry
Veer- I love you
Swara- I don’t deserve you
Veer- I love you
Swara is about to say something veer placed his lips on hers (Mera Mann plays)
Kabir- AA hmmm excuse me I am here
Both moved little bit but veer not letting her to go
Kabir-Ok enjoy your time love birds
I am going Munnar
End of flashback
Kabir- that moment I realised what true love is. I am sorry to hurt your the feeling towards yours is just infactuation . I am sure mam you will get your true love like my Bittu . Sorry mam but I have to meet Bittu she is in same Munnar
(Kabir rushed out of the boat)
Sanchi is stunned
Kabir went to the courier company in which they posted sanchi’s phone and got her address
Kabir in the entrance of sanchi’s house he hesitated for a moment and went in
Saurabh was sitting in the garden with pragati
Kabir rushed to pragati and hugged her I am sorry Bittu sorry
Pragati pushed him and shouted I am not Bittu
Kabir reaction was like what. he saw Saurabh coming towards him
Kabir -uncle actually
Saurabh stopped him from saying anything
Saurabh- I know everything. she is in terrace
Kabir- thank u uncle (he rushed to the terrace)
(Actually pragati came yesterday and told everything to Saurabh. Saurabh got very angry on him. But his anger college just few minutes before when Sanchi told what happen in boat)
@terrace
Sanchi’s turned towards the wall
Kabir stopped at the door he was hesitating to speak (finally he gathered courage and spoke)
Kabir- I am really sorry Bittu . I know how hurt you would feel when you came to know the truth. Please bittu if you think my love is true give me one last chance. For the first time I am proposing I love u???Bittu. And I promise I will love only you forever
Sanchi-No reaction
Kabir- if you don’t even want to see my face I am going .here after I won’t disturb you.
(Kabir turn to go)
Sanchi- i love u too??she shouted(tears were rolling down from her eyes)
Hearing that words Kabir turned to see his Bittu he was shocked to see Sanchi there
Kabir-sanchi…….
Sanchi- no Bittu
She ran and hugged him tightly
Kabir was shocked by this sudden gesture as well as happy
Kabir- you Bittu(Sanchi was sobbing in his embrace)
She told everything thing how she became the manager of company to take revenge from him
(Kabir listen to this with almost patience)
Suddenly he pushed her
Sanchi was shocked with his actions
Kabir saw a stool near a flower pot he took the and kept between him and Sanchi
Sanchi was puzzled with his actions
Kabir- stan on the stool
Bittu- what
Kabir- see Bittu you are shorter than me then how can I kiss you(Mera Mann plays)
Sanchi blushed heavily (she stood in the stool and kissed in his cheeks)
Kabir gave a bone crushing hug
Suddenly they heard laughter sound it is none other than Saurabh ,Pragati,veer,and swara.(actually veer know that Kabir is in love with Bittu he thought he will discover his feelings soon yesterday only he saw the letter which Kabir wrote him in that he said he is going to propose Sanchi he thought Kabir has only crush on Sanchi before he does anything stupid he thought to stop him. So came stop Kabir proposing Sanchi they reached the boat house when they saw Sanchi leaving they followed her to know about kabir)
Screen freezes with smiling faces of all
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Thank u for supporting guys it means a lot. Actually this story is inspired from the movie gundae jari gallantiya I hope you like the Kanchi and swaveer version. My friends my school is going to start on 25th of this month I am entering into my 12th std I hope you understand I will be irregular to telly updates but I will try my best to comment on your article . That’s it love u all TC everyone thank u for ur valuable comments ,likes and dislikes. See u soon???????????
29 Comments
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