Ola everyone..
This is my second time I am writing an TS have a look .
Soo starting the story..
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Character sketch
Swara :- An orphan girl . but never felt bad about that . she is a very cunning business women Current leading business women never let anyone hurt her. Love her self . no one know Her truly. Everyone think her as ruthless women 23 years old who don’t care for anyone.With futher story who know about her ..
Sanskar Maheswari :- he is the apple of the family love ragini very much . wants to marry her. He is also a business Man . but full of life never get angry but when he is angry no one can do any thing to make him calm.
Ragini garodia :- she is traditional girl love her family very much . love sanskar or can say obsessive abot him. If she want anthing she get it by hook or took. Never let any girl roam near sanskar.
Rest of the character will be come with story.
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In story Maheswari family and Garodia family are close friend . garodia has lost ragini twin sister . they think she is dead. But ragini don’t know anything about this . Sanskar think in childhood whom he is seen in cradle is ragini sanskar was 5 years at that time.
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We seen a large building full of glass moving in side we can see some meeting was going to start. Everyone is very scared because their boss is not here till now. If the owner of the company with whome they are going to start their new project come to know she will just kill them because she is very punctual about things.
Then we see a guys coming near them and say everything is ready Ma’am has arrived meeting will strt in 10 mim. They say yes everything is ready. Then they see their boss has arrived they take a deep breath and say,” baach gae..nahi toh Dracula kha jate”.
To their boss they say “ sir where were you.we were thinking you will come on oue shrad. But thanks to almighty you are here”.
We see a hansome guy in professional suit laugh at their statement and say;”don’t worry I will take full care of your family “.
Employee “kya sir, come meeting is going to start naho toh Dracula will come here”.
They all enter a room which is so manificant seeing it we can we have enter a paradise everyone say one word what a place man.
Then enter our heroine full dressed in professional talking to her PA.
She was truly a business women no emotion on her face.
She come near them and wish them
Sanskar :- hello miss Dracula opss sorry swara
Swara see him as if he is some alien no one dare to say something to her and here is calling her Dracula
But seeing his face she lost her mind
( pheli nazar ka payar ho gaya lagata hai.
Pheli nazar me a
ksa jadu kar diya …)
if someone else was att his place he have lost his life it sanskar she left and start the meeting after meeting they sign the deal now they will be working together .
everyone left the place sanskar was going to leave when phone rings . swara attend the call she say,” wtf man . why I have kept you to listen no go to hell or heaven but book my room in any hotel right now.”
She cut the call and sit at her place angrily . sanskar come her and ask any problem
She see seeing him her anger vanish. She say no nothing .
Sanskar :-hey now we are going to work together so we should help each other so tell me . may I help you.
Swara :- wooh I have asked my man to book a room me in some hotel but he forget now there is no empty room in hotel .
Sanskar :- itn ni se baat come to my house you can live there till our project is going .
Swara :- no no way at your place . how it will look.i will manage
Sanskar :- no look wook you are coming with me that’s final so tell your sevant to take your luggage at my place you are coming that final.
With no choice left she said ok. She was happy she is going to live with him.
They both left to Maheswari Mansion .
After sometime both enter a big villa .
She say it beautiful. He say not more than yours …… office
(hahahaha wat ou taught)
Wheb they enter they see two ladies sitting and chatting he say maa mom
Both turn
They see them come near them and ask ,who is she
Sanskar:- ma sh is
Then a girl enter she also ask bhai who is she
Sanskar :- uttuu she is
Then a couple enter they ask who is she..
Sanskar:- bhai bhabi she is sw..
Aree khatu shyam ji yeh chora kis a le aaya tu marree ragini ka ke hoa ga ..
Listing her a girl in bule kurti enter the scne
Now sanskar had enough he shout ,’daddddddd paaaapaaaa everyone gather in the hall.”
Everyone is sitting in hall
Sanskar :- so listen everyone carefully she is swara my
Dadi :- girlfriend. Ladoo see he has a girlfriend. Now what will you do.
Sanskar ;- dadii listen first she is our business partner she no place to live so I brought here .
Ok done you guys shoot the question.
Sujata (sanskar mom):- son it ok she can live here
Kale take her to the guest room ok
To swara beta make your self comfortable
Swara :- thank you aunty . and sorry for inconvinence.
May I have little introduction please
Uttra say”hey di myself uttra sanskar bhai sweet sis . they both are aadarsh bhai and his sweet wife they live in Bombay now for a family function they are here. He is our dad Ram Prasad Maheswari to other side Shekhar uncle this sumi aunty they our dada dadi of ragini di she is our childhood friend live next to our house.”
Aree yeh toh bhul bhai and di love each other but elders don’t know she said last line in her ear.
Swara was broken she was not knowing what this felling is before mending the heart it is broken she goes to guest room to take rest.
With passing time her love for sanskar was increasing . now it has been 3 months swara has been settle in the family everyone love her as own daughter but there is one person who is not liking swara because from when she has come no love is gining attention to her she was non other than ……………..uttra ..
In these 3 month many things changes swara came very close to shekhar and sumi because of ragini camp for kerela for 3.5 months she(ragini) talk with sanskar daily . but swara don’t know she think sanskar has started liking her. Swara has changed a lot we say with love everyone this happened with swara she has become clam .
One day swara was coming down from stairs some of push her she fall down that person goes from their thinking she died . but listening falling sound everyone came to hall . they see swara in pool of blood .
That time Ragini and Sanskar enter the house and see everyone is shocked but ram recover from shock and said come take her to the hospital sanskar rush to her leaving ragini hand she felt bad but leave it.
They take her to the hospital where doctor said we want blood they say they don’t know any of her family member . doctor said you guys give sample may be it get matched first person was shekhar his blood matched with swara . he give the blood and everyone take the sigh of relief .
Ragini was watching each and every person very carefully she was thinking this girl has make a place in everyone’s heart. I have to do something before something worng happen. Who will help me in this yaaa dadi maa .
That doctor came out and said Mr. Garodia don’t worry nothing to worry your daughter is fine .
Shekhar :- daughter doc. She not my daughter
Doc.:- no MR.Garodia she is your daughter because your DNA and her DNA has matched .
Now garodia family is shocked because they never thaught whome they thaught dead will be alive shekhar and sumi are very happy because the got their big daughter . yes swara is 1min. bigger than ragini.
Ragini was shocked she was thinking to make her away from her family her she became her family.
Sanskar was not understanding anything.
Nurse came and said patient has gain her sense. Everyone rush to her room sumi hug her and start crying saying my shona . swara was not understanding anything .
Swara :- aunty why you are crying don’t cry I have not died .
Listening this 3 person was angry they were shekhar sumi and … sanskar yes he was not understanding why he is feeling bad seeing her like this and dead statement furry .how could she speak about death like this. When his this inner turmoil was going .
Then he heard a slapping sound yes sumi slap swara lightly on her head .
Sumi :- beta you are my daughter ragini twin sister . you are my daughter she tell everything about the childhood incident .
Swara was shocked listening all this her head start spinning . she was going to faint but sanskar hold her doctor came and said don’t give stress to her brain .
Doctor give her sleeping injection and said she will get conscious in morning you guys can go and come in morning and take her home.
Next morning..
today is new day in everyone’s life everyone has got their shona .
they all go to hospital and see swara is ready in her office attire . everyone is shocked to see her like this.
Sumi :- shona what is this . you are not recovered fully where are you going office
Swara :- hey hold on Mrs. Sharmistha Garodia I am not shona I am swara the Swara who does not care for anyone understand. Some time I have talked nicely with you does’t means you have right to give order.
Shekhar :- bachha is this a way to talk to your mother.
Swara ;- mother what mother she or you guys nothing to me. Understood.
Swara :- now ready for the bomb guys . 1st whole Maheswari company is now under me. 2nd if you guys want the maheswari empire then Sanskar has to marry me.
Everyone was shocked seeing her tone of talking no was believing she is same swara whome they know since so long.
Saying this she leave from there .
She goes to reception clear her bills and go and sit in her car and move to her new mansion.
In car she started thinking
FLASHBACK
Swara was sleeping when she hear someone was crying near she open her eyes and see she is non other than uttra
Swara :- uttu why are you crying say na
Uttra :- di I want to tell you something she said some thing which is muted.
FLASHBACK END.
Car halt she come to her sense .and move to her mansion she see her house which is beside maheswari mansion.
She go to home change her clothes to Indian wear and make a plate and moves to Maheswari mansion . as she enter the house everyone turn towards to her everyone is shocked to see her in this attire .
Sujata :- oye chori tu kya kar rahi hai yaha nikal ja mere ghr se.
Swara :- I have no time time for your shitty talks . this is shagun tomorrow is our engagement I have invited everyone near and dear one. Decorator is coming he will decorate the house .
Sanskar :- swara what is this how could you do this you know na I love ragini how could do this . I was seeing everything now understand you are shameless girl who don’t kown the value of parents that why god have stanched your parents .you are bad omen of girls I hate you because of business I will marry you but will never give a wife rights.
Swara :- do hell with your rights I don’t care . but you have to marry me.
She was going outside when she turn and said,
Aree have seen uttra where is she is with me in my captive.
Saying this she leave all are now more shocked seeing her behavior.
NEXT DAY
ENGAGEMENT
Everyone is getting ready then we see swara there coming looking so beautiful but non of them seeing with pride they are seeing with disgust .
Prist say ,”come exchange the rings”.
Sanskar was moving seeing her but hear screaming sound coming from other side.
He rushes to that side and see dadi is knocking the door and asking open the door .
He go to her and ask what happen
Dadi say sanskar choree ragini andar hai aur aag lag gay a hai chree ma ri ladoo ko baccha le.
Sanskar shocked he panic he bang the door and he break the door
He goes inside and ragini is sitting corner please leave me swara I will go away from you both . but keep my sanskar happy.
Sanskar goes to her she faint in his embrace.
He take her outside patted her she does’nt open her he panic he see her pulse but pulse was going down .he does’nt think anything and started kissing her.
That time swara come there ragini has opend her eye she was stable .
She came near her and was going to slap her
But some one hold her hand….
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Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddddddddddddd
Very long part reading if you guys like then I will give last part..
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13 Comments
Awesome ?
Please give the last part as soon as possible
Tq.. yaa very soo going to update
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NICE update next part soon
got confused why swara behaving like this suddenly i think uttara said something so swara doing like this ..
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awesome dear pls post soon
Yaa going to update soon
Just excellent dear…… Please update soon dear
Thank u soo much ..
Plz give next part soon really lvd it
Update soon.. Very nice start dr
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Superb concept it’s more dan 14 days when r u gonna update next part plzz post soon
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thank u soo much. It fells so good when you guys like it. Nd my watty id is Pramitasingh18