Heyyy lovely people….thanks for commenting…this for all of them those who commented on previous shot…I hope u like this too….
Let\’s start…
Rag:shona can I ask u one thing
Swara:from when u started asking permission ragu
Rag:wohhhh actually….wohh
Swara:is it about sanskar???
Rag:(gives a how do know expression)
Swa:obviously….munda ithna handsome and hot ho tho ragini gadodia also should be flat on him
Rag:its not like that swara…I want to know wheather he really love me or just flirting
Swara:I have an idea… u just do what I say…. Okkk
Rag:okkk
Plan A
Its a party held at evening…every one is present there…and sanskars eyes r searching for ragini…he is sooo impatient to see her…
Shomi:shona beta where is ragu…I didn\’t see her from afternoon
Swara:(lil loudly)ohhh maa she is having high fever
Shomi:why didn\’t u tell us we would have called docter right…arjun see this girl how stupid she is…
Swara:she dosent want to bother u all…as today party is there
When swara turned back she could not find sanskar any where…and she smirks
At room…
Rag:got a msg that work done…start acting…
Rag:quickly lies on bed with comforter over her face and pretend to sleep
After five min she feel hot water over her hand and opens eyes…there she find sanskar holding his hand and crying…
Sanskar pov
Seeing u like this I feel like I am noo worthy of ur love…ur suffering from long time…I am enjoing down stairs…shame on my love…from today every pain should cross me first to reach u…
San gets a cloth dipped in water and rubs all her hands and face….
San:don\’t worry jaan…when I used to get fever my maa used to do same and I used to get fine sooo soon…
He immidiatly pecks her forehead and goes out smiling
Rag POV
When I opened my eyes I saw him leaving me with most dificulty….
And for the first tym in my life I felt that motherly love
Rag:sanskar what ever it is I don\’t want to loose you….plzzz be with me for all my life…
At night…
San:lucky once u call swara here
Lucky:just do as I say lucky
Lak:okkk bhaii
Swara comes there
San:swara how is ragini
Swa:she is okkk sanskar…why r u asking like that?
San:gets very angry…..just shut up u…I know she is having fever…and how can u be sooo careless…I mean she ur friend right…shittt I should not expect this much from u I
Swa:gets teary eyed….for the first time in her life some one shouted on her
She goes to her room crying
San:lucky I am very very sorry…wohh u know about my angerness right…I just…I am sorry
Lak:its okk bhaii…but I never saw u caring for some outsider…then???
San:I love her lucky…more than my life…woh thumari hone wali bhabhi hai
Lak:I am sooo happy bhai…don\’t worry I will handle her…
Precap:ragsan silly fight
I hope u like this….if not u can say frankly…actually I lost the originall plot…so I just wrote what ever came in my mind…I will end this in next one or two shots…lods of love
27 Comments
Amazing!! take your time but don’t end soon!!!
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awesome
Don’t end this soon dear. loved it, a small thing, sanskar is so caring
Awesome yaar. Atleast write 25 chappy pleacchh.
Amazingggg chappy don’t end so sooooon.
Very loooooooooooong time Awesome don’t end this story.
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Awesome loved it..Plss don’t end this story. Show Ragsan scenes more in upcoming parts.
It’s a awesomeee story. Don’t end soon take your time.
Superb di..
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Suppppppperrrrrrrrrbbb after long time. Thanks for posting this story. Don’t end soon.
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