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Episode – 15
Recap:- After practising a lot Avni recorded a song but While arguing with Neil it falls down in a hollow . Ali meets a stranger
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Neil : where are keys ?
Avni : I threw them away
Neil : Just remain here , I’ll come in a few minutes , Because with those keys , The key for these handcuffs were also there , Fine
Avni : F.I.N.E
AVNI’S POV …
AVNI : Stupid , Akroo police wala , He is just sick
( she was tied to back of Bike )
NEIL’S POV …
Neil walks down the road murmuring ” Stupid girl , Don’t know where she would have thrown the keys ”
Neil walks back to his original position but couldn’t find neither his bike nor Avni .
Neil looks here and there ” Ahiana , Ahiana where’s you ?”
Neil keeps his hand over forehead and exclaims ” Oh god now where’s she ? How can she escape her hands were tethered , Does she knows a trick , Or is she a Mr.India ” ” Where’s my bike ”
Suddenly he hears a beep sound , He turns back and saws Avni wearing helmet on his bike . He’s shocked and surprised at same time .
Avni gives him a flying kiss in air and exclaims ” Mr.Police officer , You’re beaten by me again , I won the bet ”
Showing him keys , She ignited the bike and left with a loud vroom .
Neil “No Ahiana ” ” What keys were with her only ” ” Shit man ! ”
AT LONDON ,,,,
Vidyut : What about that email which we had sent to Alia
Ballu : Don’t know sir , We haven’t got any response
Vidyut : Where the hell this alia is , We’re searching like a mad for her
Suddenly something unusual voice comes from outside as if something broke
” Who’s there , Lunatic show up ”
It was Ragu , He comes in ” Sorry boss I came because I’ve something to say ”
Ballu : You know it very well that non one is allowed to come here in this room , Hey take him out
Ragu : Please , For godsake , For once listen to me
Vidyut : Hurry up
Ragu : I want to help you out
Vidyut looks at him strangely ” Help me ! ”
Ragu : Yes , I saw you thinking day and night about Alia , So I just thought to help you
Ballu : And how’ll you help him
Ragu : I’ll go to Mumbai again and search for her
Ballu : Are you mad ! If you went there and police saw you , What’ll you say to them
Ragu : Don’t worry I’ll do the operation very silently
Ballu : Just shut up , We can’t afford to take any kind of risks , Did you got that !
Ragu : I’ve a brilliant idea , I’ll really help you out
Ballu pushed him out of room ” Just get out of here and never ever dare to show up with your nonsense ideas ”
He is thrown out of the room
Vidyut : Eh! I think he gave an idea
Ballu : what sir
Vidyut : Secrete operation , Send as many as you can , And make them watch over Mumbai in silent, Hidden way
Ballu : Hmm I understood what you wanna say
One of his servants enters in and tells them ” Sir , She’s again doing all that ”
Vidyut : What ballu ! Can’t you just do one thing
Ballu : Sorry boss ! But this time I won’t let you down
Vidyut : Good , Let’s see if you can be how I am
Ballu to that man “Come let’s go ”
Ballu slams the door open and a girl is shown in a pathetic situation , She’s crying badly , Her half of cloths are torn .
Ballu ” Eh girl what’s your problem ”
Girl wheeps ” Please let me go I’m not of that type girl ”
Ballu : Here no one is of that type , We make them so , Got that
He squeezed her chin ” Listen me carefully , Just get ready or else you know I’ll take you to the Gufa ( kind of cage ) You know it very well what happens there
Ballu : See her , Make her set and still if she dosen’t did so then lock her in cage
AVNEIL’S POV ….
Avni reaches back at that place , Hurriedly she gets off the bike ” I’ve to find my phone anyhow ”
Avni looks down through the gauge ( hollow , Khai) ” Oh my phone , Where’s you , I’ve to go down and search for it ”
She looks here and there to find a possible way to trek down . ” Oh ya ! I can do down by this way , Though it’s little steep , So what I’m not afraid , I can get down there , Yes ! Avni you can do it ! ”
Avni walks down that flat low way in order to reach her destination .
NEIL arrives , He’s wandering here and there ” Where’s she now ! Oh god , weather could be fatal ”
ALL OF A SUDDEN , He hears sounds as if somebody’s feet are continuously tapping onto the ground , That sticky sounding pitter patter of foot diverted him towards that noise .
Reaching at the last edge of the of the hollow inside earth , His neck lowered down and he points Avni strolling down .
Abruptly , He shouts ” No !!! Wait !!! ”
Her balance stumbled , Slipping from that vertical peak , She rolled down and fell
” Ahiana !!!” He shouts and rushes
NEIL slowly climbs down , On reaching the even ground , He looks here and there , He hears a cry , Someone mewling slowly ” N.E.I.L ”
NEIL WALKS UP TO THERE AND HIS SIGHT CATCHES A STRANGE THING ,” Oh shit ” He exclaims as he saw AVNI BATHED IN WITH MUD-WATER ; LYING IN LARGE PIT CONTAINING BROWN SNADY WATER .
Avni lifts up her face and looks at him ” I found my phone ”
Neil readily gives a loud laughter ” You’re looking so beautiful, I’ve no words ”
Avni : Hey you , How could you be so mean , You’re laughing at me , You should help me out instead of showing your teeth
Neil : Cooking skills zero , Rappelling skills Zero , You just know how to shout and talk
Avni : Just keep quiet and help me , Give me your hand
Neil : Ooo.. I don’t want to make my hands dirty , You see my skin is very delicate , Don’t know how many insects would be there in water
Avni yells ” Aaaahh !!! ” She frantically tries to get up but as slippery that place was she falls again .
Finally Neil lend her his helping hand and she holds and pulls him into and herself pops out .
Avni giggles : Yes ! oh god I’m so dirty ( she cleansed herself )
Neil cries ” What is this Ahiana ? ”
Avni : Nothing it’s just Eye for an eye , What you did to me , I did with you
Neil : what !!! I helped you to get out of here but you did this to me , Someone has rightly said Bhalayi ki zamana nahi raha ( it’s not the generation of helping others )
Avni :I’m here just because of you , And now I’ve to go , I’m very late , So bye
Neil : How mean are you really !
Avni : Ooo I’m really sorry but not sorry , Okay tell me at what number should I call to help a police man 101, 100 , Or what
Neil : egocentric , Mean , Self- loving , woman
Avni : Okay Okay I’m not like you ( she gives her hand and he stood up )
Avni roars ” Just because of you I’m looking like , Just like a brown chocolate cake
Neil : And what about me ! as if I’m looking like sharuhk khan
Avni :Come on ! You can never look like him
Avni sighs ” Oh god I want to clean myself , I’m so muddy .
Suddenly , Heavy downpour begins …
Neil : See god must be irritated with your voice , So it’s raining now
Avni : Now if your fatuous talks are over can we please get out of here
Neil : Thank god I really wanna get out as soon as possible
Avni : Me too
Neil putting his hands forward” Lady’s first ”
Avni and Neil walks each uttering to themselves .
Avni :I don’t think can ever reach there on time , I’m surely late , It’s going to be now
Neil : I’m late , what about mom , She must be crazy , Whole day I couldn’t work , Oh gosh !
Since showers were quiet heavy , Stormy winds all over , The atmosphere was little horrific . Unforseen , giant rock structures slides down from the vertical peak
Avni shouts “Neil get a side ”
They both separated and the rock’s rolled down .After that unexpected incident ,
Neil ” Are you okay ”
Avni : I’m
Neil : A land slide , Exclaims he
Avni : Now what !,the way is blocked
Neil : we can’t go up
Avni : No ways
Neil : This all happened because of you , Just because of your this mere 1000rs phone you’ve put our lives at risk
Avni :what do you mean ! I never called you up to come here , It was you , With your own will who came here , Tell me why did you came behind , Speak , Why’s you silent now
Neil : You know what I think you’re really foolish , Couldn’t see how dangerous the weather is !
Avni : No no I’m not foolish it’s you’re who’s stupid !what kind of police officer you’re Ha ! Instead of helping you’re putting me in problem .
Neil : Hmm you just know how to give answers you would never say thanks to person who came here just to save you
AVNI : Fine then ! you go your way and I’ll go my way , Let’s see who first can find a path to escape .
She harshly wore her bag over back and started moving forward .
They both are moving in same direction but miles away from each other …
AT LONDON …
Ragu : what’s this black cage , I’ve heard this name quite many times , What’s there
He saw Vidyut and Ballu going out of the building and sitting in a big car .
Ragu : This is the right chance I can go and find out more about Alia
He rushed towards Vidyuts room , Opens the door and gets in secretly .
He started looking over every possible place , Distorted every corner of the room . Took a glance of each drawers and cupboard there .
Ragu : Oh god ,Here’s nothing I can get some help with , Who is Alia , Who’s behind this mask ( seeing the picture )
Momentarily , He hears some footsteps , To his himself he pressed himself against a wall , Being relieved that no one is there , He threw out air from his mouth , On touching the wall he realizes some kind of voice as if the wall is not made of bricks but some hard cardboard like material , He knocks twice and finds something fishy .
Ragu ” Somethin’ is behind this wall ”
Ragu ” But how could I get into it , There must be some way ”
His feet gets tangled with a wire , He pulled that wire in and the wall divided into two sections and a dark , Complete room is visible to him.
He gets in and saw nothing but a black dark room , No fan there , A tiny window , A wooden old chair . On that chair were thick iron chains . He moves towards the chair and picks up that heavy rusty iron Shackles , Behind those he found some blood stains .
Ragu was huffing by now ” What is this place ” he said with extreme astonishment .
He twisted back and his eyes catch a sight of a television set kept there on a old table .
Ragu ” A TV ” ” Here but why ”
His front finger reached at the red button and as soon as he touched it a creepy scene comes upon ..
AVNEIL’s POV ….
Avni : Now I’d surely late , And don’t think that I could ever be a singer ( Tapping phone onto her palm ) And this phone it’s not working
Neil is doing the same ” Why’s this phone not working , O man ! I can’t even contact for help ”
Neil’s eyes looks up and he realizes that that old tree in from of him is just going to fall and benath it was standing Avni . She looks up and gets afraid and shouts , Neil rushed towards her , Grasped her hand and rolled her into his arms .
Avni is shocked and thrilled , Neil covers her mouth with his hand ” Shhh !! Nothing has happened , We both are fine , See ! “
She looks with her timid eyes into his .
[ Background music – Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil
Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil …]
He removed his hand , Avni ” Don’t stick to me ”
Neil : I’ve saved your life you can thank me
Avni : Thank you never , Its happening because of you
Neil : Don’t start with all that again
Avni : I’m having a police man with me but he can’t do anything , Someone else needs to come and help him
Neil : Why , Isn’t a police man a human , They can be in problems too
Avni : They can be , But could never put others in that kinda situations
Neil : May I ask you now where are you going my dear lady !
Avni : Tryna getting out of here
Neil : You can’t , Every possible way is blocked , We need to wait until we get help or the rains and winds stop
Avni : what it’s totally dim now we can’t stay at jungle
Neil : we’ve to , Or anything serious could happen with us
INSIDE POLICE STATION …
Dd : Shinde did you tried calling Sir again
Shinde : Yes but he’s not answering
Dd calls Ali : Hello , Noodle bhaiya , Did you called sir
Ali ” Can’t do that , his phone is being shown out of coverage
Dd : Okay , Then he thinks ” Oh god where’s sir ”
Ali : Don’t worry Dd he’s your boss he can do anything he’s super cop , He’ll manage
Dd : I know he can but who’ll handle super cop’s mother
Ali : Noone can
Dd : Bye I’ll call you later
Dd : Yes we got that email sent to Alia’s account , Play it .
AT LONDON …
Ragu plays the video < First comes in television , Images of few girls , Badly beaten , The edges of their lips leaking with blood , Then comes a voice from behind ‘ See this Alia , Just see this big full concentration , We’ve here alot of girls but you’re different from them , You were Only 6 when you were brought here but your actions , Your words , Your strength was strongest ‘ >
POLICE STATION …
Video continues < You used to argue we used to beat you , Then again you repeated we also did the same , Till that you would listen to us , But now I think again , Again you’ve forgotten those golden days in this cage , See , See this black room , This chair , These chains . You’ve forgotten everything , So I thought to make you recall all those golden memories . >
RAGU’S POV ….
video < A girl whose face is not clear , Blur bean beaten with a whip , She’s shouting , Screaming . Then another clip that girl been closed inside a chamber filled with bugs and insects . Pause , So I don’t think you want everything to be repeated right ! we’re waiting for you , Alia >
Ragu : It means I , I was right ! Alia is in danger , She needs help
DD’S POV …
Dd : This is very important information , We’ve to give it to sir
Dd : Sir was right there’s something fishy behind Alia
AVNEIL’S POV …
AVNI and Neil sitting under a shade of a large tree , Rain pouring , It’s pretty cool there.
Both are looking opposite sides .
Suddenly , Avni starts singing ”
main kyaa karun raam mujhe buddha mil gayaa,
haay buddha mil gayaa,
main gudiyaa hasin meri morani si chaal hai,
sar mein safed usake dada ji sa baal hai,
bigadega har kaam mujhe buddha mil gayaa”
Neil looks towards her strangely and touches his hair , He took out his phone and sees his face . Then he started singing ” Mere angne mein
Mere angne mein tumhara kya kam hai…
Joh hai naam wala
Arre joh hai naam wala wahi toh badnaam hai
Mere agne mein tumhara kya kam hai”
Avni : It’s not any Music competition going on here stop singing
Neil : And you too
The night grew , After some time , Neil finds Avni sleeping her back touching the bark of thick tree .
Neil looks at her innocent face and thinks ” While sleeping you look like a sweet , Calm and cute puppy but while you’re awaken you’re like a furious cat ” ( He giggles) and thinks ” Oh god how peaceful it is ”
Avni open ups the lid of her eyes a little ” Akkhh Akhhh , I can hear everything ”
Neil touches his head with tree and closed his eyes , Avni ” Don’t sleep , Just keep an eye that no one comes here ”
Neil : Why me ?
Avni : You must have been trained with night watching , Can’t you do this one night
Avni closed her eyes again .
THE NEXT MORNING …..
Neil looks at AVNI , She has lowered her head on his shoulders and is in deep sleep .
Neil clicks a picture of her ” I’ll show her this picture next time She’ll shout and then will tell her difference between Awaken and sleeping Ahiana ”
Instantly he saw her lips moving in some constant words . ” He’ll is there , He’s there , It’s dark here , Don’t hit me again , No it’s paining ”
Neil ” Ahiana are you okay , what’re you saying ”
She murmur again ” Vid … He’s there , Leave me ”
He keeps his palm over her face ” Ahiana ate you fine ”
All of sudden , Avni hugs Neil .
hope you guys liked the update . sorry for being late and if I made you bored . Forgive me for doing mistakes. please guys don’t go without hitting??and your comments. bbye ??
31 Comments
Please ignore water and other unrelated things from pictures used . They’re just pictures from actual show .
The episode was very nice ,and Have a good day ahead.
Thanks a lot , Good day to you too???
Superb episode Kira
Thanks a lot , ✌✌
Fab kind of episode. It wasn’t at all boring. I am eagerly awaited for next updates.
Thanks my lovely sis , have ossum day ahead??
Monotonouy superb
Thanks my bestie , Good night ???
Hi am following up story and it’s really nice
Hello , You’re new here , Thanks a lot dear , Good night???
If anyone is in touch with Gopika the author of Hate filled with love please tell her to upload the next episode of her Ff I’m waiting for it eagerly
Waahh!!! Too good ????
Thanks Cathy , Good night ??
When iam reading your ff never think nmkrn is over.thanx. pls update soon.waiting for it.
By the way my first comment for nmkrn
Oh thanks a lot happy to hear from you , Keep smiling ???
Nice episode didi
Sorry I didn’t commen on the previous episodes
Although I read them regularly but didn’t comment
Sorry once again
Didi can u tell me what is the minimum age to register here?
Good night didi
Hi, Please don’t say sorry we’re friends .
Thanks a lot .
About minimum age I’ve no idea but I can think it’s above 10 . just an estimate , Not sure .
But can register without hesitation???
Thanks didi
avni fooling neil n mud scene were funny.tu safar song n neil saving avni was romantic.singing budda mil gaya song was funny.neil looking at d sleeping avni n talking n avni saying she is awake n his reaction was funny.avni hugging neil in fear n neil trying to comfort her was emotional.nice pics
Thanks dear , Love reading your comments . have a nice day ahead ??
Beautiful episode. Many dialogue of this ff are so good and funny. Avniel nok jok was amazing. In short it was amazing episode. Loved it yaar. Eagerly awaited for next update. Please update as early as possible. Btw my school reopens today, eagerly awaited for it. I am toiooi excited about it.
Hope you would e exciting day at school . Thanks dear . Love u too??
Amazing episode di… And Avneil ‘s nok – jhok was lovely…
And di I am sorry for late comment. Actually I took admission in new school… I know it’s for betterment but my mood is totally off due to this reason… Bcoz my most lovely friend Ankita is in my previous school bcoz she is my one year junior.. And now we will get separated?. And infront of my parents I can’t cry also, otherwise they will ask me so many questions… Whole day I am just singing and singing… I will miss her very very much. Except bathroom no other place is there to cry… Plus I will miss my old school and my other friends also… And my best friend… He also went to another school.
Hey arayan don’t cry dear please , You can still be in her contact with phone . I know it’s harder but keep your strength , And you’ve to complete your studies first . You’ll remain friends always . Don’t worry . This has happened with me too , When I passed 10 and moved to 11 . Changes are necessary in ones life . Maybe next year she comes into your school .
Keep smiling and be happy. Everything that happens , Happens for something good .
Know it’s really harder , I’m also missing my friends , But what to do , Future isn’t in out hands . I’m sure Everything would be good .
Bye , Keep smiling dear .
Thanks a lot ?
Thank you very much sissu… ? but I have a fear that I can’t loose her..
You know di, except you I didn’t share this with anyone, I have not shared with my best friend also. Thank you very very much di.
It’s okay bro . Just smile and leave it on god .I’m sure everything would be good in future . Keep smiling. Welcome .
When can we expect next update.. totally addicted to urs and Ayesha Malhotra’s ff.. feels like Naamkaran itself
Hey Cathy , dear I’m very busy being in class 12 so I can’t be so regular . Hope you would understand. Bye , Nice day ahead??
No problem dear ??