Hello guys!!!! I’m posting this story after 9 months because i got so many messages to continue it. I’m giving the intro and first shot again so that you should know it from starting. Below first is second shot. I hope it is worth reading.
Well this story is all about two mentally unstable persons Swara and Sanskar. Here no one is mature and sensible. How they both will become life of each other. Though being imperfect they will be just perfect for each other.
Let’s begin:
Imperfections — Perfect For You
(SwaSan fs)
Shot 1:
Characters:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 24 years old but his brain works like a kid of 6-7 years. He is mentally unstable, very stubborn boy. He lives in Holyland mental hospital. His parents died in car accident since then he is living in the hospital. He is very naughty and innocent. He was like this since 5 years when he met with a drastic accident and lost his mental ability.
Swara Bose: 22 years old but she is mentally stable and her mind is like of 5 years old baby. Swara was born like this. Her mind never developed. She is so innocent and cute. Only her mom shomi used to love and take care of her but even one month ago she also died bcoz of heart attack. Now how she will live alone in this world. God is not that cruel if he snatch one person than he may send other. Who will come in swara’s life to lighten it???? Let’s see.
Holyland Mental Hospital is run by nuns on charity. Its not the place where mental people are harnessed or something but they are treated and handled politely and kindly. There are mothers (nuns) who take care of them. Most of the people are from 20- 30 years.
Holyland Mental Hospital:
Morning:
A girl who seems to be in her mid twenties is sitting in the park on bench and playing with her doll. She has messy hairs looking as she is insane.
That girl is shruti, who is mentally unstable. Sanskar and shruti always fight with each other.
Sanskar came running from inside and saw shruti sitting alone. He went near and snatched his doll.
” give its mine” shruti said and started crying.
” I want this” sanskar held that little doll close to his chest.
Mother Mary came to them as she listened shruti crying.
” what happened?” She humbly wipe shruti’s tears.
” my doll” shruti said pointing towards sanskar.
” Sanskar it’s her doll give back” mother said turning towards sanskar and he in turn shook his head not willing to give it back.
” its bad Sanskar” mother said strictly.
Sanskar bite his lips and give back the doll as he got scared. As soon as shruti got her doll,she ran away.
Mother look at sanskar who was so sad.
” I also want doll” he whisper pouting his lips.
” sanskar God will gift you also one beautiful doll” mother caress his face.
” when??” He asked scratching his head.
” very soon” mother smile.
Then only a car stops at the Hospital gate. One lady came out of the car wearing saree. Then she open the back door and pulled one girl who looks in early twenties out.
” leave plz” girl shouted. She was wearing flock and her hairs are long open reaching till her waist. Few hair strands are coming on her face, her face is pale and nose is red as if she is crying from long time.
” ohye mad keep quite” lady said loudly and dragged her cruelly inside the hospital.
Mother went near them
” plz behave calmly with her” she requested.
Sanskar took baby steps and went near them but was far only as he got scared from that harsh lady. He was trying to look at the girl.
Lady left the girl and mother held her closely. Girl hug mother tightly as she felt soothing touch.
” you are so beautiful like a doll” mother said wiping her face while the girl blink her eyes at mother.
Sanskar got attentive as mother said “doll”
” Jesus is she my doll??” Sanskar said looking at the sky.
He placed his finger at his head
” yes she is my doll bcoz mother said she is beautiful” Sanskar smile happily.
” yepiiii I got my doll” sanskar shouted in excitement. All look at him and he immediately place finger on his lips.
” sanskar go inside” mother said.
Sanskar nodded and went little far but not inside as he is scared that his doll will left him.
That girl was still hugging mother.
” what’s her name??” Mother asked.
” swara and she is mad so we came to leave her here” lady said.
” who are you to her?’ Mother again asked.
” I’m her aunty, janki” Lady said.
” plz fill the form and formalities we will keep swara here safely” mother said with a smile.
They went to the office and sanskar also tip toed after them slowly not making any noise.
He peep inside the room standing at the door. He was smiling looking at swara.
Janki fill the form and registered swara’s name in the hospital.
” now we will never take her back” janki said getting relief of the swara as she think her as burden.
” don’t worry we will take care of her” mother smile at her.
” sanskar what are you doing here??” Another mother nerissa asked from behind.
Sanskar turn back and look at her.She gesture her to come closer.
” yes??” Nerissa asked raising her brow.
” I got my doll” he said and giggles.
” where is she??” Nerissa asked.
” she is inside” he pointed at the office.
” okay for now go to your room” she said
” my doll will leave” Sanskar shook his head.
” don’t worry she will be here only you go ” nerissa assures him.
” okay” he smile and ran to his room.
Janki left swara and went from there. Mother held swara’s hand and took her inside the rooms where all are living.
Room No. 43:
In one room, there are three beds and three people live in one room. Sanskar enter inside his room smiling happily. Sanskar and shurti are living in one room and third bed is empty.
” I don’t want your bad doll I got beautiful one” Sanskar stuck his tongue at shruti who was sitting on her bed.
Shruti look at him confusedly and then she ignored him. Sanskar sit on his bed and started playing with ball.
Mother enter inside the room with swara. She was very nervous to see new atmosphere.
Sanskar and shruti look at her.
” now she will also live you both. She is your friend” mother said making her sit on the empty bed. Sanskar’s bed is in the center and near his is swara’s.
” take rest” mother said to swara before leaving.
Swara was silently sitting on her bed playing with the hemp of her frock.
” hiii” sanskar wave his hand at Swara. She just stare at him.
” may I come there” he pointed at her bed. Swara shook his head.
” okay” sanskar pout.
Shruti was looking at them till now. She got up and went near Swara.
” he is bad boy” shruti said pointing towards Sanskar.
Sanskar got angry and push shruti slowly
” she is my doll stay away” sanskar shouted.
Shruti also slap Sanskar and they started fighting. Swara was weeping getting scared.
” you made my doll cry bad girl” sanskar sit near swara.
” don’t cry doll” he wipe her tears and kiss her cheeks.
Swara look at him blankly.
” shruti also kiss her doll and you are my doll so I kissed” he innocently said.
Swara slightly smile.
To be continued….
Shot 2:
Mother Mary called three of them for dinner and later they came back to their room to sleep. Swara is silent and sanskar is all the time after her. Swara lie on her bed and sanskar on his beside her bed. After Some times, sanskar heard some noise and when he turn he look at swara who is weeping slowly. He instantly got up and went near her. ” doll what happened??” He asked tensely. ” i want mamma” swara whisper looking at him. ” where is your mamma??” Sanskar asked. ” with god” swara told sadly. Sanskar signed in relief and said ” then don’t worry because jesus will take care of her, even my mother is with him ” swara listened carefully and asked ” really??” Sanskar nodded. ” Can i sleep with you??” Sanskar asked from swara. ” yes” swara said. He made her lie on pillow and himself lie beside her. Soon they slept.
Next morning, Mother Mary and Nerissa came to swasan room and were surprised to see them sleeping together. Sanskar’s one hand is around swara’s waist while swara’s head is on his other arm. Mary and Nerissa give each other a look. ” this is not right” Nerissa said. ” what’s wrong in this??” Mary questioned. ” Though they are mentally small but in actual they are adults” Nerissa said. ” i don’t know but they both had some strong connection, didn’t you saw how much sanskar is changed in one day. He didn’t show his tantrums for having dinner and then sleeping. This is all because of swara” Mother Mary explained and Nerissa nodded agreeing to her. ” moreover swara is new here so if she is comfortable with sanskar it is good for both of them” she said and went near their bed. Till then Nerissa wake up shruti. ” sanskar get up its morning ” mary caress his hairs. Sanskar open his eyes and look at swara who is still sleeping, he smile. ” good morning mother Mary” sanskar greeted cheerfully. Mary was surprised but happy that sanskar didn’t did drama to wake up which he usually do. ” why you are not sleeping on your bed??” Mary asked. ” shurti also sleep with her doll and my doll was crying so how can i leave her alone” he tried to give a proper reason. Mother mary was impressed with his answer. ” okay” she smile. Sanskar got up and went to washroom while mary wake up swara.
The whole day went well and swara was talking only to sanskar and mother mary. In the evening, it seems like it’s going to rain soon. All are in the ground enjoying cloudy weather and it is slightly dizzling. ” should we take them inside??” Nerissa asked. ” let them play in rain” mother mary said and Nerissa nodded in anticipation. ” do you love rain doll??” Sanskar asked swara. ” yes i love rain” before swara could answer, shruti said. ” i asked from my doll not from you ” sanskar shouted angrily. ” i also love rain” swara told when she saw sanskar is getting angry. ” let’s play in the rain ” sanskar said and dragged swara with him. They got ditched as it started raining fast. Sanskar stare at swara who has closed her eyes enjoying the water dripping on her face. His head spinned and he got some flashes of a couple enjoying the rain. They were close to each other. ” it’s amazing ” swara squealed breaking sanskar’s trance. He also ignored what he saw now and started playing with them.
At night, sanskar came inside the room and saw swara sitting on her bed. He smile and whisper ” good night “. ” can you sleep with me??” She asked from him. ” okay” he said and lie on her bed. Soon they both slept.
” Shona” a man in his mid twenties shouted and ran after the girl of his age. ” you can’t catch me” girl turn back and stuck her tongue. Man increased his speed and within few seconds he caught her. He hugged her from back wrapping his arms around her waist. Due to the sudden jerk they both fell down. ” yukkk” shona said as they were in the mud and it’s raining lightly. ” what you have done sanky” she narrowed her eyes. Sanky laughed at her expressions. ” where were you running??” He asked leaning on her while she was lying on the ground. ” sanky let me go” she whisper. ” nopee” sanky shook his head. Sanky smirk and put his hand in mud. Shona was wondering what he is going to do. He rub his muddy hand on her milky neck. Shona’s breathe got hitched as his fingers wandered on her soft skin. ” sanky please” she mumble. ” what please??” He asked teasinly. Sanky lean and entangled his fingers with her. He placed his lips softly on her and kissed her. Shona closed her eyes and enjoyed his dominating kiss. He broke the kiss and smile at her. ” let me clean you” he said and then got up. He picked shona in his arms and went inside.
” i will bath myself” swara roll her eyes. ” no please let me help you” he pleaded then wink his eye. ” you are shameless” shona whisper. ” huh!! What’s wrong in bathing with my own wife??” He pouted. Shona laugh at his cuteness. ” nothing is wrong my dear hubby” she pull his right cheek. Sanky smile sheepishly.
After they were done with bathing, sanky bought shona in their room. They lie down hugging each other to sleep. ” shona” sanky said. ” hmm” swara slightly shift in his embrace. ” i love you” sanky softly kiss her forehead. “Love you too” she mumble. Soon they both slept.
Sanskar slowly move in his sleep as if he is seeing the dream. He tightened his grip around swara and whisper ” shona” in his sleep. After few seconds, swara mumble in her sleep ” sanky” . They were in sleep and were totally unaware that why they addressed each other as shona and sanky.
To be continued…..
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