before we start:
om is the father of the child.
gauri is only 16 and he is 18.
gauri knows she is expecting.
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OS:
gauri saw om waiting at the water fountain for her. she took a deep breath and walked to him. he turned to his right to see his lady love smiling lightly but he noticed she was pale.
om: arre gauri, you are so pale. you ok?
gauri: yes but I have something to tell you.
om: go ahead.
gauri: remember when night at preeti’s house?
om: oh that night.
gauri: after that night, I have started to feel sick, dizzy and my temperature has gotten high etc.
om: are you trying to say that…
gauri interrupting: yes I am pregnant.
om was shocked for a few seconds. gauri was scared.
gauri: omkaraji talk. omkaraji, say something. you are scaring me omkaraji.
finally om came back to reality and said cupping gauri’s face with his hands: gauri, you have no idea how happy I am right now.
gauri smiled thanking shakaraji for not making om abandon her. she heard about many teen pregnancy stories many in which the boy abandoned the girl once having s@x with her or knowing she is pregnant.
om: but does your parents know?
gauri: no.
om: when will you tell them?
gauri: soon. I thought to tell you first. but omkaraji, I am scared.
om: why?
gauri: my parents are very strict. they don’t even know I have a boyfriend. since childhood, they would beat me up for the smallest things like eating ice cream.
om: what? really?
gauri nods and then says: I am scared. if…if they decide to put the baby for adoption or worst abortion…
tears fell from her eyes as om interrupted her: nothing is going to happen to our baby. I much rather have our child raised by us than someone else. and if you and our child have to go through abortion, then I will kill myself.
gauri hugged om tight, thanking shankarji for giving her someone who understood everything and was always there for her in her hours of darkness.
slowly they walked to her house.
outside:
gauri: you stay here please.
om: but..
gauri interrupting: please. for me.
om: ok but if I feel that I have to talk to your parents, then I will, ok?
gauri: ok.
om hugged her tight as he noticed she was trembling with fear.
om: good luck.
gauri: thanks.
gauri broke the hug and went inside her house.
inside:
she saw her parents, raj and ahana in the living. raj was having his tea and ahana was sorting some files.
gauri: mama, papa, I need to talk to you.
raj and ahana looked at gauri and then kept their things down.
raj: ji bolo.
gauri: voh…I know that you two…that you two will not be happy hearing this…and…and I am really sorry….I was stupid….please forgive me if possible.
ahana: please explain clearly gauri. stop stammering.
raj: what happened? did you get low marks in your exam?
ahana: how many times did I tell you not to always be on your laptop or hanging out with your friends after school?!
gauri: it’s not that. my exam result was really good.
raj: thanks god.
gauri: the matter is something else. you know at preeti’s party….I drank something…something which I thought was water…and then….then….
ahana: then what?
gauri: then…that…led to…me pregnant.
there was pure silence. so silent that you could hear a pin drop. ahana and raj were as shocked as hell whereas gauri was really scared.
gauri: mama? papa?
ahana: the one time! the one time we let you go for a party trusting you not to be stupid and you broke our trust! I can’t believe this! I can’t believe that our daughter broke our trust. raj, did you hear that our daughter….our daughter is pregnant?!
raj: I have heard. gauri, today I feel the shame to call you my daughter! I spent fortunes on your education. I even sold land to get you educated in the best schools and this is how you show your generosity.
ahana: and I feel shame for giving birth to her. if I knew my daughter would do this then I would have aborted her the minute I got to know I was pregnant with this b*t*h!
raj: what will people say when they find out that this b*t*h is pregnant and that too at 16? we will be humiliated, our name will be ruined.
gauri: mama, papa, I am sorry. this all got out of hand. I am sorry.
ahana slapped gauri tightly and yelled: FROM TODAY I AM NO LONGER YOUR MOTHER! YOU CLEARLY SAID THAT DAY THAT YOU WOULD TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF AT THAT PARTY AND YOU WOULDN’T TOUCH ALCOHOL OAND THAT TYPE OF STUFF! BUT NO! YOU THOUGHT IT WOULD BE FUN TO EXPERIENCE S@X AND GET YOURSELF blo*dy PRGENANT!
gauri: I didn’t know that the water was spiked. I never wished to have s@x with anyone at this age.
raj got out his phone and started to dial a number.
gauri: what are you doing papa?
raj: I AM NOT YOUR f**kING FATHER! NOW SHUT UP!
gauri: but what are you doing?
raj: calling the hospital.
gauri: why?
raj: to abort that child!
gauri was shocked. as soon as om heard what raj said, he came inside the house saying: why abort the baby?
raj and ahana were shocked seeing om there.
ahana: now who is this boy?
gauri: my….my…my…..boy…friend
ahana and raj: WHAT?!
raj: this b*t*h was already cheating on us. she decided it would be fun to have a secret boyfriend and then have s@x with him.
gauri: I hid the fact that I had a boyfriend because I love omkaraji! I can’t imagine my life before he entered it and we weren’t even planning to have s@x now. we were planning after marriage.
om: mr and mrs sharma, gauri is innocent. we both didn’t know that the drinks were spiked and then that’s when me and gauri lost control. it was because of what was in the drinks.
ahana: I am feeling so disgusted right now. this sl*t lost her virginity. then she broke our trust.
gauri was hurt hearing painful words from her mother and father. om saw tears coming out from her eyes and felt bad as if a knife was stabbing his heart.
raj: gauri, think now! you can get your parents back if you agree for abortion or adoption.
ahana: yes gauri! since you think you can make decisions by yourself, you can choose either abortion or adoption.
gauri looked at om and om looked at gauri with a reassuring look. gauri kept her hand where her and om’s baby was resting.
raj: quickly tell us!
gauri in mind: maybe I may be making the wrong decision but I will feel guilty if I abort the baby or put it for adoption.
ahana: are you going to make your mind up or should we do it for you?!
gauri: I have made my mind up. (all held their breath) I am keeping this child.
raj and ahana: what?!
gauri: I am not putting it up for abortion or adoption. if I have to then I will kill myself. I don’t want to live with the guilt all my life.
ahana: GET LOST FROM HERE! LIVE ON THE STREETS OR WHATEVER! I DON’T CARE!! YOU CNA KILL YOURSELF! I DON’T f**kING CARE!
om: what type of mother are you? if your daughter dies then you won’t care?
raj: SHE IS NOT OUR DAUGHTER!
raj was about to slap her when om took the slap.
om: why are you blaming gauri? I too am responsible.
raj: whatever! just get lost and never come back to us.
om: fine. chalo gauri.
gauri left with om, guilt was eating her alive.
yes she wanted this child.
but she also wanted her parents.
she thought that for once her parents would understand.
but instead they didn’t.
all she had now was om and their child.
….
so guys, how was this?
to me, this os was shit — obvisiously because I wrote it.
so because you ask me why I wrote an os based on teen pregnancy, I will answer it now.
basically I hate the very idea of teen pregnancy. I have heard that the girl falls for an a*sh*le, the a*sh*le wants to f**k her only and then they lose their virginity and then the girl becomes pregnant, the parents disown her and then the a*sh*le refuses to accept the child or her.
I just wanted to write this os because I hate how om never stands up for his wife in the show.
om, hugs aren’t always the answer, get that in your brain.
so I thought of this and decided to write an os based on teen pregnancy and om standing up for gauri.
hope this was ok and tell me if you want a bonus?
2 Comments
rikara as teenagers.nice.gauri revealing her pregnancy to om n om supporting her was a lovely scene.liked rikara not doing abortion.her parents scolding her was natural.but disowning her n addressing her by vulgar words were shocking n painful.liked om saying that he too is at fault.liked om taking gauri with him.but i womder how om’s parents will react.
I am also writing a DiRa ss is loving you a mistake on the after effects of teen pregnancy.
It is nice one dear. Applauding to your efforts