Hi This is VHM aka Harika coming up with a new story / Fanfiction on Ishqbaaz. This will involve all the three couples . A subtle romance, thrill, accusations, support and family bonding. Get on a new ride with me and do support me.
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……
‘’Mr.Oberoi..’’ Anika was about to say but Shivaay stopped her in between
‘’Are you still angry on me Stupid? I know I was rude to you, but really I didn’t recognise you. Ok as per our deal, I AM SORRY, he bent his head down ‘’
Anika looked shocked and stress was building up in her
‘’Mr.Ober….Shivaay…please….listen to me once …just listen’’ Anika made him look at her and continued
‘’Shivaay…I am not getting anything what you are saying…I think you are thinking of someone else to be me….’’ Anika looked at him
‘’Don’t joke more Stupid…I am not liking it…it is perfectly fine if you are still angry , but never say you are not my Stupid….i have waited for you since long, and when you are finally here you are denying…’’
‘’No Shivaay..am not joking..i am not the one you are thinking to be..you were saying about your childhood, but I met you few months back in the meeting room, I don’t know you before that..i mean I knew as business man but not in person ….please…understand….i know this reality may seem harsh, but I cannot act or take advantage of’’
‘’Stop it Anika…just stop it’’ Shivaay screamed
Anika was taken back and the stress levels were shooting up
‘’If you want to hurt me, you can by doing anything else but for God sake don’t speak these rubbish…what do you think I would come simply to any random girl and say she is my stupid…what do you think would I not do proper verification….do you think I am mad …’’
‘’but…’’ Anika was about to speak
‘’Don’t you remember I used to call you STUPID and in turn you used to call me KHADOOS / KHADOOS SINGH OBEROI, which you few moments before called me…ok fine you can deny that too, but what about this locket?’’ he pulled the locket and brought in front of her
‘’This Locket…you…’’
‘’Yes , this Locket I gifted to you during your birthday…don’t you remember even that…ok fine let’s accept you didn’t remember then how come this locket is with you? Why does this locket still have your and my pictures ? have you any answers now?’’
‘’Shivaay…this locket was with me since my childhood I accept, but I never knew how it reached me..i tried to open this locket many times, but I could never open it … when you came to talk about this locket a day before, I thought you need this for some reason…so I unconditionally sent it to you..but I didn’t know, you needed this locket to identify your childhood friend…I am saying truth Shivaay..i am not your Stupid…I am Anika Chaturvedi..’’ she spoke but she was getting pressurised due to stress
Shivaay took steps backs , he was unable to take anything more while Anika felt bad for him and to see his state…
‘’Don’t you really know how to open this locket? Didn’t you ever check this?’’ After looking at the face of Anika which was showing that she was speaking truth
‘’No shivaay..when you sent message other day night about how to open the locket, I tried ..it opened , but I didn’t see any contents because …yeah because Sahil came at the same moment and I thought of seeing the locket later…but then you know Gauri came and …’’
‘’Fine…I will show you what’s in this…let me confirm once again that you are not My stupid…’’ his expressions changed
He brought the locket and opened it…it showed the pics of Shivaay and Anika’s childhood…Anika took steps back and collapsed on the bed and this took Shivaay by surprise
——————-Sumo’s House
Sumo was packing her luggage when her bell rang…..she opened the door and a person was standing with his back behind holding box of Pizza and bottle of soft drink
‘’who is this?’’
‘’madam Pizza’’
‘’but I didn’t order’’
‘’have you ordered I wouldn’t have bought Fatso’’
‘’rudraaaaaaaa’’
Rudra turned and smiled , Sumo also smiled seeing him
‘’but you were to go home’’
‘’yes..but couldn’t go…what to do your innocent pout came infront of my eyes and then I took u-turn and bought Pizza and softdrink and thought to help you ‘’
‘’like really..you wanted to help me’’
‘’sometimes I am good too apart from being super handsome and se*y’’
‘’Ohh please…don’t boast’’
‘’will you accept or shall I leave’’
‘’ok fine..but I will not accept you to be super handsome and the other thing you said..i will only accept that sometimes you are good too’’
‘’okay okay..i don’t want to argue now as I am super hungry…’’
She smiled
‘’what will you only smile or ask me to come in?’’
‘’very funny..when did you last take permission to enter anyone’s house?’’
‘’a few seconds before’’ he smiled
‘’good..no awesome…now come in..i am also hungry’’
‘’fatso say something new…as you are hungry always…’’
‘’okay..i will say..i want to eat Pizaa’’ she teased him
‘’I will see you later…where’s the kitchen …’’
‘’there…’’
They both sat to eat pizza
—————–Anika’s Room
‘’Anika…Anika’’ shivaay called her looking at her state
She didn’t respond
‘’Anika……’’ he again called
‘’The girl in that picture is me Shivaay…but I don’t know anything about that boy…I don’t know how my childhood pic is in that locket..i really don’t know’’ she spoke with trembling voice
Shivaya was elated to get the confirmation that She is HIS STUPID, but his happiness was getting down seeing her in tears, unable to control he ran to her and hugged her
‘’it’s okay…it’s okay…please..please don’t cry…you know I can’t see you crying…you have said and I will believe…I will not trouble you …let’s forget ..let’s forget everything….’’ He was speaking but it was too late as Anika’s brain was too pressurised thinking about the pics and about the words of Shivaay that she collapsed in Shivaay’s arms closing her eyes…….
With getting no reaction from Anika, shivaay broke the hug and looked at her and was aghast seeing her state…he sprinkled water on her face and called her name many time but didn’t get any response , unable to think anything at that moment
‘’Gauri…………’’ he screamed
Gauri ran as fast as she can and came to Anika’s room and stood numb seeing Anika lying unconscious
‘’Shivaay Sir..what happened to her? Why is she like this? tell me sir what happened?’’ she cried
‘’Hold her .. we need to take her to doctor first..you can question later’’
‘’but Sahil..who will take care of Sahil…he is sleeping …’’
‘’there is no time Gauri…do onething help me to put her in the car and stay back here…I will take her….’’
‘’no….i will come’’
‘’There is no time’’
‘’Om…I will call Om….till he reaches I will ask neighbours to stay here’’
‘’fine…do anything but let’s move now’’
Shivaay placed Anika in the car while Gauri informed Neighbours to stay in home till Om reaches
(She showed Om’s pic to them)
They rushed to hospital with Anika. Om started to Anika’s house to stay by Sahil
———Sumo’s House
‘’Fatso…is it necessary to go?’’
‘’yes duffer…Mom is not keeping well..i have to check her’’
‘’okay’’ his face shrinked
‘’duffer..i will be back in 10 days…’’
‘’10 days???? ‘’
‘’just 10 days’’
‘’Fatso..i am not letting you go…’’ he started taking all the clothes that were getting packed
‘’You have gone mad Duffer…what are you doing? I can’t pack them again’’
‘’good..don’t pack…don’t go…’’
‘’duffer please don’t irritate me ‘’
‘’Fine..go…go for 10 days…no go for 1 month…I am going now’’
‘’duffer…what happened suddenly..why are you behaving strange? I mean you were alright till few minutes back and then’’ she held his hand
‘’You will also feel the same when I will leave you and go ‘’ he spoke making her leave his hand and then left from there
Saumya stood confused, while Rudra drove his car
——————-Hospital
Anika was being taken care by doctors when Gauri approached Shivaay…He looked at her
‘’I …I didn’t do anything Gauri…I just ‘’ he couldn’t speak
‘’Sir..i know…Om said everything…’’ she showed her Phone
‘’She is really my Childhood friend, my only…’’
‘’your only friend…I can understand your feelings…don’t worry sir, she will be fine…’’
‘’I hope so else…I would never forgive myself….i shouldn’t have…’’
‘’I can understand sir, how it would feel , when you meet someone who is important to you…may be when I will also react the same when I will find my ‘’ Gauri stopped
‘’you will find whom? Who are you searching for ?’’
‘’Mr.Oberoi’’ the doctor called when Gauri was about to answer…both Shivaay and Gauri rushed towards the doctor
‘’Doctor !! How is Anika/ didi?’’ they together asked
‘’She is fine…she was much pressurised and couldn’t take it, so she fell unconscious…we have given medicines…’’
‘’When will she be normal..i mean’’ Shivaay asked with concern
‘’nothing to worry..nothing major…she should gain consciousness in couple of hours…but’’
‘’but what doctor?’’ Gauri questioned
‘’Ensure she is not prone to any mental stress …don’t force her to think about anything how much important it might be’’
Shivaay and Gauri nodded
The doctor started moving from there and turned
‘’Mr.Oberoi…I want to meet her family members…I need to talk something to them’’
Shivaay looked at Gauri
‘’Doctor…she has only an Younger brother…he is too small to understand your words…’’ Gauri replied
‘’ohh…but this is important…anyone else…like her aunts or so?’’
‘’No…just she and her brother..i stay with her in her home that’s it’’ Gauri again answered
‘’but what’s the matter Doctor?’’ shivaay asked with doubt
‘’Nothing to worry…before I say anything, I need to confirm and then I can reveal to anyone she would allow to’’ Doctor spoke
‘’fine…can we go and see her?’’
‘’yes..you can’’
‘’thanks Doctor’’
Shivaay looked at Gauri
‘’Gauri…she might get stressed again if she sees me…I can’t and don’t want to see her suffer…I will be here in the corridor , once she gains consciousness , I will leave…and will send Rudra or Om to help you in shifting her to home…’’
‘’Shivaay sir..but’’
‘’in know Gauri what you are going to say…I have waited for her these many years, I can wait for some more time…it’s okay..i am happy that I found her …’’ he smiled sadly and asked Gauri to be with Anika
He messaged Om and Rudra and sat in the corridor looking at the locket while his thoughts travelled to his childhood
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‘’Dadi where is Khadoos?’’
‘’Haan?’’ Dadi looked at her with fake anger
‘’ooh sorry Dadi..where is your billu?’’ she smiled
‘’He is taking rest Anika puttar?’’
‘’why? I mean did he work so hard that he is taking rest like a king…wait I will go and break his rest’’
‘’Anika puttar…wait…Billu is having fever…so doctors asked him to rest’’
‘’Fever? But since when? Why did none say this to me?’’
‘’you went to school . How to inform you? Now go and meet him. He will be atleast smiling’’
‘’okay Dadi’’
Shivaay who was in his room listened to all the conversation and pulled his bedsheet over him as if to enact he was asleep
Anika came to him
‘’ohhooo…Khadoos, how come you got fever…didn’t you say that fever that I am your friend and will hit it if it troubles you?’’
There was no reply from khadoos
‘’Ohh…you are sleeping..fine..i will wait…dadi said that you need rest..you sleep till then I will be here’’
Shivaay who thought of enacting actually fell into sleep and Anika who thought of waiting for him sat in the chair and slipped into sleep.
After a couple of hours Shivaay got up and looked at his stupid who was sleeping and he was laughing continuously..with his sound of laugh Anika opened her eyes and said
‘’oyee…why are you laughing Khadoos?’’
‘’what to do? I got fever and you are taking rest’’
‘’woh..i was waiting for you to wake up and when you didn’t I thought to give you company…so slept..it’s simple’’ she just spoke
‘’but what was the need to sleep in the sofa…there is a couch also right…stupid..that’s why I call you stupid’’
‘’huhhh…’’
‘’ok don’t make that pouted face…you look funny stupid’’
‘’fine..tell me..how are you feeling now?’’
‘’you came right…I am feeling really worst’’
‘’ooohhhh…finei will go then ‘’ she turned to go with anger, he again smiled and held her hand
‘’stupid…don’t go na…I am getting bored staying whole day long in this bed and no one is allowing me to do anything, not even read books…’’
‘’okay okay fine..don’t make that puppy face…I will stay here , but promise me you will take ample rest as said by dadi’’
‘’okay…’’
‘’waise Khadoos..what would you do when I will get fever or get something major and get admitted in the hospital’’
‘’ayee..shut up stupid…what nonsense are you speaking’’
‘’ohho…just for the sake I am asking…tell na’’
‘’I will cry…’’
Anika looked at him and he looked at her …Anika smiled
‘’you will cry..really…boys don’t cry is what you always say right?’’
‘’yes I will cry, because I cannot see my best friend suffering…so don’t you dare think of it so’’
‘’waise I too don’t like to see you crying…you are good being khadoos than crydoos’’ she giggled
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He came out of thoughts to notice part of his trouser over his thighs being wet with his tears…..He quickly wiped them and sat when Gauri came to him
‘’Shivaay Sir, Anika didi gained consciousness…you’’
‘’I will see her from her the glass and leave …you stay here till Om comes…Rudra will be with Sahil till then’’
‘’thank you ‘’
‘’no don’t be..in a way I am the reason for this state of hers…I should be the one to ‘’
‘’it’s okay Shivaay Sir…I can understand’’
‘’Gauri…’’ he called, She looked at him
‘’Gauri …this locket is her possession…I gave it to her as her birthday gift, and this belongs to her…give it back at appropriate time…till then keep it with you…also ask her not to work for couple of days, she would need rest…say her the staff will take care of the work…you too stay with her and don’t come to office…if needed Om will come to your home to work….i will just see her once and leave’’
Gauri nodded and took the locket….while Shivaay had a glimpse of her friend and left from there sadly
Precap : Locket to get opened in front of Gauri …What will happen next ? Dadi to inform Tej and Family about Anika.
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This is the Twentieth episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
24 Comments
Khidkithod episode hari no words to say update was awesome.
Anika got unconscious due to stress☹ but she came to know her minute past hope everything goes well after knowing tej that anika is alive.
Waiting for nextupdate
Bye keep smiling and take care
Hi Medha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Wow Just Wow Dear.. Its A Mixed Emotions Kind Of Epi.. Ur Just Superb What a Chappy.. Will Get Me Some time to Get out off.. Excited For the Upcoming…
Hi Shiny…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Hi harika… OMG. It’s 20th episode already. Congrats and thanks for this wonderful journey.
Today’s episode is really super fast, khidkitod, pyaara, and emotional. How do you get this fun nicknames, khadoos, stupid Ritchie rich, surpanaka and what not. In every episode I said that this was khidkitod episode. But you give me a even better episode, the next time. You are a gifted story teller.?????. And as usual your precap is so exciting. But I have to wait till Monday ????. It’s ok. Have a great weekend. Bye….
Hi Katz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Fabulous update di….loved it
Hi Harini….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care.
Hi friend how are you n how is your day.very sweet n splendid episode.you have narrated in brilliance n filled with perfection..vhm I just mentioning my views after reading your updates by means of enthusiasm n I did not mean to deviate or distract from your ideas.im very happy n elated that you are noting my points I’m just moved with this.you jusy carry on with your way of thoughts. Im too touchy n influencing of happiness n having very bright smile through every context of your writing.shivaay talk n shivaays care for Anika n anikas feelings to shivaays expressing shivaays feelings to anikas expressing finally after passing so many ups n downs they tend to known n confirmed shivaay knows his stupid n stupid have to identify her khadoos in future pretty soon.no problem Yaar shivaay sab theek karega n his love care n affection thinking like n taken duty as besties khadoos will suit n right for stupid.very soon stupid too agrees for this n flats for this side of her khadoos.most intriguing part what doctor will say n reveal her accident in childhood n lost her childhood memories.then how will shivaay react n how he takes care of his stupid.gauri n shivaay discussion n sharing their thoughts in mean time is awesome n cute.n shivaay thought not to stress n leaving his stupid painfully n placing omru for their support is just like a family n one for all all for one.it really means alot.next Gauris turn to know truth n then I’m in line to meet his friend..in this what will dadi say about anika n how seniors will take it as precap is stunning n super suspended one.in every thick n thin now khadoos is with stupid to fulfill the taken promises.lazt but always extreme one their childhood memory always in its special timing n I loved n lived with every time aa only his stupid is right to take every emotion of her khadoos n she definitely solves the mystery of his life n make colour full as he wished n meet his expectations…you vhm is very creative n quality writer that I remains on cloud nine when I’m reading n be in contact with you.keep it up dear .I miss you n awaits for you till then take care .n have a good time.
Hi Raji…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Lovely chapter. Mix emotions between shivika, Rudy and sumo. Hope anika remember her past. Can’t wait for next chapter. Take care.
Hi Jeeta…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Hi akka to u nd Akki.
The episode as always khidkithod super semmaaa episode. U made emotional nd at the same time and also smile. I just loved RuMya part. Rudy feeling for somu. Kash I wish even in show RuMya was pair. Thanks akka for they cute moments. And shivay vvvvvvvvvvvv. Sad for him. Wen came to know abt is stupid now she don’t remember anything ?????. Even hope even anika fine….. Nd fb was also good. Again unwanted weekend. Waiting to know wt if gouri sees anika childhood photo r she had forgotten her sis face.?????? Waiting for it akka.
Happy weekend akka. Lots of love to u nd Akki ???. Tc
Hi Jeevitha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
It is amazing update dii…
Hi Nikki….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care.
hello akka..i am speechless..it’s like a roller coaster ride of emotions for me..shivika scene lo billu matalu chadivithe chala chala baada kaligindhi…he waited for her for so long and ippudu thanaku em gurthuledhu ani telisi his feeling and to add to the feeling aa FB..Oh God!! It made me sad..Rumya scenes are super cute.. precap is helluva interesting akka..so thwara thwara ga next part post chesai.…will be waiting for it..Till then take care…and bye for now???..and haa keep smiling???…..love you loads❤❤❤…
Hi Chelli….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…glad that you liked the episode and hope everything will get normal soon…..next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Awesome.
Hope di ko sub kuch jald yaad a jaye
Love to u and cutie
Hi Ritika….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Hi hari
Emotional update finally shivay reviled to annika she is his stupid but annika condition hope soon annika Will recognise shivaay as her best friend…
Waiting for next…
Happy weekend take care …
Hi Chaithu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care. Sorry , not able to post detailed reply as i am busy today with Household chores. Sorry again.
Loved this chapter…. conversations and flashbacks being shown very well!!!
Hi Dear….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode is published….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care.