Udaan 1st November 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Chakor and Suraj seeing Anjor, and crying for her. Vikram calls them and threatens. Vikram says I promised you, I will make Anjor’s life hell, we gave her many injections, she will live in pain and fear, seeing her pain, you will kill her to save her from this pain. Chakor and Suraj get shocked. Anjor gets an attack and shouts. Chakor asks Suraj to do something. Suraj asks Anjor not to worry. He shouts to doctor. Vikram says I didn’t wish to do this with Anjor, then I recalled Suraj’s deed, then I gave her many injections. Chakor says tell me what you did with her. He laughs. He recalls giving injections to Anjor. Vikram says I have such wound to them, that they will never forget.
Rajeshwari says I m glad, but what’s the plan to get rid of police, we will get punished, police is finding us, all the ways got shut for us. He says don’t worry, I always play a move by thinking next two moves, I have a plan to end your worry, there is a village far away, no one can reach us there. She asks where is such place. Vikram says its not on govt. Records, I have changed that village into a nice place, I have completely changed it. Rajeshwari asks when did you start social work. Vikram says I m a big sinner, I will never help anyone without a motive, I knew that our business has big risk, one day will come when we can’t get saved from laws, we are saviors for those people, we took care of them. I provided them food and clothing, those people will always welcome us, that place is our Lanka. They smile. He says we will live there and do our business, there won’t be any harm. Bacha and Rajeshwari praise him.
Vikram shows them three people captive. Doctor says don’t give her pain killer, she has to live with this pain all her life, she is given many hormones injection, if we give her pain killer, her kidney may fail, it will be more dangerous for her. Chakor and Suraj get shocked. Rajeshwari asks who are these people, they are similar to us. Vikram says yes, so they are chosen, they will be sacrificed today, and we will get free, they will do our duplicate’s neck, you put your belongings on them. Vikram smiles. Bacha pandey and Vikram burn the people. Vikram says we three are dead for the world now. They smile. Suraj says no, do something, there will be some way. Chakor recalls Vikram’s words. Chakor sings the lullaby for Anjor.
Precap:
Chakor says I swear on Anjor, till I take revenge on them, I will not sit quiet, I will give them a similar life, until then I won’t let them die. Suraj says we will not spare those devils.
Update Credit to: Amena
6 Comments
The only good thing about the episode was the lori scene and Saanvi’s flashback, the rest was a big disappointment.
I think the writer can’t process human emotions, he may be a robot or a sociopath.
Instead of focusing on Sukor’s pain and Anjor’s suffering, they focused on the Vikram and his boring monologues. Whenever I started to feel Sukor’s pain, the scene shifted away from them.
The music during Anjor’s suffering should’ve been sad instead of dramatic.
The flashback scene about the new village was too cliched.
The burning scene had too many words but failed to impress, I couldn’t feel disgust or fear, just boredom.
I advise makers to watch the first 10 minutes of the slot leader’s episode to see how to make audience emotionally connected without too much dialogue or drama.
Right now, too many things are happening but viewers can’t connect because of the rushed pace and lack of emotional depth.
Overall this week’s episodes are worse than last week’s (except Monday and Sukor’s scenes yesterday).
The show needs better writers.
Udaan’s strength was the perfect mix between emotions, romance and drama, but now drama is too dominant, there is no human touch. Watching the episode feels like reading a news report not watching a story with characters.
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Sukor scenes felt chopped.
Vikram was given too much attention and the worst part was I couldn’t feel anything in his scenes, it was a summary of what he did, like reading a news report.
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Instead they could’ve shown Sukor crying in each other’s arms, show them praying. Let Bhuka or leela come to comfort them, anything other the never ending vikram phone call or the redundant burning scene.
Can the writers please give Suraj something to say other than supporting Chakor or praising her and I don’t mean he should go against her, I mean he could talk to Teju, inspector, talk about villains.
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Yesterday’s scene of Chakor listening RD’s crime was boring, we already know, instead either make Suraj talk to Anjor or even defy villains or Sukor talking to each other.
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It would be good too if Sukor become more human, like before the 1.5 year leap because now it feels Chakor is a godess and Suraj is her devotee.
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The precap was more of the same, just routine Chakor dialogue, it lacked something. I don’t know if tears would make it better or if making the speech shorter would be better.
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Generally please decrease length of vikram’s and chakor’s dialogues and increase suraj’s and side character’s dialogues.
too much of drama. there is no that connecting moments. Yes a bold subject is taken but Sukor’s emotions, their chemistry is not being used well. Suraj’s dialogues are compromised.
I dont feel like watching a show but looks like a news channel.
But in all this the hindsight is Meera and Veejay just ace their performance but without proper connectivity it will go down the drain.
This is what i have been saying all along.
At times like this in their lives, old Suraj should have been back. The whole idea that his famioy has been attacked should have triggered so much of mixed emotions and anger and that it is what happens in reality.
We neee to see Suraj, the protective husband, father and son! He needs to be more proactive and tactical and ‘bad ass’ at the same time, geez! Get him out of Chakor’s shadow. One or two action fight scenes are not sufficient. Show the realistic actions of a husband, father and son. He is the patriarch of the family.
Just how Vikram is two steps ahead in his evil plans, so too Suraj should be able to counter act. He knows how evil some people can be and the lengths they would go. After all his father was Kamal Narayan and he was once in that circle as well. He has become too soft in his ways. We want to see a bit old Suraj once again. This is actually the best time to show that. Don’t make antagonists like Vikram stronger and smarter than him.
Show what a man is capable of when his family is being targeted.
I know Udaan was always based on Chakor’s struggles and fights, but now the show has evolved. It’s not just about Chakor anymore. She is married now and she has a family, and she and Suraj should be shown as equals and as a team. Give them both equal screen time and powerful roles.
Suraj is rich and powerful. Show him use his status to fight for good.
I really do hope the writers read our comments.
The problem is not with the show but with the bad writers that don’t create good scenes for the actors.
I stopped watching this drama two weeks ago.
I have follow Udaan for a long time but now I stopped because I find it too depressing and not entertaining.
I think that the six months extension is helping us to deal with any withdrawal feelings that we may have had after the show ended last September. Now, nobody will miss this show because is so bad.