TERA FITOOR (Hate Full Of Love)??
All’s well that ends well
Shot 19 ….
The Episode starts with Kunj and Samar seeing each other they choose to ignore and asked twinkle and Rhea to come with them respectively and went in opposite direction leaving a confused twinkle and disturbed Rhea behind
Twinkle was hesitating to talk to her …but finally she asked ..
Is everything alright between them ????
Twinkle asked with an unknown fear seeing their reaction towards each other ….
Nope nothing is fine Rhea replied twinkle ..
Means ? Twinkle asked baffled ..
Rhea told twinkle about everything how Kunj called them and told to give him his personal space and never interfere in his life while twinkle was damn shocked …
What he did that ? She asked and somewhere felt bad she always wondered about it but never got a chance to ask Kunj ..
Yes trust me twinkle we just wanted to celebrate his birthday and also apologize to you for our behaviour during that days but everything went wrong and that closed the door of our friendship specially Kunj and Samar …Rhea said ..
I never knew this twinkle said ..
Okay Samar would be waiting for me Rhea said while twinkle nodded giving her side she left …
Twinkle was thinking about Rhea words and was walking when her foot tripped she held the wall for support …Kunj comes there and sees her …he rushed towards her ..
Are you fine ???? Dhyaan kaha hai twinkle tumhara??? He asked while she looked at him lovingly ..
He held twinkle for the support and was going to walk when she winced in pain ..
Ouch Kunj twinkle said ..
What ? He asked ..
My foot is pain ing twinkle said ..
Wait come here he said making her sit on the nearby bench …
Where it is paining ? Kunj asked ..while she showed her foot…
He twist it slowly while she screamed loudly …
Now get up and see if it is paining now also Kunj asked ..
While twinkle got up and nodded in no yes it’s better now thank you she said while he smiled ..
You are really a Siyappa queen come now he entwined their hands and they started their shopping while having fun together ..
Soon they returned back home after having their dinner outside only Kunj helped twinklee in keeping everything at their places while both smiling teasing other each other to the core …
I need to take shower now Kunj said ..
Go and take then twinkle replied ..
Acha ? if you want you can accompany me Kunj said while she looked at him ..
What ??? She asked again ..
I mean see I’ll go now then you will go so why to waste water as well as time let’s go together he winked at her …
You are such a …. twinkle started to say but Kunj cuts off her in the middle ..
Amazing and handsome husband Kunj replied while they laughed ..
Go now twinkle said ..
See think again twinkle it will be beneficial for you too Kunj said ..
You are going or not ? Twinkle asked ..
You are coming or not Kunj talked in same tone as of her ..
NO twinkle said keeping a hand on her waist while Kunj pulled her closer to him ..
You have to pay for this mrs sarna ? he said ..
Acha let’s see twinkle replied ..
He pecked her lips and went to take bath while twinkle Murmured pagal and continued her working ..when she heard her phone ringing and saw it was call from Suhasini ..
She picked up ..
Haan dadi say how are you ? Twinkle asked ..
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It’s me twinkle not dadi Leela said ..
Sorry maa hello kaise ho aap twinkle asked ..
I am fine putttar you say she replied ..
I am also fine twinkle said smiling ..
Acha did I disturbed you ? Twinkle ?? Leela asked ..
Are nahi maa was just arranging kitchen you say how’s papa dadi bhai bhabhi and my Ishu twinkle asked ..
They all are fine Leela replied ….the mother daughter duo continued talking while Leela passed the phone to rt who also talked with her followed by Abeer Meher Suhasini ..
I am feeling so happy that you went back Abeer said ..
Huh ?let Kunj get free then I will come back twinkle replied the call was on speaker from tanejas side ..
Ohoo really Abeer said ..
Yes and I am sure you are the one missing me like anything twinkle said smirking ..
Huh who will miss you Abeer replied ..
Haw papa lial(liar) bua papa was missing you today he was seeing you and his baby photos(childhood pics) Ishaan said in his cute voice ..
Hawwwww baby you called me liar Haan Abeer said ..
Yes baby papa is liar twinkle said they all having fun while talking ..
Where is Kunj ? Rt asked ..
He went to take shower papa twinkle replied …
Kunj came out after sometime and saw her talking he went tip toed and backhugged her while she gasped with the sudden touch ..
What happen ??? Suhasini asked from other side ..
Nothing dadi twinkle replied ..while Kunj tightened his grip on her waist ..
Twinkle pleaded him to leave her while he nodded in no smirking ..
Your son in law is here talk to him twinkle said smirking while Kunj was shocked he left her and took the phone ..
Hello Everyone how are you all Kunj asked ruffling his hairs cursing twinkle while she was smirking …
He talked with everyone while twinkle went to take bath and Kunj rested in their room while chatting with Yuvi and Karthik who were teasing amaira in their siblings group …
You went in honeymoon still chatting with us Haan Karthik asked ..
Shut up ? I was just feeling bored that’s why came to check everyone’s status amaira replied back ..
Bored ???? Kunj pinged ..
????? Yuvi and Karthik replied ..
Bhai you also started with them Haan amaira messaged back ..
Are I just asked a normal question kunj replied …
Haan ? it was just a normal question Ammu baby Yuvi also pinged them ..
Waste to talk to you all amaira messaged ..
We are not dying even Kunj replied
Yeah Yuvi said ..
Twinkle came out after a quick bath in her bathrobe with wet hairs looking damn cute while Kunj was busy in his phone twinkle smirked looking at him ..
She quickly tip toed and went beside him he was laying on his back while twinkle climbed upon him and kissed his nape ..
Who’s this Kunj said ..
Who can it be twinkle asked getting angry while Kunj chuckled seeing her response ..
Oh my god are it’s my s*xy wifey Kunj said turning back pulling her beneath him while twinkle looked at him …Kunj kept his phone aside ..
You are looking gorgeous my love Kunj said in a seducing voice nuzzling his face in her neck smelling her wet hairs…
Twinkle started caressing his hairs too while he looked at her and pecked her forehead …
Kunj your phone twinkle said hearing the messages voice ..
Huh Kunj said kissing her cheeks ..
Are it can be important twinkle replied ..
Nothing can be more important than you at this time Kunj winked at her ..
Before Kunj could seal their lips twinkle did it making him shocked while he composed himself and started kissing her back pulling her bathrobe making it loose while she was completely lost in him …they broke the kiss and looked at each other ..
Today it’s my day ? twinkle said ..
Means ? Kunj asked…
She pushed him and went upon him while his hands went inside her bathrobe she started kissing him on his neck harshly ..
Ouchh twinkle Kunj said ..
What ouch Haan ? bear the pain which you gives me twinkle replied ..
Acha let’s see what you can do baby Kunj said while both of them were lost in their own world’ …
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After sometime they were resting in each other embrace twinkle was resting on his chest while he was caressing her hairs lovingly …
You know Kunj twinkle said ..
What ? Kunj asked ..
I love you twinkle said smiling ..
I love you more even more than you Kunj replied pecking her hairs while she smiled and again hugged him ..
Check your messages it can be important twinkle said .
Wait I’ll show you how important they were Kunj said ..
He opened the chat ??and laughed ..
See he said ..
Ja don’t disturb us disturb your husband tera ansh it was Kunj last message before getting into a romantic session
Haan we had alot of works to do ?rather than entertaining you Karthik messaged back ..
Huhuh you are such a bad brothers anyone could ever get amaira replied .
Thanks for the appreciation baby Yuvi too added..
Are Kunj bhai ?? He went offline ? Amaira messaged ..
Haan may be not like you to get bored ? Yuvi added to the convo ..
Yeah after all he had such a beautiful wife Karthik too messaged ..
Huh I am also going my hubby came back I am not velle like you both amaira messaged ..
Huh bye
Bye ?
Both Yuvi and Kartik replied and the chat ended while twinj laughed ..
You all are impossible bechari ammu twinkle said ..
She is not a bechari bhtt chalu hai wo Kunj said while they were laughing ..
Twinkles eyes went on the demons group and she recalled her conversation with Rhea ..
Kunj can I ask you something ? Twinkle stated ..
You never had to take my permission Jaan Kunj replied ..
Is everything fine between you and your demons ? Twinkle asked while Kunj sighed still caressing her hairs ..he stayed quiet for few minutes ..
Kunjjj twinkle said again but there was no response ..
You don’t want to answer ? Twinkle asked again let it be if you don’t want twinkle ended ..
Nah it’s nothing like that twinkle …I am not in touch with them Kunj said ..
Why ? Twinkle asked getting up a little looking at his face ..
When you went back Amritsar I was so angry on me as well as them I decided that I can never balance between you and them together and at a point I need to choose one of between you all so I decided to choose YOU Kunj said ..
Twinkle looked at him confused while he understands her inner turmoil..
Kunj narrated his conversation on the beach when he told them to never interfere in his life now or neither try to contact him ..while twinkle was guilty of pushing him to that situation ..
But Kunj it’s not right na twinkle said ..
I know I was rude and it was totally selfish but at that time I could just think about our marriage I didn’t wanted to loose you at any cost ..kunj said ..
I always tried to maintain balance between you all I told you to ignore their taunts thinking about them as my buddies and told them not to bother you but still they did and what happened ? You misinterpreted the whole situation and went from their and even tired to commit suicide but I don’t want anything to happen like that again I can never loose you twinkle though I feel bad daily of being rude with them that day but I can’t help it if you find me selfish ..than I am I can’t loose you …I don’t want you to think again that they are my first priority over you ..Kunj said tears forming in his eyes ..as he recalled twinkle and his conversation where she told about her suicide ..
Kunj I am sorry twinkle said while he looked at her ..
Why are you sorry ? Kunj asked ..
I had put you in such situation I am mad you know na I never wanted you to break your friends with your demons who were more than your family twinkle replied ..
Damage is done we can’t do anything twinkle let life goes how it is going Kunj said …
No I can’t live with this guilt of separating you with your buddies ..twinkle said .
Think about it Kunj don’t you want them too in your life ? They have been with you when no one was there ..then how can you let them go easily ? Haan twinkle asked ..
I am helpless twinkle I can’t keep you both together Kunj said ..
I promise Kunj I’ll never complaint to you about choosing your demons over me but please patch up with them they are your life and you are their life please twinkle said ..
But twinkle i can’t they won’t forgive me Kunj said ..
They will Kunj they will understand twinkle replied ..
You are not angry with them ? Kunj asked…
Nah because I got my Kunj I don’t want to hold any grudges against anyone what all happened was a past which was thrown in a corner now twinkle said ..while Kunj stayed silent ..
Now speak up twinkle asked after 5 minutes ..
What I should say Haan no one can understand you ladies ?you all and your moodsiwngs ..
One time you want to get all the attention to yourself and other time you don’t want to break any relations ..
Why babaji why you made ladies like this you all are totally messed humans you can’t decide what you exactly wants Kunj blurted out his frustration while twinkle chuckled seeing his response ..
We are made with multi-tasking baby twinkle said wiping the formed tears in his eyes kissing his nose tip …he hugged twinkle tightly ..
You are really mad mrs twinkle Kunj sarna ? Kunj said ..
I know I am totally but in your love mr Kunj sarna twinkle replied while he looked at her ..
You want to have coffee ? Kunj asked ..
You are making ? Twinkle replied ..
Yes Kunj said ..
Then toh I’ll definitely have twinkle said ..
Okay Kunj said he changed into his night tracks and went to prepare coffee while twinkle too joined him ..
So when are you meeting them ? Twinkle asked ..
You are really excited but they are going to beat me for being rude with them Kunj said ..
Haan so ? Twinkle replied…
You want to see your husband getting beaten up by someone ? Kunj asked baffled ..
Not someone but his own demons and I’ll ask them to punch you 2-3 times more from my side too twinkle replied blinking her eyes cutely ..
Ho ho party change..? Kunj said ..
Yes twinkle replied ..
He poured the coffee into the mugs and passed her one ..
But why you want them to beat me more 2-4 times Kunj asked ..
For being so stupid twinkle replied chuckling ..
Huh ?I should have made some other one of your batch my girlfriend atleast she would have respected me Kunj said ..
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Ohoo you had me in your destiny even after going away I had to be with you unfortunately twinkle said teasing him more ..
They went in their room balcony sitting in side hugging position having their coffee ..
Now no more teasing or else the outcome will be more worse than the previous work out Kunj said while she hits him and chuckled ..
What do you mean ? She asked ..
You know what I mean very well mrs sarna so don’t pretend as if you don’t know ? Kunj replied ..
Hate you twinkle said ..
Still love you Kunj replied pouting while she pecked his pout he pulled her in his lap while keeping their mugs aside both engrossed in talking and teasing each other …the whole night passed ..
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Next day ::::
Twinj were sleeping peacefully on the either sides of bed it was too late when Kunj phone started ringing …
Kunjjj your phone twinkle said covering her head with the quilt ..
Are pick it up na yaar ? Kunj said snatching the quilt from her while she woke up with the jerk ..
Sadu sarna twinkle said and checked his phone it was arhaan who was calling him ..
Are arhaan is calling you twinkle said shaking Kunj while he woke up ..
What’s the time ? He asked ..
It’s 10:30 twinkle said seeing in clock ..
Whatttttt Kunj said while twinkle too realised the time ..
We have slept so late she said ..
Pass my phone Kunj said calling arhaan back ..while twinkle take out her and Kunj clothes and was going in washroom ..
Yeah yeah I’ll be there in few minutes he said quickly getting up from bed ..
Twinkle was going to step inside washroom when Kunj held her wrist and pulled her back ..
I have urgent work let me go he said ..
Oye even I have to go my work place twinkle replied ..
You use it later Kunj said ..
You go to your room twinkle replied ..
Hey it’s my room only now don’t waste my time in talking Kunj said ..
Huhuh you are wasting my time I’ll get freshen up in 5 mins then I have to prepare breakfast too twinkle reasoned .
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I am wasting huh ? I woke up late because of you only Kunj said ..
Hooo how ? Twinkle asked ..
First you distracted me last night with your romance then your talks whole night Kunj said ..
You are very bad go now don’t show me your face I’ll also see how you come close to me now ? twinkle said ..
throwing his clothes on his face while he laughed ..and went inside ..
Twinkle went in another washroom and freshen up quickly she went and prepared bread and omlette for both of them and poured the juices in glass while Kunj after getting ready and keeping all of his files came out ..
Have your breakfast twinkle said ..while he quickly had while standing …
Ho ho someone is so angry Kunj said drinking his juice while twinkle was ignoring him ..
Bye bye angry bird Kunj said backhugging her kissing her cheeks and Ran from there ..
Huhuh sadu Kahi ka twinkle said she also changed and left for her work ..
The duo worked for whole day when Kunj was going back home ..
I should take something for her she will be damn angry with me ..waise did she reached home or not Kunj said and called twinkle ..while she picked up …
Say ..she stated ..
Hayeee ? still angry uhmmah love you twinkle said ..
Hate you she replied ..
Where are you ? Kunj asked ..
In hell ? Twinkle replied ..
Oh when you went Amritsar your maternal home Kunj said giggling ..
If you say it one more time than no one will be more worse than me twinkle said while he laughed ..
I think you are still working I’ll be there in 20 mins be ready Kunj said ..
Okay twinkle replied they ended the call smiling ..
Soon he reached and picked up twinkle he changed his plan and decided to go on dinner with her …
They reached and called arhmaya too who called Samar and others upon twinkle insistence ..
They all reached while twinj was waiting inside ..and saw all of them ..
They all are here Kunj murmured ..
Yes Kunj you have to patch up remember twinkle replied ..
So soon Kunj said ..
Yes didn’t you heard ” kal kare so aaj kar ..aaj kare so abhi” twinkle replied ..
Samar and others saw Kunj too they were shocked ..
Arhaan why you called us bhai Aryan said ..
Yeah Kunj asked us not to disturb him Naman too added ..
As if you all are so good to listen to me Kunj said gritting his teeths ..
What ? Samar asked ?
Huh ? waise toh all you don’t leave me but when I said you all agreed Haan Kunj said ..
So what we can do ?Samar replied ..
You could have punched me and said that you are my demons and would never leave me Kunj said ..
Huh ? as if you were listening that day Aryan added ..
I am sorry Kunj stated ..
What ???? All asked in shocked ..
I was disturbed guys but I don’t want to do it but someone made me understand to balance between you all Kunj said while looking at twinkle ..
Forgive me please Kunj said ..while they looked at each other and jumped on Kunj tightly hugging him while arhaan Amaya twinkle smiled….
They also apologize to twinkle while she was happy seeing them mingling up with her and giving her the respect which she deserved ..they all became a very good friends and sat to have their dinner ..
Acha hua we patch up ? after 2 weeks it’s my wedding Naman said while all looked at him shocked .
Seriously Kunj said ..
Yeah Naman replied ..
You didn’t invited me still he said ..
As if you invited us ? Naman replied ..
Are ?he was also invited at last moment in his own wedding arhaan joked while all laughed ..and Kunj passed him death glare ..
Jokes apart do your works in this week then you all have to come for my wedding he said while all teased him to the core they had their dinner all spend the time together and went back homes ..
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Few months later :::
@ sarna mansion :::
Everyone was at sarna mansion rejoicing their vacation ..rt Leela Suhasini Meher Abeer Ishaan Manohar Usha bebe Yuvi Karthik Avni Khushi Kunj twinkle ansh amaira ragini and Neil all were sitting ..
Kunj was sitting on floor keeping his head on manohar’s lap while twinkle was sitting beside rt everyone pulling each other’s leg ..having fun ..
When twinkle got up and brought lassi for all of them amaira helped her in serving ..
In these months Avni and Yuvi also became very good friend aka bffs they used to share each and everything and have fun while Khushi and Karthik was same love sick puppies ansh and amaira was happy in their married life same as with mehbeer and twinj they were damn happy their equation with their parents changes and whenever they gets free they comes back to Amritsar and spends time with them after that dinner they worked for entire week and enjoyed Naman wedding fully followed by Aryan wedding everyone was mingled up with each other …
Uff what an amazing lassi summer and this these are amazing combinations rt said ….
Yeah after all my daughter in law prepared it Manohar said ..
Huh ? Siyappa queen Kahi ki pehle baar koi Siyappa nahi Kiya Kunj said ..while Manohar pulled his ear ..
Dare you say anything to my daughter in law he said ..
Ofoo papa I am your baby not twinkle Kunj said …
Haha good thing happen with Kunj ? bebe said ..
Everyone’s is on her side Kunj said ..
Because I am the best twinklee replied ..
Now stop praising yourself even my son in law is no 1 Suhasini said while Kunj passed her a flying kiss ..
All were laughing seeing them while they were happy too …the elders went inside while the siblings were still sitting ..
Hey twinkle Abeer said…while she looked at him …
What bhai ? She asked innocently ..
When you are making me mamu yaar Abeer asked while all giggled ..
Huh you make me bua again then I’ll she said while Kunj raises his eye brow ..
Haan bhai even I want to become bua amaira said ..
Acha same you make me mamu first Kunj copied twinkle dialogue ..
You copy cat ? twinkle said ..
Are why copy cat you are my better half Kunj pecked her forehead lovingly ..
Awwww all said together seeing them ..
The siblings were teasing each other to the core hi-fi ing giggling they were enjoying their family time together ..
Everything went back on their places ..
Their messed up life was on track ..
Their equation with their parents improved
They were understanding from life from the different perspectives
Their love for each other increased …
Their friends vs girlfriend issue resolved and she also became a very close to his demons ..
Their destructed love had been redefined
Marrying to an known Stanger falling in love with them again or unwrapping the love which they hided they fell for each other more and more ..
Though they had been imperfect which led to their insecurities But their imperfections made them tie in a perfect knot ..
They learned from their mistakes corrected it and moved on in their life ..
They were balancing their relations …
Their journey was totally a roller Coster in which their were many up and downs and a fear of falling but they held each other hands for the support and enjoyed their lovely ride ..
Their fitoor increased daily their hatred which was full of the hidden love cherished again making them of each other for the rest of the birth ?
Everything is gonna be okay in the end ..
If it’s not okay it’s not the end ?
Everything will fall back at its place and ALL’S WELL THAT ENDS WELL ?
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Finally done writing this ?..
I have been trying to complete it but was getting engrossed in some or the other work ..
Sorry for posting it late too as I told I don’t feel like writing ?
Still I hope I have done justice with every character share your views guys ..
Thanks to all who commented on the last one ..love you all ..
Ignore errors no proof read ..
Bye Allahafiz ???
10 Comments
Lovely journey of reading this ff.Amazing 1.Loved it.Plz new 1.
Amazing dear ending was so amazing
Wonderful episode ?
Awesome ending …..
Amazing awesome
But is this end? Hey not fair I feel like its just started.
Wow amazing Episode dear please post next story
It was amazing, mindblowing….???????
Luved it …????❤❤❤❤????
Finally everything is gud….????????
But why r u ending yr ….i want more plz….?????
If not then u have to come with new ff….???
Luv u ????
Episode was the best love twinkle and Kunj romance yaar than demons❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
Finally they reunit ????.Siblings conversation amazing ????..
yaar why you end I didn’t like it it’s just start
Yaar kya yaar I was so shocked I know maan nahi toh you take break na but why you did ??this I read numbers of time really you end it man can’t belive it.. but can’t do anything.
Whole journey was amazing all ups and downs no words Tera fitoor till last breath of mine never end up man. ?????. Best story wanted more twinj.
Come back with bang babes love you like anything.❤️❤️You justify with each characters yaar.?????
Wow amazing episode in the end everything is well I’m so happy but I miss your FF please come back with another story
Ahh.. you ended this yaar!!
But seriously, it was amazing!
Finally all’s well between Kunj & twinkle and also between Kunj & his demons!!!
Loved the story.
It was a beautiful & very unique plot.
Pls do be back with a new story soon!
Waiting for you ??
Take care
Wow amazing episode dear but I’m shocked ?why you end this story ? well please come back with another story of twin