In this ff in the previous episode we saw the first introduction Kiara, and she was raised till now by Tanu in Mussoorie, she is a grown-up woman now, let’s see what happened with her in the past and how her life is now.
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In Mussorie, Tanu’s House
Rakhi (Actually Kiara who was named Rakhi by Tanu) calls out Tanu, “Mamma, Mamma, where are you???? Look what I want to show you !!!!” Tanu comes out and asks her “What is it Rakhi??? Why are you shouting at the top of your voice???” Rakhi smiles cheerfully and comes and show her the trophy and certificate which she has received,,,,Mamma, look nah, I won the state level 1st prize in music competition, The judge was so impressed with my song that he asked me to sing for his next album.” Tanu takes the trophy and certificate from Rakhi’s hands, looks at it, then suddenly, she pulls her hand backward and twists it hard. Rakhi cries out in pain “Mamma, Mamma, leave my hands, it’s paining”. Tanu asks, “When did you participate in the competition without my knowledge???” Rakhi still in pain says “Mamma that actually, my friends told me that if I participate in this competition my talents will be known everywhere which will make you feel PROUD!!! Tanu pushes her down, then comes near her and pulls her hair “But don’t you know, how much I hate you singing, then why did you sing, WHY???”. Rakhi weeps and tell “Mamma, I just wanted to make you happy, Ma, and I also thought the prize money will be a great relief for our family!!!”. Tanu stops harassing her “PRIZE MONEY, did you talk of MONEY???” Rakhi replies “Yes Mamma, as the first prize winner of this competition, I’ve received a cash prize of Rs. 1 Lakh. Tanu calms down “Well this time I can forgive you but next time don’t you dare let the OUTSIDE world know anything about your VOICE, even if it is for MONEY, or else I will have to ask your FATHER to handle you!!! Rakhi’s eyes roll big in fear, she gets up and runs outside crying.
She keeps running until she reaches a CHURCH, she covers her head with her DUPPATA comes forward and kneels down in front of the MOTHER MARY’S PICTURE,,,Dear Mother I always heard you are a MOTHER who SACRIFICED her own CHILD for the WHOLE WORLD. And when he died, he made YOU the MOTHER of the WHOLE WORLD as a RESPECT for your SACRIFICE. So, every child sees a REFLECTION of you in their MOTHER. Then, why is my MOTHER not like you??
In Tanu’s House
Tanu says to herself “I’m NOT your mother RAKHI, instead I’m a devil who is punishing you for the MISTAKES which YOUR MOTHER committed against me. Pragya you should not have never taken my place in Abhi’s LIFE, I thought I will punish you by murdering you and your twin children, but LOOK AT FATE, Fate brought your daughter, the daughter who united you and my ABHI together and snatched Abhi from my hands. She remembers the day when Nikhil took Kiara to the top of the Cliff, while Abhi and Pragya are seen pleading in front of Nikhil, Tanu is seen hiding behind in sunglasses and headcover, she murmurs, come on Nikhil “JUMP!!!JUMP!!!”. At that moment, Nikhil jumps with Kiara but both of them land safely on to a NET placed below, Kiara tries to shout “Mamma, Mamma”, but before she could do that, Nikhil takes out his handkerchief of chloroform and makes her unconscious, he jumps quickly aside with the net and hides. When Abhi, Pragya and the others come and look down the CLIFF, he is completely unseen. FB ends. Tanu laughs loudly “Fortunately, my plan to take KIARA away from you worked!!! And I didn’t know that would also separate you from Abhi. But I was still not satisfied, I took your daughter and brainwashed her in such a condition that the seven years of her memory was ERASED completely, she did not remember who she was nor where she came from!!”, All that she knew is the story which I told and she believed that “I am her MOTHER and NIKHIL her FATHER, Your daughter has gone a lot on YOU, Pragya, she really loves her mother a lot and does not miss a chance to impress me and make me happy, but me, I don’t leave any chance to give her all the pain which I wanted to give YOU.
In the CHURCH
Rakhi stands in front of the crucifix and laments “My voice is a blessing from GOD yourself, then why does MAMMA doesn’t want me to sing??? Why does she hate my voice from being known to the world??”
In Tanu’s House
Tanu continues to reveal her evil doings “Of course, Rakhi is the daughter of the FAMOUS ROCKSTAR, Abhishek Mehra, she has his BLOOD, and so does have his talent to sing, but I will never allow her to bring it out, I will never allow the WORLD to see her TALENT, I will assure that her voice is a CURSE for her which will choke her to DEATH”.
But that’s not it Pragya, this is not the END of your daughter’s sufferings. Nikhil could NEVER satisfy his LOVE with me, even though we stayed together, I never allowed him to come near me, but slowly then KIARA, started growing, her feminine beauty started showing up in her teenage years, which came in the light of Nikhil’s lustful eyes. His hunger for a female BODY, which he could not fulfil through me, he wanted to fulfil through Rakhi. Slowly, during the nights, he reached Rakhi’s bed, your DAUGHTER was BOLD and INTELLIGENT like you. She tried her every means to stop the advantages of NIKHIL, she even approached ME but then I vented out all my ANGER ON HER that I had ON YOU. I made her feel guilty for ACCUSING HER FATHER’S LOVE, while she was the REAL VICTIM OF s*xUAL ABUSE OF NIKHIL. Nikhil’s mother Mrs. Saroja Sood and his younger brother SUNIL who is as old your daughter, did try to stop him, but, unfortunately, he did not and continues to torture your daughter EVEN TODAY. And that is why she always fears the name of FATHER. Tanu agains gives out loud LAUGHTER, LOOK Pragya, the daughter who was the apple of you and Abhi is now ROTTING IN HELL.
In the Church
Rakhi starts to feel weak, she falls on to the foot of the CRUCIFIX AND calls out “MAMMA, PAPPA”
Abhi and Pragya both in their respective houses feel that their daughter has called, Abhi goes to check Rhea while Pragya checks on Prachi, both are sound asleep. Prachi and Abhi look outside onto the moon and wonder “Who called me?”
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This episode was exclusively meant only for KIARA, that is why none of the other characters are depicted much. Hope you liked how Kiara is introduced, but unfortunately the Kiara is a girl who has gone through a LOT, please put on your comments regarding KIARA
18 Comments
Whew! Tough to read about the specialized and generational habits of some Indian parents. i.e. brutalizing someone’s child because of the deeds of the parent and the gloating over the suffering of a child. These families have cowardice bred into their genetics. I truly hope that your story will offer some solutions unlike Ekta Kapoor and her writing team where greed supersedes humanity every time. Best wishes for your endeavour!!
Hey Akituster,
I guess you are one of the most valuable commentators of kkb updates, and I used to read your comments b4 and from your comments i could sense that you have an attitude of downmarket towards Indians, their cultural values and traditions. Well I’m not opposing you but I would like to bring to your acknowlegement that just like the WESTERN CULTURE and VALUES have imbibed and spoilt our INDIAN ETHNIC ENVIRONMENT, in the same way the crimes from the west too have changed our society. But right from the time the British colonized the INDIANS, the westerners always think that their genes are better evolved than the INDIANS. So this story has nothing to do with “the specialized and generalized habits of Indian parents”
Infact I was INSPIRED to write this EPISODE after reading a MURDER news in our LOCAL DAILY
“A woman killed the 3 yr old of the MAN whom she LOVED cause that MAN was not ready to ACCEPT their ILLICIT EXTRA-MARITAL AFFAIR infront of the society”. After reading such a NEGATIVE news i couldn’t digest the reality that a poor kid had undergone the punishment of his father. So at that moment I realized that there should also be positive things happening in this world, so I changed my area of NEWS STUDY and felt much better, that is what I want to give to the readers of my ff, I know whatever I described in this episode was extremely negative but to allow the positive which would happen later to seep into my readers’ minds I had to bring this negativity.
And don’t worry i would never leave this ff without any solutions. I guess the major cause of this happening with the kkb series is that it has given its full FOCUS on the PROBLEM that the whole plot is made with twists and dramas around the PROBLEM alone that they hardly realise FOR EVERY PROBLEM, THERE EXISTS A SOLUTION IN THIS WORLD, only thing the HUMANITY has to find it.
Finally I cannot finish this message without expressing my extreme gratitude to you AKITUSTER for reading this episode and giving your well wishes for my future endeavours, Thank You
Hope I did not hurt you
Definitely not hurt Aleyamma! I know that if you have read my comments then you know I am good at ‘dishing it out’ and am very willing to hear ALL other perspectives. I am an NRI who immigrated as a small child and unfortunately am intimately familiar with the negative type of parenting which justifies itself through ‘traditions’. Several of my comments have spoken of the British Raj and the horrific rape of India, which continues to this day. I feel fortunate in having experienced life in several very different cultures because of living in several very different countries. I accept that the diaspora population tends to become stuck in generational mores while India herself has moved on. It has been on this site that I am so pleased to see thoughtful and heart-based individuals bringing needed change and am very happy to hear that you are one of those individuals. Please know, that I fully accept that every culture has it’s good, it’s brilliant, it’s ordinary and it’s problem or dysfunctional members. And I am sure that you saw that I try to bring attention to negative attitudes and solutions where I can have an impact. (I’m very community minded). Most important Aleyamma, no of course you did not hurt me! I thank you for your concern. This is part of my message (what I teach in real life). Only I can be responsible for my own feelings. My feelings are never anyone else’s fault or responsibility. I know the concept of emotional adulthood requires some explanation. I do recognize your kind and thoughtful heart and honour you for that. And yes, I will check back in, as I sincerely hope that you do enjoy, develop and complete your project. Honestly, I have wondered if you are also writing to support the DP only. I am also curious to see if you have the Tuna-fish greet some of her karma! As you know, I have a visceral reaction to that particular character and Aliyah. Now, we both know that a successful writer keeps the readers coming back… so… Congratulations! I know that my curiosity was piqued by your writing style ! May your creative ability bring expansive growth through feeling and thought… and entertainment to your future readers.
Dear Akituster,
I was about to post my 8th episode in this series, when I got to see this message and I should say that “those words mean a lot to me”. Thanks once again from the bottom of my heart. Infact I was rather surprised this morning when I posted my 6th and 7th episodes, which are not published by the Tellyupdates yet, that you have read my ff and given your comment about it, it was totally unexpected because I stopped commenting on the “Kumkum Bhagya” episodic updates long back. But when I used to comment I always had a deep respect on your negative criticisms on this show, that is why I mentioned you earlier “valuable” and din’t want to hurt you at all with my statements.
And yes I’m writing ony for the dp because my writing is not that great being just a post-grad in English I can become a real life script writer, even though I would love to see atleast something from my ff to be incorpated into the real tv series.
It is real difficult to write about so many characters because the real series already has “ocean full of them” and that is why the grey characters which is at present tanu, nikhil,aliyah, priyanka, to certain extent sunny and rhea with all get back for their wrongdoings in this ff but for that at present they are getting what they want but will be paid back later.
Finally, I’m elated to know my writing has aroused your curiosity, because as I said, i have always valued and respect your comments earlier in kkb episode page
Regards
Aleyamma
Just an after thought…. you did misquote me. I did say, “some Indian parents” vs “Indian parents”
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Oh sorry!!! I didn’t do it on purpose, I will be more careful next time.
p.s. that personal emotional responsibility is not be confused with emotional reactions/responses that entertainment is hoping to create within a viewer/reader/listener. ‘Entertainment’ originally was meant for a community to ‘process’ emotion in order to strengthen individuals and communities. That’s NOT what Ekta Kapoor is doing. She is diminishing individuals and communities.
I will make sure not to confuse “emotional responsibility” and “emotional reactions/responses” as I agree with what you point out completely. I had created this ff because I could not take any more the “evil” getting away with their wrongdoings always in this series”, that is why I want to give every grey character/ mistakes from the part of protagonists in the real series some sort of end. The real series is playing too much with the emotions of the viewers by giving wrong messages in the the name “ENTERTAINEMENT” which in reality is an “EMOTIONAL TORTURE”.
so cruel of tanu to twist kiara’s hand 4 participating in singing contest.shocking that nikhil is after kiara. poor girl complained to tanu n tanu making her feel that she is doubting her own father…so painful.kiara calling for her parents…abhigya feeling it was emotional
I hope alley sees the positivity in my negativity. Are you Christian Aleyamma?? Is that why you wrote church?? If so,another thing we have in common!!
Not really, I always like to project secular ideas outside the context of caste, religion and ethinicity in my writng. And I used church because Mussorie is famous for churches.
You are not NEGATIVE Steeva, just that you didn’t know how to approach
By the way, I always believe that every reader has the right to show the negative if there really exists a negative in the writer’s work.
Aleyamm, you have inspired me to make my own series!! Which I will write very soon on telly updates. Till now I was writing news but now I will write ffs.I hope you take our time to read. Can u give me ideas?? What serial should I do??? What interesting plots can I add?? I will surely give you credits. I thinking to do qubool hai 2 or KDB
Well, I cannot really say anything regarding your choice, because being a writer, I always write what my HEART tells me, you should also listen to your heart.
If you are writing KDB, maybe you can a reformed story of story of the criminals Sherlyn, Prthivi and Kareena are paying for crimes, and since the show is named “KUNDALI BHAGYA”, you can create a plot with Rishabh-Preeta as lead, where Karan remarries, dies in an accident,,,,blah, blah, blah
From where you can add on even though Preeta’s love meant her to unite with Karan, but her Kundali bhagya meant her to unite her with Rishabh
I’m just suggesting, It’s all upto you
ALL THE BEST!!!
THANK YOU @ALEYAMMA! Love the fabolous ideas. I have wronged you badly. SORRY. And I will surely include this in the KDB update!
You need not apologize, Hope you a great journey for your ff!!!
I don’t if this is important, but is your real name Elizabeth?? Because My Grandma’s older sis is called ALEYAMMA WITH LOVE but her real name is Elizabeth, same with the younger one, we call her SUSAMMA and her name is Susan. IF you don’t want to tell me, just avoid this.
Why wouldn’t i tell about my NAME which I really love!!! My real is not Elizabeth but it is Aleyamma only, but yeah it means Elizabeth, since I’m a MALLU, it’s distinctive in our region to call Elizabeth as Aleyamma
OMG!! You won’t believe it!! ME TOO!!