Hey guys, Iam starting my second fan fiction. It is based on Qubool Hai. Iam starting to write from Sanam’s story, which is after Zoya and Asad’s death. Iam making slight changes in some character’s behavior and attitude. Hope you enjoy .
Here is the promo .
A girl is wandering in the market . She goes to buy some groceries . She bargain over the price . Finally, shopkeeper agrees to her. Her face is shown . Sanam ( Surbhi ) smiles . Sanam walks away.
Aahil ( Karan ) is driving his car and there is girl on the other seat. He is flirting with her .
By the time, Sanam tries to cross the road . Aahil comes over in his car and he gets distracted. He see someone crossing the road and tries to stop. He applies the brake but he hits Sanam lightly. Sanam fall down and bags too.
Aahil get down from the car. Sanam tries to get up. Aahil takes away his sunglasses and see her. Sanam looks up in anger. Then she notices her bags fallen down. She picks it up. She gets up. She has no major injuries.
Aahil – “ Are you blind ? Can’t you see ? What if I didn’t applied brake?”
Sanam – “ Excuse me , you hit me and you are blaming me”.
People gathers and enquirers.
Random person ( to Aahil) – “ Where were your eyes at ?”
Sanam see the girl inside.
Sanam – “ When there is a girl beside , you can understand on whom his eyes on”.
Aahil – “ Mind you! “
Sanam – “ Don’t shout. Apologize for your mistake and leave”.
Aahil – “ What! You don’t know who Iam ? “
Sanam – “ Who cares to know , who you are?”
Aahil – “ Attitude doesn’t suit people like you”.
Sanam – “ Is attitude only meant to be for such rich spoilt people? “.
Aahil gets angry. People ask him to apologize and finally he agrees.
Aahil – “ Ss .. Sorry”.
Sanam – “ Pardoned. Be careful next time”.
Sanam smiles and leaves . Aahil angrily looks her.
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11 Comments
I am happy to see a saahil ff.here sanam seems to be quite bold.loved her dialogue whether attitude suits only rich spoilt people
Hey Jazz!!
Never knew you also liked Qubool Hai!!
Well Adhu, is Seher going to be added as I found her character only interesting in that crappy season 2.
Otherwise, season 1 till 301 episodes qubool hai was really good but after it turned bad!!
I hated the other seasons! And Sahil’s story was so boring
I have not watched QH.have seen a few episodes of saahil n I loved them
By the way, can you an ff on RagNa from Ek Mutthi aasmaan. I really miss them.. plss adhu
Hey Adhu,
Really great to see a Qubool hai FF from you. One of my readers did ask me to write a FF but I can’t as I already have enough FFs on the ongoing stage.
So, I am really happy that you started this FF and it was a superb start dear!
Keep it up and keep going!
All the best!
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Thank you , guys for your valuable comments.
I use to the show daily when it was on air. I do agree they didn’t utilized Sahil story in season 2 . That is the reason why I thought to write FF on them . Seher will be added too. Iam planning to give space for Seher and Rehaan’s love story along with Sanam and Aahil’s love story.
I will try to do it once I catch up with the episodes to fresh up their story @AsadZoya
I liked it
Nice one I always wanted this type of quotable hai
Nice one adhu
Thank you guys. You comments give me motivation to write. Please do support like this once I start episodes. Please do give me your suggestions in future too.?