It’s been three years that I have been writing stories on telly updates. I had written my first story on one of our favorite couple Swasan and well after that, I have only been writing about Ishkara and Ishqbaaz.
So writing about a new couple was very difficult for me. When Jasminerahul asked me to write about Pranbir (Prachi-Ranbir from Kumkum Bhagya), I couldn’t say no and then decided to give it a try. So, I hope you all like the OS. Also, if knowingly-unknowingly I have hurt any Pranbir fans or Kumkum Bhagya fanes, I am really sorry.
Please read the OS and share your valuable comments.
TERI MERI KAHANI (ONE SHOT): PRACHI – RANBIR
A beautiful bakery is shown, the entire bakery was decorated with balloons and white flowers, a girl was standing on the stool outside the bakery, she was wearing a white dress with red roses on the border, she was decorating the board that had the bakery’s name, “CHERRY ON TOP”, she was smiling looking at the board, she was adding white flowers, her hair left loose would come on her face from time to time, she would move the hair strands back, but the breeze would bring them ahead again, she was irritated but moved the hair back again, she was busy with her work when someone called her,
“Excuse me” the sudden voice made her startled and she moved, the stool lost balance and she was about to fall, she closed her eyes tight with the fear of falling and however she opened her eyes when she realized that someone was holding her, she looked at the person and her eyes met his eyes, he was looking at her and she was looking at him.
(“Akhia de kol,
Reh jaane de,
Kehna hai jo,
Keh jaane de,
Tere khayalon mein bite yeh raatein,
Dil mera mange yehi dua,
Tu samne ho aur karu main baatein,
Lamha rahe yun thehra hua,
Pehle toh kabhi yun,
Mujhko naa aisa kuch hua,
Deewangi lehron ko jaise,
Sahil mila,
O… Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga,
Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga….” Plays in BG)
They both realized that they were standing on the road, “Will you please put me down?” she asked him and he placed her down, “Thank you so much”, she said smiling at him, “I thought I was going to fall down” she continued. “Its fine” he said, he said ahead, “In fact I am sorry that I startled you that you were about to fall”. “Nothing like that” she said, “Actually I have started this bakery today only, so why don’t you try something?” she asked him, he looked at the bakery, “Well the bakery is looking beautiful, then the cakes would also be amazing. I would love to try something new.” She smiled hearing him, she opened the door and walked inside, he followed her. Once inside, he was mesmerized by the beauty of the bakery and the various cakes that were placed on the counters for display. “Wow, they all are looking delicious. I don’t understand which one to try” he said looking at the cakes. She looked at the cakes and smiled, “Well I’ll help you with that” she went across the counter and took out a few cake pieces, he was keenly looking at her, how she carefully cut each cake piece as if it was a piece of art and she didn’t wish to ruin the beauty of the cake, how she gently placed it on the plate and then the satisfactory smile that appeared on her face looking at the cake piece, “She really loves her baking and this bakery” he thought to himself. She brought the plate and placed it in front of him, she looked at him, he looked at the plate, “Try it and tell me how it is”, he smiled at her and took the spoon, he carefully took the first bite of the cake, she was eagerly waiting for him to say something, but he didn’t say anything and took another bite, she was confused by his behavior, but waited for him to say something, however he didn’t say anything, he was eating the cake, finally she spoke breaking the silence, “Will you say something”, he looked at her and smiled, “The cake is so tasty that I cannot stop myself from eating it”, she looked at him and then both of them smiled. He finished eating the cake, “You have magic in your hands, and I have never eaten anything this tasty before”. “Please, I have learnt everything from my mother. She is an amazing baker”, she smiled.
“I am sure this bakery is going to be the best bakery in town soon” he said, “I don’t know about the best but I just wish that all the customers are satisfied” she smiled, “Maa, always says you can earn money but earning people’s love and trust is the most important” he was looking at her surprised and happy seeing her outlook towards her work and the world.
They continued talking when a customer came inside, “Excuse me, I have to buy chocolate cake”, she got up from her place and walked to the customer, “Sure sir, you’ll get the best chocolate cake here”, she showed him the counter and the customer was deciding which cake to buy. Soon other customers also started coming inside, there were many people but she managed everything and handled all of them with grace. All customers were impressed with the taste as well as the presentation of the cakes, how everything was in the right place and right amount. Finally, the last customer left with a smile.
She packed everything and turned to the table, he was sitting but to her surprise he was not there, she walked to the table to pick up his empty plate, she picked the plate but was surprised to see a flower kept there and a paper folded and kept below the flower. She kept the plate aside and picked up the paper, she opened the fold, and read what was written, and “Thank you so much for this amazing cake and the flower is for your mother who has brought up such an amazing daughter – Ranbir” she smiled looking at the note and picked up the flower.
“So his name is Ranbir” she said to herself and turned around, to her surprise he was standing at the door looking at her, “You are here, I thought you left” she asked him amazed. “I thought not to disturb you. I was going to go but thought to see your reaction after reading the note and also give you this”, he took out another flower, “That is for your mother but this is only for you” he held the flower in front of her, she smiled and took the flower, she forwarded her hand, “Prachi” she said smiling, he shook hand with her, “Ranbir” he said smiling. They look at each other smiling.
“It is time. I should be leaving. Maa must be waiting for me” she said, “Even I should be leaving” he said. “Come then we’ll go together. I live nearby only. I’ll just pack everything” he nodded, “I’ll wait outside then” he walked outside. Prachi packed everything and came out, she locked the door properly.
They were walking through the park, “How did you get the idea to start your own bakery” he asked her, “I loved baking from a young age, maa taught me everything and then one of friends suggested that I should start my own bakery. Maa also liked the idea and there it is then” she said. “What about your father, did he like the idea?” he asked as she didn’t talk about him even for once, “I don’t know” she said sadly, he asked her surprised, “You don’t know, what does that mean”, “I live alone with Maa. I don’t know anything about my Papa” she said and wiped the tears that collected in her eyes, he felt sad hearing her, “I am sorry, I shouldn’t have asked”, “It is fine, you asked because you didn’t know” she said putting her smile back, “You miss him a lot” he said seeing her fake smile, she looked at him surprised, “I do miss him sometimes but when Maa is with me, I don’t feel sad, she has done everything for me. She is both my mother and my father”, he looks at her and smiles, and “Aunty is very lucky to have a daughter like you” she smiles hearing his statement. They kept walking, every now and then Ranbir would look at Prachi and smile, and she was smiling while walking.
“There it is, this is my house” she said pointing to a house, they walked towards the door, “It was nice meeting you” Prachi said smiling at Ranbir, he smiled back, “Bye” she said and was about to go in when he held her hand, she looked at him surprised, “One day you’ll definitely meet your Papa” she looked at him surprised, he smiled and she smiled back. “Bye” he said and left her hand, she smiled and went inside. He also smiled and started walking away.
AUTHOR’S NOTE: So this was a small story about our lovely Prachi-Ranbir. I hope you all will like it. I am really sorry if any fans are hurt or if I have hurt anyone’s feelings or not done justice to Pranbir’s story. I haven’t watched much of Kumkum Bhagya so I don’t know what exactly is Pranbir’s story, so I thought to write something different. I hope you all like it, and please share your opinions.
KEEP READING AND SMILING!!!
TAKE CARE, STAY AT HOME AND STAY SAFE!!!
21 Comments
It was a great story!! Loved the kind behaviour of Ranbir and sincerity of Prachi towards her work,this was a nice OS. liked it a lot and there was nothing about hurting Pranbir fans!!
Thank you so much for your kind words…. I have never written about any other pair other than Ishkara so I wasn’t sure how would the readers feel about this….But your comment has really made me hopeful…..Thank you so much once again….
Hey Prajkta,
Really good shot of Pranbir! I liked the way you introduced Prachi’s trying to open her own bakery. It was really nice to see Prachi’s different version.
And even the ending was cute, the way Ranbir assured Prachi that she will surely meet her Dad. In total, it was a cute SHORT AND SWEET OS by you!
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments…..I thought to try something new when I haven’t written ever about Pranbir…..I thought to bring a new Prachi and a new Ranbir as well…..I am happy that you all are liking my OS…..
Hey Prajkta!! How lovely of you to start your own ff of Pranbir! I’m not a fan of Pranbir but just came here to see you because you like that girl Vrushika. You should watch Qubool Hai or Ek Mutthi Aasman. You’ll love it! You are sweet and must remain like this even after you get very popular! Because I can’t bear to lose more pure friends! Always stay the sweet girl and you will get success. Don’t become like Aleyamma woman! Be nice and you will get every success in life.. do watch ek mutthi aasman and qubool hai and do share to me how you liked it!
This was a really sweet OS.
I really liked the idea of Prachi opening her bakery and the scenes were actually really cute! Reading every FF on Pranbir, I realized that they are not that irritating couple and it’s the actors who made that impression of those particular characters!
That note and flower scene, Ranbir waiting to see Prachi’s reaction, them walking in the park, Ranbir comforting emotional Prachi and at the end holding her hand by wishing she meets her dad soon, all these scenes were really pleasing! And the best part about this OS was, that you were able to express each and every emotion perfectly!
You did a great job with your OS!!
Thank you so much for your valuable and encouraging words…..I am happy that Pranbir fans are liking the OS….All these words by readers mean a lot to a writer….
thank you so much for the dedication.prachi opened a bakery.wow.I am happy that you didn’t show the typical profession which we usually see in tv shows.ranbir catching prachi when she fell n eye lock were romantic. ranbir tasting her cake n appreciating her was nice.what I found unique was ranbir left a note with a flower for pragya for bringing up a daughter like her.ranbir giving a flower to prachi n saying that its specially for her was sweet.pranbir walking n smiling at each other was so sweet.ranbir saying that one day she will meet her father was nice.that time only I realized that you have taken the background of kkb here.it was a very cute story.why did you say that you may have hurt pranbir kkb fans?I wish you had extended this story showing pranbir love story n prachi n pragya uniting with abhi
I am happy that you liked the OS….You actually gave me the confidence that I can write about other couples also….Thank you so much for that….This was my first try on something like this….So I wasn’t sure how the readers would react but now reading their comments, I feel happy and content….
❤️That was a very sweet OS?. I am just so happy that I got to see Ranbir and Prachi have a normal sweet talk without fighting which is really sweet?. I hope this can someday happen in the real series. They are always fighting with each other in the real series which can get really annoying but it was really nice to such a decent and caring side of Ranbir(which he is in the show but just not around Prachi sometimes) and a very mature and sweet side of Prachi. Your OS was very very cute and I couldn’t help but smile? while reading it. When Prachi said about her father I got really sad? but how Ranbir supported her was so cute?.
Thank you so much for your lovely words….I am happy that you liked the story….Getting such positive comments from the readers is all that a writer needs and the story being liked by all is all that I wanted….Thank you so much….
❤️That was a very sweet OS?. I am just so happy that I got to see Ranbir and Prachi have a normal sweet talk without fighting which is really sweet?. I hope this can someday happen in the real series. They are always fighting with each other in the real series which can get really annoying but it was really nice to such a decent and caring side of Ranbir(which he is in the show but just not around Prachi sometimes) and a very mature and sweet side of Prachi. Your shot was very very cute and I couldn’t help but smile? while reading it. When Prachi said about her father I got really sad? but how Ranbir supported her was so cute?.
That was really cute ??
Unlike the real show where pranbir’s story started with lots of fights, I saw the beauty of friendship in pranbir’s first meeting itself. So that was really nice. Hope to see more of such stories from you Prajkta
Thank you so much Shanaya…..I am happy that you liked the OS….
Whenever you get time….Do read my other stories also….
That was a wonderful starting. Hoping for new one eagerly??
Thank you so much….
It’s a very very good story❤️❤️.The feelings of Pranbir are written beautifully.Hoping for more from you ASAP.I am one of the biggest fan of Pranbir ,so thanks for this OS
Thank you so much for your appreciation…. I am happy that you liked the story and I tried my best to portray all Pranbir feelings with utmost sincerity…. I am glad that you liked it
When r u going to do next update?????
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