Hey all!!! It’s our MISHBIR and KUKU again…
It’s a bright monday morning .
A girl with is riding a cycle. Wind is blowing embracing her hair… has a naughty smile… kuhu maheshwari is shown… kuhu is on her way to college…
Kuhu: how can the weekend end do fast? It’s very wrong in a week there is 5 working days and just 2 days leave #total unfair
She is speaking to herself all the way… and stops suddenly in a shock…
A long road busy with vehicles is shown. A girl with bright eyes pink lips lovely dress in footpath is calling for taxi. It’s none other than Mishti maheshwari
Mishti : It’s a working day. Getting taxi is very difficult. How can I reach on time bappa u have to help me…
Again shows hand calling taxi.
Someone is talking over phone.A chocolate boy with silky hair, refreshing smile is shown. It’s our hero Abir rajvansh
Abir: be cool sweetheart… I will reach on time. It’s my promise . I am the one who keeps promises.
He is also looking for a taxi.
Abir: call you back sweetheart taxi mil gayi. Abir rushes towards taxi and get in . At the same time Mishti also get in as she was also showing hand for taxi
Mishbir:(together) devi ma ki temple bhai
Both look at each other… bgm of dheere se meri zindagi…seems like they don’t exist in this planet
Driver: sir !mam!
Both are back in reality.
Mishti: Excuse me Mr..
Abir: yes ms.
Mishti: please get out of the car
Abir: what!why should I?
Mishti: should I explain it! I have get in first so it’s my journey first
Abir:oh really!? I have get in first… I think u have to change your glass
Mishti : it’s not mine yours have to be checked Mr
Driver is looking both of them perplexed
Abir: Ms. It’s my journey first taxi was stopped for me
Mishti: seriously Mr. I have been waiting for a taxi for 15 minutes
Abir: so what… it’s my journey first anyway
Mishti was about to say something obviously. Driver interrupts
Driver: Both of you can fight in the footpath. Please get out of the car.
Abir and mishti :how can u leave like that bhai!?
Driver: both of you wants to go to temple,right?
Abir and mishti nods.
Driver: so what’s the problem same destination same way let’s go together
Mishti : No way I will not travel with unknown persons… that too like this pagal staring at abir
Abir:don’t stare too much eyes will come out. Stay in the footpath for another 15 minutes get out
Mishti : why should I? (Thinking) fine let’s go together
Abir: let’s go madam is convinced ( looking at mishti)
Driver starts the car. They are heading towards their destination together
Really sorry if you guys find it less interesting. Please point out my weakness and help me improve with my writing skills. I will rectify it and make more interesting episodes
2 Comments
It was really nice! Introduction too was nice. I literally can’t find any sort of weakness, writing skills too was amazing!!! Is it your first fan fiction?
And when will you upload the next episode?
Thank you ananya… it’s my first attempt
I will upload the next episode as soon as possible thank you for your review…so happy to hear this