“How could you say that you ain’t got any information about Ridhima!! Do whatever you can within 3 hours Ridhima’s whereabouts should be in my hand.”
Vansh cuts his call with anger and guilt for losing Ridhima……. his eyes were filled with the pain though he knew this wasn’t anything compared to the pain and torture he gave to her………. suddenly his phone vibrates on receiving a notification. Hurriedly he checked the phone as it could be something related to Ridhima. To be his surprise, it was a WhatsApp message from Ridhima!!
He is on cloud nine now. After using his leverage, his lady love messaged him. Is she ready to forgive him? This question increased his pulse rate and heart started to beat fast. After all, his life lies in this message……..
After checking the message he screamed……
“RIDHIMAAAAA”
The whole mansion had shaken on his scream…
Within spur, he ran out of the mansion…
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After three years
The glittering sun rays spread various hues of shiny silvers and golds. The sound of the rhythmic waves tumbling in the surf brought a peaceful hymn to his ears. He slowly opened his eyes with yawning. His ears heard a lightful voice hymn, he turned his blinking eyes towards the sounds. He saw his ladylove getting ready. His corners of the mouth formed a curve producing a smile while admiring his soulmate. He shut his eyes whispering “My Ridhima” in his husky voice……
” Vansh Vansh get up it’s getting late, you’re having a meeting at 10 am and now it’s already 7:30. ”
Vansh got irate by that voice. Within a flash of light, he opened his eyes.
He was fuming in anger seeing a lady in her mid-twenties with coffee for him.
” How many times I told you to stay away from me and how dare you peeked into my room Ahana?” He asked bursting all his fits of anger out.
Ahaana replied him back within the nick of time with full attitude.
“Seriously Vansh! Are you still behind that Ridhima?”
Precap:
Ridhima: Vansh today your hatred towards me will end.
Vansh: No Ridhima, No……You can’t do this, I love you Ridhima, I need you.
Author’s note : Happy Birthday my cutie pie Preetichu……..This FF is exclusively dedicated to you on current track….
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Happy birthday preetu
first birthday girl than you so,..
Now coming to the update
Denza your writing skills are damn good and this update was wonderful..
I thought you are good at writing comic parts but this one was unexpected.. Waiting for the next part eagerly
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Once again Happieee Level up day ma girl………
Soon you’ll be getting my next update with a bang
Stay tuned
Happy Birthday to our Preetichu first!!!!
Den mere yaar kar diya hai tune kamal
Intro jab accha ho itna to chapter karega dhamal
Waiting for 1st chapter. You need to update that quickly varna aluu tujhe message dete dete pagal bana degiπ
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Teri wajah se toh itna jaldhi meine post kiya , warna ek mahine ke baad hi milegaππ (kidding buddy)
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I think it might be the first FF you’re gonna follow π€π€
I hadn’t seen you in any another FFs
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And I really liked your Episodic analysis,
Due to lack of time I hadn’t commented
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