Author’s note : Guys I am much confused. I need your opinion if you want comedy more or thriller. It would be helpful for me if you tell me your opinion. And guys don’t forget to watch immj2 on TV.
Sejal didn’t smile for a moment after Ayan came. Looks like she was waiting for some sort of confrontation. Soon after the class ended, Sejal went home alone. She didn’t even wait for Riddhima. Ayan and Riddhima knew that she has not forgotten the incident. Riddhima and Atan too went to the home after the class. Vansh noticed all of this and his suspicion was growing.
In Riddhima and Sejal’s residence
Riddhima: Sejal, you shouldn’t have come like this.
Sejal: Come on Riddhima. No one is here. So better we don’t hide anything. I just want to know why this man is here.
Riddhima: You can’t talk to him like this. He is your elder brother.
Sejal: He was the one who couldn’t protect him.
Riddhima: How much more will you accuse him? Whatever happened was not his fault.
Ayan: I know you don’t to see my face but I have come here for my other sister as she needs me.(I will clear everything later on)
Sejal: So you have come here for your business again.
Riddhima was about to say something but Ayan indicates her to let Sejal speak.
Sejal: I better not say anything. My opinions never mattered. (Saying this she lefts from there)
Riddhima : Bhai, don’t mind her words. She is still immature.
Ayan: Somehow I feel that I am also responsible for that. I shouldn’t have allowed you to join this world.
Riddhima: Bhai, it was my own choice. I think this is the thing which makes me feel complete.
Ayan: Sweetheart, I think that Vansh is in madly in love with you.
Riddhima: The deeper the love is, the deeper is the pain of betrayal.
Ayan: I know sweetheart bit I fear that you are.developing a soft corner for Vansh. That’s why I want you to wrap this soon.
Riddhima: Don’t worry bhai. I know how to control my emotions. And I am in the category of those people who think from brain.
Ayan: I know it, sweetheart. I have full faith on you.
Riddhima: Tonight he is going to get a small message.
Ayan: Your habit of playing with the enemies won’t go so soon.
Riddhima(with a smirk): A hunter is bound to get fun playing with his enemies.
In Raisinghania mansion
Ishani: Bhai, what are you searching for?
Vansh: You won’t understand. I am searching for a picture.
Ishani(in mind) : God knows what that picture has. Bhai has been searching for it for more than 1 hour.
Vansh: So found it last. I knew it. Old habits die hard.
Ishani : Bhai, can I also see this picture?
Vansh: No, Ishani. Not now. I will show it to everyone when the right time comes.
Ishani(pouts): Okay Bhai.
Vansh: Ishani, be ready tomorrow you have to go with me to Riddhima’s place.
Ishani: Really??!! Is there any special occasion?
Vansh: Tomorrow is Riddhima’s childhood friend’s birthday.
Ishani: Okay Bhai,I need to go now. I have to select my dress and shoes now.
Vansh: Okay! Go now.
Ishani goes from there and after sometime Vansh gets a notification on his phone. It was a message sent by an unknown number.
“Hi Mr. Coward Raisinghania! Hope you remember me. By the way, AR is not someone whom you can forget so easily. I know its 1 am but I know you are not able to sleep as you are getting nightmares. Mr. Coward Raisinghania, you were supposed to be a tough competitor but the problem is you use old tricks. Please use some new ones to give your dear enemies some entertainment. I want to enjoy a lot before destroying you but it looks you are not willing to give me that chance. Remember I said your birthday has only 2 weeks left. I am planning to give you a special gift. Be sure of one thing that day I will be in front of you but still you will not be able to shoot. It’s my promise. Now you have to do one thing track this number before sleeping. Lots of wishes for you to have the worst birthday after 2 weeks.Now let me finish my message with my Shayari.
” Waat ka khel hai aisa
Jiske age nahi teeke koi dusra
Kismat ke age jo ghutne tika de
Uski haar hai pakka.”
(Guys I am learning hindi newly. So ignore the mistakes in the Shayari.)
After reading the message, Vansh calls Angre.
Angre: Hello, Boss.
Vansh: Angre, few minutes ago that AR sent me a message.
Angre: Boss, it’s good then. Send me the number. I will track it.
Vansh: No need to track it.
Angre: Why?
Vansh: As it’s sent from another country.
Angre: So that AR is sending you messages through different persons.
Vansh: Angre, it’s fun to have a tough competitor.
In Riddhima and Sejal’s residence
Riddhima(over phone): So, my work is done.
Ayan: Sweetheart, what did you do now?
Riddhima: Nothing much bhai. I just sent a message to my dear enemy Vansh.
Ayan: So tonight that Vansh is going to have nightmares.
Riddhima(with a smirk): I am his biggest nightmare.
Ayan: I am going to sleep now.
Riddhima: Okay Bhai.
Both Riddhima and Ayan goes to their respective rooms for sleeping.
In Ayan’s room
Ayan’s POV: Sejal, I don’t know when I will be able to earn your forgiveness. I can’t see hatred for me in your eyes. I promised mom and dad to never leave your hand but it’s you who is not willing to hold my hand.
In Riddhima’s room
Riddhima is seen talking to a picture. It’s Kabir’s picture.
Riddhima(crying): Don’t worry. I am going to give Vansh such pain that the pain which he gave me will be much less. He didn’t even give me the chance to cremate your body. I am angry on you. You have left me all alone. Sejal and Ayan bhai are there but none can take your place.
Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Bajaron ne bhi thukra diya
(Just imagine this song is being played in the background)
Precap: Birthday celebration.
46 Comments
I really liked the ep🤩🤩 as u asked i would like to see thriller 🔥🔥 waiting for next ep
Thanks a lot dear for your opinion dear🥰🥰🥰 I will try to update the next one as soon as possible.
It was well written and fantabulous episode..
I loved when riddhima said my dear enemy vansh..
Who could be kabir I mean his relation with riddhima..So much suspense so,i think it is already a thrill..what you asked thrill or comedy my answer is I would prefer a combo of both..
Ek shayri just a try-
“Humne socha tha ye ayan honge sejal ke dhokebaaz saiyaan
Par ye toh nikle inke bhaiyaan”
Astha…..kia likha hai…man gai tm ko mai…😁…
Amazing shayri…👌
Thanks a lot Astha 🥰❤️🥰 Riddhima is considering Vansh as his enemy but I fear she is developing a soft corner for Vansh (Maybe I am thinking just like Ayan😅)
I will reveal the relation of Kabir and Riddhima soon. I am attracted to thrill much. When I planned to write this ff, I thought I will hardly complete 5 episodes as I am too lazy to write but seeing such huge response and love from you guys Allah gave me power to complete 10 chapters. Now my target is 15 chapters at least. I will do the combination of both.
Wah wah! Kya baat hai.Aysha aur tumhari sang rehke mujhe bhi Shayari se pyaar ho gaya
Thank you both!!
Aluuuu…..superb.. brilliant… amazing… awesome……💗💗
It’s just mind blowing….
So Ayaan is sejals brother….😅(bhot hi bura guess tha mera…😂)
So Ridhima is basically taking revenge for Kabir’s death from Raisinghania’s….ya to kabir us ka BF hoga ya phir brother….ye bhi ho sakta hai ke us ki death kabhi hoi hi na ho….🤔🤔
AR threatening and tashan wala message fo Vansh was just Jhakas…..😆
Tm bhi Sahyar nikli Aluuu….it was so so good…. really liked it….😊♥️🌹
I think now we should have some move from our Great VR as well😎…I mean he should also give some shock to AR….🤓
Fire dono Tarf se honi chahye na…😝
I want thrill more….lekin nok jhok bhi chahye thi….chalo 60% thrill 40% nok jhook…😏
“Aluu hai meri pyari si dost….
Rehti hai mere dil ke close….
Krti hai wo hum se bhot pyar…
Rkhti hai hmari khwahishat ka khyal…”
Waiting anxiously for what will happen next…..
💚💙🧡❤️
Yeh comment kitna chhota hai ..Nahi ?
Kia Mtlb Jaz….🤔
Thanks a lot Aishu ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ayan was Sejal’s brother and your guess was she was his girlfriend. Bohut bura guess tha😂😂Lekin guess sahi nahi hua isliye maza aya.
Kabir kaun hai🤔🤔Riddhima ka bf ya phir brother🤔🤔🤔 Yeh sochneke ki baat hai. Uska raaz khulega baad mein.
Mujhe pata nahi kyu Tashan dekhna bohut pasand hai. Jab players takkar ke ho tab hi jeet ne mein maza ata hai.
Meri Shayari tumhari aur Astha ke sath rehne ki wajase hai. Dono shayar ka influence hai mujhe pe. Tumne kal mujhe naye urdu words nahi sikhaye. Vansh ka khel sabse khatarnak hai. Uske dimag mein kya hai itni jald nahi pata chalega. Tumhari tamanna puri hogi.Kal woh bhi ek message bhejega.
Tumne shayari kar ke kar diya dil khush
Ab itni khushi mein ho na jayu behosh
@Jazzmiiiine Aishu ke isse bhi bare comments hai. Shayad yeh dusre walo se chota hai🤔😂
Sachi mai…is baar chota hai…..😔
Waise guess mera sachi mai bhot bura tha….😂😂😂😂
Thanks means “Shukria” in urdu
Shukriya means Thanks in Bengali too. Mujhe khushi huye janke ki tumhara guess had se jyada bura ho gaya😂😂
Awsm yaar nd ur shayari is much better. Nd i want both some comedy some thriller..bcoz in movies i like both…nd its gud to know that u learn hindi..
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰🥰 I will try to write with the combination of both thriller and comedy. My hindi is getting mixed with Bengali, English and a little Urdu I guess😅😅
I would like 50% thriller and 50% comedy…Nice episode
Thanks for your opinion dear🥰🥰
Amazing dear!!
Well keep going as it dear 😉
Excited for the upcoming events
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰
Fabulous update dhi❤️…very nice sharyari….
And I can’t decide if it should be a thriller or comdey….maybe thriller😂😂😂😂….
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰 You changed your name from Riddhimas lover to Riansh lover and here I am planning to change my TU name (not sure but planning to) Your condition is similar to mine. I had planned to write romantic thriller but made it comedy thriller instead 😂😂😂
Yes…well after yesterday i didnt know if i should change it but i think the revenge i wanted is complete😂😂😂
Back to Riansh Lover💖
I only like vansh…not love 😕
You changed your TU name where on the other hand I forbade everyone to call me VR’s replica. I guess we both took our revenge from Vansh😂😂😂😂
Aluuuu…..
Many many Coooonmnnggrrraattuulllaattiioonnnnsss…..🎊🎊🎉🎉🎂🎂🎂🎂…to you foe successfully completing 10 chapter of such an amazing FF….
Many more success to come…
ALLAH tm ko himmat aur hosla deim aise hi pyari aur achi achi FF likhne ki…Ameen…
💕💕💕
Thanks a lot Aishu🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
My plan after completing 5 episodes was to end this ff in 10 episodes. But whenever I start to write Allah give ideas because of which the length of my episodes is increasing. Because of Allah’s Rehmat and everyone’s love and support I managed to complete 10 episodes. 10 episode is like 100 episodes for a lazy person like me. Allah tumko bhi hosla aur himmat de tumhari 19 January se shuru hone wali exam mein top karne ke liye.
Very nice episode…loved it…waiting for the next one……it is difficult to decide between comedy and thriller…..anything will do.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰 I will try to write with the combination of the both.
Itni acchi thriller yaar me to marjawan
Thanks dear 🥰🥰 Yaar no need to die 😅😅
Amazing episode🥰😍…. Where are you from? ☺…and shaayaris are awesome🥰..
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰 I am from Bangladesh
Such a brilliant episode dear.You are just awesome.I dont have words to express how best ur FF is.Keep it up!!!
Loads of love!!!!
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰 It’s everyone’s support and wishes which helps me to write😇
As always interesting episode
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰🥰
Muje Hindi patha Nahi teekh sae, isliyae koyi problem Nahi and episode is superb Yaar
Thanks a lot Sakhi🥰🥰🥰
Wow amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍. I want thirller and comedy so both scenes are I want. Thanks for updates 😊❤️💗. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊❤️💗. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊❤️💗.
Thanks a lot for your opinion dear 🥰🥰 I will write with the combination of the both.
So nice and great updates 😊
Thanks for updates 😊.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰
Hmm that’s why riddhima hates vansh so much. Nice but i have a question did after vansh or vihaan meet his love” aisha” or he just loved her without knowing her
Yeah Riddhima hates Vansh so much because of that.I am a little confused about the question as there is no one named Aisha. If you don’t mind will you elaborate the question.
No abou aisha i think i read it in an other one and confused it with yours😅 Don’t mind it
It’s completely okay 😇 One more thing I never mind anything 😂
That’s nice then