So guys this is the 1st chapter of “Stalemate” ๐
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A boy in his late twenties is shooting … but somehow he is missing the chance to shoot at the target… He is sweating , like something is really affecting him…. suddenly his phone rang..
Voice; Hello hello Vansh sir please come soon… I will send you the location
Vansh; ok
He doesn’t need any explanation for such calls… he knows what happened there without going there….. It was his soul target which he could not able to achieve….
Vansh ( pointing the gun towards the target); again you…. this is your ninth one… are you joking or bulling me… since the very first day I have been trying to catch you… but you vanished like a wind clearing all the data…. but you can’t escaped from my eyes anymoreย serial killer…..
saying this he shoot and he able to shot at the target…..
( Vansh Raisinghania ; He is a CID officer … His best friend is alcohol… He is the one who handle the case of serial killer… he is a clever and multi talented officer … but when it comes to the case of serial killer he is completely a crazy man … the actual truth is he is obsessed with that case so much … in nature he is a cool guy )
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” Riddima come here darling…. you are soo late.. come soon… otherwise that fatty old professor will not spare us…” a girl in her early twenties yelled wearing her shoes…
” I am coming Sejal” a same aged girl shouted coming down…
” so Ridz will you ride or..”
” ok ok I will do it”
” are you sure I mean you got the license three days ago … so even I don’t have any life insurance…”
Hitting playfully” Sejal…. you…. don’t you believe me , your bestie.”
” ok ok drama queen let’s go”
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Vansh went where his assistant Angre told… When he tried to enter the premises a guard stopped him saying strangers are not allowed there. Then,
Vansh; ( showing his Identity card ) ; I am not any stranger . I am Vansh Raisinghania ,the CID officer who handle this case
Guard; sorry sir I am new to here sorry
Vansh ( patting his shoulder) ; its ok its happen
Vansh enter to the premises…..
Angre; Boss what do you want to do first? to watch the death body or the place where he killed?
Vansh; first the death body
Angre and Vansh went where the death body was….
Vansh; Angre go and don’t let any one to come here until I finish my work here ok?
Angre; ok boss
( Angre Sharma; He is the most trust worthy person of Vansh… He is Vansh’s assistant in CID … He is loyal and hard working person who helped Vansh in every manner )
Vansh checked the death body well and try to memorize all the fact that related to this incident….
Vansh ( thinking ); the same fact … same to same…
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย 1) The death body has no scratches
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย 2)ย a tattoo named ” R.I.P.” ( most probably the name of Serial killer)
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย 3) died because of highly toxic poison or one bullet
while Vansh was lost in his thoughts Angre called him..
Angre; Sorry boss for disturbing… The forensic pathologist has arrived to give the report.. so…
Vansh; its ok Angre called him to do his job… I did my work so we can leave now…
Angre; ok boss
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Sejal; Ridz wait na… I want to drink something cool…. please
Ridz; no Sejal … I don’t have any spare cash only pocket money….
Sejal’; you…. greedy friend… useless friend… monster friend …. boring friend….
Ridz; hey…hey… stop your blabbering… I will
before she complete her sentence….
Voice; hey stop your cat fights… remember this is a college ok? Sejal come with me na forget this boring friend… come I will buy you not one but two glass of cool drinks…
Sejal; I am coming Aarul…..ย I love you my buddy…
Aarul; I love you too buddy
Their acting was irritating Riddima… she hit Aarul saying” you. fool… I will never leave you.. wait and watch what will I do” saying this she began to hit Aarul by her bag but Aarul started to ran so both of this crazy friends ran around the college until they really want a cool drink…..
( Arul Singh ; Riddima , Sejal and Aarul are the best friends of each other… in their college they are famous as ” Three Buddies” He is a kind hearted and a cool guy… For Sejal he treats like a brother but for Riddima he…… ( wait guys you will know it soon) )
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Vansh was in his office room talking with Angre
Vansh; Angre did you bring the full data base of the one who died
Angre ; I told Ahana to bring it…
In a minute a girl entered into the office room of Vansh
( Ahana Reddy ; the assistant of Vansh … she is also a CID officer but a hacker… she is a clever and hard working girl who truly support Vansh)
Vansh; Ahana did you bring it?
Ahana; yes sir
She gave the full data base of the person who died today ….. It was like that,
ย Raj Ahuja.
* A businessmanย
* married and have two children
*40 years old
*……………. etc
Vansh throw away the file in full angry mood … He was firming in angry … Both Ahana and Angre was silent thinking what caused him to be angry…
Vansh; idiots… I told to get a full data base of him not this damn age and al…. I want all police records of him… I want a report of his business …. I want a report of his family life… most important thing is I want a report of his behavior and what he did nowadays… ok?
Angre : but boss…..
Vansh: no but …just bring it as soon as possible
Ahana @ Angre; yes boss / sir
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Ridz and Sejal was on the way to their home… but in mid way suddenly someone’s car collied with Ridz’s Scooter… Sejal and Ridz fell on the road and Sejal quickly stand up but Ridz could not as her leg was bleeding……
Sejal; are…. are… are you fine Ridz… give me your hand…
Ridz ( in angry ); I don’t want to stand up… called that idiot driver… and tell him to take to the hospital… I… I… will not spare that damn driver if something has happened to my Scooter… where is that idiot… where is he.. don’t let hi escape Sejal….
She was blabbering and shout for the driver… people gathered there because of her loud scream…. Sejal was about to cry because of shame ….
Then a man who was driving that car came behind and closed Ridz’s mouth by his hand and took her in bridal style and got into the car… Ridz and Sejal was in shock …. Ridz try to bite the hand of that man and hit him, but all her attempts were useless… the he came near her one ear and said…..
Voice; I am not a raper sweet heart… so stay silent until we reached to the hospital….
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Who is this driver? ๐
47 Comments
Very interesting episode Chocori.
Keep going dear.
Please post the next episode soon.
thanks a lot Merra….
I hope to update soon dear……
Rishiii is awesome!!
It’s*
Thank you so much dear…..
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Vansh is the driver…don’t know.???…
Thanks dear….
yep he is the one who has driven the car….
Akki wow so you were writing this but it’s awesome
Vansh
Thanks a lot nangiyoooo……
ya that’s Vansh…..
Awesome ๐ and u think Vansh is the driver
Thank you so much dear….
ya that is Vansh…..
Wao cool update next
Thanks dear……
I hope to update soon….
Nice episode
Thanks dear…..
i am hundred percent sure vansh is a driver.
ch is awesome.
post soon
yes of course you are right dear…..
thanks and I hope to update next soon….
Vansh
ya he is Vansh……
Officer Aryan Mathur ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
ha ha ha….. I really like Aryan Mathur……
Advance RIPFATTYOLDPROFESSOR
ha ha ha ya soon Sejal and Ridz will make that……
Nice episode
Interesting story
I think driver is vansh
Thanks a lot dear…..
ya he is Vansh……
Obviously vansh.. only vansh calls Riddhu by the name sweetheart!! Pls post soon .
of course yes… only he has the soul right to call Ridz as ” Sweet heart”
Bit obvious vansh one and only vr amazing yr i loved it post asap
Thanks a lot dear….
yes he is Vansh …..
I hope to update next soon….
Nice one๐….
Thanks dear….
Amazing episode dear it’s Vansh
Thanks dear…..
yep he is Vansh…..
Great episode!! looking forward to read the next one!!๐
I think it’s Vansh
Thanks a lot dear….
Ya it’s Vansh…
I hope to update the next soon
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Thanks a lot dear…. It makes me so happy…. as usual your comment make me so happy….
Ya it’s Vansh…. and I hope to update next soon
So nice updates ๐
Thanks for updates ๐.
Thank you so much dear……
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Waiting for next one ๐๐.
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I hope to update next soon
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Thank you so much dear…..
Awesome update
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